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高三英语作文“内容概要”
模拟练习（十四、十五）写作指导
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一、概写原文
阅读下面短文，根据其内内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Something happens to many children when they are out of school over the summer months. It is called the "summer slide". This may sound like a ride at a water park. But it's not. Summer slide is when children forget much of what they learned during the latest school year.
To fight the effects of summer slide, teachers often give students homework over the summer. Many parents may send children to all kinds of camps or find other activities to keep them learning. Some even try to build up their children's strengths by getting them into extra tutoring.
However, experts say keeping children busy all the time is not good for them. The result is often a tired child with an overcrowded schedule. This keeps a child's brain active constantly-learning, gathering information and preparing for the next event. And this may have the opposite effect the parents are not hoping for.
What should parents do instead Nothing. According to Lea Waters, a psychologist specializing in positive psychology and positive education, slowing down actually helps children become the best they can be. Machines need to be reset, while kids need to goof off(偷懒). She says that goofing off really allows kids to have some downtime, when they are not focused on a specific task but are free to do something that they're interested in doing and that they can do more automatically and get enjoyment from, like shooting baskets or listening to the music.
She also adds that goofing off does not mean the brain isn't working It just goes into this default network mode(默认网络模式)and uses that time to process all the information it had during the day, to integrate(整合)new information. It makes a kind of decision about what information to put into memory and what to get rid of, which in fact helps to improve memory.
二、分段概括
关键词句已在原文标出，结合理解，用中文概括出一句话并译成英文。
To avoid so-called "summer slide" over the summer vacation, teachers and parents explore ways to keep children busy in learning.
为避免暑期时所谓的"暑期滑岥",老师与家长们想出办法让孩子们忙于学习。
Nevertheless, experts think that this may produce the undesired result that tired children have difficulty keeping a tight schedule.
然而，专家们认为这可能会产生不好的结果: 疲倦的孩子很难坚持安排得很紧的日程。
According to a psychologist, children need to goof off so that they can freely do things that appeal to them.
根据一个心理学家，孩子们需要偷点懒，这样他们就能做些他们感兴趣的事情了。

Besides, goofing off is helpful for the improvement in memory.
此外,偷懒也有助于记忆力的提高。
三、组句成文
组句成文，检查连接词、用词、语法、字数等并修改。
To avoid so-called "summer slide" over the summer vacation, teachers and parents explore ways to keep children busy in learning.(要点1) Nevertheless, experts think that this may produce the undesired result that tired children have difficulty keeping a tight schedule.(要点2) According to a psychologist, children need to goof off so that they can freely do things that appeal to them.(要点3) Besides, goofing off is helpful for the improvement in memory.(要点4)【69字】
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一、概写原文
阅读理解并划出关键词句，整体把握全文大意与结构。
China's bike-sharing has exploded from nothing about a year ago into a transport phenomenon in major cities. Just by scanning the QR code(二维码)that appears behind the seat, one can unlock a shared bicycle. Once the service has finished, the user blocks the bike and the total is charged to his mobile account. The process lasts less than 30 seconds and costs no more than one penny. By the way, there are still no fixed places to find or leave a bike, although areas such as university campus, and metro or bus station are preferred.
Many young people believe shared bicycles have many advantages. They are not expensive to rent, they do not have to be protected from thieves, and there is no need to repair them. You just have to change them for another one. They are alsoenvironment friendly and lower the use of cars, which also helps to relieve traffic. In fact, it is considered an awesome combination of technology and tradition.
Since they appeared, shared bicycles have raised a lot of dust There is no doubt of the benefits but the disadvantages cannot be ignored. Many problems related to shared bicycles have emerged. It is due to bad behavior from some users who always want to seize the bicycles, but also because of the mess that has been created since one can leave the bicycle anywhere, which is against public urban order management. There are so many poorly parked bikes that sometimes they end up blocking streets.
In Xi Luoyuan, Beijing. the "Civilized Use of Bicycles "campaign has been launched.In addition to having 40 officially permitted stops, there are also clear signals to lead users to these stops. A team of supervisors keep order in the area. This is the first area that is part of an official system to manage bicycles. The purpose of this campaign is to solve the mess that the popularity of shared bicycles is causing in Beijing, both with the participation of companies and the users. If the pilot plan works out well in Xi Luoyuan, it will be extended to all of the cities in China.
二、分段概括
关键词句已在原文标出，结合理解，用中文概括出一句话并译成英文。
Major cities in China have witnessed the enormous popularity of bike-sharing due to its convenience and costs.
因为方便与费用便宜，共享单车在中国一些大城市很受欢迎。
Young people feel that shared bicycles bring lots of benefits in some aspects, including environmental protection and traffic.
年轻人认为共享单车在环保以及交通等方面给我们带来了很多好处。
However, they mess the cities owing to bad behavior from some users.
然而，由于用户的不良行为，共享单车把城市搞得一团糟。

Therefore, a campaign on the problem has been carried out in Beijing to encourage civilized use of bicycles.
因此, 北京就这一问题开展了一个活动以促进文明用车。
三、组句成文
组句成文，检查连接词、用词、语法、字数等并修改。
Major cities in China have witnessed the enormous popularity of bike-sharing due to its convenience and costs.(要点1) Young people feel that shared bicycles bring lots of benefits in some aspects, including environmental protection and traffic.(要点2) However, they mess the cities owing to bad behaviors from some users.(要点3)Therefore, a campaign on the problem has been carried out in Beijing to encourage civilized use of bicycles.(要点4)【65字】

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