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高中英语新高考-英语作文：热点写作话题指导与解读：科技
前言
本篇作文和科技有关，此类作文也是高考常见的，大体思路也不会有多大的不同。
题目
第六部分：书面表达（共1小题；满分25分）
请阅读下面这段文字和图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Have you ever paid for knowledge online According to Bloomberg, a platform, the De Dao app offers written articles and podcasts from famous personalities that the users must pay for, with topics ranging from music to economics. By May 2017, De Dao had 7 million users. As is reported in People’s Daily, Ximalaya FM, another popular online learning platform, had about 450 million users as of January 2018. The platform allows people to pay for and listen to online learning courses.
Many Chinese people used to be unwilling to pay for content online. However, many internet users’ attitudes have changed since they began to see quality content as valuable. In fact, 75% of internet users are happy to pay for quality content, according to a 2017 report by Chinese science news website Guokr and Internet Netease.
【写作内容】
1．请以约30个词概括上文和图表内容；
2．请以约120个词谈谈你对“Pay for Online Knowledge”的看法，包括如下要点：
（1） 分析哪些原因促进了网上知识付费市场的迅速发展（不少于两点）；
（2） 你愿意为网上知识买单吗？请阐述你的理由（不少于两点）
写作指导
如何写概括
第一段：
主题句+举例：例子就不要管了，主要体现越来越多的人付费网上知识。
第二段：
关注however后，说的还是第一段的内容。
再看图：
数据从2017涨到2020。不过请注意：2020年还没有到，说明这是预测。
概括以上内容，即：
越来越多的人付费网上知识付费产品，从2017年的多少到2020年的多少。
我的概括：
A growing number of internet users are keen on paying for content online, predictably promoting the market size from 4.91 billion yuan in 2017 to 23.51 billion yuan in 2020.（后半句仿照2017年的）
比较参考答案：
Nowadays, many online apps have witnessed more and more people paying for online knowledge. It’s estimated that, by 2020, China’s online paid knowledge market will expand 5 times what it was in 2017.（前半句参考2017年的，后半句用了一个倍数表达法，值得学习）
第二段的写法
第二段：分析原因
写作思维：
所有作文思维，一定要切记：分两个方面考虑。可以是：对立方面（即正反）；角色联系方面（即文章涉及到哪些人物或事物）；功能方面等等。这个没有统一答案。
就本文而言，我从角色联系方面着手：
原因一：从个人考虑，大众对知识的渴望（继续追问：为什么渴望？因为现在的AI时代对个人素质要求提高，必须满足社会的需求）
原因二：从app功能考虑：讲到科技产品，四个绕不过去的词：efficient, convenient (cheap), abundant, accessible，即：高效，方便(或者便宜)，丰富，易接触
Many reasons give rise to the phenomenon. For one thing, with Artificial Intelligence increasingly influencing our daily life, people are eager to improve themselves for fear of being left behind. Without doubt, online learning platforms can facilitate their learning and satisfy almost all their needs by providing abundant resources of high quality. For another thing, the booming development of technology allows online learning products to be more convenient to use. Whether young or old, people have easy access to them.
注释：
1. give rise to引起
2.be eager to急切做
3.for fear of doing以防
4.be left behind落后
5. satisfy their needs满足需求
6. of high quality高质量
7. have easy access to容易接触
第三段的写法
第三个要点的思维：
如果继续写赞成，那就意味着继续思考知识付费的好处，但是我上面已经写得差不多了，继续硬凑当然不是太好的主意，所以我选择从反面写，毕竟科技的弊端也是明摆着的，同样离不开四个词：distract, addiction(或者reliance), privacy, alienate，即：分散注意力、上瘾、隐私、分离（人和现实世界）
However, despite those advantages（衔接上文，以退为进）, I am unwilling to pay for online knowledge. Unlike apps featuring speed and convenience（对比手法）, paper books make it possible for me to think deeply and creatively. Besides, too much information presented tend to distract my attention and worse still, encourage heavy reliance on them.
注释：
1. despite those advantages主要是和上文衔接，常用手段
2. unlike apps…用的对比手法，可以参考昨天的盐城作文的五种思维之一
3.make it for me…这是it作形式宾语的常用句型
4.distract one’s attention, encourage heavy reliance on都是科技作文常见用词。
合并：
A growing number of internet users are keen on paying for content online, predictably promoting the market size from 4.91 billion yuan in 2017 to 23.51 billion yuan in 2020.
Many reasons give rise to the phenomenon. For one thing, with Artificial Intelligence increasingly influencing our daily life, people are eager to improve themselves for fear of being left behind. Without doubt, online learning platforms can facilitate their learning and satisfy almost all their needs by providing abundant resources of high quality. For another thing, the booming development of technology allows online learning products to be more convenient to use. Whether young or old, people have easy access to them.
However, despite those advantages, I am unwilling to pay for online knowledge. Unlike apps featuring speed and convenience, paper books make it possible for me to think deeply and creatively. Besides, too much information presented tend to distract my attention and worse still, encourage heavy reliance on them.
范文写得也是非常好，很值得背诵的。另外作者的思维发散又多了两个角度：
1.网络可以使得专家传播知识
2.对知识版权的尊重
Nowadays, many online apps have witnessed more and more people paying for online knowledge. It’s estimated that, by 2020, China’s online paid knowledge market will expand 5 times what it was in 2017.
What on earth gives rise to the booming of the online paid knowledge market Firstly, people find it convenient to acquire large quantities of selected quality contents, saving them time and energy, just with a reasonable amount of money. Secondly, the decentralized nature of the Internet allows more professionals to spread their knowledge, appealing to those who are thirsty for knowledge. All these provide a solid foundation for paying-for-knowledge industry to grow rapidly.
I’m willing to pay for knowledge online. For one thing, I’m eager to acquire the latest knowledge to adjust myself to the rapidly changing world. For another, the quality contents online deserve the payment, which can show my respect for the owner of the intellectual property.

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