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感谢信/祝贺信
1．假定你是李华，你被自己心仪的大学录取了。请你给你的外教Mrs. Wilson写封感谢信，感谢在校期间她对你的教导和帮助，内容包括：
1. 表达感谢；
2. 回顾老师对你的帮助；
3. 表达对老师的想念以及衷心祝愿。
注意：1. 词数不少于100；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mrs. Wilson,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．假设你是红星中学高三年级李华。今年 9 月你校外教 Jim 就要完成他在你校一年的教学工作， 启程返英。请你给他写一封电子邮件，表示对他的感谢。邮件包含以下要点：
1. 感谢 Jim 这一年来的教学和帮助；
2. 回忆去年感恩节一起做火鸡（turkey）、开派对的情景；
3. 希望可以得到回复并继续保持联系。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右。
2. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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3．假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Ann在北京冬奥会期间提供志愿者服务，并被评为优秀志愿者。请你给他写封电子邮件，表示祝贺，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 告知庆祝派对安排的相关事宜；
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Ann,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
4．假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。近日你校外籍教师Jim为你们年级做了关于心理健康的线上讲座。请你给Jim写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 感谢；
2. 收获。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim知道你即将参加高考，发邮件向你表示祝福并给你提供了几条考前学习的建议，你感觉非常有效。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 感谢他的祝福；
2. 你比较获益的一条建议及理由。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。近期，你校英国外教Jim做了关于阅读方法的在线讲座。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达感谢并简述你的收获；
2.说明你阅读中的困惑并寻求帮助。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Andy在你市举办的“中国成语大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表示祝贺；
2.回顾他付出的努力；
3.期待交流。
参考词汇：中国成语大会：Chinese Idiom Contest
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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8．假设你是李华，请你用英文给我国选手谷爱凌（Eileen Gu）写一封祝贺信。她在第24届北京冬季奥运会上赢得两金一银奖牌，为中国队奖牌数名列前三做出了突出贡献。
内容包括：
1．表示祝贺；
2．她在奥运会上的优异成绩；
3．个人感想。
注意事项：
1．词数：100词左右；
2．开头及结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3．可适当增加细节使语句连贯、通顺。
Dear Eileen,
It is universally acknowledged that the 24th Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics was a success.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你在学校英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请用英文写一封邮件感谢外教Jim对你的帮助，内容包括：
1．表示感谢；
2．回顾Jim对你的帮助。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
10．假设你是李华，上周日不慎把书包(内含学生证……等重要物品)遗失在操场上，本校外教Mr.Smith捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信。
内容如下：
1.表示感谢；
2.回顾丢失和找到的过程；
3.再次表示感谢。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
1．Dear Mrs. Wilson,
I’m glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to college, which I have been dreaming of. I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
It was you who offer me a series of practical approaches to learning English. But for your guidance, I couldn’t have made such unbelievable progress in English. In addition, it’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to win the first prize in a recent English speech contest, which motivated me to devote myself to learning English and built up my confidence. What’s more, not only did you cheer me up in difficulties, but you also inspired my enthusiasm for learning English. Words fail to express my endless appreciation to you, as you have done so much for me.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant and safe journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mrs. Wilson写封感谢信，感谢在校期间她对你的教导和帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→ delighted
感谢：gratitude→ appreciation
要不是：but for→ without
比赛：contest→ competition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：But for your guidance, I couldn’t have made such unbelievable progress in English.
拓展句：If I hadn’t had your guidance, I couldn’t have made such unbelievable progress in English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In addition, it’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to win the first prize in a recent English speech contest, which motivated me to devote myself to learning English and built up my confidence.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】What’s more, not only did you cheer me up in difficulties, but you also inspired my enthusiasm for learning English.（运用了not only置于句首引起的倒装句）
2．Dear Jim,
How are you doing these days Hearing that you are going to go back to your homeland Britain in this September after teaching there for one year, I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your teaching and the assistance you gave me during the previous year.
I still remember the very scene when we made turkey and had a party on last Thanksgiving Day. It was at that day that you shared so many interesting things about your country with us, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history. We really enjoyed ourselves there. What’s the most important is that we’ve become good friends since then. Though I felt a little sorry that you are leaving soon, I am pleased to know you can return to your hometown and reunite with you family.
I really hope we can keep in touch often.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给自己的外教写一封感谢信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
返回：go back to → return to
去年：the previous year → last year
感谢：gratitude→ thanks
帮助：assistance → help → aid
分享：share → exchange
玩得开心：enjoy oneself→ have a good time → have fun
开心的：pleased→ happy →delight→ content
联系：keep in touch→ contact
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句1：Though I felt a little sorry that you are leaving soon, I am pleased to know you can return to your hometown and reunite with you family.
拓展句1：Though I felt a little sorry that you are leaving soon, I am pleased to know the truth that you can return to your hometown and reunite with you family.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I still remember the very scene when we made turkey and had a party on last Thanksgiving Day.（运用了定语从句。）
【高分句型2】It was at that day that you shared so many interesting things about your country with us, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history.（运用了强调句型和定语从句。）
【高分句型3】What’s the most important is that we’ve become good friends since then.（运用了主语从句。）
3．Dear Ann，
Knowing that you have worked as a volunteer of the Beijing Winter Olympics and have been selected as an excellent volunteer, I'm really happy for you. And I'd like to offer my sincere congratulations to you.
To celebrate your achievement, I will hold a party for you this Saturday evening. I will invite some of our friends over, who have prepared surprise gifts for you and are eager to know about your experiences during the Winter Olympics. In addition, you will enjoy delicious Chinese food cooked by myself. I'm sure you will like the party. Please arrive at my home by 5: 00 pm.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的新西兰朋友Ann在北京冬奥会期间提供志愿者服务，并被评为优秀志愿者的事情，写封电子邮件，表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择：selected→ chosen
此外：In addition → what’s more
高兴：happy→ glad/pleased
渴望：be eager to→ long for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In addition, you will enjoy delicious Chinese food cooked by myself.
拓展句：In addition, you will enjoy delicious Chinese food, which was cooked by myself.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you have worked as a volunteer of the Beijing Winter Olympics and have been selected as an excellent volunteer, I'm really happy for you.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作原因状语。）
【高分句型2】I will invite some of our friends over, who have prepared surprise gifts for you and are eager to know about your experiences during the Winter Olympics.（运用了连词who引导的非限制性定语从句。）
4．Dear Jim,
Having been benefited a lot from your online mental health seminar, I am writing to express my thanks to you.
Due to the impact of the COVID-19 pandemic, we can only communicate with you online. But it is the first time that I realize the importance of mental health, especially for us at this stage. First of all, I understand that as students, only when we hold a positive attitude towards life and study, can we have a happy life and achieve good grades. What’s more, we must have a correct sense of autonomy and be able to control our emotions well. Last but not least, to learn to live in harmony with classmates should be put inthe first place to integrate well into the class.
The letter paper is very short, but the harvest is very large. All in all, thank you very much for this lecture, which will have a profound impact on my life. I am expecting that the COVID-19 pandemic will end soon and that I can have the opportunity to communicate with you face to face.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校外籍教师Jim写信，表示对他召开线上心理健康讲座的感谢以及自己的收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢：thank→gratitude
重要性：importance→ significance
培养：have→cultivate
影响：impact→effect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Having been benefited a lot from your online mental health seminar, I am writing to express my thanks to you.
拓展句：Because I have been benefited a lot from your online mental health seminar, I am writing to express my thanks to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】But it is the first time that I realize the importance of mental health, especially for us at this stage.（运用了that引导定语从句）
【高分句型2】All in all, thank you very much for this lecture, which will have a profound impact on my life.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
5．Dear Jim,
Thank you very much for your letter and your very best wishes, which really encourage me a lot.
The tips you gave are all practical and helpful. I have benefited a lot from them. The one that works very well on me is “Using Mind Maps to Review”. By drawing mind maps, I am clearer about the knowledge systems and have a better understanding of each section that I review. I am now more confident about my preparation and exams.
Thank you very much again and best wishes to your graduation. May you have a fruitful college life.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim回复一封邮件，对他对自己表示祝福并提供了几条考前学习的建议表示感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：tip→suggestion
实用的：practical→effective
理解：understanding→grasp
成果丰硕的：fruitful→prolific
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The tips you gave are all practical and helpful. I have benefited a lot from them.
拓展句：The tips you gave are all practical and helpful, which I have benefited a lot from.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Thank you very much for your letter and your very best wishes, which really encourage me a lot. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] By drawing mind maps, I am clearer about the knowledge systems and have a better understanding of each section that I review. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
6．Dear Jim,
Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on reading methods. I’ve learnt really a lot, because you helped me overcome the bottleneck of my reading—how to increase the reading speed.
However, I am still puzzled by some difficulties in reading. For example, I find it hard to grasp the gist of the passages, and I also feel it hard to continue reading when confronted with new words. What can I do Would you please give me some advice I would be really grateful if you could help me out.
Thank you very much again. Your earliest reply would be appreciated.
Yours,
Li hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文给你校英国外教Jim写一封电子邮件，表达对他关于阅读方法的在线讲座的感谢并简述你的收获，并说明你阅读中的困惑并寻求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
困惑的：puzzled →confused
困难：difficulty →trouble
难的：hard →difficult
建议：advice →suggestion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your earliest reply would be appreciated.
拓展句：I’d appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on reading methods. (运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)
[高分句型2] I’ve learnt really a lot, because you helped me overcome the bottleneck of my reading—how to increase the reading speed. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
7．Dear Andy,
Learning that you’ve won the first prize in your group in the Chinese Idiom Contest, I’m writing to offer my congratulations.
It came as no surprise to me that you won the first place in the contest. For several years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese idioms, Not only have you recited a sea of Chinese idioms with great enthusiasm, but you also have dived into Chinese history and learned about the stories behind them. You deserve the prize.
Hope to have a talk with you and exchange our experience of learning idioms.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的留学生好友Andy在市举办的“中国成语大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。要求考生给他写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：offer→provide
惊奇：surprise→astonishment
比赛：contest→competition
热情：enthusiasm→warmth
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Learning that you’ve won the first prize in your group in the Chinese Idiom Contest, I’m writing to offer my congratulations.
拓展句：When I learn that you’ve won the first prize in your group in the Chinese Idiom Contest, I’m writing to offer my congratulations.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It came as no surprise to me that you won the first place in the contest.（运用了that引导的主语从句）
【高分句型2】Not only have you recited a sea of Chinese idioms with great enthusiasm, but you also have dived into Chinese history and learned about the stories behind them.（运用了not only…but also…不但……而且……句型，位于句首句子用部分倒装）
8．Dear Eileen,
It is universally acknowledged that the 24th Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics was a success. I am writing to congratulate you on your achievements. The whole nation is proud of you. Thank you heartedly for what you have done to our country.
The other day, when watching the race on TV, I was fully attracted by your excellent performance in your events. And I felt thrilled and cheered for you the moment you reached your goals skillfully and successfully. It was you who won two gold and one silver medals, which contributed to the final result—China at top 3 of the medal list.
Your success and spirit inspire me greatly, and I decide to follow you to do something for our motherland.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给我国选手谷爱凌（Eileen Gu）写一封祝贺信，祝贺她在第24届北京冬季奥运会上赢得两金一银奖牌，为中国队奖牌数名列前三做出了突出贡献。
【详解】1.词汇积累
以……为骄傲：be proud of →take pride in
兴奋的：thrilled→excited
实现：reach→achieve
决定：decide to→be determined to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your success and spirit inspire me greatly, and I decide to follow you to do something for our motherland.
拓展句：Your success and spirit inspire me greatly, which makes me decide to follow you to do something for our motherland.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Thank you heartedly for what you have done to our country.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 It was you who won two gold and one silver medals, which contributed to the final result—China at top 3 of the medal list.（运用了强调句和which引导非限制性定语从句）
9．Dear Jim,
How is everything going I am writing to express my heartfelt thanks to you because I’ve won the first prize in the English Speech Contest of our school. Your kind help has meant more than anything.
I remember vividly how you guided and encouraged me. During the preparation of the contest, you helped polish my draft many times and better my pronunciation with great patience.
The public speaking skills you shared turned out really effective. More importantly, whenever I felt hesitant and unsure about myself, you were always there to back me up and boost my confidence. Without you, I couldn’t have made such an achievement.
Thank you for everything you have done for me and wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Jim写一封感谢信，感谢他对你参加英语演讲比赛的帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
衷心的：heartfelt→sincere
一等奖：the first prize → the first place
耐心地：with great patience→patiently
成就：achievement→ accomplishment
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Your kind help has meant more than anything.
拓展句： It is your kind help that has meant more than anything.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I am writing to express my heartfelt thanks to you because I’ve won the first prize in the English Speech Contest of our school.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
[高分句型2]I remember vividly how you guided and encouraged me.（运用了how引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型3]The public speaking skills you shared turned out really effective. （运用了省略了关系词that/which的定语从句）
10．Dear Smith,
I’m Li Hua, а student from Xinhua Middle School. I’m writing this letter to thank you for returning my schoolbag.
Last Sunday afternoon, after I played basketball with my friends in the playground, I left my schoolbag there owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student’s ID card, cellphone, wallet and some documents were all in it, which are very important to me. Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school’s Lost and Found, where I knew it was you that had picked up my schoolbag and handed it in.
It’s such а great kindness of you to do so. I’m extremely grateful to you. You did set а good example to us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封感谢信，感谢他捡到并归还了你的书包。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢：thank→appreciate
归还：return→give back
由于：owing to=due to
重要的：important→significant
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I’m extremely grateful to you. You did set а good example to us.
拓展句：I’m extremely grateful to you, who did set а good example to us.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I was worried because my student’s ID card, cellphone, wallet and some documents were all in it, which are very important to me. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school’s Lost and Found, where I knew it was you that had picked up my schoolbag and handed it in. (运用了where引导的定语从句和强调句型)

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