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1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数至少应为80词。
When I was a child, we lived next door to the Schonfield Home, People who got too old to take care of themselves lived there. I was a regular visitor and enjoyed spending time with the old people there.
One day, a very old lady named Mrs. Kurtz moved to the Schonfield Home. She seemed sad all the time. For days, I had never seen her smile or laugh. My parents learned that she had no family or friends.
Weeks later, I was visiting the home again. And I saw her sitting alone, looking unusually depressed(消沉的). Mrs. Smith, one of the old people told me that Mrs. Kurtz had turned eighty-nine, and that she was upset to be celebrating another birthday all alone without any cards or gifts. She truly believed there was no one in the world who loved her.
This moved me deeply, and I started to create a plan in my mind. I ran home and raced to my room. I took out my piggy bank that I always valued. And I poured out all the money that I had received on birthdays and other special occasions. I had been saving money for a new bike. Although the money wasn’t enough to buy a bike, it was enough for what I wanted to do then.
I raced down the stairs. My mother was cleaning the house. I walked to her and explained what I was about to do. And she smiled at me proudly. She planted a kiss on my cheek and said, ”I must be the luckiest mother in the world to have such a caring daughter." My mother stopped what she was doing.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数至少应为80左右;
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;
Paragraph 1:
And we went to a gift shop together.
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Paragraph 2:
We went up to Mrs. Kurtz and gave her our gifts.
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2．阅读下面短文，根据所给内容续写一段文字，使之构成一个完整的故事。开头已给出。
Jimmy and Bob who were raised in New York were childhood best friends. When Bob was eighteen and Jimmy was twenty, Bob set out for the West to make his fortune. They parted at “Big Joe’ Brady’s” and made a promise to get together at the same place after twenty years. However, at the appointed time and place, it turned out that Bob became a criminal while Jimmy was a policeman. Jimmy did his duty and Bob was put into prison. Having spent 20 years in jail, Bob was finally released. Now 58, felt lost and helpless.
“Twenty years is a long time,” he smiled bitterly, not knowing where to go. He had no family, and had never heard a word from Jimmy again since that cold, dark night. “Was he ashamed of having a friend like me ” Bob longed for an answer.
“Excuse me, sir, are you Bob ” Bob heard the voice of a young man.
“Yes.” He turned around and was surprised to find a familiar-looking man in his thirties. “Have we met before ”
“No, sir,” replied the man. “My father told me to meet you today. I have a note for you from him.”
Doubtfully, Bob unfolded the note. His hands were shaking by the time he had finished reading.
Bob, the doctor says I’ve only got three months. I’m afraid I won’t be able to meet you this time, but you’ll always be my dear friend.
Jimmy
“You’re Jimmy’s son !” Bob shouted in surprise.
注意：1. 续写词数应为80词左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Yes, sir,” the young man smiled. “And my name is Bob.”
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3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Birthday Cake
Josie was a girl who loved to bake. She always helped her uncle at his bakery. Mostly she carried ingredients from the refrigerator to the large work table. Sometimes Uncle Dave let Josie stir (搅拌) the cake batter (面糊) with a wooden spoon.
Josie wanted to learn to bake a cake on her own. She asked if Uncle Dave would show her how Her mother’s birthday was only two days away. If Josie made a cake all by herself, it would be a wonderful surprise.
On Saturday morning, Josie arrived at the bakery just as it was closing. The bakery always closed early on the weekend so Uncle Dave could walk his dogs. “Ready, Josie ” Uncle Dave asked “Ready!” Josie answered.
First, Uncle Dave had Josie get all the ingredients (原料) and line them up on the work table. Then he showed her how to measure flour and sugar so that she had the exact right amount. She added these ingredients to a large mixing bowl. Next, Uncle Dave tapped an egg on the side of the bowl to crack it. “Be careful not to get any bits of shell in the bowl,” he said.
Josie tapped her egg very gently on the bowl. It didn’t crack. She tried again, and this time the shell came apart. She pulled the egg apart over the bowl and watched the yellow egg yolk drop into the flour.
Now it was time to stir. “This is fun!” said Josie.
When the batter was ready, Uncle Dave helped Josie pour it into the cake pan. He gave Josie oven mitts (烤箱手套) and showed her how to put the pan in the oven without burning her hands.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
While the cake baked, Josie and Uncle Dave wiped off the table and washed all the dishes.
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On her mother’s birthday, Josie put the cake before her mom secretly.
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4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A man came home from work late, tired and unhappy, to find his 5—year—old son waiting for him at the door. How the boy wished to have fun with his father at home even for a short time.
“Daddy, may I ask you a question ”
“Yeah sure. what is it ” replied the man.
“Daddy, how much do you make an hour ”
“That’s none of your business. Why do you ask such a thing ” the man said angrily.
“I just want to know. Please tell me. How much do you make an hour ” pleaded the little boy.
“If you must know, I make $20 an hour.”
“Oh,” the little boy replied with the head down.
Looking up, he said. “Daddy, may I please borrow $10
The father was angry. “If the only reason you asked that is that you can borrow some money to buy a silly toy or some other nonsense, then you march yourself straight to your room and go to bed. Think about why you are being so selfish. I work hard every day for such childish behavior.”
The little boy quietly went to his room and shut the door. The man sat down and started to get even angrier about the little boy’s questions. “How dare he ask such questions only to get some money ” he thought to himself.
After about an hour or so, the man calmed down, and started to think: Maybe there was something he really needed to buy with that $10 and he really didn’t ask for money very often. The man went to the door of the little boy’s room and opened the door. “Are you asleep, son ” he asked.
“No, daddy, I’m awake.” replied the boy.
I’ve been thinking. maybe I was too hard on you earlier,” said the man. “It has been a long day and I took out my anger on you. Here’s the $10 you asked for.”
The little boy sat straight up, smiling. “Oh. Thank you, daddy!” he shouted. Then, reaching under his pillow he pulled out some crumpled(皱巴巴的)bills.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数不少于100词；
2．续写部分开头语已为你写好；
The man, seeing that the boy already had money, started to get angry again.
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Not knowing what his son meant, the father just stood there, waiting for his boy’s explanation.
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5．阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
An 80-year-old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45-year-old highly educated son. Suddenly a crow(乌鸦) sat on their window.
The father asked his son, “What is this ” The son replied, “It is a crow. ”
After a few minutes, the father asked his son for the second time, “What is this ” The son said, “Father, I have just now told you, it’s a crow!”
After a little while, the old father again asked his son for the third time, “What is this ”
At this time some expression of irritation(恼怒) was felt in the son’s tone when he said to his father.“It’s a crow, a crow.”A little while later, the father again asked his son the fourth time, “What is this ”
This time, the son shouted at his father, “Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again, although I have told you so many times ‘IT IS ACROW’. Are you not able to understand this ”
A little later the father went to his room and came back with an old diary, which he had kept since his son was born. On opening a page, he asked his son to read that page. When the son read it, the following words were written in the diary:
“Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa, when a crow was sitting on the window. My son asked me 23 times what it was, and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow. I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question. I did not at all feel irritated but I rather felt affection for my innocent son.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After reading the diary,
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Feeling ashamed,
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6．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Alex was very excited because the New Year Eve’s party was coming and as usual it was going to be held in his Uncle Peter’s home. Suddenly, he saw his grandfather sitting alone looking very unhappy.
Alex went to him and asked, “Grandpa, why are you sitting alone Is there anything wrong with you ”
His grandfather replied, “No, I am fine. I just feel like sitting alone.”
“Grandpa, you know the New Year party is near, so are you preparing for it ” asked Alex excitedly.
“No dear, I am not. With the passage of time, the world has completely changed and I don’t see any point in celebrating the world I see today,” answered his grandpa disappointedly.
“I know something is wrong with you and you are not telling me. Please tell me what the problem is.” Alex said.
“I feel I am a stranger in the world I am living in. It is not the same as I have known. Now everyone is busy with their own work. Your father is busy with business, your brother is busy on the computer, your sisters are busy watching dramas and your mum is busy with housework. I don’t know how to pass my days,” said his grandfather sadly.
“Grandpa, you have me!”said Alex.
His grandfather smiled and said, “Yeah, you are here, but what about others In our days, we had a fixed (固定的) time each day when the whole family sat together and talked, shared problems and laughed together.”
That night Alex thought about what his grandfather had said and an idea flashed his mind. He decided to have a surprise. New Year party at his own home and make everyone come together that day. As New Year’s Eve got nearer, Alex got busy preparing for the party. He kept it a secret from his grandfather and asked everyone not to let him know about it in order to surprise him.
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
It was December 31 and everyone was busy with their own work.
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Alex saw his grandfather looking very happy while talking with the family members.
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7．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
That cold January night, I was growing sick of my life in San Francisco. There I was, walking home at one in the morning after a tiring practice at the theater. With opening night only a week away, I was still learning my lines. I was having trouble dealing with my part-time job at the bank and my acting at night at the same time. As I walked, I thought seriously about giving up both acting and San Francisco. City life had become too much for me.
As I walked down empty streets under tall buildings, I felt very small and cold. I began running, both to keep warm and to keep away any possible robbers (抢劫犯). Very few people were still out except a few sad-looking homeless people under blankets.
About a block from my apartment, I heard a sound behind me. I turned quickly, half expecting to see someone with a knife or a gun. The street was empty. All I saw was a shining streetlight. Still, the noise had made me nervous, so I started to run faster. Not until I reached my apartment building and unlocked the door did I realize what the noise had been. It had been my wallet falling to the sidewalk.
Suddenly I wasn’t cold or tired anymore. I ran out of the door and back to where I’d heard the noise. Although I searched the sidewalk anxiously for fifteen minutes, my wallet was nowhere to be found.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just as I was about to give up the search, I heard the garbage truck (垃圾车) pull up to the sidewalk next to me.
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It was nearly 3 a.m. by the time I got to bed.
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8．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My hearing aid was a box that was tied to my shoulders and hung from my neck. I carried it because when I was young I became deaf. After consulting(协商) with a lot of educational experts, doctors, and parents of other deaf children, my parents decided to send me to a school where all of my classmates and teachers would have normal hearing, instead of sending me to a private school for the deaf. So I was the only deaf child at Blue Creek Elementary School.
I experienced great anxiety throughout Elementary School because, in addition to the problems of “fitting in” with the other students, I also struggled with most of my school work. I seemed to spend every spare moment doing homework just so I could keep up. I could feel that my parents and teachers were deeply disappointed in me because of my academic struggles. The teachers didn’t know what to do with me nor did they show much interest in any of my poor performances.
My hearing disability required me to ask everyone from time to time, “What did he or she say ” I worried that everyone would soon grow tired of repeating everything back to me. When the kids made fun of me, I had no way but to accept it. I was sure that I was a bad person; my self-esteem(自尊心) was quite low. I saw myself as an ugly kid wearing a box around his neck who wasn’t even smart enough to keep up with the rest of the other kids.
Mrs. Jordan, my 5th grade teacher, changed all of that with a simple two-word phrase. One morning, she asked the class a question. I read her lips(嘴唇) from my front-row seat and immediately raised my hand. I couldn’t believe it—for once I knew the answer.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But, when she called on me, I was afraid.
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For the first time in my young life, I was a star in my class.
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9．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The skies were dark. Rain fell in big drops. Thunder and lightning flashed across the skies. I shivered with cold and fear as I walked through the streams of muddy water. Some people were rushing by, completely wet in the heavy rain.
Along the way, I saw some schoolchildren carrying their heavy schoolbags and rushing home. I also saw that some road repair work had been abandoned by workers. Obviously, the workers had left in a hurry because of the storm. There were few signs and it was hard to see what was on the road. There were pieces of wood and slabs of metal and it looked like a hole had been dug and hurriedly covered with planks.
I moved on but suddenly stopped as I heard some sounds. It sounded like children crying. I quickly turned back and went back to the place from where the sounds came. I was horrified! To my shock, I found that two small children, about eight years old, had fallen into the gaping hole on the road. The children were so scared that their faces were pale, crying for help. They were running back home when suddenly the planks moved away with the force of the rushing water. They fell into the hole by accident. I could barely see the children, as it was dark all around me. I got down and tried to reach them with one of my hands, but it was too deep to reach them. I comforted the children with words and told them that I was going to get help.
I was not sure of what to do or where to go but decided to go to the nearest house for help. I knew the man, Mr. Lee, who lived there. He was a kind-hearted man who was always ready to help others. I decided to turn to him for help. It was the only way that I could think of.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I knocked at the door and told Mr. Lee about the problem.
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The parents of the children who had just arrived from work were totally shocked to hear of what had happened.
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10．阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Easton retired(退休) as a school teacher, and he didn’t have enough savings. What’s worse, his wife, Cassandra, had heart disease that needed expensive treatment.
To save his wife’s life, Easton didn’t have a choice but to take up a job, and he found one as a pizza delivery(递送) man at Rooster’s Pizza. On his first day on the job, his co-workers judged him because the sight of an 84-year-old pizza delivery man was undoubtedly a rare one. But Easton didn’t care.
After delivering the first two orders that day, Easton was on his way to deliver the third one, when he realized his car was low on gas. He stopped at a gas station, worried he would be late for his next delivery. Determined to make it on time, Easton grabbed the steering wheel and drove as fast as he could. However, as he reached one of the main roads, a police car stopped him.
When Officer Jenkins and Officer Matthew walked up to Easton’s car, they were shocked to see an 84-year-old behind the wheel of a pizzeria car. Moreover, they didn’t expect an old man to be speeding.
“You see,” Easton said nervously, “I am running late for pizza delivery. We have a policy of delivering pizza within 45 minutes, or I’ll have to pay for it out of my pocket, and I need money for my wife’s treatment. I hope you understand…”
Officer Matthew looked at Easton’s teary eyes and trembling hands and felt deeply sad for him. However, he couldn’t go against his line of duty. They had to give him a ticket anyway. Easton was late for the delivery that day, prompting his manager to deduct(扣除) it from his salary. He was also warned that he would have to leave if he repeated the mistake.
Not losing heart, Easton set out for his deliveries the following day. “Rooster’s Pizza!” he shouted as he rang the doorbell of one of the houses on his list.
注意：1. 续写词数应150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When the door opened, Easton recognized his customer was Officer Matthew!
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Easton couldn’t believe what had just happened and was surprised by what Officer Matthew did for him.
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参考答案
1．Paragraph 1:
And we went to a gift shop together. There we bought a lovely heart-shaped musical jewelry box. Then we bought a birthday card and a beautiful bouquet of red roses. I wrote the following words on the card: “To the best lady at the Schonfield Home, Happy birthday and all the best! From your neighbor who loves you very much, Mimi”. With all our gifts, we headed for the Schonfield Home. And as expected, we found Mrs. Kurtz sitting alone on a chair.
Paragraph 2:
We went up to Mrs. Kurtz and gave her our gifts. I saw her eyes widen in surprise when she received our gifts. As she finished reading my message on the card, she looked up and flashed a beautiful smile, which I had never seen on her face before. When I said goodbye to her a while later, Mrs. Kurtz was still smiling, and at that moment, I noticed that my heart was smiling along with hers. At that moment, I understood a kind act is often its own reward.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者小时候经常去隔壁的一家养老院Schonfield Home去看望那里的老人，发现一位名叫Mrs.Kurtz的老妇人认为这世上没有人爱她，又担心自己会独自度过即将到来的89岁的生日，没有礼物和卡片，所以意志消沉，脸上从不见笑容。作者和妈妈得知后去商店为老人选购了礼物和卡片，一起为老人庆祝了生日，终于看到了老人开心的笑容，同时自己内心也得到了快乐。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们一起去了礼品店”可知，第一段可描写作者和妈妈为老人选购了礼物、准备了卡片。
②由第二段首句内容“我们走到Mrs. Kurtz面前，把我们的礼物送给她。”可知，第二段可描写老人收到礼物后的反应和作者的感受。
2. 续写线索：去礼品店— 买礼物— 送礼物— 老人感动、露出笑容— 作者感受— 点明主题
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①购买：buy/purchase
②前往：head for/leave for
③预料：expect/predict
④变宽：widen/broaden
情绪类
①美丽微笑：flash a beautiful smile/smile beautifully
②好的、善良的：kind/good
【点睛】[高分句型1] As she finished reading my message on the card, she looked up and flashed a beautiful smile, which I had never seen on her face before. （运用了以连词as引导的时间状语从句和关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句。）
[高分句型2] Mrs. Kurtz was still smiling, and at that moment, I noticed that my heart was smiling along with hers. （运用了以连词and引导的并列句和连接词that引导的宾语从句。）
2．“Yes, sir,” the young man smiled. “And my name is Bob.” Speechless, Bob realized that he had lost his best friend forever. Although there were some problems between them, he has forgiven him. And Jimmy commemorated their friendship in his own way. Then Bob followed Jimmy’s son home, which Jimmy arranged for him before his death. The uncertainty was gone. He now had a home. He knew he wasn’t alone anymore because his friend and junior Bob will be his side.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了吉米和鲍勃在纽约长大，他们是儿时最好的朋友。但鲍勃成为了一名罪犯，而吉米是一名警察。吉米履行了他的职责，鲍勃被关进了监狱。鲍勃在监狱里蹲了20年，终于被释放了。出狱这天吉米的儿子来接他，鲍勃非常感动。
【详解】1.段落续写：
由首句内容“‘是的，先生，’年轻人微笑着说。‘我叫鲍勃。’”可知，后文可描写年轻人带鲍勃回家，以及鲍勃的感受。
2.续写线索：年轻人来接鲍勃——原谅——回家——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
意识到：realize/come to realize
跟着：follow/come after
消失：be gone/disappear
情绪类
沉默：speechless /silent
永远：forever/for good
【点睛】[高分句型1] Although there were some problems between them, he has forgiven him. (运用了although引导让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] Speechless, Bob realized that he had lost his best friend forever. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
3．While the cake baked, Josie and Uncle Dave wiped off the table and washed all the dishes. While waiting, Uncle Dave told Josie why he opened this bakery in the first place. When Uncle Dave graduated, he had to work in two places to make a living and one of them was a bakery. He gave free cakes and bread to the homeless. Working there helped him understood what he wanted in life — making people happy and helping people. Josie smiled and told Uncle Dave that she wanted to be like him, someone who is passionate and warm-hearted.
On her mother’s birthday, Josie put the cake before her mom secretly. When Josie’s mom opened her eyes, she couldn’t believe what she saw. What was in sight was a perfect cake made by her perfect daughter. She told Josie that she would never forget this birthday because she has made it special. Surprisingly, the whole family shared this cake and they all found it amazing, which encouraged Josie. Ten years later, when she opened her own charity bakery to help the poor and the homeless, Josie started her presentation with a simple sentence: “We are here to help.”
【导语】本文以故事为线索展开。女主人公乔西是一个喜欢烘焙的女孩，她经常在她叔叔的面包店帮忙。她想在妈妈生日的时候自己做一个蛋糕来给妈妈当惊喜，于是乔西在一个周六的早晨来到了叔叔的面包店，开始自己第一次做蛋糕。
【详解】1. 段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“蛋糕烤的时候，乔西和戴夫叔叔擦桌子，洗所有的盘子。”可知，第一段可描写乔西和戴夫叔叔在收拾东西时发生的事情，戴夫叔叔讲述他开面包店的起因和初衷。
②由第二段首句内容“在妈妈生日那天，乔西偷偷地把蛋糕放在妈妈面前。”可知，第二段可描写“妈妈”看到蛋糕后的心情，乔西受到鼓舞，坚持梦想，开了自己的慈善面包店。
2. 续写线索：烤面包时乔西和戴夫叔叔收拾东西——戴夫叔叔讲述他开面包店的起因和初衷——乔西送妈妈蛋糕——妈妈感到惊喜——乔西受到鼓舞——开了自己的慈善面包店
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①赠送、给：give/hand out
②成为：be/become/turn into
③谋生：make a living/seek a livelihood/earn one’s living/support oneself
情感类
①热情的：passionate/enthusiastic/full-blooded
②令人惊讶地：surprisingly/amazingly
【高分句型1】While waiting, Uncle Dave told Josie why he opened this bakery in the first place. (使用了While引导的时间状语从句的省略和why引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Josie smiled and told Uncle Dave that she wanted to be like him, someone who is passionate and warm-hearted. (使用了that引导的宾语从句和who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型3】What was in sight was a perfect cake made by her perfect daughter. (使用了what引导的主语从句)
【高分句型4】The whole family shared this cake and they all found it amazing, which encouraged Josie. (使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
4．One possible version:
The man, seeing that the boy already had money, started to get angry again. “How can you be so selfish Why do you want more money since you already have these bills ” the father could hardly hold his anger back and inquired with two eyebrows knitted into one. With held-back tears in his eyes, the little boy slowly and carefully counted out his money, and then looked up at his father, replying, “Because I didn’t have enough before, but now I do.” with big blue eyes shining with tears.
Not knowing what his son meant, the father just stood there, waiting for his boy’s explanation. Wiping away his tears and an innocent smile appearing on his face, the boy requested in a relieved voice, “Daddy, I have $20 now. Can I buy an hour from you Please come home early tomorrow. I want to have dinner with you.” Hearing the boy’s small but sincere request, the father couldn’t hold back his tears. Realizing he was too busy with his business to spare some time with his beloved ones, he gathered his son into his arms and apologized again and again, “Sorry..., and I promise I’ll be back early tomorrow.”
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，孩子为了得到父亲的陪伴而向父亲借钱。父亲由于工作劳累而态度不好，斥责了孩子。后来父亲意识到了自己的行为不妥，来向孩子道歉并解释。而根据所给的段首句可知，故事的结尾却又发生了转折，形成曲折的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“男人看到男孩已经有钱了，又开始生气了。”可知本段应该描写父子之间的新的情感冲突。
②由第二段首句内容“父亲不知道儿子的意思，只是站在那里，等着儿子解释。”可知，本段主要是儿子的解释，是整个故事的高潮和主旨。
2.续写线索：父亲再次开始生气——批评小男孩自私——男孩强忍委屈——父亲等待小男孩解释原由——男孩拿出20美金，想买父亲的一小时，希望父亲第二天早点回来共进晚餐——父亲留下了惭愧的泪水，并答应了小男孩。
3.词类激活
行为类
①.质问：inquire/ question
②.强忍：hold back / choke back/ fight back
情绪类
①.愤怒：anger/ rage/ wrath
②.微笑：smile / beam/ grin
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Hearing the boy’s small but sincere request, the father couldn’t hold back his tears.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]. Realizing he was too busy with his business to spare some time with his beloved ones, he gathered his son into his arms and apologized again and again, “Sorry..., and I promise I’ll be back early tomorrow.”（运用了现在分词作状语以及省略that的宾语从句）
5．Paragraph 1 :
After reading the diary, the son began to think back to the days when he used to sit together with his father, his eyes filled with tears. His father would patiently answer the same question all 23 times without feeling irritation while his father asked him the same guestion just 4 times! The son thought to himself: If I attain old age, how will my son look at me Will he think of me as a burden Will he shout at me because of my poor sight, poor hearing or poor understanding
Paragraph 2:
Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father. He made an apology to his father, begging his father to forgive him for his bad behavior. He said aloud, “I promise to make you happy forever, Dad. It is you who have cared for me ever since I was a little child, showering your selfless affection on me. You worked hard to make money so that I could afford to go to university. I will serve you in the best way.”
【导语】文章以人物为线索，讲述了一位80岁的老父亲在向45岁的儿子问了四次同样的问题后，儿子变得很不耐烦，老父亲拿出以前的日记本让儿子看。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“看了日记之后，”可知，第一段可描写儿子回想起过去和父亲在一起的日子。
②由第二段首句内容“儿子感到羞愧，”可知，第二段可描写他向父亲道歉，请求父亲的原谅。
2. 续写线索：看完日记——回忆——感到羞愧——道歉——承诺好好对待父亲
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①充满：be filled with/be full of
②看作……：think of...as/treat . ..as/regard...as
③赚钱：make moneylearn money
情绪类
①高兴的：happy/glad/delighted
②恼怒;生气：irritation/annoyance
【点睛】[高分句型1]If I attain old age, how will my son look at me (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
[高分句型2]It is you who have cared for me ever since I was a little child, showering me with your selfless affection.(运用了强调句型)
6．One possible version:
It was December 31 and everyone was busy with their own work. Alex’s grandfather was sitting in his room, reading a book. When the clock struck 8 p.m. everyone started gathering in the living room and Alex went to call his grandfather. When his grandfather arrived in the living room, he was surprised to see everyone was there.“Today we are not going anywhere and today’s party is especially for you, Grandpa!” Alex said. The whole family apologized to him for being busy with their own lives. Then they had a wonderful dinner, telling stories and jokes.
Alex saw his grandfather looking very happy while talking with the family members. He came to Alex and said, “My dear child, I am really thankful to you. Because of you I feel excited and alive again today. I thought that with each passing day and year, things would only get worse and worse but I know that this New Year is going to be a good one. Now I wish to live longer and enjoy life with everyone.” Alex was excited too at seeing his grandfather happy and he truly knew that families do matter.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述新年前夕Alex通过和爷爷的沟通发现，爷爷因为家人们都在忙自己的事感到非常孤独。Alex想办法举办家庭聚会，希望能让爷爷高兴起来。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“那是12月31日，大家都忙着自己的工作。”可知，本段可以写Alex举办聚会，给爷爷惊喜，家人因忽视而向爷爷道歉。
②由第二段首句内容“Alex看到他的祖父在和家人交谈时看起来很开心。”可知，本段可以写爷爷很开心，爷爷感谢Alex让他感觉生活再次有了意义。
2.续写线索：聚会——Alex给爷爷惊喜——家人们道歉——爷爷快乐——爷爷感谢Alex——Alex明白了家人的重要性。
3.词类激活
行为类
①聚集：gather/get together
②道歉：apologize /say sorry/make an apology
③懂得：know/understand/be aware of
情绪类
①感激的：thankful/appreciative/grateful
②激动的：excited/thrilled
③惊讶的：surprised/amazed/astonished
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Then they had a wonderful dinner, telling stories and jokes.（运用了现在分词作伴随状语。）
【高分句型2】
Alex was too excited at seeing his grandfather happy and he truly knew that families do matter.（运用了that引导宾语从句。）
7．One possible version:
Just as I was about to give up the search, I heard the garbage truck (垃圾车) pull up to the sidewalk next to me. I heard a man call my name from the truck. It was surprising! When the voice called me from the inside of the truck, I thought I was dreaming. How could this man know my name The door opened, and a small red-haired man jumped out. He had an amused look in his eyes, “Is this what you are looking for ” he asked, holding up my wallet. I really couldn’t believe my eyes at the moment. Yes, sir! It was my wallet. Joy welled up inside me when the man handed my wallet to me.
It was nearly 3 a.m. by the time I got to bed. But I couldn’t fall asleep right away. While I wouldn’t get much sleep that night, I had got my wallet back. I also got something valuable—I realized that the city couldn’t be a bad place as long as people were willing to help each other.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，文章讲述的是作者在一天的工作之后，感到对这个城市，对生活的对工作都失去了兴趣的时候，因为得到了别人的帮助，又重新燃起了对这个城市生活的喜爱之情。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“就在我要放弃的时候，我听到旁边的人行道上停了一辆垃圾车。”可知，下文可描写垃圾车上的人把钱包还给作者。
②由第二段首句内容“我上床睡觉时已经快凌晨3点了”可知，下文可描写作者睡意全无，回想发生的事情，以及感悟。
2.续写线索：即将放弃时出现垃圾车——有人叫作者的名字——还钱包——高兴——回家已经半夜——回想及感悟
3.词类激活
行为类
①寻找：looking for /searching for
②得到，获得：got /gained
③递给我钱包：handed my wallet to me /gave my wallet to me
④拿回，取回：got back/take back/bring back
情绪类
①令人惊讶：surprising /amazing/astonishing
②好笑的，逗乐的：amused /entertained/funny
【点睛】[高分句型1] When the voice called me from the inside of the truck, I thought I was dreaming.（句中when引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型2] Is this what you are looking for （句中使用what引导的表语从句）
[高分句型3] I realized that the city couldn’t be a bad place as long as people were willing to help each other.（句中使用that引导宾语从句和as long as引导的条件状语从句）
8．
But, when she called on me, I was afraid. I took a deep breath, stood up slowly and answered Mrs. Jordan’s question in a low voice.Then came the silence. I felt so nervous that I lowered my head and did not dare to see the reaction of the teacher and other students. I would never forget what happened next. Mrs. Jordan pointed directly at me. With shinning eyes and a wide smile, she cried: “That’s right, Stephen!” Surprise and then joy overwhelmed me.
For the first time in my young life, I was a star in my class. I became the focus of my class, with everyone looking at me. My confidence soared like never before. I decided right then and there that I would make a place for myself in this world. No matter how many difficulties I might meet in life, I knew I could overcome them. A simple three-word phrase delivered with incredible enthusiasm had totally changed my young life. “That’s right, Stephen!”
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章通过作者的亲身经历讲述了“恰当时间下的恰当的话”会彻底改变一个人的生活。作者是一个失去听力的人，他需要助听器才能正常沟通交流，这使得他一度非常自卑。尤其是进入正常的学校之后，作为一个特殊的学生，他不仅需要融入集体，还要努力学习，但却都不尽如人意。一次，老师Jordan在课堂上提问，作者鼓起勇气举手回答，之后得到了老师的赞许，这极大的鼓舞了作者。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“But, when she called on me, I was afraid.(但是，当她叫我的时候，我很害怕。)”可知，第一段可描写作者是如何小心翼翼地回答问题的，同时描写老师听到答案后对作者的称赞。
②由第二段首句内容“For the first time in my young life, I was a star in my class.(在我年轻的生命中，我第一次成为班里的明星。)”可知，第二段可描写作者被称赞后的心理变化，有了自信，有了克服困难的决心。
2.续写线索：小心翼翼回答问题——紧张不敢抬头——得到老师的称赞——有了自信——有了决心——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①深呼吸：take a deep breath/ breathe deeply
②大声说：cry/speak out/speak up/shout
③高涨：soar/rise/rear
④下决心做某事：decide to do/ make up one’s mind to do/ be determined to do
⑤克服：overcome/get rid of/conquer
情绪类
①笑容满面的：with a wide smile/ with a big smile/beaming
②热情：enthusiasm/passion
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I will never forget what happened next. （由what引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. I decided right then and there that I would make a place for myself in this world.（由that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型3]. No matter how many difficulties I might meet in life, I knew I could overcome them.（“No matter how many difficulties I might meet in life”为让步状语从句，且从句中包含省略关系代词的定语从句“I might meet in life”，其先行词为“difficulties”）
9．Paragraph 1:
I knocked at the door and told Mr. Lee about the problem. He readily said that he would get a torch and some rope. He also called his wife to come along with him. A few other neighbors also quickly joined the rescue party and together went to the road. They managed to get the children out of the watery hole safely. The children were very scared and they shivered with cold, crying for their moms. Immediately, we asked for their parents’ phone numbers and told them the incident.
Paragraph 2:
The parents of the children who had just arrived from work were totally shocked to hear of what had happened. They were very grateful to the neighbors who had helped to rescue the children and thanked them sincerely. The children hugged their parents tightly, with their eyes closed. I was very happy that I had been part of this act of neighborliness. It was a wonderful moment, one I will never forget. We should show respect to the neighbors since they had helped people in need without thinking twice. I went home with a good feeling.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一个雨天遇到两个八岁的小孩掉进了马路上裂开的洞里，孩子们吓得脸色苍白，哭喊救命。于是作者去附近寻找李先生来帮忙，最终他们和邻居们一起救出了孩子们。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我敲了敲门，把这个问题告诉了李先生。”可知，第一段可描写李先生得知之后的反应以及他们如何施救的。
②由第二段首句内容“刚下班的孩子们的父母听到发生的事情完全震惊了。”可知，第二段可描写孩子父母得知后的反应以及作者的感受。
2.续写线索：敲门——帮助——父母得知——感谢——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
拿：get/fetch
告知：tell/inform
拥抱：hug /embrace
情绪类
害怕的：scared / frightened
感谢的：grateful /thankful
【点睛】[高分句型1] He readily said that he would get a torch and some rope. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] We should show respect to the neighbors since they had helped people in need without thinking twice. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)
10．One possible version:
When the door opened, Easton recognized his customer was Officer Matthew! He handed the pizza and was about to leave when Officer Matthew stopped him and approached him with an envelope. “We were able to raise a modest sum for your wife’s treatment, sir. It’s only $2,340，but I’m hoping it’ll help. Last night, I thought about how I was unwilling to give the ticket to you, but that’s our line of duty, sir. I spoke to your boss, and he agreed that your pay wouldn’t be deducted. Take care of your wife, and I appreciate the pizza!” Officer Matthew smiled and went inside.
Easton couldn’t believe what had just happened and was surprised by what Officer Matthew did for him. With trembling hands, he opened the envelope and found several dollar bills and a note that read: “Our duty is to protect and serve, but we are still humans at the end of the day. Have a wonderful day!” His eyes filled with tears, Easton rang the doorbell and thanked Officer Matthew again. Then he got into his car and drove away.
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了已经84岁的Easton为了妻子的治疗费用不得不重新工作，而他能做的就是从事披萨配送员的工作。一次配送途中，由于车子就快没油了，而他为了准时送到不被罚钱，他选择超速行驶，最后被开了罚单，配送被延误，受到了老板的警告。第二天的一次配送居然是送到给他开罚单的Matthew家里，原来Matthew他们为他的妻子筹集了资金，并告诉他，作为警察，他们必须履行职责，但作为活生生的人，他们还是具有同理心的。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“When the door opened, Easton recognized his customer was Officer Matthew!(当门打开时，伊斯顿认出他的顾客是警官Matthew!)”可知，该段应描写警官Matthew对Easton所说的话，讲到职业职责和私下里为Easton所作的事情。
②由第二段首句内容“Easton couldn’t believe what had just happened and was surprised by what Officer Matthew did for him.(Easton不敢相信刚刚发生的一切，警官Matthew为他所做的一切让他感到惊讶。)”可知，第二段可描写Easton听到Matthew的话后的感动和接受帮助后的举动。
2.续写线索：送披萨——发现是Matthew警官——Matthew警官讲述如何帮助Easton——Easton的感动——Easton发现信封里的字条——Easton再次当面感谢
3.词汇激活
行为类
①交给/递给：hand/give sth to sb./pass/offer
②靠近/走近：approach/come up to/walk up to
③交谈：speak to/talk to/communicate with/talk with
④充满：be filled with/be full of
情绪类
①不乐意：be unwilling to/ be reluctant to
②惊讶的：surprised/shocked/amazed
【点睛】[高分句型1]. He handed the pizza and was about to leave when Officer Matthew stopped him and approached him with an envelope. （由when引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]. I spoke to your boss, and he agreed that your pay wouldn’t be deducted.（由that引导从句作动词“agreed”的宾语从句）
[高分句型3]. His eyes filled with tears, Easton rang the doorbell and thanked Officer Matthew again.（“His eyes filled with tears”为独立主格结构作伴随状语）

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