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1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I first became conscious of my body image last year in fifth grade. One day I was walking by my mirror getting ready for bed and I noticed that my stomach looked big. I started to really hate that and think I was fat even though my family always told me how skinny I was. It wasn’t only my stomach—I started to think my nose was ugly and that my laugh was disgusting. I was even afraid to laugh or smile in public.
Then, in the sixth grade, a popular guy in my class named Luke made it worse. He told his table group that my body looked swollen in skinny jeans. I heard about it from someone else, but then Luke even told me to my face! I couldn’t stop thinking about what Luke had said. Even worse, I started to believe it was true, and I hid my skinny jeans all the way at the bottom of my drawer.
I know I cared too much about what other people said and thought about me. I guess I just wanted to be liked. In fact, I really wish I could have just brushed off comments like that, but I couldn’t change my personality and what I care about that easily.
Luke’s mean comment affected me in a big way. I lost confidence in more than just my body—I started to think that I didn’t matter and that I didn’t have a place in the world. To make it worse, some people also started telling me that I was not meant to be an author, which is what I really want to be. That especially hurt and I started to feel really sad all the time.
I hadn’t really told anyone how I’d been feeling until a couple of months ago when I got a call from my cousin. I’m really close to her, and hearing her voice and laugh made me feel so good inside. I thought about how I used to be that way too, and how I was so sick of feeling sad.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then I started telling her and it all came out.
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When I went back to my bedroom, I looked at myself in the mirror for a long time.
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2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My first life began in November,1904.I was happy and in excellent health. Then I got married and became the father of two lovely girls. I had a good job and a beautiful home.Life was a pleasant dream.
The dream ended suddenly. Then began my second life.
I suffered from a rare disease that affected my motor abilities, first my right arm and leg, then the whole body. Every day after work I climbed up the 14 steps leading up from the garage to the kitchen door, lifting one foot up one step and then dragging the other painfully after it. Repeating the process 14 times was a huge effort for me.As time passed, I became more upset.I wondered why I had been chosen to suffer.
Then on a dark night in August, 1971, I began my third life. Raindrops were beating down hard on the car when I drove slowly down one of the less-traveled roads .Suddenly the wheel(方 向盘)jumped in my hands as one of the tires burst with a bang . I fought the car to a stop and sat there as the terrible nature of the situation swept over me.It was impossible for me to change that tire! Absolutely impossible!
A thought that a passing motorist might stop was deserted at once. Why should anyone I knew I wouldn’t! Then I remembered that a short distance up a little side road was a house.I started the engine and drove slowly along until I came to the house. Lighted windows welcomed me as I pulled into the driveway and sounded the horn(喇叭) .
The door opened and a little girl stood there, looking at me. I rolled down the window and called out that I had a flat tire and needed someone to change it for me because I had a crutch (拐杖) and couldn’t do it myself.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:She went into the house and later came out followed by an old man.
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Paragraph 2:I held out a five-dollar bill to her grandpa, but got no response.
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3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Son’s Love
Our church congregation in Toronto has a way of assisting those who have financial difficulties without making the recipient feel shame or guilt. Money is dropped into an offering box with only the name of the recipient on the envelope. The envelopes are then distributed to those members without them knowing the name of the giver.
There came a time when my husband and I were among those in need. We did not talk about our financial difficulty with anyone. The only reason our children knew was because we had to cut back on many things. Still, we hoped they were not aware of the extent of our need, nor of how much their father and I were suffering because of it. We did not want to burden them with a problem they could do nothing to solve.
Our situation wasn’t improving, and my husband and I knew that we would have to look for outside help. Just as we reached the point of despair, our church gave us a gift envelope that had been left in the offering box. We were overjoyed to receive a very substantial amount of money, enough to bring us through that desperate time. We couldn’t help but wonder who had given such a generous gift. We were extremely relieved and enormously grateful.
A year later, our seventeen-year-old son was applying for a student loan so he could attend university. It was then we discovered that his savings account was almost empty. His father and I were very disturbed by this. We had trusted him to put part of his wages from his part-time job into the bank towards his education. From the time he was nine years old he had been a paper carrier for The Toronto Star, and he had worked very hard for his small earnings.
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1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Anxious, I asked him repeatedly to tell me where the money had gone.
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Finally, in tears, and with great reluctance, my son told us the truth.
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4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Peter started working from home when his wife Annika passed away years back. Although he would take his daughter Mary to school every morning, she would usually walk home with her friend Anna every afternoon, He would then sit in the hallway, waiting for her to arrive.
In the past month, Peter noticed that Mary would always return home with her clothes dirtied. He didn’t think much of this, as he thought maybe she played with other kids at school on the field or at the playground. However, he started to notice that Mary would no longer walk with Anna. Mary usually came back around twenty to thirty minutes after Anna.
He asked Anna’s mom what happened. “The girls are having one of those quarrels (争吵) again. You know, teenage girl stuff.” Anna’s mom said. This didn’t sound good to Peter, so the next day, he decided to see where Mary would go after school.
Peter waited inside his car from across the school. He saw Mary leaving, and her clothes were not dirty. He started the car and slowly followed her as she walked. After a while, she turned towards an old abandoned house and entered. Peter quickly parked the car and ran towards the house to follow her inside where he saw Mary approaching an old man in dirty clothes
“Mary! Get away from him!” he shouted, Mary jumped at her dad’s loud voice and dropped the bag of food she had brought for the man.
“But Dad…” she started to say. Before she knew it, Peter lifted her from the ground and brought her inside the car.
“Mary, you can’t be walking into abandoned houses and talking to homeless men like that! What if he did something to hurt you ” he said angrily. “Promise me, Mary. You’re not going back there.”
Hesitantly (迟疑地), Mary nodded. “I promise. But Daddy, can you please get the drawings he made for me Please, I want the drawings,” she said.
Mary wouldn’t stop crying, so after he dropped her home, Peter went back to the abandoned house. “My daughter won’t stop talking about some drawings she left over here,” Peter said to the man.
The man quietly handed him pieces of paper. Peter was surprised to see that they were portraits (肖像) of his late wife.
注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
“Your daughter is a kind young girl,” the man started to explain.
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Peter then asked the man if he wanted to work in an art shop nearby run by his friend.
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5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Almost all of my holidays were spent with my grandpa. My grandpa was a retired army officer and the years in the army had made him a very tough person, which helped him a lot in fighting with cancer for a long time. Silver and golden stars on his shoulders and medals on his chest in grandma’s old photo albums reflected the marks of his distinguished service and numerous adventures. Grandpa had fine qualities and was a real personality. He was strict with his family, me included, as well as himself.
In our ancestral house there was a big pond as was common in bygone Bengali homes with lots of trees and bushes. Both my grandparents were fond of our so-called garden. One morning our new neighbor saw my grandpa planting two trees on both sides of our main gate, which still stand tall today. Across the street our new neighbor also got the same kind of tree and planted the trees exactly on both sides of his gate too.
My grandpa didn’t often give enough amount of water to his plants and didn’t always give his full attention to them, while our neighbor gave a lot of water to his plants and looked after them too well. My grandpa’s plants were simple but looked good. But our neighbor’s plants were much fuller and greener.
Normally, during April and May, we have short but violent thunderstorms called “Kalboishakhi”. One late evening during a Kalboishakhi we had showers with strong winds, which continued right throughout that night. Next morning along with my grandparents I came out to inspect the damage to our garden. I saw our neighbor was there in his garden too, but looked upset as his plants were uprooted. But, our plants were not damaged and were standing firm on the ground.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Seeing this, our neighbor was surprised and curious.
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Grandpa’s explanations not only convinced the neighbor, but made me realize something.
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6．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was the first week of the summer vacation, and Parisa was already ready to be back at school. Not everyone she knew liked school, but Parisa loved learning new things. Even more than that, she loved school because she got to be with her friends all day long. Parisa was an only child, and she thought it was too quiet at home.
Now her two best friends in the neighborhood were out of town for two weeks, and to Parisa, it seemed like two years. What would she do Sitting on the wide front step of her house, she looked through her favorite kids magazine. The word “contest” caught her eye. “Create Your Own Magazine!” the headline read.
Parisa loved magazines, but it had never occurred to her that she could create one herself. The article said contestants must send in an eight-page magazine with handwritten articles and hand-drawn pictures- nothing was printed by computer.
Parisa returned to her room and lay down on the floor next to her cat. This was what she did whenever she needed to think of really good ideas. She closed her eyes and imagined all sorts of magazines. She imagined magazines about bikes, skating, ballet, soccer, dessert ... But after much thought, she knew what she wanted to feature in her magazine—her neighborhood, for there were always interesting things. She would call it “The Tall Pines Gazette” and fill it with news.
She found a notebook and a pen and left her room. Then she found her grandmother at the door and told her about the contest. “Granny, I’m going to be a reporter for a while, ” Parisa announced. “I’m going to see if there’s any news. ” Her grandmother smiled, “ Well, good luck, honey. You do like asking questions, so I bet you won’t have too much trouble finding news. ” Two hours later, Parisa ran into the house. “Granny, I’ve got so much news that I can’t fit it into eight pages!”
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右;
2．请按如下格式作答。
Parisa got down to working on her magazine.
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A few weeks later, Parisa received a package from the kids magazine.
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7．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Eugene Pugliese, a heroic firefighter in New York, would not have imagined that after more than three decades, the little girl he once saved would track him down and express her appreciation in person for what he had done for her.
That was a bitterly cold December afternoon. Pugliese was fixing a broken pipe in the SoHo neighbourhood when he was approached by a man who said there was a fire down the block. Pugliese followed him, taking off at a sprint(快速奔跑). The man guided him to the sixth-floor apartment that was blowing out thick smoke, and Pugliese went in without hesitation.
Upon entering the smoky apartment, Pugliese noticed and rescued a woman who then said her child was inside the apartment. The woman kept screaming, “My baby Taylor! My baby Taylor!” So Pugliese went back inside, crawling(爬) through the burning room and blinding smoke, and found a young girl who was unconscious. Immediately, he rushed her down the stairs and gave her mouth-to-mouth to bring her round. To Pugliese’s relief, she woke up and started to cry. Then she was taken by ambulance to hospital for further examination.
Soon, the touching story made headlines in the local newspaper. People were full of praise for Pugliese’s bravery. But he just said “I was just in the right place at the right time”. After that, Pugliese didn’t see Taylor ever again, but he always thought of her and wondered how she was going.
Taylor, now a registered nurse in Alexandria, Virginia, has never forgotten him, too. She has kept the newspaper article documenting her being rescued by Pugliese from a burning New York apartment since she was a child. As she got older, she wished she could find Pugliese and thank him face to face—a desire that grew stronger after she became an emergency room nurse, as she learned how rare it was to hear from patients she met on the worst days of their lives again.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
A chance came recently when Taylor was appointed to help in a New York emergency room for weeks.
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Finally, the day of meeting came and Taylor went to Pugliese’s place in excitement.
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8．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jenny had hearing problems when she was four years old. Several surgeries later, Jenny was found having a severe joint disease at seven. She could not put pressure on the back parts of her feet, so she walked on tiptoe(脚尖), and when the pain became unbearable, someone had to carry her. Once when she suddenly experienced sharp pain, her friends got her up and carried her from class to class.
All through grade school, and on into high school, Jenny suffered, yet never complained. She took her medicine and wrapped her feet in steaming towels until the pain eased. As soon as she could bear the pain Jenny immediately carried on, as though she was free of pain. She always wore a smile on her face and expressed her love for others.
Jenny had never been a cheerleader or competed in a sport. She could not even take part in a gym class, though she took the same health class four years in a row, through which she could pass with a substitute credit each year.
Jenny continued to have one surgery after another on her ears all through school. Her hearing improved and she taught herself to read lips. She also carried a pillow(枕头)to school so that she could relieve the pain when she sat down. Gradually, Jenny began attending every football game, cheering the team on.
Then came her senior year. She saw documents about scholarships on the school website when visiting it one day. According to the statement, she would be considered for scholarships; however, school activities, especially sports, could often mean the difference between receiving an award and losing out. She continued to read other notices and found an ad from the football team, which stated that the football manager was seeking for an assistant, who would take on ancillary(辅助的)services like taking charge of the team’s supplies communication and security.
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1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Jenny decided to seize the chance.
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When asked why the team did so well that year, a player spoke of Jenny.
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9．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“All done!” Stephen placed a bowl by the sink. “Let’s swim.” “Swimming! I just can’t get used to it in December,” Martine said. All Stephen had heard since his American cousin, Martine, arrived in Australia were stories about snow and fireplaces. Stephen had only seen snow in pictures.
Suddenly, a loud splash (落水声) came from the backyard. “Mr. Baker’s dog, Max, must be taking a quick swim again.” Stephen rolled his eyes upward. Martine followed Stephen as he went to the pool and stopped, truly shocked. In the water was a round and hairy ball that looked like a wet bear.” A koala bear!” Martine sounded happy as the animal splashed water over his ears. “In fact, you know, he isn’t a bear.” Stephen told her. “He’s a marsupial (有袋动物), like a kangaroo.”
Martine and Stephen sat on the edge of the pool and watched. The koala swam, and then floated on his back until he headed for the opposite side of the pool across from Stephen and Martine. The koala tried to pull himself out, but the pool wall was too slippy.
“He can’t get out,” Martine said. “We’ve got to help him.” Stephen kicked off his shoes and stepped quietly into the pool. By the time Stephen reached the frightened animal, the koala was moving to the metal ladder (梯子). Stephen put his arms under the koala and gave him a push. Martine lifted the animal onto the solid ground. The koala shook himself before climbing across the grass and up the nearest tree.
“We’ve never seen a koala in the pool before,” Stephen said, “but koalas love to swim. My teacher said that backyard pools are often the places where koalas have accidents in Australia.” “What if he falls in when no one is at home ” Martine asked. “All the koala needs is something rough to hang on to,” Stephen replied, “so that he can pull himself right out.” After hearing what happened, Stephen’s mom said, “There is some leftover carpeting in the house. You can use that.”
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Stephen and Martine found the carpet in a corner and carried it to the pool.
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Finally, there came the familiar splash several weeks later.
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10．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The yellow light flashed on my dashboard(仪表盘), showing the words: Maintenance Required. “I don’t have time for this,” I thought as I sped along the freeway. “I’ve got two jobs, and a family to take care of, dogs to feed and exercise to get in. When can I squeeze in a four-hour window without the use of my car ”
In fact, for days I drove with the light flashing. I felt exhausted, juggling(尽量兼顾)a new job that had me driving all over the city, eating in my car and carrying piles of files with me. I was drowning in my “to-do” and this “Maintenance Required” was putting me over the top.
The light now had my full attention. It was obvious that I was going to have to change my entire day. As a contract therapist(治疗师), I was only paid for the patients I saw, so canceling my appointments was going to cost me a lot, but so would ignoring the light. As I reached for my cell phone to call the office, it rang from the depth of my pocket. My patient called to cancel his appointment.
Therefore, I made it to the dealer’s in time to drop off my car. I had four hours to kill. I thought about waiting at the dealer’s, but that seemed like punishment. My car needed maintenance and so did my soul. I found out that the dealer offered a bus ride that could drop me at a mall. Although I had no love for shopping, I knew that the beach was about a mile from the mall. I had my sneakers, my iPod and my phone, so I set off on my adventure.
I discovered that everything, including waiting and distance, seemed shorter and closer when I mentally used the word “only”. It would only be four hours and I would have my car again.
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I plugged in my iPod and began to enjoy relaxing music from my yoga class.
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My phone rang.
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参考答案
1． Then I started telling her and it all came out. She seemed so surprised and said how special I was. She started listing all my good qualities, saying I shouldn’t listen to people who say mean things because they were probably just feeling bad about themselves or trying to look cool. Definitely, she added, I shouldn’t let them tell me how to feel about myself or my body. It was like a sudden wake-up call: focusing on what other people thought of me only made things even worse, and I must learn to love and accept myself for who I am.
When I went back to my bedroom, I looked at myself in the mirror for a long time. I saw what I had never seen in myself before, like my nice grey eyes, my cute smile, and the fact that I am beautiful in my own way. I know some people might still make hurtful comments again, and sometimes I may feel like I am fat again, but next time I will be prepared. I will only think well of myself even when I am feeling sad, and stand up for myself when someone puts me down. In my eyes, I am perfect myself—no one can change that.
【导语】文章以时间发展为线索。主要讲述了在作者成长过程中，五年级的时候作者第一次注意到镜中自己的大肚子，随后作者否认自己，觉得自己很丑，笑声很恶心，甚至不敢在公共场合笑。到了六年级的时候，班级里的一位叫卢克的孩子让事情变得更糟。他告诉同学作者穿着紧身牛仔裤的身体看起来有些肿胀，甚至当面告诉了作者这种情形。这让作者相信自己真的很胖。卢克刻薄的评论深深地影响了作者，让作者不仅仅对自己的身体失去了信心，同时也开始觉得自己无足轻重。甚至有同学告诉作者注定不会成为一个作家。这些让作者很伤心，直到几个月前作者接到表姐的电话，告诉她自己的感受。
【详解】1. 段落续写
①根据第一段首句“然后我开始告诉她，把一切都说出来了。”可知，第一段可以接着描写表姐听了我的诉说之后，她给我建议，让我不要听从别人对我的讨论，我要学会爱自己并接受自己。
②根据第二段首句“当我回到我的卧室，我看着镜子里的自己很长一段时间。”可知，第二段可以接着叙述在镜中我发现了自己的美，同时我告诉自己，尽管别人还会恶语攻击，但我要看到自己的优点，我认为我是完美的——这一点没有人能改变。
2.续写线索
倾诉——列举我的优点——警醒——返回卧室——注视镜中的自己——发现自己的完美——决定——感受
3.词汇积累
行动类：
①开始：start/begin/commence
②说，表达：say/speak/tell/express
③关注：focus on/concentrate on/centre on
情绪类：
①惊讶的：surprised/astonished/shocked
②伤感情的：hurtful/unkind/harmful
【点睛】【高分句型1】She seemed so surprised and said how special I was. (运用了how引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 I saw what I had never seen in myself before, like my nice grey eyes, my cute smile, and the fact that I am beautiful in my own way. (运用了what引导的宾语从句和that引导的同位语从句)
2．She went into the house and later came out followed by an old man. Bundled in a raincoat and a hat, he asked me to sit there comfortably, and started working hard in the storm. It seemed to me that he was awfully slow and I was beginning to become impatient. Eventually, it was done, I felt the car bump as the jack was removed, and then he was standing at my car window. “The tires have been changed,” he told me solemnly. “You can drive away safely.”
I held out a five-dollar bill to her grandpa, but got no response. When I lowered the window and handed him the money, I found the old man a cripple, wet through! Shame penetrated and I was sick with an intensity I had never felt before. How could I sat comfortably in the car while an old man did all the work for me in the soaking rain! It was also at the moment that I realized I was filled with self-pity, indifference to the need of others and thoughtlessness. That night marked the beginning of my third life：I am trying to help others in my small way.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者原本拥有一个幸福的家庭，但所有的一切在作者得了一种罕见的疾病之后发生了变化。这种疾病影响了作者全身运动的能力。在一次滂沱大雨中，作者的车胎在高速路上爆了，考虑到自己的疾病情况，作者认为自己不能修理车胎。于是寻找帮助，当车子开到一户人家门前，出来帮忙的竟然也和作者一样——一个跛脚的老人帮助他修理车胎。由此，作者意识到自己错误想法同时也学会了应以自己的方式尽可能地去帮助别人的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“她进了房子，后来又出来了，后面跟着一位老人。”可知，第一段可描写在大雨中老人帮助作者修车的场景。
②由第二段首句内容“我拿出一张五美元的钞票给她爷爷，但他没接。”可知，第二段可描写作者拿钱对老人进行感谢，并发现事实真相——跛脚的老人帮助自己修车，可以描写作者的羞愧和最终的感悟。
2.续写线索：请求帮助——老人帮忙修车——掏钱感谢——发现真相——作者羞愧——最终感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①披着：bundle/cover
②.递交：hand/ pass
③.意识到：realize/be aware of
情绪类
①.没有耐心的：impatient/out of patience
②.羞愧：shame/ abashment
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Bundled in a raincoat and a hat, he asked me to sit there comfortably, and started working hard in the storm.（句使用了过去分词作伴随状语）
[高分句型2]. It was also at the moment that I realized I was filled with self-pity, indifference to the need of others and thoughtlessness.（运用了强调句型）
3．Anxious, I asked him to tell us where the money had gone. Hesitant and wordless, he didn’t dare to look directly into my eyes, but lowered his head, almost to his chest, with hands tightly clasped and face blushing. The scene that he kept so silent like a statue brought more anxiety to my already burning heart. Countless doubts and speculations roared in my messy mind, every nerve in my body yelling at me to hound him for the answer. “Tell the truth!” I urged, determined to find out where the money had gone. Then, over his face came a torn look.
Finally, in tears, and with great reluctance, my son told us the truth. “I sent it to the offering box with your names,” he murmured, the salty water pooling in his eyes. His words suddenly hit me like lightning. I was glued to the spot, speechless, with a lump in my throat—it had taken my son years to save that money. He had given it to us willingly—without telling us what he had done. The following moment witnessed me drawing my son into my arms, sobbing and apologizing. Never in my life had I been aware of my son’s love, silent but pure and deep, which had saved our family and now warmed my life like sunshine.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和她丈夫有一段时间陷入了经济困难，但是没有人知道，作者的孩子们只是知道他们不断的削减了开支，可是情况并没有得到改善。在作者快要绝望的时候教堂送来了一大笔钱，帮助他们度过了难关，他们并不知道是谁捐赠的。一年后，作者17岁的儿子上大学申请学生贷款时，发现他的储蓄账户几乎是空的，他们开始追查儿子的钱到底去了哪里。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我一再问他钱到底去那里了。”可知，第一段可描写作者询问儿子及追查钱的去向。
②由第二段首句内容“最后，儿子流着泪，非常不情愿地告诉我们真相。”可知，第二段可描写作者的儿子告诉他们自己把钱放进奉献盒捐给了作者和父亲，作者深受感动。
2.续写线索：询问钱去哪了——儿子的神情——作者的心情——儿子承认捐钱——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①保持沉默：kept so silent/be quiet/keep quiet
②决定去做：determine to do/decide to do /make up one’s mind
情绪类
①生气：angry/show anger/mad
②流泪：salty water pooling in his eyes/burst into tears
【点睛】[高分句型1] I urged, determined to find out where the money had gone.(由连接词where引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] He had given it to us willingly — without telling us what he had done.(what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型3] Never in my life had I been aware of my son’s love, silent but pure and deep, which had saved our family and now warmed my life like sunshine.(Never引导的部分倒装句，which引导的非限制性定语从句)
4．“Your daughter is a kind young girl,” the man started to explain. “She goes to see me every day.” After communication, Peter eventually knew where the dirty spots of his daughter’s clothes came from. One day, Mary went home alone after quarreling with Anna, when she noticed this old man begging for food. So sympathetic was she that she bought him some food and accompanied him back home. Weeping for Mary’s kindness, Peter asked curiously, “Is this the reason why you made her the drawings ” “Yes, she told me she missed her late mom so much. As a painter before, all I can do for her is to draw some pictures about her mom.”
Peter then asked the man if he wanted to work in an art shop nearby run by his friend. He wanted to be as helpful as his kind-hearted daughter. “Can I ” the old man just couldn’t believe what he heard. Peter later bought him some new clothes and took him home. The father knew these two sincere friends were worthy of more mutual companionship. Mary was overwhelmed by astonishment when she took over the drawings from the old man at the gate. In the portraits, her mom smiled gently, as if she was saying, “Helping others is helping ourselves.”
【导语】本文以故事发展为线索展开，讲述了Peter在妻子离世后每天送女儿去上学，然后在家里等女儿放学归来。但是他偶然发现女儿的衣服很脏。他就偷偷去学校，想等放学一探究竟。他发现女儿跑到一处废弃的房子，接触一个无家可归的老人。他很害怕，赶紧带女儿回家了。但是女儿恳求他把老人给她画的妈妈的画像取回来。于是他再次找老人，才知道老人和女儿之间感人的故事。于是他把老人接回家中，想让这种陪伴和互帮互助延续下去。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘你女儿是个善良的小女孩，’男人开始解释。”可知，第一段可描写在老人的讲述下，Peter知道了女儿如何善良地帮助这个老人，以及他俩的故事。
②由第二段首句内容“然后，彼得问这名男子是否想在他朋友经营的附近一家艺术店工作。”可知，第二段可描写Peter也准备采取行动帮助这位老人。
2.续写线索：发现女儿衣服脏——一探究竟——发现陌生老人——强行带女儿回家——独自返回取画——得知善良女儿和老人的故事——主动帮助老人
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.陪伴：accompany sb./keep pany
②.回家：go home/come back home
情绪类
①.好奇的：curiously/out of curiosity
②.惊讶：be surprised to do/be overwhelmed by astonishment
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Peter eventually knew where the dirty spots of his daughter’s clothes came from.（由连接副词where引导的宾语从句作knew的宾语）
[高分句型2]. So sympathetic was she that she bought him some food and accompanied him back home.（由so...that引导结果状语从句）
5．One possible version:
Seeing this, our neighbor was surprised and curious. He came up to my grandpa and asked with a touch of embarrassment, “How is this possible I actually looked after my plants better.” My grandpa had his signature smile on and replied, “What you did spared the plants the need to work themselves hard for anything. I gave them just certain water and let their roots do the rest to search for more. And their roots went deeper, which made their position stronger. That is why they survived.”
Grandpa’s explanations not only convinced the neighbor, but made me realize something. My grandpa was strict with me on many occasions with his do’s and don’ts, and that drove me to be independent and work hard for what I wanted, which, however, I’d rarely noticed. I became aware that anything easily got can go off much more easily. Still after a rainy night when the sun is clear and bright the next morning it reminds me of my grandpa’s words. The guidance has taken root in my mind and influences me all the way.
【导语】文章以种树为线索展开，讲述作者几乎每个假期都在爷爷家度过，他们的老院子里有很多树。一天爷爷的新邻居看见作者爷爷在大门的两侧种植了两棵树，就也在自家的大门两侧种植了两棵同样的树。作者的爷爷不经常给他的植物浇足量的水，而爷爷的邻居则给他的植物浇很多水，关怀备至。在一次强烈的雷暴大雨中，邻居的树被连根拔起，但作者爷爷的树仍安然无恙。
【详解】1.段落续写
①根据第一段首句“看到这个结果，我们的邻居既惊讶又好奇。”，再结合续写第二段的开头语“爷爷的解释不仅说服了邻居，也让我意识到一些事情。”可知，本段应围绕邻居与作者爷爷关于为何邻居的树被连根拔起而作者爷爷的树却安然无恙而进行的交流展开。
②根据第二段首句“爷爷的解释不仅说服了邻居，也让我意识到一些事情”可知，本段应围绕作者从上述事件中得到的感悟以及该事件对作者生活的影响展开。
2.续写线索：邻居惊讶——爷爷解释原因——说服邻居——作者的感悟
3.词类激活
行为类
①照顾：look after/take care of/attend to
②寻找：search/seek
③注意：notice/take notice of
情绪类
①尴尬：embarrassment/awkwardness
②微笑：smile/beam
【点睛】[高分句型1]What you did spared the plants the need to work themselves hard for anything. (运用了what引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2]My grandpa was strict with me on many occasions with his do’s and don’ts, and that drove me to be independent and work hard for what I wanted, which, however, I’d rarely noticed. (运用了what引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6．佳作展台
Parisa got down to working on her magazine. She wrote “The Tall Pines Gazette” in big, colorful letters on the front cover. After due consideration, she chose the news about Barky, her next door’s dog, as the first story. The process was smooth. Days later, Parisa finished all stories that covered a lot of ground, with hand-drawn pictures added to each one. She couldn’t believe how fast the days had flown by because of her project. Parisa was filled with pride and excitement when she sent it off to enter the contest.
A few weeks later, Parisa received a package from the kids magazine. To Parisa’s surprise and delight, “The Tall Pines Gazette” won first prize! The kids magazine had it printed and sent her some copies! She rushed to share them with her grandmother and her friends who had just returned from their vacations. They congratulated her and told her her magazine was really cool. Her neighbors were so impressed that they suggested Parisa keep her magazine going. Surely she happily agreed and she’s already had inspiration for the next issue!
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了暑假开始了，Parisa最好的两个朋友都不在家，她又是家里唯一的孩子。看书时，儿童杂志上的一则比赛信息吸引了她。比赛要求参赛者创作一本八页的杂志。一番思考之后，Parisa决定以街区为创作主题参加比赛。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“帕里萨开始着手制作她的杂志。”可知，第一段可描写Parisa是怎么创作杂志的。
②由第二段首句内容“几周后，帕里萨收到了一份儿童杂志的包裹。”可知，第二段可描写Parisa收到包裹后的心情与举动。
2.续写线索：创造杂志——获奖——得到赞扬
3.词汇激活
行为类
①充满了：be filled with/be full of
②完成：finish/complete
③赢得一等奖：win the first prize/rank first
情绪类
①令人惊讶和高兴的是：to one's surprise and delight/surprisingly and delightedly
②高兴地同意了：happily agreed/agreed with delight
【点睛】【高分句型1】Parisa was filled with pride and excitement when she sent it off to enter the contest.（由when引导了时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】She rushed to share them with her grandmother and her friends who had just returned from their vacations. （由who引导了限定性定语从句）
7．A chance came recently when Taylor was appointed to help in a New York emergency room for weeks. “I must take this rare opportunity to find Pugliese and thank him in person,” Taylor murmured to herself. When packing her luggage, she packed the newspaper article too. For her, it was not just an article; it recorded the love and bravery of a noble soul. Though she was almost rushed off her feet, she squeezed every possible minute to track Pugliese down. Eventually, to her great relief, she came across an acquaintance of Pugliese’s, got Pugliese’s phone number and managed to fix an appointment with him.
Finally, the day of meeting came and Taylor went to Pugliese’s place in excitement. The moment she saw Pugliese, Taylor felt her eyes moistened. “Thank you so much, sir,” she said in a choked voice. “Had you not been there, I wouldn’t be here today.” Tears in his eyes, Pugliese took Taylor to the sofa and they had a hearty conversation, recalling the past experience of the fire and exchanging life stories. Learning Taylor has become a nurse, the retired firefighter felt very proud of her. Although time can make the article fade, the precious memory will never fade away, neither will the love among people.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了三十多年前的一个寒冷的冬天，一所公寓发生了火灾。消防员Eugene Pugliese奋不顾身冲入火海救出了已经失去意识的小女孩Taylor。他的英勇事迹上了当地报纸的头条。但之后，Pugliese就再也没有见过Taylor了，不过他会时常想起这个小女孩。长大后的Taylor成了弗吉尼亚的一名急诊室护士，她一直保留着当时记录她被救的故事的报纸文章。随着她逐渐长大，她想要找到自己的救命恩人并当面道谢。这个愿望在其成为护士后愈发强烈。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①续写第一段的开头语是“最近，当Taylor被指派去纽约的一个急诊室帮忙数周时，机会来了”。结合短文最后一段提到的当了护士的Taylor愈发想要找到救命恩人并当面向其道谢的内容可知，本段续写内容应涉及Taylor决定抓住这次宝贵的机会去寻找Pugliese、她在纽约的工作情况以及她工作之余寻找Pugliese的努力等。
②续写第二段的开头语表明，续写第一段还应提到Taylor成功找到了Pugliese并与其约定了见面时间。续写第二段的开头语是“终于，见面的日子到了，Taylor激动地来到Pugliese的家”。由此可知，本段应重点描述Taylor和Pugliese见面后的场景，如Taylor向Pugliese表达谢意、他们见到彼此的心情、他们的交流等。
2.续写线索：被派往急诊室帮忙——努力寻找——约见面——见面后场景——表达谢意
3.词汇激活
行为类
①小声说：murmur/whisper/susurrate/in a choked voice
②挤压：squeeze/squash/press
情绪类：
①感谢：thank/showing his appreciation/show his gratitude/be grateful
②真诚：hearty/genuine/sincere
③宽慰：relief/alleviation
④珍贵的：precious/cherished/valuable/treasured
【点睛】【高分句型1】When packing her luggage, she packed the newspaper article too. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略）
【高分句型2】Though she was almost rushed off her feet, she squeezed every possible minute to track Pugliese down. （运用了though引导让步状语从句）
【高分句型3】Had you not been there, I wouldn’t be here today.（运用了虚拟语气和倒装）
【高分句型4】 Learning Taylor has become a nurse, the retired firefighter felt very proud of her.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
8．One possible version:
Jenny decided to seize the chance. The football manager turned her down at first considering her health condition. After that, she began to bombard the manager, begging and promising. Impressed by her persistence, he finally gave in with the warning, “If you miss ONE game, you’re out!” Jenny nodded in excitement. Before each game, Jenny could be seen carrying big buckets of water to her teammates, with her pillow under the arm. She helped bandage knees, massaged backs and gave pep talks. She was continually at their beck and call, and it turned out to be one of the best years for the team in its history.
When asked why the team did so well that year, a player spoke of Jenny. “When we’re knocked down and can’t move, we look up and see Jenny, struggling across the field, dragging her buckets and carrying her pillow. It makes anything the rest of us suffer seem insignificant. We feel we have no excuse not to work hard,” he recalled. Finally, Jenny gained recognition and respect that she totally deserved, and she received a number of scholarships. Her favorite scholarship, however, was a small one from a sports club, because she thought it was of special and considerable significance to her.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。Jenny从小听力受损，还患了严重的关节病。上学期间，Jenny手术不断，但她以坚强的毅力克服病痛，以积极阳光的态度面对生活。她从未当过啦啦队队员，也没有参加过体育比赛，但她在病情好转后积极参与到每一场足球赛中，为队员加油。当看到学校足球队主教练想要招聘一个助手时，Jenny决定抓住这一机会申请去做主教练助手。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Jenny决定抓住这一机会”可知，第一段可描写Jenny去申请做主教练助手的情节。结合文中对她身体状况的描述可猜测，她会遇到一些困难。
②由第二段首句内容“当被问到这一年球队为什么表现这么好时，一个队员谈到了Jenny”可知，第二段可描写第二段可描写全体队员是怎么受到Jenny的鼓舞和感染的。最后还可呼应短文中的“she would be considered for scholarships... losing out”，描写Jenny担任主教练助手期间的收获，如获得了奖学金、得到了他人的认可等。
2.续写线索：申请做主教练助手——遇到一些困难——全体队员是怎么受到Jenny的鼓舞和感染的
3.词类激活
行为类
①拒绝：turn down/refuse/reject
②帮助：help/assist
③获得：gain/obtain/get
情绪类
①兴奋：excitement/thrill
②重要的：insignificant/ unimportant
【点睛】[高分句型1]. When we’re knocked down and can’t move, we look up and see Jenny, struggling across the field, dragging her buckets and carrying her pillow. （由when引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]. Finally, Jenny gained recognition and respect that she totally deserved, and she received a number of scholarships. （由关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句）
9．Stephen and Martine found the carpet in a corner and carried it to the pool. Then they found some rope in the garage and tied one end of the rope to the carpet. After tying the other end of the rope to two poolside grab bars, they cut the carpet so that it extended into the pool, making sure it lay against the pool wall. “I hope it works,” said Stephen. Stephen and Martine waited and waited, but the koala was nowhere to be seen, and the “pool wall koala aid” was almost forgotten, which left Martine a bit disappointed.
Finally, there came the familiar splash several weeks later. Stephen and Martine looked at each other with the same thought. It could be Mr. Baker’s dog or... Martine rushed outside with Stephen. The water shone on the koala’s furry head. He swam around for a while, and then swam toward the carpet. Grabbing it with his front feet, he slowly pulled himself up and out of the water. With four feet planted firmly on the ground, he shook himself and ran off. Martine laughed. “I’ll always remember my trip to Australia and the swimming koala.” she said.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Stephen邀请表妹Martine一起游泳，但Martine说她不习惯在12月份游泳。突然，他们听到后院有落水声，Stephen猜测是Baker先生的狗又在游泳了，但当他们走近时，才发现是一只考拉。这只考拉在泳池里游了一会儿后想出去，但泳池壁太滑了，它出不去。最后，在Stephen和Martine的帮助下，考拉成功地从泳池中出来了。Stephen告诉Martine，他的老师曾说，在澳大利亚，后院游泳池是考拉经常发生意外的地方。Martine询问如果考拉掉入泳池时无人在家该怎么办呢？Stephen回答说，需要有一些粗糙的东西，这样它们就能抓住并能自己从泳池里出来。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Stephen和Martine在一个角落里找到了地毯，并把它带到了泳池边。”可知，第一段可描写Stephen和Martine合力为考拉准备能帮助它们爬出泳池的东西以及他们的期待考拉再次出现等展开。
②由第二段首句内容“几周后，终于出现了熟悉的落水声。”可知，第二段可描写考拉回来了，它在泳池中游泳，并借助Stephen和Martine用地毯为它做的东西成功地从泳池出来的内容，以及Stephen和Martine看到他们的努力得到回报后的感受。
2.续写线索：准备爬出泳池的东西—期待考拉出现—失落—考拉出现—考拉借助准备的东西上岸—努力得到回报的开心
3.词汇激活
行为类
①捆，系：tie/knot/bind
②冲：rush/dash/run at full speed
③拖：pull/drag/draw
情绪类
①失望的：disappointed/depressed
②笑：laugh/smile
【点睛】【高分句型1】After tying the other end of the rope to two poolside grab bars, they cut the carpet so that it extended into the pool, making sure it lay against the pool wall.(运用了现在分词短语作状语和so that引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】With four feet planted firmly on the ground, he shook himself and ran off.(运用了with复合结构作状语)
【高分句型3】Stephen and Martine waited and waited, but the koala was nowhere to be seen, and the “pool wall koala aid” was almost forgotten, which left Martine a bit disappointed.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
10．One possible version:
I plugged in my iPod and began to enjoy relaxing music from my yoga class. Then I listened to self-help and motivational music that I had heard before, but suddenly heard in a new way. As I walked. I dug my toes into the soft wet sand. I breathed in the salty fresh ocean air. I felt the warmth of the sun and the gentle touch of the wind. I was feeling so renewed and peaceful that I almost felt guilty. What a brilliant idea those carmakers had. I thought. Maintenance Required! If only we came with such a light.
My phone rang. It was the dealer letting me know my car was ready an hour early. “So soon ” I asked. “Will it be OK if I come in a couple of hours I am still working on a little maintenance of my own.” Hearing “Of course” on the phone, I said goodbye. Lost in natural beauty on the beach, I felt more and more refreshed. I suddenly realized the importance of taking care of ourselves.
【导语】本文以人物为线索，讲述作者为了养家糊口，工作非常的繁忙，自己身心疲惫。因为病人取消了预约，作者有了四个小时的休息时间，所以他去购物，放松自己，从而意识到了自我放松的重要性。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我插上iPod，开始享受瑜伽课上的放松音乐。”可知，第一段可描写作者听着音乐，慢慢的放松了自我。
②由第二段首句内容“我的电话响了。”可知，第二段可描述作者接到电话后并没有立刻去工作，他意识到了自我放松的重要性。
2.续写线索：得到四个小时的放松时间——听音乐——放松了自己——意识到了自我放松的重要性
3.词汇激活：
行为类
①呼吸空气：breath in the air →take in the air
②意识到：realize→be conscious of
③照顾：take care of→look after
情绪类
①鼓舞人心的音乐：motivational music→inspiring music
②感觉焕然一新：feel so renewed→feel so refreshed
【点睛】【高分句型】Then I listened to self-help and motivational music that I had heard before, but suddenly heard in a new way. （由that引导了限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I was feeling so renewed and peaceful that I almost felt guilty. （由so...that...引导了结果状语从句）

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