资源简介 读后续写1.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数至少应为80词。When I was a child, we lived next door to the Schonfield Home, People who got too old to take care of themselves lived there. I was a regular visitor and enjoyed spending time with the old people there.One day, a very old lady named Mrs. Kurtz moved to the Schonfield Home. She seemed sad all the time. For days, I had never seen her smile or laugh. My parents learned that she had no family or friends.Weeks later, I was visiting the home again. And I saw her sitting alone, looking unusually depressed(消沉的). Mrs. Smith, one of the old people told me that Mrs. Kurtz had turned eighty-nine, and that she was upset to be celebrating another birthday all alone without any cards or gifts. She truly believed there was no one in the world who loved her.This moved me deeply, and I started to create a plan in my mind. I ran home and raced to my room. I took out my piggy bank that I always valued. And I poured out all the money that I had received on birthdays and other special occasions. I had been saving money for a new bike. Although the money wasn’t enough to buy a bike, it was enough for what I wanted to do then.I raced down the stairs. My mother was cleaning the house. I walked to her and explained what I was about to do. And she smiled at me proudly. She planted a kiss on my cheek and said, ”I must be the luckiest mother in the world to have such a caring daughter." My mother stopped what she was doing.注意:1.所续写短文的词数至少应为80左右;2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;Paragraph 1:And we went to a gift shop together.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:We went up to Mrs. Kurtz and gave her our gifts.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.阅读下面短文,根据所给内容续写一段文字,使之构成一个完整的故事。开头已给出。Jimmy and Bob who were raised in New York were childhood best friends. When Bob was eighteen and Jimmy was twenty, Bob set out for the West to make his fortune. They parted at “Big Joe’ Brady’s” and made a promise to get together at the same place after twenty years. However, at the appointed time and place, it turned out that Bob became a criminal while Jimmy was a policeman. Jimmy did his duty and Bob was put into prison. Having spent 20 years in jail, Bob was finally released. Now 58, felt lost and helpless.“Twenty years is a long time,” he smiled bitterly, not knowing where to go. He had no family, and had never heard a word from Jimmy again since that cold, dark night. “Was he ashamed of having a friend like me ” Bob longed for an answer.“Excuse me, sir, are you Bob ” Bob heard the voice of a young man.“Yes.” He turned around and was surprised to find a familiar-looking man in his thirties. “Have we met before ”“No, sir,” replied the man. “My father told me to meet you today. I have a note for you from him.”Doubtfully, Bob unfolded the note. His hands were shaking by the time he had finished reading.Bob, the doctor says I’ve only got three months. I’m afraid I won’t be able to meet you this time, but you’ll always be my dear friend.Jimmy“You’re Jimmy’s son !” Bob shouted in surprise.注意:1. 续写词数应为80词左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“Yes, sir,” the young man smiled. “And my name is Bob.”_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.阅读下面短文,根据所给内容续写一段文字,使之构成一个完整的故事。开头已给出。My sister, Mary, and I were quite different. In my eyes, Mary was quiet and, maybe, cold.My parents ran a chicken farm. Since my parents were busy with other farm work, I offered to clean the chicken house, on the weekend and each school day after I returned home. It surely wasn’t fun for me, but I was happy to lend a hand. More importantly, the 20 dollars my parents promised me for the job meant much to me, with which I could afford my favorite books and CDs.Cleaning the dirty chicken house was really a challenge for a 12-year-old like me. For several times, when I stopped by Mary’s room, I knocked at her door and asked whether she would help clean the chicken house However, I got “No” each time. She was indeed cold, I said to myself.One Saturday, I came back home late due to a class outing. I was anxious and I hated to see the tired and disappointed look on Dad’s face! Luckily, Dad hadn’t come back yet.注意:1. 续写词数应为80左右:2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答,I rushed to the chicken house and found Mary was there.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Jake was anxiously waiting for the bus with $6 in his pocket. Moments later, the bus pulled over, and Jake jumped in, assuming it was just going to be an ordinary ride to school. The bus came to a stop, picking up Christel, a 65-year -old woman. She was dirty and wet. Christel looked around for an empty seat, just two seats away from Jake.“Tickets, please!” said the conductor to the new passengers on the bus. “Tickets... tickets... Where to ... $3 pleas...”The conductor gave away tickets and collected money from the passengers until he finally reached Christel’s seat. “Ticket! This is not a charity ride that picks up beggars for free,” he said, staring at her. The man was sure he hadn’t collected money from her yet and that she hadn’t bought a ticket from him. Christel’s face slowly started to flush red. “One second. I’m looking for my wallet,” she replied. “I... uh... I don’t have money. I forgot to bring my wallet,” Christel stammered (吞吞吐吐), embarrassed and surprised. She had never met anybody before who was so rude and unkind to her, let alone in public.Jake saw everything and was disappointed at how the conductor treated the poor woman. Then he remembered he still had some change. “Hey, watch your words, conductor! Her ticket is on me!” shouted Jake, drawing all the attention from onlookers.“Here is your $3... Give her a ticket.”Christel invited Jake to sit beside her after the person near her got down at the next stop. They chatted for a while. From their talk, Christel learned that Jake’s mother was working hard to raise him and his sister and he was eager to become a basketball player.注意:1.续写词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The next day Jake saw Christel outside his classroom__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Tinky, an eight-year-old girl, was studying in a primary school in a village.Though she belonged to a poor family, her family was rich with cultural and ethical (道德的) values、But children don’t care about ethics when they are in a group which doesn’t know about ethical rules. Tinky was a member of such a naughty (顽皮的) group.New Year’s Day was about to come. Every shop of the village was full of celebration materials, such as lights, colorful papers and beautiful greeting cards. Children’s eyes started shining and hearts started dancing with joy whenever they see these materials.One day some naughty kids stole some greeting cards from a shop while its shopkeeper was busy in other activities. Tinky told her friends that stealing was a very bad thing. But her friends didn’t return, instead they gave one card to Tinky. She got excited with that magic greeting card and decided not to tell anybody about these stolen cards.Next day Tinky was thinking to whom this bcautiful card should be given so she asked her sisters about it. They told her that she should give the card to her teacher and write a few lines for her.“My teacher is so pretty like a necklace full of diamonds ( 钻石)...”,she wrote. And she mentioned her teacher’s name as well as her own name in it.On New Year’s Day she gave her greeting card to her leacher saying Happy New Year mum. Her teacher didn’t expect it from her because children used to give grceting cards to their friends only.注意:1.续写词数应为80左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。So when receiving it, her teacher was surprised but smiled.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Wang Peng is a kind and intelligent 16-year-old boy. His family enjoyed traveling together, and one day they planned a trip to Hainan, as they loved learning about unique cultures.They arrived at the airport hours in advance. To pass the time, Wang Peng’s parents went to the shops while the boy sat nearby quietly waiting, until he realized the girl next to him was crying. “Hi, Sister, Are you okay ” the boy asked. At first, the girl did not answer. “Where are you about to fly ” he asked. Finally, the girl spoke up. “I’m supposed to fly back home to Hainan. I promised my mother that I would come home for her 60th birthday, but I lost my plane ticket,” the girl said. “I’d been saving up for this ticket for such a long time. I can’t afford another ticket now.” she said.Wang Peng felt really sorry for the girl. Soon he saw his parents returning from the shops. Quickly, he stood up and, before his parents could come closer, he leaned toward the girl and said, “Check under your seat. Isn’t that a ticket Maybe you can ask the ground staff to change it to your name.”The girl, Li Mei, was at first confused. But when Wang Peng left, she checked under her seat and saw a ticket lying there. It wasn’t hers, but she was hopeless, so she childishly thought she could do as Wang Peng told her.She handed the ticket to the woman at the counter (柜台) and as she waited, she saw Wang Peng’s father shouting at Wang Peng, “How could you be so careless and lose your ticket ”At that moment, Li Mei realized whose ticket it was under her seat. But just as she did, the woman at the counter spoke to her. “Excuse me, girl. I believe this is that boy’s missing ticket.” She pointed to Wang Peng.Upon overhearing what the woman said, Wang Peng’s father turned toward Li Mei and shouted, “You’re a thief Why do you have my son’s ticket I’m calling the police!”注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“Dad, wait!” Wang Peng stepped in before things could get worse._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Mei couldn’t believe she’d been given a second chance to go home._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Cats are a mysterious kind of animal-there is more passing in their minds than we know of. I can’t agree more with this because of my recent experience.It was the Sunday before Labor Day, and I was tired after spending the day at a picnic in a relative’s garden. I looked out of the window before climbing onto bed. Stars filled the night sky, and crickets(蟋蟀) gently sang in the darkness. All seemed right with the world.My big, old black-and-white cat, Oreo, lay on the foot of my bed where he slept every night, keeping my feet warm. I climbed onto bed and immediately fell into a deep sleep.I had just fallen asleep when Oreo woke me up by walking over my stomach. I looked at the bedside clock: 3:10 am. I had no idea why Oreo was troubling me. He’d never done that before unless I overslept in the morning, but that usually happened at 8:00 am, not in the middle of the night.I pushed Oreo off me, rolled over and pulled the blanket (毯子) over my head. But Oreo didn’t stop. He stepped on my head and began to make noises loudly.“Oreo,”I said. “Go back to sleep.”But Oreo wouldn’t stop. He kept walking on my stomach and legs, continuing to trouble me. Suddenly, there was a crash of thunder (雷), and I sat up on the bed and looked out of the window. Lightning filled the sky. Strong winds blew through the window. Rain started to come down hard, making it almost impossible to see the trees in the yard. Soon the wind was picking up and the branches of the trees were moving violently(强烈地).A terrible storm had started.Seeing the sight, I was struck with horror. Thinking that it was not safe to stay in the house, I climbed out of bed, put on my clothes, and held Oreo in my arms.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式作答。We headed for the basement (地下室).________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I discovered that my house had been damaged (损)by a fallen tree.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。This morning I went shopping and in a surrounded area where the shopping trolleys(购物车) are housed, I saw a young man who appeared very troubled. He was thin, dirty and very much alone. I went over to see if he was OK and asked if I could get him something. He said he was OK and that he didn’t want anything.Oh, my heart went out to this man who appeared to have a mental(精神的)illness and to be homeless. He was so tired and he looked very sad. His feet were in worn shoes. He had a small backpack, a cap, a pair of well-worn runners and a can of coke with him.While shopping I kept an eye on him to see if he’d moved away or was still there. As he hadn’ t moved on, I bought him a sandwich, a couple of bottles of water, some bananas, muesli bars and some cheese and put them in a bag for him.As I gave the bag to him, I sensed he was astonished at the simple act of kindness. He said, “You didn’t have to do that for me”, to which I answered “I wanted to. ” I spoke to him again as I was returning my trolley and he was clearly mentally unwell but I took the time to listen to him.He introduced himself as Nathan and I introduced myself to him. I hope Nathan felt a little bit of love and human kindness today in a world where many people like him are ignored(忽视), and given up. I’m sure Nathan never expected to be where he was now when he was growing up.I won’ t forget Nathan easily. His sad brown eyes, his tiredness and my short connection with him today touched me deeply. I wonder what situations have brought him to his present state. I came to know his past experiences.注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。He lost everything, including his parents, in a hurricane (飓风).________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I happened to know from our talk that the next day was his birthday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。When two-year old Frankie-Rae Hockney took her first shaky steps across the livingroom, her mother cried. Although watching a child walk for the first time is an exciting moment for any parent, for Mary-Ella Tuppenney-Hockney it was a milestone she neverthought her daughter would meet.Frankie-Rae was born with a rare chromosomal anomaly (染色体异常) called 17p 13.1 microdeletion syndrome, of which there are only 21 known cases. Doctors explained that they only had five different case studies who had the condition and so there were lots of uncertainties about her future. As a result, when she was born, Mary-Ella, 36, and dad Ben Hockney, 37,were warned that she might never walk or talk. They both broke down in tears, not knowing what life would hold for their daughter.Mary-Ella is a dance teacher and she runs her own dance school in Oxfordshire and so dancing is a huge part of their lives. So she thought it was heart-breaking to think that Frankie-Rae wouldnever be able to be part of that. However, Frankie-Rae quickly beganseeing experts in occupational health. Despite all her problems, she grew into such a happy, smiley little girl who loved listening to music and waving (挥舞) along to it.“Because she couldn’t walk as she got bigger, we needed a special pushchair and the one available on the NHS wasn’t suitable for her needs,” Mary-Ella explains. Fortunately, the Carter Trust stepped in to give Frankie-Rae one that worked. It meant her parents could take her shopping with them on weekends and out to the park. It made such a huge difference to her and the family. But Mary -Ella felt guilty for taking the money from the charity.That’s when Frankie -Rae’s elder sister Georgie-Ellyn, eight, came up with the idea of fundraising (募捐) for the charity that helped them. As a result, the family got together, organizing some activities such as selling second-hand clothes and books. They also held aparty inviting those who cared for the charity.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。However, it was Frankie-Rae’s shaky steps that inspired people most.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Frankie Rae is such a smiley happy little girl that she brings hope to all that meet her.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事,Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus(马戏团). Finally, there was only one family between us and the ticket counter.This family made a big impression on me. There were eight children, all probably under the age of 12. You could tell they didn’t have a lot of money. Their clothes were not expensive, but they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of them standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, holding hands. They were excitedly jabbering about the clowns, elephants, and other acts they would see that night.One could sense they had never been to the circus before. It promised to be a highlight of theiryoung lives. The father and mother were at the head of the pack, standing proud as could be. The mother was holding her husband’s hand, looking up at him as if to say, ”You’re my knight(骑士) in shining armor(盔甲).” He was smiling, looking back at her as if to reply, “You got that right.”The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted. He proudly responded. “Please let me buy eight children’s tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus.” The ticket lady quoted the price. The man’s wife let go of his hand, her head dropped, and his lip began to shake. The father leaned a little closer and asked, “How much did you say ” The ticket lady again quoted the price. The man didn’t have enough money.How was he supposed to turn and tell his eight children that he didn’t have enough money to take them to the circus Actually we were not wealthy in any sense. So I understand how the kids would feel. I feel sorry for them.注意:1. 所续写的短文词数应为80词左右;2. 段落开头句已经为你写好,不计入总词数。Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案1.Paragraph 1:And we went to a gift shop together. There we bought a lovely heart-shaped musical jewelry box. Then we bought a birthday card and a beautiful bouquet of red roses. I wrote the following words on the card: “To the best lady at the Schonfield Home, Happy birthday and all the best! From your neighbor who loves you very much, Mimi”. With all our gifts, we headed for the Schonfield Home. And as expected, we found Mrs. Kurtz sitting alone on a chair.Paragraph 2:We went up to Mrs. Kurtz and gave her our gifts. I saw her eyes widen in surprise when she received our gifts. As she finished reading my message on the card, she looked up and flashed a beautiful smile, which I had never seen on her face before. When I said goodbye to her a while later, Mrs. Kurtz was still smiling, and at that moment, I noticed that my heart was smiling along with hers. At that moment, I understood a kind act is often its own reward.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者小时候经常去隔壁的一家养老院Schonfield Home去看望那里的老人,发现一位名叫Mrs.Kurtz的老妇人认为这世上没有人爱她,又担心自己会独自度过即将到来的89岁的生日,没有礼物和卡片,所以意志消沉,脸上从不见笑容。作者和妈妈得知后去商店为老人选购了礼物和卡片,一起为老人庆祝了生日,终于看到了老人开心的笑容,同时自己内心也得到了快乐。【详解】1. 段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“我们一起去了礼品店”可知,第一段可描写作者和妈妈为老人选购了礼物、准备了卡片。②由第二段首句内容“我们走到Mrs. Kurtz面前,把我们的礼物送给她。”可知,第二段可描写老人收到礼物后的反应和作者的感受。2. 续写线索:去礼品店— 买礼物— 送礼物— 老人感动、露出笑容— 作者感受— 点明主题3. 词汇激活行为类①购买:buy/purchase②前往:head for/leave for③预料:expect/predict④变宽:widen/broaden情绪类①美丽微笑:flash a beautiful smile/smile beautifully②好的、善良的:kind/good【点睛】[高分句型1] As she finished reading my message on the card, she looked up and flashed a beautiful smile, which I had never seen on her face before. (运用了以连词as引导的时间状语从句和关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句。)[高分句型2] Mrs. Kurtz was still smiling, and at that moment, I noticed that my heart was smiling along with hers. (运用了以连词and引导的并列句和连接词that引导的宾语从句。)2.“Yes, sir,” the young man smiled. “And my name is Bob.” Speechless, Bob realized that he had lost his best friend forever. Although there were some problems between them, he has forgiven him. And Jimmy commemorated their friendship in his own way. Then Bob followed Jimmy’s son home, which Jimmy arranged for him before his death. The uncertainty was gone. He now had a home. He knew he wasn’t alone anymore because his friend and junior Bob will be his side.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了吉米和鲍勃在纽约长大,他们是儿时最好的朋友。但鲍勃成为了一名罪犯,而吉米是一名警察。吉米履行了他的职责,鲍勃被关进了监狱。鲍勃在监狱里蹲了20年,终于被释放了。出狱这天吉米的儿子来接他,鲍勃非常感动。【详解】1.段落续写:由首句内容“‘是的,先生,’年轻人微笑着说。‘我叫鲍勃。’”可知,后文可描写年轻人带鲍勃回家,以及鲍勃的感受。2.续写线索:年轻人来接鲍勃——原谅——回家——感悟3.词汇激活行为类意识到:realize/come to realize跟着:follow/come after消失:be gone/disappear情绪类沉默:speechless /silent永远:forever/for good【点睛】[高分句型1] Although there were some problems between them, he has forgiven him. (运用了although引导让步状语从句)[高分句型2] Speechless, Bob realized that he had lost his best friend forever. (运用了that引导宾语从句)3. I rushed to the chicken house and found Mary was there. She was cleaning the chicken house. Surprised and curious, I said to her, “As far as I can remember, this is the first time you have done this job.” Seeing me back, she lowered her head and whispered, “I know I was wrong. I should help our parents do more work. They are too busy and tired. Dad was so busy that he didn’t have breakfast this morning. I promise I’ll help our parents together with you.” Hearing this, I felt warm and happy. Mary was not cold at all. She was so thoughtful and understanding.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,作者的父母经营了一个养鸡场,父母很忙,所以每天放学后和周末,作者都要帮忙打扫鸡舍。有几次,作者想叫上妹妹玛丽一起帮忙,都被拒绝了,作者认为玛丽很冷漠。一个周六放学回家后,作者发现玛丽正在打扫鸡舍,通过交流,作者知道玛丽有了很大的改变,玛丽也很体贴和善解人意。【详解】1.段落续写:由所给首句内容“我冲到鸡舍,发现玛丽在那里。”可知,续写内容可描写玛丽是怎样有了改变开始帮助打扫鸡舍的。2.续写线索:经常帮父母打扫鸡舍——请玛丽帮忙——多次被拒绝——发现玛丽打扫鸡舍——通过交流了解原因——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①帮助:help/aid/assist②低下头:lower one’s head/ hang one’s head③许诺:promise/pledge情绪类①惊讶的:surprised/astonished②高兴的:happy/glad【点睛】[高分句型1] Surprised and curious, I said to her, “As far as I can remember, this is the first time you have done this job.”(运用了形容词作状语)[高分句型2] Dad was so busy that he didn’t have breakfast this morning. (运用了so…that…句型,that引导的是结果状语从句)4.The next day Jake saw Christel outside his classroom. “Boy, I come here to say thanks. Here’s a gift for you,” she said with a smile. She took out a new basketball, “I hope it’s a ticket to your being basketball player.” Jake looked at the basketball, excited but confused. In fact, Christel was a retired basketball coach. That day her car broke down. When she was waiting to get a lift, a car splashed dirty, muddy water on her. So hurriedly did she get on the bus that she forgot to take her wallet. It was Jake who helped her out. A small act of kindness paid off.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了杰克坐公共汽车上学的时候,帮助了忘记带钱包的克丽丝特尔太太的故事。【详解】1.段落续写:由首句内容“第二天,杰克在他的教室外面看到了克里斯特尔。”可知,本段可描写克里斯特尔感谢杰克的经过。2.续写线索:到学校——带着篮球——明白事情经过——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①.坏了:broke out/didn’t work②.搭车:get a lift /get a ride情绪类①.感谢:say thanks/show gratitude/be grateful②.困惑的:confused / puzzled【点睛】[高分句型1]. When she was waiting to get a lift, a car splashed dirty, muddy water on her.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2]. So hurriedly did she get on the bus that she forgot to take her wallet.(运用了部分倒装结构)5.So when receiving it, her teacher was surprised but smiled. She started reading what was written in it. The teacher’s heart was filled with pleasure and happiness. She hugged Tinky tightly and said “Thank you so much honey”! Tinky was also full of joy. She never saw her teacher that happy before. Then Tinky thought what if her teacher came to know that it was a stolen card. She felt quite ashamed of her stupidity. She decided to tell the teacher the truth. Knowing what had happened, the teacher praised her for her honesty. She realized a greeting card was not costly but the value it gave was precious.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了一个八岁的女孩Tinky虽然属于一个贫穷的家庭,但她的家庭富有文化和道德价值观,但当孩子们身处一个不懂道德规则的群体时,他们就不在乎道德。元旦就要到了,一些淘气的孩子在商店店主忙于其他活动时偷了一些贺卡。虽然Tinky告诉她的朋友偷窃是件很糟糕的事情。但她的朋友没有还,而是给了她一张卡片。她对那张神奇的贺卡感到兴奋并在元旦那天,她把贺卡交给了她的老师。她的老师感到出乎意料。【详解】1.段落续写:①由段首句内容“因此,当她的老师收到它时,很惊讶,但笑了。”可知,这段可描写老师的反应和感受。以及Tinky的感受和思想斗争。以及在得到老师表扬后的感受。2.续写线索:老师阅读——老师高兴拥抱——Tinky羞愧认错——老师表扬——Tinky感悟3.词汇激活行为类充满:be filled with/be stuffed with/be full of告诉:tell/inform意识到:realize/ be aware of/be conscious of情绪类羞愧:ashamed/humiliated愉快:pleasure/sweet / joyful/happy【点睛】[高分句型1] She started reading what was written in it. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2] Knowing what had happened, the teacher praised her for her honesty. (运用了非谓语动词和what引导宾语从句)6.One possible version:“Dad, wait!” Wang Peng stepped in before things could get worse. Li Mei was embarrassed standing there. Wang Peng explained to his father what had happened. At last he learned that the girl could not go back to Hainan to attend her mother’s 60th birthday because she lost her ticket and could not afford another one. Wang Peng put his ticket deliberately under the girl’s seat, pretending to remind the girl to change the name of the ticket. She was mistaken by his father for stealing Wang Peng’s ticket. After the misunderstanding was cleared, Wang Peng’s father apologized to Li Mei and put forward to buying one ticket for her.Li Mei couldn’t believe she’d been given a second chance to go home. With tears in her eyes, she thanked the Wang Peng’s family. She also asked for Wang Peng’s contact information so that she could keep in touch with him. Looking at Li Mei, Wang Peng felt extremely pleased. He realized that when people can make others’ lives smoother and richer, a journey can be sweeter.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了王鹏在机场准备和家长去海南旅行时遇到了一个哭泣的女孩,她丢飞机票并且也没有钱再一张回海南的机票,王鹏把自己的飞机票掉在女孩座下,让她去柜台更改姓名,被王鹏的父亲发现责备她是小偷。经过王鹏的解释,王鹏爸爸给李梅买了回海南的机票。【详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“‘爸爸,等等!’在事态进一步恶化之前,王鹏介入了。”可知,第一段可描写王鹏对爸爸进行了解释,以及李梅和爸爸的反应。②由第二段首句内容“李梅不敢相信她得到了第二次回家的机会。”可知,第二段可描写王鹏爸爸给李梅买了回海南的机票,李鹏也由此感悟到:当人们可以帮助他人的生活过得更顺利、更丰富时,一段旅程也可以很甜蜜。2.续写线索:误解——解释——陷入沉默——爸爸为李梅买机票——李鹏感悟3.词汇激活行为类①得知:learn/know/be informed of②回家:get home /go back home/return home③提出:put forward/ come up with情绪类①愉快的:sweet / joyful②尴尬的:embarrassed/awkward【点睛】[高分句型1] Li Mei was embarrassed standing there (运用了非谓语动词作状语)[高分句型2]After the misunderstanding was cleared, Wang Peng’s father apologized to Li Mei and put forward to buy one ticket for her. (after引导状语从句)7.One possible version:We headed for the basement (地下室). Once there, I sat on the floor with Oreo on my lap as the wind blew and the thunder boomed. Then there was a great crash that shook the house. Hearing the noise, Oreo turned to me, with his eyes full of fear. I had no idea what it was about. In spite of this, I had a feeling that something terrible must have happened to my house. The storm continued for a few minutes and then passed as quickly as it had arrived. Oreo and I headed back upstairs.I discovered that my house had been damaged (损害) by a fallen tree. The tree knocked a big hole in the roof right above my bed. If I had been on that bed, I could have been killed. I felt so relieved and happy that I couldn’t hide my tears. Thank goodness that Oreo had sensed the coming storm and woken me up. That old cat saved my life! This was an episode in my life that I would never forget.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者养了一只猫叫做Oreo,一天晚上,Oreo突然把作者吵醒,刚开始作者不明其意,后来发现原来是暴风雨来了,最后在Oreo的提醒下,成功躲过灾害。【详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“我们朝地下室走去。”可知,第一段可描写作者躲到地下室后的感觉和Oreo的表现。②由第二段首句内容“我发现我的房子被一棵倒下的树毁坏了。”可知,第二段可描写作者劫后余生的感悟,以及对Oreo的感谢。2.续写线索:晚上睡觉——Oreo吵醒我——感到奇怪——发现暴风雨来了——去地下室躲避——感动害怕——发现房子毁坏了——自己差点遭受意外——感谢Oreo3.词汇激活行为类①到达:arrive/reach②返回:head back/return/go back③撞击:knock/hit/strike④感觉到:sense/perceive/have a feeling情绪类①害怕:fear/terror/anxiety②宽慰的:relieved/pleased/comforted【点睛】[高分句型1]If I had been on that bed, I could have been killed.(if引导的条件状语从句,以及虚拟语气)[高分句型2]This was an episode in my life that I would never forget.(that引导的定语从句)8.One possible version:He lost everything, including his parent, in a hurricane (MSM) .He used to have a happy family. His parents had a small farm. When he was 14 years old, a terrible hurricane suddenly hit his hometown, and the hurricane destroyed their house and the crops in their fields. Worse still, his parents were killed in the disaster. He was hurt himself, which completely changed his life forever. He had been living a hard life ever since. A few years later, he left his hometown and became a homeless person.I happened to know from our talk that the next day was his birthday. I thought it was a good chance for him to feel the warmth of the world. So the next day I invited Nathan to a nearby restaurant to celebrate his birthday. It happened that the boss also knew Nathan, and he was very moved when he heard my decision. He chose a comfortable room for us and gave us some dishes for free. Later, we sang Happy Birthday to Nathan together. Once again, Nathan felt that people cared for him.【导语】本文以人物为线索,文章讲述作者一天去购物,遇到了一个看起来有精神疾病而且无家可归的人,他叫Nathan,作者买了东西送给他,并且了解了Nathan的遭遇,给Nathan庆祝生日,让Nathan感到了爱和关心。【详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“他在飓风中失去了一切,包括他的父母。”可知,第一段可描写作者了解了Nathan的遭遇。②由第二段首句内容“从谈话中我碰巧知道第二天是他的生日。”可知,第二段可描写作者给Nathan庆祝生日,让他感觉到爱和关心。2.续写线索:Nathan家遭遇飓风——失去父母——成为无家可归的人——得知生日——帮Nathan过生日——感受到关心3.词汇激活行为类①毁坏:destroy/damage/break②.庆祝:celebrate /congratulate③.关心:care for/be concerned with情绪类①.糟糕的:terrible /too bad/awful②.舒适的:comfortable / easeful【点睛】[高分句型1]. He was hurt himself, which completely changed his life forever.(由关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]. It happened that the boss also knew Nathan, and he was very moved when he heard my decision.(由when引导的时间状语从句)9.参考范文:Howwever, it was Frankie-Rae’s shaky steps that inspired people most. It was difficult for the two-year-old to practice walking but she made it. Mary set up a page for her, introducing her and those who have the specially rare disease. On the page, she included a Crowdfunder link and posted details of the challenge on social media. And every day the family cheered her on as she took a few shaky steps. So far Frankie-Rae has raised over 1,000 for the Carter Trust. And the family is anxious to break their target of 2 ,000.Frankie-Rae is such a smiley happy little girl that she brings hope to all that meet her. She relies on special equipment on her legs to support them and it is hard for her, but she never gives up practising. Although she can only say “Mum” and “Dad”, she understands everything the others say. She’s a very determined little girl, who loves music and loves nothing more than waving to the music at the dance studio. With her determination, she will continue to surprise the world!【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Frankie-Rae Hockney的第一次让她的母亲高兴地哭了,因为她出生时就患有一种罕见的染色体异常,所以她的未来有很多不确定因素,她的妈妈是一位舞蹈老师,当她想到Frankie-Rae Hockney永远不能成为其中的一员时,她感到很伤心,Frankie-Rae Hockney积极进行治疗,卡特信托基金为她提供了一辆特殊的婴儿车,她姐姐想出为帮助他们的慈善机构筹款的主意。【详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“然而,Frankie-Rae Hockney的颤颤巍巍的舞步给人们带来了最大的启发。”可知,第一段可描写她的家人是如何筹款的。②由第二段首句内容“Frankie-Rae Hockney是一个笑容灿烂、快乐的小女孩,她给所有见到她的人带来了希望。”可知,第二段可描写Frankie-Rae Hockney的可贵的品质以及对人的影响。2.续写线索:建立网页——发帖——为她加油——筹到钱——从不放弃——震惊世界3.词汇激活行为类①建立:set up/build up②筹集:raise/collect③使惊讶:surprise/shock情绪类①急切的:be anxious/be eager②有决心的:be determined/be resolved【点睛】[高分句型1] Mary set up a page for her, introducing her and those who have the specially rare disease. (由关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] She’s a very determined little girl, who loves music and loves nothing more than waving to the music at the dance studio. (由关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句)10.One possible version:Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground. Then he picked it up, tapping the man on the shoulder, “Excuse me, sir, this fell out of your pocket.” The man turned around and saw the money. Knowing what was going on, he looked straight into my dad’s eyes, took my dad’s hand and squeezed tightly. With his lip shaking and a tear running down his cheek, he replied, “Thank you, thank you, sir. This really means a lot to me and my family.” At the same time, his children bowed to us with eyes shining with delight and gratitude. Giving a helping hand to the one in need was really great, which had a profound effect on my life forever.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和父亲排队买马戏表演的票,看到一个家庭有八个孩子,父母带孩子准备看马戏表演,但是没有带足够的钱买票,作者的父亲看到这种情况,伸出援手帮助了这一家人,他们非常感激父亲,这件事对作者的生活产生了深远的影响。【详解】1.段落续写:由段首句内容“看到这一切,我爸爸把手伸进口袋,掏出一张20美元的钞票,扔在了地上。”可知,本段可描写作者的父亲帮助了这家人,这家人非常感激父亲,这件事对作者的生活产生了深远的影响。2.续写线索:作者父亲捡起钱——假装询问——那个父亲了解实情——感激作者父亲——作者感悟3.词汇激活行为类①拿起:pick up/take up②.转身:turn around/ turn about③.帮助:give a helping hand / give a hand/ do sb a favor情绪类①.感激:with gratitude/ show his gratitude/be grateful②.显著的,伟大的:great/distinct/outstanding【点睛】[高分句型1]. Knowing what was going on, he looked straight into my dad’s eyes, took my dad’s hand and squeezed tightly. (由连接词what引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]. Giving a helping hand to the one in need was really great, which had a profound effect on my life forever.(由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句) 展开更多...... 收起↑ 资源预览