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1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A couple of years ago, just as I do every winter, I bagged up all the items in my closet that I no longer wore, along with the clothing my sons had outgrown (长得穿不下). I issued a call to action to all of my family and friends, asking them to do the same. It is always my hope to re—purpose (重新利用) those things that do nothing more than take up space in our homes, things other people might make better use of. Nothing bothers me more than selfishly squirreling things away, things that we know we will never use or wear, while people in our community go without.
I found an ugly pair of hand-knitted (手工编织) socks in one of the bags donated by a friend. Not to be mean, but they were a bad mixture of colored yarn (纱线): orange, purple, yellow and blue. I had to decide—garbage or donation It wasn’t like they were unusable. They were simply unpleasant to look at, surely not something anyone would choose to wear. I imagine they were a homemade gift gone bad.
I put the ugly socks in the garbage, but ten minutes later, I took them back and put them in the donation pile. Later that afternoon, my mother and I drove down to Madison Avenue in downtown Phoenix. Every winter she and I load up my Jeep with our own cast-offs (自己不穿而赠人的旧衣服) and the donations from friends, and we take them downtown, along with food and water, to distribute to the men and women living on the street. Sometimes I even get my boys involved.
On this particular afternoon, as Mom and I distributed warm clothing and hot food to a small crowd of people outside a local homeless shelter, I reached into the bag and pulled out the last of the donations—the ugly socks. Surreptitiously (偷偷地), I held them in my hand as the crowd of homeless quietly left, each with a grateful smile, a fistful of food and an armload of clothing.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just as I was about to drop the socks back into the empty bag, a teenage boy came up to me.
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“These socks are perfect for me!” he smiled.
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2．阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。
One long-ago morning, the hot summer sun climbed to the top of the sky. By noon, flowers drooped(低垂). Birds stopped singing.
Lan, who walked to visit her grandmother on Sundays, grew hotter and hotter. As she passed an enormous house, she spotted a beautiful tree. Its branches spread wide, and their leaves created a shady space next to the road. Lan sat down in that shade to rest. How nice and cool, she thought. I still have a long walk ahead of me, but I can sit here for a while.
Lan was wrong. Less than a minute later, the door of the enormous house opened with a bang. A boy rushed out and shouted, “You can’t sit there! That’s my tree! Chen’s tree!” He wore silk trousers and carried a golden toy pony.
“Maybe it’s your tree, but you don’t own the shade beneath it,” replied Lan.
“Yes, I do,” declared Chen．“I own everything about that tree, even the birds! You’ll have to pay to sit there.”
“Pay you ” cried Lan. “Shade belongs to everyone.”
“Not my shade,” said Chen．
“If I buy your shade, may I stop here on Sundays this summer ” asked Lan.
“I suppose,” said Chen．
Lan reached into her twice-mended pocket and handed over her only coin. “That’s all the money I have.” she said.
“Fine!” said Chen. “But remember, you bought the shade. Nothing else!”
Every summer Sunday, Lan stopped to sit in Chen’s shade on the way to her grandmother’s. She often called to the birds in the tree. The birds would fly down and gather around her.
Alone in his toy-filled bedroom, Chen watched Lan talk and laugh with the birds. She’s telling stories, he thought. It looks fun. Should I charge her more money when she stays longer Then he remembered she’d had only one coin in her pocket. However, when autumn arrived, Lan no longer walked to her grandmother’s.
Chen missed seeing her talking to the birds.
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On the Sunday Lan appeared as expected.
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3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Marie was upset. The single mom worked late shift but never managed to sleep past 6: 00 am because of the garbage collectors! “Don’t make any noise!” she screamed out of her window. “People are trying to sleep!”
“Sorry, Madam,” Jeff the garbage collector, said. “We’re trying our best to avoid producing noise. And we’re just doing our job!” Marie stared at him and shut her window angrily. Jeff emptied the heavy garbage cans into the back of the truck. “You fool,” Marie said. She never expected that very soon she’d be very grateful to the young man she had just screamed at.
A week later, Marie woke at 5: 55 am because of the stomach pain. She got up and headed for the bathroom, but on her way she started feeling dizzy and sick and broke into a cold sweat. “David!” Marie cried for her six-year-old son. “David, help me!” When David got up and reached her, Marie was lying on the floor. “Get help,” she whispered to him. The little boy saw his mom was lying on the floor unconscious and started crying.
He wondered whom he could turn to for help. They were new in town and had no family there. And at that time, neighbors were all sleeping. Just then, the garbage truck came to collect garbage. David then rushed outside and cried anxiously, “Help! Help!” Hearing it, Jeff and his teammate quickly got to David! After knowing what had happened, Jeff called an ambulance and comforted David.
Soon, the ambulance arrived. The medical workers checked Marie and found the unconsciousness was caused by anaemia(贫血). They gave her first aid and claimed that Marie would recover soon. But she needed to go to hospital and be treated with injections. Then, Marie was taken away.
David cried sadly for his mom. Jeff accompanied him, patting him on the shoulder and saying, “Don’t be afraid, and your mom will be back soon.” The six-year-old boy nodded as if he could understand. Jeff couldn’t bear to leave the little boy alone at home. After asking for a leave of absence, Jeff stayed to take care of David.
注意：1.续写的词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Then, Jeff followed David into his room and tried his best to help him.
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Several hours later, Marie headed home hurriedly after she was allowed to leave hospital.
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4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Due to a medical misdiagnosis (误诊), Susan, 34, had been left sightless, and was suddenly thrown into a word of darkness, anger, frustration and self-pity. And all she had to depend on was her husband, Mark.
Mark was an officer and he loved Susan with all his heart. When she first lost her sight, he watched her sink into despair and was determined to help his wife gain the strength and confidence to become independent again.
With Mark’s encouragement, Susan felt ready to return to her job, but how would she get there She used to take the bus, but was now too frightened to get around the city by herself. Mark volunteered to drive her to work. Soon, however, Mark realized the arrangement wasn’t working. Susan is going to have to start taking the bus again. But she was still so fragile, so angry, how would she react
Just as he predicted, Susan was scared at the idea of taking the bus again. “I’m blind!” she responded bitterly. “How am I supposed to know where I am going I feel like you’re abandoning me.”
Mark’s heart broke to hear these words, but he knew what had to be done. He promised Susan he would ride the bus with her until she got the hang of it. And that is exactly what happened. For two solid weeks, Mark, military uniform and all, accompanied Susan to and from work. He taught her how to rely on her other senses, specifically her hearing, to determine where she was and how to adapt to her new environment. He helped her befriend the bus drivers who could watch out for her, and save her a seat.
Finally, Susan decided to try the trip on her own. Mark encouraged her but he decided to continue watching out for her where she got off the bus, only in secret.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Monday morning arrived. Before Susan left she kissed Mark and thanked him.
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Curious, she asked the driver, “Why do you say that you envy me ”
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5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As we pulled out of the garage, my mind went blank when I saw the gun pointing against the car window. This can’t be happening to me. Then I felt the gun, cold, against my head, and I heard my friend Jeremy saying, “What do you want Take my wallet.” but at the time I thought of nothing.
I remember being a little annoyed when the gunman pulled me from the car by the hair. I remember the walk to the house --- Jeremy, me, the two men with two guns. I remember the fear and anger in the gunmen’s voices because Jeremy was being slow, and I remember wondering why he was being slow. I did not realize that Jeremy had thrown the keys into the bush. But I remember that sound of the gun hitting Jeremy’s head and the feeling as the man who had hold of my hair released me. And I remember the split second when I realized he was looking at Jeremy, and I remember wondering how far I could run before he pulled the trigger. But I was already running, and upon reaching the car across the street, I didn’t crouch(蹲伏) behind it but screamed instead.
I remember thinking there was something ridiculous and illogical about screaming “Help! Help!” at eight o’clock on a Tuesday evening in December and changing my plea(恳求) to the more specific “Help! Let me in. Please let me in!” But the houses were cold, closed, unfriendly, and I ran on until I heard Jeremy’s screams behind me announcing that our attackers had run away.
The neighbors who had not opened their doors to us came out with baseball bats and helped Jeremy find his glasses and keys. In a group they were very brave. We waited for the police to come until someone said to someone else that the noodles were getting cold, and I said politely, “Please go and eat. We’re OK.”
I was happy to see them go. They had been talking of stricter sentences for criminals, of bringing back the death penalty(处罚) and how the President is going to clean up the country. I was thinking they could be saying all of this over my dead body, and I still feel that stiffer sentences wouldn’t change a thing. In a rush all the anger I should have felt for my attackers was directed against these contented people standing in front of their warm, comfortable homes talking about all the guns they were going to buy. What good would guns have been to Jeremy and me
People all over the neighborhood had called to report our screams, and the police turned out in force twenty minutes later. They were ill-tempered about what was, to them, much trouble about nothing. After all, Jeremy was hardly hurt, and we were hopeless when it came to describing the gunmen. “Typical,” said one policeman when we couldn’t even agree on how tall the men were. Both of us were able to describe the guns in horrifying detail, but the two policemen who stayed to make the report didn’t think that would be of much help.
The policemen were matter-of-fact about the whole thing. The thin one said, “That was a stupid thing to do, throwing away the keys. When a man has a gun against your head, you do what you’re told.” Jeremy looked properly embarrassed.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then the fat policeman came up and the thin one went to look around the outside of the house.
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All that sleepless night I replayed the moment those black gloves came up to the car window.
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6．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。
Once a man got lost in a desert. The water in his water bag had run out two days ago, and he was on his last legs. He knew that if he didn’t get some water soon, he would surely die. The man saw a small house ahead of him. He thought it might be his imagination, but having no other option, he moved toward it. As he got closer, he realized it was quite real, So he dragged his tired body to the door with the last of his strength.’
There was no one in the house and it seemed like it had been empty for quite some time. The man entered it, hoping against hope that he might find water inside.
His heart missed a beat when he saw what was in the house—a hand pump. It had a pipe going down through the floor, perhaps tapping a source of water deep underground.
He began working the hand pump, but no water came out. He kept at it and still nothing happened.
Finally, he gave up. He threw up his hands in despair. It looked as if he was going to die after all.
Then the man noticed a bottle in one corner of the house. It was flled with water. He uncorked the bottle and was about to drink the sweet life-giving water, when he noticed a piece of paper attached to it. The handwriting on the paper read: “Use this water to start the pump. Don’t forget to fill the bottle when you’re done.”
He had a dilemma. He could follow the instructions and pour the water into the pump, or he could ignore it and just drink the water.
What should he do How would he feel as he watched the water disappear into the pump What if the pump did not function What if the pipe had a leak What if the underground water had long dried up
But then maybe the instructions were correct. Should he risk it If it turned out to be false, he might be throwing away the-last water he would ever see.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hands shaking. he poured the water into the pump.
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He heard a gurgling sound, and then water came out.
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7．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Last winter, Linda went through a very messy divorce and was very depressed. So she quit her job and left Los Angeles, where she encountered her ex-husband in college. She flew to Boston on the east coast of the US. Later, she settled in a new neighborhood in East Boston. However, shortly afterwards, the company where she worked went bankrupt (破产). Suffering a series of bitter blows, she fell ill, a severe case of flu. She had to stay at home for the whole week, feeling extremely bad and hopeless.
Early one morning, Linda lay in bed, feeling painful all over. Then all of a sudden, there was an upsetting knock on her front door. Struggling out of the bed, she dragged herself to the window. There, outside, she saw a young lady carefully holding some leaflets(传单)and a TV set model. She knew of a large TV set establishment nearby and assumed a message was about to be gently delivered. “This is the last thing I need today.” She muttered to herself and hesitantly opened the door.
Coughing bitterly, Linda stuck her head out. “Excuse me, madam…” the young lady said with a smile. “I’m sorry but I am not the slightest bit interested in any TV whatever.” Linda interrupted her impatiently. “As a matter of fact, I am feeling terribly awful.” “Is there anything I can do for you, madam ” the young lady asked with concern. “No thanks, just leave me alone.” Linda then shut the door in her face. The young lady politely turned and left in silence.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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A few hours later, another knock.
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Linda was surprised by this loving action.
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8．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I moved to a new place. After the first day at my new school, I walked home alone. Mom told me she had to work. I was still hoping she’d meet me after the bell.
I opened the door. I was hungry. I wandered into the kitchen, tearing tape from the packed boxes while I searched for a clean plate. My fingers slipped, and something went crashing to the ground.
“Benjamin!” cried Mom from the doorway. I didn’t hear her come in. “What just broke ” she asked, bending to pick up the shards (碎片). In her hands, I recognized the pieces. It was Grandma’s bowl, the one Mom put out for special occasions.
“Why couldn’t you have waited for me to unpack I couldn’t believe you broke this,” she said.
Words burst from my mouth and spilled across the room. “Well, I can’t believe we have to live here now! I can’t believe I have to switch schools when there are only a few weeks left before summer!” I ran into my room, shutting the door behind me violently.
The broom (扫帚) swept across the kitchen floor. Then the click of Mom’s bedroom door closed behind her. I stole out into the kitchen and picked out the shards in the dustbin. There were so many pieces in here, but maybe I could put them back together.
“I’ m sorry I yelled,” said Mom, as she opened her door. “Please just throw out the pieces. We can’t make a fresh start with broken things.”
As I wandered down the hall, Mr. Sato, my neighbor, was emptying his garbage.
“Are you sure you want to throw that out ” he asked, gesturing towards the bowl.
“It’s broken,” I whispered. “This is all my fault.”
“Things break, Benjamin. That isn’t anyone’s fault. Besides, this is a simple e. I’ll show you.” Taking a thin knife, Mr. Sato started to repair the bowl. After a long time, Mr. Sato said to me, “This needs to dry. Come back on Saturday, and we will finish it.”
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Saturday morning, I stole out early and knocked on the Satos’ door.
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I was a little nervous to show Mom the bowl, but that night I brought it into her room.
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9．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once upon a time, there was a village where lived a wealthy man named Rama. He was always ready to help the poor and needy. His act of kindness made him so popular that villagers thought of him as the head of the village. And he was overjoyed at villagers’ love for him.
Rama was a well-known businessman who dealt in the export of agricultural products. One year, there was no rain so the whole village was under drought conditions. There was a lack of food and water everywhere. Villagers were dying of hunger. Therefore, they reached out to Rama for help.
Rama, in spite of having a huge loss in business, chose to help the villagers out generously. He started giving out food for free. Every day he would give a part of his wealth and grains to the needy. Soon, Rama ran out of money and food as he gave all his wealth to the needy villagers. Rama tried hard to manage his business, but he failed. Finally, he was left with nothing.
Rama had to live in a rented house. He looked for a job but no one was ready to offer him one because they were in fear of losing their wealth because of his kind nature. After a few days, he left with no money, so he had to leave his rented house. Rama was now homeless. He and his wife decided to leave the village.
Rama and his wife set off for another village. After walking for a while, both were tired so they decided to take a rest under a tree, and after that, they would move further. They ate whatever they had with them and slept under the tree. They were so tired that they slept the whole day and when they woke up it was dark. They started seeking shelter. Soon they saw a luxury mansion（公馆）and went there for help.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
They knocked and a man opened the door.
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When he heard his words of gratitude, Rama’s eyes were filled with tears.
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10．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Alexander sang all the time. He sang in the shower, he sang while he did his homework, and he sang while he walked to school. He simply loved singing. One day during a break, he heard Kevin talking about the tryouts(选拔)for the City Choir(合唱团).
“Yeah, I’m attending the tryouts this weekend,” Kevin announced. “With my voice, I’m pretty much guaranteed a spot. I don’t even need any practice as I am so talented. Imagine they’ll want me to perform lots of solos(独唱),too.”
Everyone knew that Kevin had a fantastic singing voice. Normally, Alexander just ignored him, but he couldn’t help imagining himself as a member of the choir. Wouldn’t it be fun, he thought, to sing with other kids every day and have someone actually teach him about singing
On the tryout day, Alexander took a deep breath, walked into the building, registered at a large table, and then waited nervously in the hallway. The only one who didn’t look nervous was Kevin. And why should he be He has performed as a soloist many times. Alexander, on the other hand, had never taken a musical lesson in his life, much less had performed for an audience.
After a while, the choir director, Mr.Robeson, walked in and told the kids that they were to sing a song individually, sing as a group and answer some questions. Soon the individual test began. When Alexander stood on the stage, he tried to calm down and pretended he was singing in the shower. He felt satisfied when he was done, at least until Kevin’s turn came. As Kevin s confident voice filled the room Alexander realized that he would never sound that good.
Next, Mr. Robeson put the kids into groups of four or five and asked them to sing together. Kevin’s group sang right before Alexander’s, and even with four other boys singing, Kevin’s voice clear and distinct; it seemed to reach the farthest corners of the room.
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1.写作词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then came the time for Alexander to sing with his group.
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Finally Mr.Robeson told Alexander that he made it, not Kevin.
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参考答案
1．范文
Just as I was about to drop the socks back into the empty bag, a teenage boy came up to me. “Can I please have those socks ” he asked, his blue eyes sparkling in the sun. I was surprised handing him the socks. “Thank you so much, Ma’am!” he grinned. “These socks remind me of my grandmother. She used to knit stuff like this for me!” The young man raced to the sidewalk cheerfully as if I had given him a brand new car or a million bucks. He sat down, slipped into the socks, stood up and stomped his feet.
“They’re perfect!” he smiled. I was deeply touched by his innocent smile. Those socks not only warmed his feet that day, but so was his heart—and mine. They had rekindled the memory of that young man’s grandmother, a woman who must have loved him dearly. I had ever been so thoughtless as to think that those socks, as pitiful as they appeared on the surface, didn’t have a purpose. To this day, it’s proof that there is happiness in life’s simplest things, and we’ll never know how much until we’ve shared those things with others.(165 words)
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者发起了一项回收旧衣并赠送给有需要的人的活动。一次，作者发现了一双难看的手工编织的袜子，作者本打算扔掉，想了想又留了下来。在作者分发旧衣服的时候，作者本以为这双袜子送不掉了，这时一个男孩却对这双袜子很有兴趣。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“正当我准备把袜子放回空袋子时，一个十几岁的男孩向我走来。”以及第二段首句内容““它们是完美的！”他笑了。”可知，第一段可描写小男孩为什么想得到这双袜子。
②由第二段首句内容““它们是完美的！”他笑着说。”可知，第二段可描写男孩的话让作者产生的一些感悟。
2.续写线索：收集衣物——发现难看的袜子——扔掉又捡回来——赠送旧衣物——男孩想要袜子——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①使感动：touch/move
②使回忆起：rekindle/bring back
③快跑：race/run quickly
情绪类
①惊讶的：surprised/amazed
②开心地：cheerfully/happily/merrily/gladly
【点睛】【高分句型1】They had rekindled the memory of that young man’s grandmother, a woman who must have loved him dearly.（运用了who引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】To this day, it’s proof that there is happiness in life’s simplest things, and we’ll never know how much until we’ve shared those things with others.（运用了that引导的名词性从句和until引导的时间状语从句）
2． Chen missed seeing her talking to the birds. Week after week, Chen played alone in his toy-filled room. The picture of Lan’s chatting with birds came to his mind again. Looking at Lan’s coin, Chen wondered what to do if she came back to sit in his shade. Should he charge her again, or should he give the coin back Many months later, the summer sun returned, hot as ever. Chen stood by his window each Sunday, looking forward to Lan’s coming again.
On the Sunday Lan appeared as expected. At the sight of her, Chen raced outside. Without hesitation, he reached into his pocket, pulled out Lan’s coin，and handed it back． “I’m sorry,” he said. “You didn’t need to pay me.” Lan was too surprised to believe it, so she asked in doubt, “This summer, your shade belongs to everyone ” “Yes,” replied Chen. “Now, please, call the birds down for us. Let’s tell stories.” They began to play with birds together, cheerful laughter echoing in the air.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Lan在每周日步行去看奶奶的路上发现一棵美丽的树，她坐在树下休息，然而男孩Chen从树旁边的房子里出来，说这棵树的一切都属于他，要求Lan付钱给自己，Lan把口袋里唯一的硬币给了他，后来夏天的每个星期天，Lan都会在树下坐坐，孤单的Chen在房间里看着她在外面和鸟儿们谈笑风生，但当秋天来时，Lan不再步行去奶奶家。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Chen想念她和鸟儿说话的样子。”可知，第一段可描写Chen期待Lan再次出现。
②由第二段首句内容“星期天，Lan如期而至。”可知，第二段可描写Chen把硬币还给Lan，并和她一起在树荫下快乐地玩耍。
2.续写线索：
看着硬币陷入沉思——期待Lan出现——还硬币——Lan感到惊讶——一起玩耍
3.词汇激活
行为类
①期待：look forward to/expect
②跑出去：race outside/run outside
③回答：reply/answer
情绪类
①惊讶：surprised/astonished
②快乐：cheerful/joyful
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Looking at Lan’s coin, Chen wondered what to do if she came back to sit in his shade.（由从属连词if引导的条件状语从句）
[高分句型2]. They began to play with birds together, cheerful laughter echoing in the air.（独立主格结构）
3．参考范文：
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Then, Jeff followed David into his room and tried his best to help him. He held David all the time, trying to give the little boy some warmth, which considerably relieved David’s sadness. David gradually calmed down and fell asleep. Then Jeff prepared a meal for David. When the boy woke up hungry, he was amazed at the wonderful food made by Jeff, who was really good at cooking. The two happily enjoyed the meal, then read books and played games together. David was full of life again.
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Several hours later, Marie headed home hurriedly after she was allowed to leave hospital. The moment she opened the door, she was shocked to see David was with Jeff. They seemed to have got along well. Seeing his mom, David ran to hug her excitedly and told her all that Uncle Jeff did for him and her. Jeff smiled without saying anything. Marie sincerely thanked Jeff and apologized for her previous rudeness. Jeff and Marie became friends. And later when the truck came at 6: 00 am, Marie didn’t yell any more. She came out with cups of coffee for Jeff and his teammate.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述Marie在一个早上由于贫血而昏迷，她的儿子向每天来收垃圾的Jeff求救，最后获救的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然后，Jeff跟着David进了他的房间，尽力帮助他。”以及第二段首句内容“几个小时后，Marie在获准出院后匆匆回家。”可知，第一段可描写Jeff是如何帮助David，安慰和陪伴David。
②由第二段首句内容“几个小时后，Marie在获准出院后匆匆回家。”可知，第二段可描写Marie回到家后发现David得到很好的照顾后对Jeff充满愧疚和感激之情。
2.续写线索：充满怨恨——昏迷——求救——照顾——感动——成为好朋友
3.词汇激活
行为类
①缓解；减轻：relieve/reduce/alleviate
②擅长：be good at/do well in
③准备：prepare/make a preparation
情绪类
①惊讶的：amazed/surprised/shocked
②开心地：happily/merrily/gladly
【点睛】【高分句型1】He held David all the time, trying to give the little boy some warmth, which considerably relieved David’s sadness.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】The moment she opened the door, she was shocked to see David was with Jeff.（运用了the moment引导的时间状语从句和省略that的宾语从句）
4．One possible version：
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Monday morning arrived. Before Susan left she kissed Mark and thanked him. Her eyes filled with tears of gratitude for his loyalty, his patience, and his love. And for the first time, they went separate ways. Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday... Each day on her own went perfectly, and Susan had never felt better. She was going to work all by herself. On Friday morning, as she was getting off the bus, the driver said, “I do envy you.” Susan wasn’t sure if the driver was speaking to her. After all, who would envy a blind woman
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Curious, she asked the driver, “Why do you say that you envy me ” The driver responded, “You know, every morning for the past week, a gentleman in a military uniform has been watching you as you get off the bus until you safely enter your office building. You are one lucky lady.” Tears of happiness poured down Susan’s cheeks. Although she couldn’t physically see him, she had always felt Mark’s presence. She was so lucky, for her husband had given her a gift she didn’t need to see to believe — the gift of love that can bring light where there is darkness.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在Suan因误诊而失明后，她的丈夫Mark帮助她克服内心的恐惧，使她能够独自一人乘坐公交车上下班的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“了星期一早上。Suan离开前吻了吻Mark，并向他道谢。”可知，第一段可描写Suan独自一人乘坐公交车上下班的经历。
②由第二段首句内容“她好奇地问司机：“你为什么说你羡慕我？””可知，第二段可描写司机解释了羡慕Suan的原因。
2.续写线索：Suan独自坐公交车——司机羡慕Suan——Suan很困惑——司机羡慕Suan的原因——感悟
3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）
行为类
①对……说话：speak to /talk to
②回答：respond/reply
③享受：watch/stare
情绪类
①幸福：happiness/blessedness
②幸运的：lucky/fortunate
【点睛】[高分句型1] On Friday morning, as she was getting off the bus, the driver said, “I do envy you.”(运用了as引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Although she couldn’t physically see him, she had always felt Mark’s presence. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句)
5．Then the fat policeman came up and the thin one went to look around the outside of the house.“That was the best thing you could have done, throwing away the keys,” he said. “If you had gone into the house with them…” His voice became weaker. “They would have hurt her” — he twisted his head toward me —“and killed you both.” Jeremy looked happier. “Look,” said the fat policeman kindly, “there’s no right or wrong in the situation. There’s just luck.”
All that sleepless night I replayed the moment those black gloves came up to the car window. How long did the whole thing last Three minutes, five, eight No matter how many hours of my life I may spend reliving it, I know there is no way to prepare for the next time — no intelligent response to a gun. The fat cop was right. There’s only luck. The next time I might end up dead.And I’m sure there will be a next time. Guns make some people feel safe and some people feel strong, but they’re fooling themselves.
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章记录了作者和Jeremy被持枪罪犯袭击的过程，同时也记录了邻居们和警察在这次袭击后的反应。作者因此感叹安全只是幻觉，不管是铁索还是枪支都不会带来安全。枪支使一些人感觉安全，而且有些人感觉强大，但是他们只是欺骗自己。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然后那个胖警察走了过来，那个瘦警察到房子外面四处看了看”可知，第一段可描写警察和他们之间关于这次事件的对话的场景。
②由第二段首句内容“那个不眠之夜，我回想起那双黑手套临近车窗前的那一刻。”可知，第二段可描写作者回忆的一些细节，掺杂着一些感悟。
2.续写线索：警察到现场查案——对话——回忆起被袭击的细节——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①扔掉：throw away/toss out
②.进入：go into/come into /enter
③.伤害：hurt /wound
情绪类
①.看起来更高兴：looked happier/looked more pleased
②.友善地：kindly/neighborly
【点睛】[高分句型1]. No matter how many hours of my life I may spend reliving it, I know there is no way to prepare for the next time — no intelligent response to a gun.（运用了No matter how引导的让步状语从句）
[高分句型2].And I’m sure there will be a next time.（运用了宾语从句）
6．One possible version:
Hands shaking, he poured the water into the pump. He began operating the pump painstakingly, with a mixture of nervousness and excitement. But after what seemed a century, nothing happened. Seized with panic and regret, he thought to himself, “So stupid am I that I follow the instructions. I am bound to die in the desert.” Frustrated and exhausted, he felt as if it were the end of the world, his heart torn with despair. At the very moment, a miracle occurred.
He heard a gurgling sound, and then water came out. With wide joy welling up inside him, he couldn’t wait to drink his fill. The sweet life-giving water relieved his uneasy mind as well as the parched throat. Then he filled his water bag for the journey ahead. He also filled the bottle and put the cork back. Before leaving the house, he added below the instructions, “Believe me, it works!” Exposed to the burning sun, he took long strides in the boundless desert, refreshed and determined.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了有个人在沙漠里迷路了，水袋里的水两天前就用完了，他已经奄奄一息了。这人发现了一个房子，并且找到了一个水泵，旁边还有一瓶水，瓶子上贴着一张纸。纸上写着 “用这些水启动水泵。喝完后别忘了把瓶子装满。”最终这人选择了相信纸条上写的，最终喝到了水。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“他双手颤抖着，把水倒进水泵”可知，第一段可描写倒入水之后的事情。
②由第二段首句内容“他听到汩汩的声音，然后水就出来了”可知，第二段可描写有水流出来后的事情。
2.续写线索：倒水——等待——后悔——发生奇迹——喝水——装水
3.词汇激活
行为类
颤抖：shake/tremble
开始：begin/start
缓解：relieve /ease
情绪类
激动：excitement / thrill
愚蠢：stupid /foolish
【点睛】[高分句型1] But after what seemed a century, nothing happened. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] With wide joy welling up inside him, he couldn’t wait to drink his fill. (运用了with的复合结构)
7．One possible version:
A few hours later, another knock. Linda glanced out of the window. To her surprise, at the door was the same lady, back again. Really annoyed this time, Linda opened the door. Before Linda could utter any word, the young lady handed her a warm pot, with a concerned look on the face. “I’m so sorry to have disturbed you earlier. I thought you may need this homemade chicken soup. Hope it might make you feel a little better. ”
Linda was surprised by this lovely action. After being refused so rudely, the lady still showed much kindness to her. A sense of shame creeping upon her heart, she could only force a smile with burning ears. But also, a warm current surged through her brain and body. Linda took the chicken soup gratefully, tears blurring her eyes and a lump in her throat. The lady wrapped Linda in her arms and patted her on the back. “It’s OK, dear. Everything will be fine.” Hearing these words, Linda felt a ray of bright sunshine lighting up her life.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了琳达经历了离婚和破产。一天清晨，琳达躺在床上，感到浑身疼痛，被敲门声叫醒。她看到敲门的是一名推销电视的年轻女士，琳达拒绝了推销，年轻的女士礼貌地转过身，沉默地离开了。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“几个小时后，又传来敲门声。”可知，第一段可描写琳达的心情以及年轻女士给琳达带来的惊喜（鸡汤）。
②由第二段首句内容“琳达对这个可爱的举动感到惊讶”可知，第二段可描写琳达的感受以及年轻女士对琳达的安慰。
2.续写线索：生气——惊喜——琳达感受——安慰
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.拒绝：refuse/reject
②.展示：show/express
③.拥抱：hug/wrap
情绪类
①.令某人惊讶的是：to one’s surprise/to one’s astonishment
②.感激地:gratefully/appreciatively
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Before Linda could utter any word, the young lady handed her a warm pot, with a concerned look on the face. （before引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]. Hearing these words, Linda felt a ray of bright sunshine lighting up her life. （现在分词作状语）
8．One possible version:
Saturday morning, I stole out early and knocked on the Satos’ door. “Now comes my favorite part,” said Mr. Sato. He offered me a tiny brush. “Take your time, and fill in the crack lines.” At first my hand was shaking, but then I painted with smooth strokes. When I finished, the bowl looked completely different. Instead of the cracks blending in and disappearing, now you could see exactly where it was broken. “This bowl has another layer to its history— it has been broken, repaired, and is stronger because of it,” said Mr. Sato. I took the bowl home quietly.
I was a little nervous to show Mom the bowl, but that night I brought it into her room. She ran her fingertip over the golden veins. “Mr. Sato helped me fix it,” I said. “It’s so beautiful,” she replied. “A new beginning.” I sat on the edge of her bed, and Mom reached out to me. Our hands joined with crisscrossed fingers. Maybe it finally did feel like a fresh start. The bowl was stronger like this too. It was the cracks that were holding it together.
【导语】本文讲述了作者搬到了一个新地方居住，在新学校的第一天，他独自走回家。回到家后，他饿了，从还未拆封的盒子里寻找盘子，不小心打碎了奶奶的碗，这一场景被妈妈看到，妈妈很生气，责备他，他也愤怒地向妈妈大喊，因为他不想转学，不想在这个新地方居住。作者反思后，感到后悔，并和妈妈道歉，当他准备扔掉碎掉的碗时，遇到邻居佐藤先生，佐藤先生说他可以帮忙修复这个碗。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“周六早上，我很早就溜了出去，敲了敲佐藤家的门。”可知，第一段可描写作者和佐藤先生一起修复碗的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“我有点紧张，想把碗给妈妈看，但那天晚上我把它带进了她的房间。”可知，第二段可描写妈妈看到碗被修复好后的感受。
2.续写线索：一起修复破碎的碗——碗被修复好——佐藤先生的道理——把碗带给妈妈看——妈妈的感受
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.提供：offer/provide
②.颤抖：shake/tremble
③.完成：finish/complete
情绪类
①.平静地：quietly/calmly
②.美丽的，漂亮的：beautiful/pretty
【点睛】[高分句型1]. When I finished, the bowl looked completely different. (由When引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]. Instead of the cracks blending in and disappearing, now you could see exactly where it was broken.(由where引导的宾语从句)
9．They knocked and a man opened the door. The moment he saw them, he greeted them with joy. He took them inside and offered them food to eat. Rama was surprised and asked why. The man said, “Years ago, I was dying of hunger when you helped me out. Not only did you give me food, but you also gave me money to restart my business. I can never thank you enough and I am so glad that I am able to repay your generosity today.”
When he heard his words of gratitude, Rama’s eyes were filled with tears. He told that man even though he changed from a wealthy man to a homeless person, never did he regret what he had done. The man asked him not to worry and promised to help. With his generous aid, Rama was able to recreate his business. Slowly and steadily, he became rich again. In spite of so many ups and downs, Rama didn’t forget his social responsibility and he started helping the needy again.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个名叫拉玛的富人总是乐于帮助他人。有一年，天气干旱，农民们缺水少食。尽管拉玛在生意上损失惨重，但还是选择慷慨地帮助村民直至自己一无所有。拉玛和妻子离开村子去寻找避难所。他们看到了一座豪华公馆去那里求助，被自己曾经帮过的人帮助的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“他们敲门，一个人打开了门。”可知，第一段可描写拉玛获得了帮助，且帮助者就是曾经自己的帮助对象。
②由第二段首句内容“当他听到自己的感激之词时，拉玛的眼里充满了泪水。”可知，第二段可描写拉玛在他的慷慨帮助下得以重建他的生意。慢慢地，他又变得富有了，并继续帮助他人。
2.续写线索：问候——给食物——感谢——回馈帮助——变得富有——继续助人
3.词汇激活
行为类
①提供：offer/give/provide
②.回报：repay /pay back
③.感谢：thank /appreciate/ show gratitude/be grateful
情绪类
①.高兴：joy /delight/happiness
②.惊讶：surprise /astonished
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Not only did you give me food, but you also gave me money to restart my business.（运用了not only …but also…句型。）
[高分句型2]. He told that man even though he changed from a wealthy man to a homeless person, never did he regret what he had done.（运用了部分倒装以及what引导的宾语从句。）
10．官方范文
Then came the time for Alexander to sing with his group. He didn’t want to sound too loud. Instead, he thoroughly enjoyed singing with the others, trying his best to integrate his voice with theirs. Finally, Mr. Robeson asked the kids about their performance experience, music lessons and trainings. All Alexander could say was, “I just really enjoy singing, but I want to learn more and practice more.” He knew his answer was not perfect, but he was willing to do whatever it takes to become a better singer in the choir.
Finally, Mr. Robeson told Alexander that he made it, not Kevin. There must have been some mistake. “How did I make it, Mr. Robeson ” asked Alexander in disbelief. “Well, you love singing. Although your voice isn’t the best, with training it will improve.” “But, what about Kevin ” Alexander asked. “Talent alone is not enough,” said Mr. Robeson. “After all, we weren’t looking for soloists.” Alexander now understood that hard work and right attitude made a difference. He couldn’t wait for the choir practice in the coming week.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了亚历山大喜欢唱歌，且一直在练习唱歌，他积极地准备唱诗班的选拔，他自己一个人唱歌唱得很好，但是一想到和别人一起合唱他就很紧张，选拔当天他独唱的非常好，但是改合唱了，他感到一阵忧郁。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“然后是亚历山大和他的团队一起唱歌的时候了。”可知，第一段可描写亚历山大参加团队唱歌时的心理历程和经过。
②由第二段首句内容“最后，罗布森先生告诉亚历山大，他成功了，而不是凯文。”可知，第二段可描写亚历山大的成功以及获得的额感悟。
2.续写线索：Alexander参加演唱——感悟和决心——Alexander演唱成功——获得的感悟
3.词汇激活
①行为类
努力：try one’s best/do one’s best/do what sb. can
喜欢做某事：enjoy doing/like doing/have an interest in
愿意做某事：be willing to do/would like to do sth./feel like doing sth.
②情绪类
不相信：in disbelief / unbelievably
激动的：couldn’t wait for/be thrilled/be excited
【点睛】[高分句型1] Instead, he thoroughly enjoyed singing with the others, trying his best to integrate his voice with theirs. (运用了动名词作宾语和现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] He knew his answer was not perfect, but he was willing to do whatever it takes to become a better singer in the choir. (运用了省略了that的宾语从句，whatever引导的宾语从句)

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