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1．阅读下面材料 ,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段 ,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was in the eighth grade, I became interested in mountain climbing. Then I climbed my first mountain— a fairly gentle 3,900-foot peak near where I live in surrey, British Columbia. I loved the challenge of conquering something bigger than myself. I like climbing more and more. Soon I’d climbed nearly l00 peaks. My parents were happy I’d finally found a hobby.
Two years ago, on December 30, when I was 16, I drove to Oregon to climb 11,240-foot Mount Hood with my friend Mel Olsen. It’s safer to start winter climbs at night when there’s less risk of the sun melting the snowpack (积雪). That day, we started at 3 a.m. The temperature was about 14 degrees. Along the way, we met two other climbers, and the four of us continued on together.
After about five hours, we reached Devil’s Kitchen, a plateau at about l0,000 feet. By this point, the wind conditions were nasty (极糟糕的). My exposed skin felt as though it were burning. The trail we followed grew narrower and steeper. At around 9 a.m. , we reached an ice step. I volunteered to go first. I placed my left foot on it.
Confident I was safe, I put my full weight on it. Suddenly, I heard a loud noise, and a whole slab of ice broke off the step, right under my foot.
In an instant, I fell backward, rolling down the mountain as if I were a character in a video game. After a few seconds, I came to a stop on a shallow slope just above the Devil’s Kitchen. I’d fallen 600 feet. My clothes were torn into small pieces, my helmet was broken, and my face was bloodied from cuts and scratches. Fortunately, for the most part, I was fine, except that I was suffering from a sharp, great pain in my left leg.
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l. 续写词数应为 l50 左右;
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I yelled for help.
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This accident made me have a deep reflection, but I was back climbing again.
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2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In the village where Charles lived, high in the French Alps, December usually brought garlands scented with pine. Each Sunday, villagers would walk down decorated streets to the old stone Wishing House. There, for the four weeks before New Year, they would light candles in the house and share their stories and pray for the next new year together. Charles loved the glow of the candles.
But this year, World War Ⅱ changed everything. Charles’s father and brother went to do their military service. Families needed ration coupons for things like butter and sugar. Because candles were costly and hard to find, the house would not have any candles this year. Charles was thinking about all of this as he stepped slowly out of bed one morning. He put on his warmest clothes and headed out to do his chores.
He opened the big barn door, sunbeams streaming into the barn. He looked up to the loft where his treasure box hid. The box held fishing line, a dried snakeskin, a whistle and his birthday candles. Each year on his birthday, one new candle would appear on his cake. After making a wish, he’d quickly blow out the candles, clean them off, and carefully put them into the box for next year.
When his chores were done, Charles climbed the ladder and opened his treasure box. He counted 10 candles. The cool wax with already melted edges gave him an idea. Charles wrapped the candles in his handkerchief and put them carefully into his pocket. He hurried down the ladder and ran to the house.
“Mama! Grandpa! I know how we can have candles for the Wishing House!” he cried as he threw open the door.
“How ” his mother asked.
“I could collect people’s used candles and make new ones. Maybe we could melt them down.”
“It’s a wonderful idea,” said grandpa, “I’ll help you.”
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1. 续写词数应为150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Charles and his grandpa visited every house and shop in the village.
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In the Wishing House were the four candles Charles had made.
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3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Wake up, Mom!” I felt a little hand on my face and reluctantly opened my eyes. There was my son, ready to start the day. I also heard my babies awake in the next room. Ready or not, the day had begun!
I loved being home with my little ones, but I felt the weight of the world on my shoulders. My husband and I had just bought a house, and some unexpected expenses made our budget tighter than it had ever been. I was weary of spending more pennies. We weren’t foolish with our money. We worked hard. We were doing all the right things, but we had had one financial disappointment after another.
I was going to pick up my kids’ photo portraits from the studio at the local mall. Despite our small budget, it was important to me to have pictures of my children as they were growing up. The previous week, I had found a coupon (优惠券) and used some change from the car to buy a $7.99 portrait package, and today was the day I was to pick up the portraits. Since we were going to the mall, I decided to make it an outing and packed some sandwiches for us to eat at the food court. What’s more, there are many ride-on toy cars in the mall’s food court for fun and for free.
After breakfast, we went off. After we parked, we walked into the portrait studio at the mall, and I approached the counter. The young woman smiled.
“May I help you ”
“Yes, I’m here to pick up our photos.”
The woman asked my name and opened her drawer. “Ah, yes, here they are. Aren’t they just so adorable ” She took out the photos, and the smiling faces of my kids warmed my heart.
“Yes, they are great. Thank you,” I said.
She put the photos into an envelope. Then she spread out additional photos of my kids that I hadn’t ordered. I knew what that meant. The upsell pitch (推销) was coming.
“Would you like to purchase these extra portraits They are only fifteen dollars apiece!” she smiled sweetly.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My heart turned cold. “I don’t have fifteen dollars.”
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As we were having our lunch, the young woman came up and pressed something into my hand.
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4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。
There are lots of chances in front of us. Whether you can seize them or not depends on the choices you make. This reminds me of one choice I made during my childhood.
Two tickets. Only two tickets to the final basketball game.
Three pairs of eyes focused on the tickets in Dad’s out-stretched hand. Mike, the oldest, asked the question running through everyone’s mind, “Only one ticket for us three But, Dad, which of us will go with you ” Avery, the youngest, repeated the question quietly. I asked Dad if there was any chance to get more tickets. I might be the middle sister, but I was just as eager as my basketball-crazy brothers for a night out with Dad. Dad said he’d got the tickets from a friend and there were only two available.
Seeing that none of us would give up the chance, Dad told us he would choose which of the three of us deserved to go by the following morning.
The next morning, we hurried into the kitchen and looked for Dad, only to find that he had gone out. We were told to get started on our Saturday cleanup as soon as we finished breakfast. Mike complained that he couldn’t concentrate on chores with the game a mere eleven hours away. He slurped the last of his milk, grabbed the basketball and headed towards the back door. Avery dashed after his brother. Before I realized it, the door snapped shut. I glanced out the window and saw Mike practicing his shot while Avery cheered him on.
Seeing the mess on the breakfast table—the leftovers on the sticky plates and dirty cups, I felt frustrated. I approached the window and knocked on it. When the boys looked at me, I held up a kitchen sponge and dishtowel. Mike casually nodded to me and held up five fingers. Sure, five more minutes! I didn’t believe they would return to do the cleanup in five minutes, especially in Dad’s absence. Apparently, they had made their choice.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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Anyway, I chose to do the Saturday morning chores on my own.
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Dad was happy to know I found the ticket he had hidden in the cupboard.
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5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Half is more
Being the mother of three active children, I enjoyed volunteering at their school and attending their music concerts. One morning, my youngest son asked, “Mom, are you coming to the concert at my school next month ”
“You know I am, so why are you asking ”
“Well, umm, please don’t wear your clown blouse,” he said.
“So what blouse are you talking about ”
Looking at the floor, he softly replied, “The bright blue one with the yellow flowers and it ties in a big bow at the neck.”
He had just described my favorite blouse. Suddenly I started laughing and couldn’t stop because I had to admit it did look a bit clownish. With tears running down my face and a big smile I promised him: “I will never wear that blouse again.”
The look of relief on his face was unforgettable as he grabbed his books and ran out the front door to school. Reluctantly I went upstairs to get dressed for work. Since my favorite blouse was now definitely out, I had to choose another top to go with my navy blue skirt and heels. Stressed, I pulled on a red short-sleeve sweater that was too hot for the sunny September day, but there was nothing else that looked appropriate.
Off and on that day I couldn’t stop thinking about all my clothes. After the birth of my first child I had started purchasing my clothes from clearance racks(清仓货架) to save money. This plan had worked when I was a stay-at-home mother. Jeans, T-shirts were my main wardrobe.
However, things had changed. I had a new full-time job. This first week had been really stressful, between trying to get dressed each morning and learning my new responsibilities.
Knowing I had to make some major changes, I got up early on Saturday to sort out my closet, which I hadn’t done in years. I put all the worn clothing and shoes into large trash bags. I kept only the clothes and shoes that fit perfectly and were a solid color. Looking at the few remaining dresses, skirts, and blouses I could see there wasn’t much left to wear to work or to attend the music concerts in my son’s school.
Unsure of what to buy next, the following week I signed up for an adult education class. It was for women like me who wanted to learn how to dress appropriately.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When the big day arrived, there were thirty women in attendance, and the instructor started to instruct us to make a change.
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Finally, the concert in my son’s school came.
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6．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was one o’clock in the morning. In the Ritesville art gallery, a window opened and a man came in. His name was Harry Black, and he was a thief. It was dark in the gallery, but Harry had a light. He looked across the room at a painting.
“There it is!” he said.
Harry moved quickly across the room. He stood and looked at the painting.
“A million dollars for this ” he thought. “I don’t understand it.”
But he took a knife from his coat. Then he took the painting very, very slowly from its frame(画框). Harry went back across the room to the window, but he walked into a table. There was a beautiful blue glass vase on the table. It fell onto the floor and broke into pieces. He ran across the pieces of glass to the window.
He had rented a room in Janey Allen’s house. He went quietly up to his room and closed the door. In his room, Harry took the painting from his bag. He wrapped it with a newspaper and put it under his bed.
In the morning. Janey was putting old bottles into a box. On the TV, a reporter was at the Ritesville art gallery. He was talking about the lost painting and the broken glass vase. Janey glanced at a photo of a blue vase.
At that time Harry wasn’t in his room. He was talking on his telephone. Janey was looking for old newspapers. Every Friday morning, she took then from every room in the house. Then later, the newspaper recycling truck arrived.
Janey opened Harry’s door and looked into his room. She always took his old newspapers or bottles for recycling. She found a newspaper under Harry’s bed. She put the old newspaper into a black recycling box. Then she ran from the house and saw the truck. “Wait!” she said. And she quickly gave the box to one of the men.
Harry came back to the house. Ile saw the recycling truck, and he saw Janey. “The newspaper! Oh, no!” Harry, cried.
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2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
He desperately chased after the truck.
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Then Janey called the police on the telephone.
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7．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Every Sunday, Grandma and I walked to the Children’s home a few blocks away from our house. Grandma always brings a home-made cake to these children, who are of different nationalities and ages. Some are refugees (难民)who cannot talk in English, some are even disabled.
First we visit John, who is from Brazil. I call him “Football genius”. He plays football so well that he organized a football team to help other kids develop football skills, such as passing and ball control. Every time we reached the playground, we saw a group of sweaty kids running around a field with bright smiles.
Next we visit Daisy. I call her “The singer” because she has a great gift for singing. She loves to sing songs for us. Wherever she stays, her soft and sweet voice fills the air.
Then we visit David. I call him “Prince(王子)Joke”. He can do talk show, cross-talk(相声)，tell jokes. Sometimes he laughs loudly while telling jokes, we could see his legs shaking up and down, his face turning red. Grandma and I can’t help laughing along with him.
One day, Grandma fell ill and had to stay in bed. She was in a low spirit and couldn’t move.
Sunday came. Grandma put my hand into her hand and told me “Rose given fragrance(芳香)in hand.” I understood what she meant, I bought a cake from shop and went to children’s home. Everyone was happy lo see me. They were disappointed when they didn’t see grandma. Knowing grandma was sick, they were sad. They prayed together for grandma’s recovery. After a while, I said goodbye to everyone.
A week later, grandma was still lying in bed. She could not walk or speak, what she could do was drink some milk. I begged her to go to hospital. She shook her head. I hid myself under the big tree in our yard so Grandma wouldn’t see tears on my cheeks.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Suddenly, the doorbell rang.
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That evening, Grandma called me in her bedroom.
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8．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I am very delighted to enter my ideal school. For most freshmen, August is the month for military training, which serves as a good chance to get familiar with new classmates and adapt to campus life.
Our school’s training took place from Aug 23 to 29. One of the challenges was to make a blackboard presentation in the new classroom. When I found out that I was in charge of this project, I had butterflies in my stomach. After all, this was the first activity in our school life.
“Would other top students alienate (疏远) me Could I manage to both complete this project and rehearse for the closing concert What if my classmates wouldn’t follow instructions under my leadership I was thinking of these tricky questions by myself.
The project began on Aug 24. The group of blackboard presentation was composed of four girls. The three other girls in the group were flexible. We gave up our lunch break hour and returned to the dormitory later at night so as to work longer on the project. One girl questioned my design, saying that we should abridge (删减) the text and leave more space for pictures. The disagreements between us upset me from time to time, but whenever there was a conflict, I tried to stay calm, decide whether to take her suggestions and then make adjustments accordingly. Gradually, I found her to be a person of strong opinion and organizational capabilities. Sometimes I was absent for a rehearsal, and I felt relieved to leave the project in her care. Other classmates turned out to be amazingly warm-hearted. Every day, five or six students came to ask me if they could help out with the decorations. Then came the big day.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Two hours before our presentation, we were in need of paper flowers.
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Eventually, the school leaders announced the result of the competition.
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9．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Joe and I had been looking forward to our retirement. However, when he suffered a heart attack last spring, he was forced to leave his job as a truck driver earlier than we had planned. As the medical bills increased, we realized I would have to continue working full-time while Joe stayed home and took over the housework.
This new arrangement was a disaster. One night, when I dragged myself to bed, I was horrified to discover Joe had turned our white sheets blue. He told me he had found out how to save on water, soap and electricity. He patted his blue trousers and announced proudly washing everything together was the secret.
When I awoke to the deafening rain the next morning, all I wanted was a hot home-cooked meal. However, what greeted me at the table was a microwave package. I knew my husband had his faults, but I thought he at least knew how to cook! I knew if I didn’t leave the house soon I would lose my temper with him. As the heavy rain thundered down outside, Joe offered to drive me to work. I ignored him as I struggled into my jacket and seized my bag with my teaching plans inside.
He insisted that he would take me and reached for his boots. I looked at the piles of newspapers and the dirty dishes still on the table. “Don’t you have enough to do I can take care of myself.” I stormed out, not even kissing him goodbye. Joe shouted after me not to take the shortcut (捷径).
Ten minutes later, I ignored Joe’s warning and turned off the main route to take the shortcut. I thought it hadn’t rained enough to flood the road, but as I rounded the corner, water rushed across my path. After a few feet, the car got stuck. I opened the door and water poured in. I hurriedly closed the door. I couldn’t risk walking in this. Almost 20 minutes passed. The car began to shake. 1 got the fright of my life when I heard three long honks (喇叭声).
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a familiar truck.
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After getting to our warm home, Joe held my hand tight.
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10．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I couldn’t believe it. As I walked into campus, I saw posters everywhere with the words “Throw out the student union president!” on them.
As my schoolmates began arriving on campus, I watched them gather around the posters and then looked toward me because I was the president. At that moment, I felt that I was torn into pieces and tried my best to stay calm.
When I was elected the president, my friends said it was one of the best campaigns they had ever seen. I started it by organizing a group of students to climb the mountain near our school. When we reached the top of the mountain, it felt like we were at summer camp. We laughed, danced and told jokes. It was really fun. While playing like little children, we agreed to do it again the following week and decided that each of us would bring a new friend.
We started out with a small group of hikers. But as the word spread, the number of participants increased. One day on campus, I met a girl in a wheelchair and we started talking. Her name was Grace. I asked her if she had ever been to the top of the mountain. She said she hadn’t. I told her that my friends and I would carry her if she were up for it. Grace accepted the offer. The next time when we went up the mountain, we took turns to carry her in her chair all the way to the mountain top.
This was probably one of the most meaningful things I did during the campaign. By the end, we had over seventy-five people climbing the mountain on Thursdays, including Grace. All of us who participated felt like we were part of something much bigger than we were. We were building a community and it felt great and no one was surprised that I had won the election.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But I was so proud of my accomplishment that I let my pride out of control.
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When I realized I had made a mistake, I decided to change.
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参考答案
1．I yelled for help. Hearing my cry for help, Mel made her way down and other climbers came to assist me. A couple of them were trained first aid treatment. They splinted my leg and called rescue team. Mel stayed by my side while I tried not to cry from the pain. I’d been lying on the ice shivering and in agony for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me. They strapped me into a sled and pulled me down the mountain. Then I was loaded into an ambulance and taken to a hospital, where I stayed for four days.
This accident made me have a deep reflection, but I was back climbing again. The fall has made me more cautious. One slip on a mountain can change everything. But the experience also made me grow as a person and helped me mature. Since the accident, I’ve climbed another 60 mountains. I’m not going to let one fall and its aftermath keep me from doing my favorite thing in the world.
【导语】本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了作者从八年级开始就对爬山有兴趣，并且很快爬了近百座山峰。16岁时，作者和朋友Mel Olsen相约去攀登11,240英尺高的胡德山，但在中途过程中，作者意外从山上摔下来的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我大声呼救。”可知，第一段可描写作者被得到救助的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“这次事故让我有了深刻的反思，但我又重新爬了起来。”可知，本段描写作者通过本次经历得到了哪些反思，以及后续又开始爬山。
2.续写线索：大声呼救——被救助过程——感悟——重新开始爬山
3.词汇激活
行为类
①帮助：assist/aid/help
②颤抖：shiver/tremble/quiver
③阻止某人做某事：keep sb from doing sth/prevent sb from doing sth
情绪类
①痛苦：agony/pain/suffering
②谨慎的：cautious/careful/prudent
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Hearing my cry for help, Mel made her way down and other climbers came to assist me.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]. I’d been lying on the ice shivering and in agony for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me.（运用了by the time引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型3]. Then I was loaded into an ambulance and taken to a hospital, where I stayed for four days.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
2．范文
Charles and his grandpa visited every house and shop in the village. Chilly wind and snow pushed against them at every turn, but Charles’s heart was consumed with happiness and warmth, imagining the new candles he could make. “Madam Sir Could you spare a few old candles for the New Year ” said Charles, holding out a basket from door to door. When the last door had closed, they headed home with a wide variety of candles of different colours and size. Looking at the good harvest, Charles breathed a sigh of relief. Without delay, he and his grandpa set to work, dropping the villagers’ candles together with all his own treasured ones into a melting pot.
In the Wishing House were the four candles Charles had made. They were small, and they were not the regular New Year candles. Each was a blend of different colours, glowing in the house. Charles smiled, knowing his friends would see it and believe New Year was coming after all. As it turned out, the villagers who went to the house and witnessed the candles cheered up, surprised and teary-eyed. “The candles are beautiful, aren’t they, Grandpa ” Charles whispered. “Beautiful!” grandpa nodded. Sometimes, difficulties and adversity are unavoidable, however, we can bring sunshine and hope with a warm heart. Maybe, this is what New Year is all about.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了查尔斯的父亲和哥哥去服兵役了。家庭需要黄油和糖等食品的定量配给券。因为蜡烛很贵，而且很难找到，所以今年家里不会有蜡烛。于是他提议收集人们用过的蜡烛，制作新的。最终在爷爷的帮助下，查尔斯制作并点亮了蜡烛。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“查尔斯和他的爷爷参观了村里的每家每户。”可知，第一段可描写他们收集蜡烛的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“许愿屋里放着查尔斯做的四支蜡烛。”可知，第二段可描写村民看到点燃蜡烛之后的反应和感悟。
2.续写线索：参观——收集蜡烛——制作蜡烛——点亮蜡烛——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
开始：set to /start to
制作：make/produce
松了口气：breathe a sigh of relief / let out a (long) sigh of relief
情绪类
快乐：happiness /joy
无法避免：unavoidable / inevitable
【点睛】[高分句型1] Without delay, he and his grandpa set to work, dropping the villagers’ candles together with all his own treasured ones into a melting pot. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] As it turned out, the villagers who went to the house and witnessed the candles cheered up, surprised and teary-eyed. (运用了who引导定语从句)
3．One possible version:
My heart turned cold. “I don’t have fifteen dollars.” I took the photo envelope and walked away, with my cheeks red after my reply. Next, we stopped at the ride-on toy cars in the mall’s food court. There weren’t any other kids there. My kids climbed on them enjoying themselves very much. After a while, we were tired so we unwrapped our lunches that I had brought from home. Although the mall’s food court was near, I didn’t have extra money. It was early for lunch, but we were hungry.
As we were hawing our lunch, the young woman came up and pressed something into my hand. She said, “Here. Take your family out for ice cream after lunch.” I was surprised. I managed to say “thank you” as she turned and walked away. Then I looked down at what she had given me. The bills totaled fifteen dollars. Tears rolled down my cheeks as I quietly finished my sandwich. The doubts in my heart melted away and my faith was renewed. Kindness can change someone’s dark moment into a bright one.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和丈夫刚买了一套房子，一些意料之外的开支使他们的预算比以往任何时候都要紧张，作者带孩子们去当地商场的摄影棚里拿孩子们的肖像照的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我的心凉了。‘我没有15美元。’”可知，第一段可描写作者没有钱买多余的肖像，带着孩子在商场玩耍的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“当我们正在吃午饭的时候，那个年轻女人走过来，把什么东西塞到我手里。”可知，第二段可描写肖像画室里的年轻女人送给作者一些东西，以此来帮助作者和她的孩子们。
2.续写线索：拒绝购买多余的肖像——带着孩子离开——带孩子们在商场玩耍——吃午餐——年轻女人送给作者一些东西————两人进行简短交流——感悟
3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）
行为类
①走开：walk away /go away
②玩得开心：enjoy oneself/have a good time
③改变：change/ transform
情绪类
①累的：tired/sweatful
②吃惊的：surprised/amazed
【点睛】[高分句型1] My kids climbed on them enjoying themselves very much. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Although the mall’s food court was near, I didn’t have extra money. (运用了although引导让步状语从句)
[高分句型3] I managed to say “thank you” as she turned and walked away. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句)
4．Possible version:
Paragraph 1: Anyway, I chose to do the Saturday morning chores on my own. I threw the leftovers into the dust bin, put the plates and cups in the sink, and cleared the table. With the sticky plates and dirty cups now clean, I felt a sense of achievement. As I opened the cupboard, something dropped out. I picked it up and found that it was the ticket. I was thrilled. At this time, the boys returned. I turned in their direction and held up the ticket. They looked at each other questioningly, as Dad’s car pulled into the yard.
Paragraph 2: Dad was happy to know I found the ticket he had hidden in the cupboard. Holding the precious ticket, I was proud of the right choice I had made. At the same time, shocked and regretful, the boys realized that they had lost the chance to watch their longed-for final basketball game because they had chosen to play basketball instead of cleaning the kitchen. Holding the precious ticket, I imagined what it would be like being at the game with my dad. It was the right choice to follow my dad’s instructions. It was a long-remembered lesson in responsibility from a dad who let his kids make their own choices and earn their own rewards.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者爸爸只有两张篮球决赛的票，他决定带三个孩子中的其中一个去看比赛，爸爸告诉我们，他将在第二天早上前从三个人中选出应该去的那个人，第二天早上，我们被告知，一吃完早餐就开始周六的大扫除，作者的两位哥哥选择去打篮球，而作者独自一人打扫。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“总之，我选择了周六早上自己做家务。”可知，第一段可描写作者在打扫的时候找到了票。
②由第二段首句内容“爸爸知道我找到了他藏在碗柜里的那张票，很高兴。”可知，第二段可描写作者知道自己做出了正确的选择时的感受，哥哥们的感受和作者的感悟。
2.续写线索：打扫——找到票——哥哥们的反应和感受——作者想象看比赛——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①扔进：throw into/cast into
②掉出来：drop out/fall out
③拿着：hold/grasp
情绪类
①兴奋的：be thrilled/be excited
②惊讶的：shocked/surprised
【点睛】[高分句型1] Holding the precious ticket, I was proud of the right choice I had made. (现在分词作状语，关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句，省略了that)
[高分句型2] It was a long-remembered lesson in responsibility from a dad who let his kids make their own choices and earn their own rewards. (由关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句)
5．When the big day arrived, there were thirty women in attendance, and the instructor started to instruct us to make a change. The instructor welcomed everyone and promised, “In the next two hours, you are going to learn how to put together a simple and basic working wardrobe for the business world.” She started off by instructing us to purchase a skirt, slacks, jacket, cardigan sweater, shoes, and a purse all in the same color like black, gray, dark blue, brown, or beige. “Whatever your budget, try to buy these basic items from the same manufacturer so the dyes and styles match.” I had never thought about details like this before, but this was definitely the information I was looking for.
Finally, the concert in my son’s school came. I wore a matching black skirt and jacket by adding a scarf. When I turned up at my son’s music concert, my youngest son saw me immediately. He smiled at me and gave me a thumbs-up. After the volunteer activities, we enjoyed the concert together.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者喜欢到学校做志愿者，参加孩子们的音乐会。但是最小的儿子担心作者还会穿以前的小丑衬衫，于是作者决定对自己的穿着做出重大的改变的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当这个重要的日子到来时，有30名女性出席，老师开始指导我们做出改变。”可知，第一段可描写作者学习穿着改变的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“终于，我儿子学校的音乐会来了。”可知，第二段可描写小儿子对作者的穿着很满意。
2.续写线索：学习——指导——改变——赞赏——共度音乐会
3.词汇激活
行为类
①学习：learn/study
②教：instruct/teach
③出现：turn up /appear
情绪类
①微笑：smile at/beam on
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I had never thought about details like this before, but this was definitely the information I was looking for.（运用了省略关系代词的定语从句）
[高分句型2]. When I turned up at my son’s music concert, my youngest son saw me immediately.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
6．One possible version:
He desperately chased after the truck. By coincidence, the traffic light in the nearest crossing turned red when the truck was on the point of going through it. The truck having to stop, Harry managed to get close to it and reached the black recycling box. Having held the most expensive newspaper tightly under his arms, he got into a taxi immediately, not noticing a thin piece of glass drop. However, Jenny witnessed what had happened. Driven by curiosity, she picked up the piece of glass and remembered the photo of the blue vase, with her mouth wide open.
Then Janey called the police on the telephone. She informed the police of where the taxi was heading and the doubtful piece of glass she had just found. “It’s exactly from the broken vase in the art gallery, I bet.” The policemen set off in no time. After thirty minutes or so, Harry, the hateful thief was caught when hiding the precious painting in a hut. Eventually, the painting was returned to the art gallery and Harry was punished for his greed.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小偷哈利偷走了画廊里一幅珍贵的画作，但是他不小心打碎了一个花瓶，并不经意带走了一个花瓶碎片。哈利的房东珍妮在收集旧报纸时碰巧拿走了哈利藏画的报纸并扔进了回收车。哈利发现后追上回收车并拿到了报纸，但不小心掉了花瓶碎片并被珍妮发现。珍妮意识到这是新闻上登的碎掉的花瓶，她打电话报警，成功帮助警察抓住了小偷哈利。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“他拼命地追赶那辆卡车。”可知，第一段可描写哈利成功追上了卡车拿到了报纸，但是却不经意掉了一块薄玻璃，被珍妮注意到并发现是报纸上登的花瓶碎片。
②由第二段首句内容“然后珍妮打电话报警。”可知，第二段可描写珍妮向警察报告哈利的行踪，警察成功抓获了哈利。
2.续写线索：追赶卡车——车等红灯——成功取画——上出租车——掉碎片——发现——报警——抓获——归还并惩罚
3.词汇激活
行为类
①进入：get into/enter
②注意到：notice/take notice of
③出发：set off/start off
情绪类
①可恶的：hateful/vile
②惊讶地：with her mouth wide open/more than surprised
【点睛】[高分句型1] The truck having to stop, Harry managed to get close to it and reached the black recycling box. (运用了独立主格结构)
[高分句型2] After thirty minutes or so, Harry, the hateful thief was caught when hiding the precious painting in a hut. (运用了when引导的省略句)
7．One possible version:
Suddenly, the doorbell rang. Grandma opened her eyes and sat up. A confused look appeared on her pale face. Suddenly, a loud laughter came into my ears. “It’s David, the Joke Prince.” I shouted. “We miss you.” David rushed to grandma with a delicate cake in his hands. It was a nice-looking cake decorated with fruits in the shape of heart. “The cake is made by all children in the nursery home.” David said and switched on the recorder; a sweet voice filled the air. It was a song sung by Daisy. Magically, he took out a picture. In the picture, grandma was watching John’s football team playing football.
That evening, grandma called me in her bedroom. She said she was hungry. She drank a big bowl of porridge and tasted a bit of cake. A satisfied smile flashed on her face. Her eyes were shining with joy. With tears in her eyes, she hugged the recorder and picture into her arms. She told me she would go to hospital the next day. She was eager to recover soon to visit the lovely kids. “What a magic visit!” I whispered. Nothing is more fantastic than being needed and valued.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，作者的奶奶很有爱心，经常看望福利院的孩子们，了解孩子们的爱好特长。一天奶奶生病了，依旧牵挂着孩子们，让作者去探望孩子们。作者把奶奶生病的消息告诉给了福利院的孩子。奶奶的病情加重，还丧失了信心，不肯去医院。作者焦虑万分。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“突然，门铃响了。”可知，第一段可描写福利院的孩子来看望奶奶的情景。
②由第二段首句内容“那天晚上，奶奶把我叫去她的卧室。”可知，第二段可描写奶奶精神状态好些了，并主动提出要去医院，因为奶奶觉得自己是被需要的。
2.续写线索：开门——疑惑——惊喜——高兴——决定就医——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①打开：switch on /turn on
②出现：flash /appear
③小声说：whisper/murmur
情绪类
①迷惑的：confused /puzzled
②满意的：satisfied/pleased
【点睛】[高分句型1]. It was a nice-looking cake decorated with fruits in the shape of heart.（运用了过去分词作定语）
[高分句型2]. With tears in her eyes, she hugged the recorder and picture into her arms. （运用了with的复合结构）
[高分句型3]. Nothing is more fantastic than being needed and valued.（运用了比较级用于否定句中表示最高级含义）
8．However, it seems that no trace of it has been found around us. Finally, we unanimously confirmed that we forgot to prepare. But the time is coming to an end. If we can’t find paper flowers before the speech, it is doomed that all our efforts will be wasted. At this time, I bravely stood out and said, ”Everyone, everyone, listen to me now.“ I said to two of the students, ”You are responsible for cutting paper“, and then said to the other students, ”We are responsible together to fold their cut paper into flowers". Though nervously, we went ahead in full swing and finished our work before the speech contest.
Surprisingly, but it seems reasonable, we won the first prize in the competition. This award is not only the result of the unity and cooperation of our members, but also means that I stood up bravely and led the team to success. This is really an unforgettable and pleasant experience.
【导语】本文以主人公进入新学校的活动为线索展开，即从得知负责新教室黑板报、做准备到展示，讲述了作者在得知要负责黑板报设计时怀着忐忑的心情着手准备黑板报，后来获得了同伴的帮助、理解和支持，终于获黑板报评选一等奖。她懂得这不仅显示了团队的团结协作，还锻炼提升了自己的能力。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“在我们展示前两小时，我们还需要纸花。”可知，第一段可描写作者和同伴如何获得纸花。
②由第二段首句内容“最终，学校领导宣布了比赛结果。”可知，第二段可描写评比情况，作者所在团队应该通过努力获得奖项。
2.续写线索：得知要负责准备黑板报——和同伴一起准备——评比之前突然发现缺少纸花——团队想办法制作纸花——获奖——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.完成：complete/finish
②.负责：be in charge of/lead
情绪类
①.紧张：have butterflies in one’s stomach/nervously
②.积极：delighted/pleasant
【点睛】[高分句型1]. If we can’t find paper flowers before the speech, it is doomed that all our efforts will be wasted. （由连接词if引导的条件状语和that引导的主语从句）
[高分句型2]. This award is not only the result of the unity and cooperation of our members, but also means that I stood up bravely and led the team to success.（由关系代词that引导宾语从句）
9．Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a familiar truck. I realized that Joe had come to rescue me. My heart danced with joy when I heard Joe’s voice. Following his instructions, I climbed out of the sunroof. When I got out, I found that Joe had turned the truck round for me to get on. Joe drove to higher ground. He rapidly got out of the vehicle and helped me into the passenger’s seat. When I thought about how I had treated him earlier, my eyes watered.
After getting back to our warm home, Joe held my hand tight. He was wet all over, but wrapped a blanket around me first. In a whispering voice, he admitted it was his fault for not doing the housework properly. It didn’t make me angry anymore when I thought of Joe’s heroic rescue. I also realized that our current life was new to both of us. We had to allow each other the time to get used to it. With this thought, I opened my arms to Joe and said, “Darling, I forgive you.”
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者对丈夫的一些生活琐事的误解，非常生气，气冲冲地去上班。外面倾盆大雨，作者无视丈夫的警告，在上班的路上遇险的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我扭头望向一辆熟悉的卡车闪烁的灯光。”可知，第一段可描写丈夫救作者的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“回到我们温暖的家后，乔紧紧地握住我的手。”可知，第二段可描写作者对丈夫的误解消除，爱意上头。
2.续写线索：高兴——解救——感动——承认错误——原谅
3.词汇激活
行为类
①意识到：realize /be aware of
②.泪流满面：one’s eyes watered / one’s face is covered with tears
③.爬出：climb out / crawl out
情绪类
①.高兴：joy /delight /pleasure
②.生气的：angry /annoyed
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Following his instructions, I climbed out of the sunroof.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]. I also realized that our current life was new to both of us.（运用了连接代词that引导的宾语从句）
10．But I was so proud of my accomplishment that I let my pride out of control. I began speaking down to people, demanding they listen to me. My friends and supporters tried to communicate to me that I had changed and that I was abusing my position, but I wasn’t listening. It wasn’t long before the very people who had trusted me began to turn against me. But I still wasn’t paying attention and even had public conflicts with them.
When I realized I had made a mistake, I decided to change. I used to think that I had to pretend to know what I was doing and that I was in charge. It was that kind of thinking that got me into trouble in the first place. Now, I was finding that the easiest way to gain other people’s respect was to admit to them what I did not know. I felt greatly ashamed. Eventually, I finished my term as president.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者通过努力，克服困难，成功当上了学生会主席。但很快作者被胜利冲昏了头脑，骄傲自满，滥用职权，最后遭到了众人的反对。最后，作者认识到自己的错误，并且改过自新。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但我对自己的成就太骄傲了，以至于我的骄傲失去了控制。”可知，第一段可描写作者居高临下，滥用职权，甚至引发冲突。
②由第二段首句内容“当我意识到我犯了一个错误时，我决定改变。”可知，第二段可描写作者为改变做出的行动，认识自己的不足，去赢得别人尊重 。
2.续写线索：被指责不对——发生冲突——突然意识到问题——愧疚——改变——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①滥用：abuse/misuse
②某人陷入麻烦：get sb. into trouble/sb. be stuck in trouble
③承认：admit/acknowledge
情绪类
①羞愧：feel ashamed/feel guilty
【点睛】[高分句型1]. It wasn’t long before the very people who had trusted me began to turn against me. (句中使用who引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]. Now, I was finding that the easiest way to gain other people’s respect was to admit to them what I did not know. (句中使用that引导的宾语从句以及what引导的宾语从句)

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