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1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Price of a Miracle
Tess was an eight-year-old girl when she heard her mom and dad talking about her little brother, Andrew. All she knew was that he was very sick and they were completely out of money.
Only a very costly operation could save him now and it was looking like there was no one to lend them the money. She heard Dad say to her tearful mom with desperation, “Only a miracle can save him now.”
Tess went to her bedroom and poured all the change she had saved out on the floor and counted it carefully:47 cents. She slipped out of home and made her way to Rexall’s Drug Store. She waited patiently for the pharmacist to give her some attention but he was too busy at this moment. Finally, she took a quarter from her pocket and banged it on the glass counter. That did it ! “And what do you want ” the pharmacist asked in an annoyed tone of voice. “I’m talking to my brother from Chicago Medical University whom I haven’t seen in ages,” he said without waiting for a reply to his question.
“Well, I want to talk to you about my brother,” Tess answered back in the same annoyed tone. “He’s really, really sick and I want to buy a miracle.”
“We don’t sell miracles here, little girl. I’m sorry but I can’t help you,” the pharmacist said, softening a little. “Listen, I have the money to pay for it. If it isn’t enough, I will get the rest. Just tell me how much it costs.” Tess answered with a blind faith.
The pharmacist’s brother was a well-dressed man. He stooped down and asked the little girl, “What kind of a miracle does your brother need ” “I don’t know,” Tess replied with her eyes welling up.
“I just know he’s really sick and Mom says he needs an operation. But my dad can’t pay for it, so I want to use my money.”
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“How much do you have ” asked the man from Chicago.
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The operation was completed.
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2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I managed to stop my friend Timmy’s bike in a fashionable way at the end of the narrow road in the neighborhood. If I rode just a little further, I would come to a wide road of my city. When I stopped the bike, I saw Timmy running to catch up. I was grateful to him. He had taught me how to ride a bike. Now he was teaching me how to stop the bike in a special way.
When he neared me, he congratulated me on my first successful stop. Seconds later, my dad came up. He always seemed to be strict. He didn’t want me to do anything I liked. When he came up, he said angrily, “I suppose if I allow you to ride the bike, you will agree to keep off the city road ” “But we don’t get on it,” I replied.
He shouted, “You were close enough! If you had slid one more foot, you would have been there. What if a car had been coming This road is dangerous. It goes through the hills. Tall trees line the road, and there are many bends. If you get on the road, a driver may not even see you coming! I didn’t buy you a bike just because of the dangerous road!”
I was really sad. It wasn’t until a few weeks later that I got a chance to ride the bike again. It was a perfect afternoon. My parents weren’t at home. Timmy and I took the opportunity to ride his bike.
With Timmy’s encouragement, I dared to ride with no hands on the handle bars for the first time. Later, Timmy said, “Why don’t we try riding down the hill fast ” I knew that it wasn’t allowed. But finally, I agreed. Timmy rode down while I waited for him to come back. When he rode back, he said, “Incredible! Do you want to try it ” I said, “Yes!” I was excited because I was going to try something disallowed. I felt daring and free.
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With excitement, I started down the hill.
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I tried to stop the bike, but still ran into the coming car, though not violently.
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3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
John and Bobby joined a wholesale company together just after graduation from college the same year. Both they worked very hard. After several years, however, the boss promoted Bobby to the position of manager but John remained an ordinary employee. John could not take it anymore, submitted his resignation to the boss and complained the boss did not know how to delegate and did not value hard working staff, but only promoted those who flattered him.
The boss knew that John worked very hard for the years. He thought a moment and said, “Thank you for your criticism, but I have a request. I hope you will do one more thing for our company before you leave. Perhaps you will change your decision and take back your resignation.”
John agreed. The boss asked him to go and find out anyone selling watermelons in the market John went and returned soon. He said he had found out a man selling watermelons. The boss asked how much per kg John shook his head and went back to the market to ask and returned to inform the boss of the price —$1.2 per kg.
The boss told John to wait a second, and he called Bobby to come to his office. He asked Bobby to go and find anyone selling watermelons in the market. Bobby went, returned and said, “Boss, only one person sells watermelons. $1.2 per kg, $10 for 10kg, he has a supply of 340 melons. On the table 58 melons, every melon weights about 2 kg and bought from the South two days ago, they are fresh and red, good quality. ” After the careful report, Bobby waited for the reply of the boss. At that moment, the boss started at John without any words.
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John realized the difference from Bobby.
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John and Bobby were good partners for the company.
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4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One particularly cold Saturday in January, I was supposed to take our dog out for a walk, but it was so cold that I didn’t want to go outside. Instead, I just opened the door and let the dog out by himself. I kept an eye on him to make sure he would come back inside.
However, another neighborhood dog quickly ran past our house, and our dog sped after to catch him. I hurriedly went to grab my coat so I could follow my dog, and then I rushed outside. Unfortunately, I was already too late, and my dog was nowhere in sight. I walked a few blocks, but I was unable to find him.
Depressed, I returned home. My mother was standing at the door waiting, and she asked me what had happened. “I know I was supposed to walk our dog,” I admitted, “but I thought he would be able to go outside and come back by himself. Now he’s gone and I can’t find him anywhere.”
My mother was very angry with me; she said I should have been more responsible. She decided to help by making some signs. The signs read, “Lost: A big black dog. Please call us right away” and she printed our phone number on the bottom. “Okay, Darrell,” she said, as she handed over those signs, “now go post these on all the street posts.”
My sister and I grabbed the signs and we posted them along our street as well as along the surrounding streets. The whole time, I was incredibly sad and worried about our dog. All I could think about was how cold it was and how cold our dog must be. My sister wanted to go home, so I told her I’d walk her home, but then keep looking for the dog myself.
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I took my sister home and continued my search alone.
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When I returned, my mother was waiting for me, smiling broadly.
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5．阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。
It took place in a teacher’s family. One day, Ben was playing basketball in the living room after school when he accidentally threw the ball at a vase sitting on the shelf. The vase dropped to the floor and a large piece broke off. What made Ben more upset was that the vase was not a common decoration but an antique, which was handed down through generations from the 18th century. It was also his mother’s favourite possession. To cover his terrible action, the terrified boy glued the pieces together hastily and put the vase back to its place.
As the mother herself dusted the vase every day, she naturally noticed the cracks(裂纹)that evening. To her surprise, the repair work was actually very good. At dinner time, she asked her boy if he had broken the vase. Fearing punishment, the suddenly inspired boy said that a neighbour’s cat jumped in from the window and he couldn’t drive it away no matter how hard he tried. It raced around the living room and finally her son was lying, for all the windows were closed before she left for work each morning and opened after she returned. However, in the face of her son’s nervous eyes and the suspicious looks of the other family members, Ben’s mother remained calm. She realised she shouldn’t just simply blame and punish her son for lying. She came up with another idea.
Before going to bed, the boy found a note from his mother in his room, asking him to go to the study at once. The boy thought he would now be punished but, as he had already lied, he was determined to deny everything to the end, no matter how angry his mum became.
In the study, calmly bathed in the light, his mother’s face showed no sign of anger. On seeing her son push open the door and cautiously enter, she took a box of chocolates out of a drawer and gave him one.
The mother said, ”This chocolate is a reward for your imagination: a window-opening cat!“
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Now with some chocolates in his hand, the boy’s bad attitude disappeared.
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6．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Here is a secret that everyone knows: I don’t like to ask for help. Of course, my disability means that I need assistance when I get dressed and have to be driven everywhere, but that is precisely my point.
One night a few years ago, after my caregiver helped me to bed, I enjoyed my favorite part of my routine — playing with my service dog Marshall. When the rest of the world made me feel “lacking”, Marshall made me feel like “enough” .
As usual, he jumped off the bed after a few minutes, but the pain in his eyes told me something was wrong. A few days later, a trip to the vet confirmed my worst fears. Dr Tom said, “I must perform an operation to treat him.”“Is he in pain ”I held my breath. Then I got the answer “Yes.”
I felt heartbroken. I couldn’t remember talking about the details. I had one huge question:“How much would the operation cost ”“About$2, 500. It might as well have been a million.” I couldn’t afford it. Each day, I searched for ways to raise money for this operation.
A beautiful bike trail was close to the apartment where we lived. On most of the days of our eight years together, Marshall and I used it. I loved the trees, the fresh air and being outside. Over the years, many of the neighbors got familiar with us. Everyone loved Marshall.
Then one day, an idea occurred to me. Could I ask these people to contribute to the cost of Marshall’s operation If I could push my wheelchair a certain number of laps (圈) and get money for every lap that I completed, might I raise enough money for Marshall to have his operation Our regular route was a mile and a half long. My goal was to push my wheelchair ten laps, a total of fifteen miles. Next, feeling very bold and a little nervous, I set a date. Then I made posters and posted them around my apartment and all over the bike trail. My neighbors were concerned for Marshall.
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
With hope, I started to train myself.
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The big day finally came and I went out at 6:30 a.m.
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7．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。
Growing up, I always dreamed of being a professional skater. After years of hard work, I am living proof that dreams can come true.
When I was born, my parents immediately noticed something wrong and the doctor said I couldn’t skate. I, however, insisted on trying skating in an ice rink (滑冰场)not far from my house where local skaters would often perform ice shows. I remember seeing the shining costumes and their graceful movements.
I determined to take group skating lessons, but I’d cry before class because going into a group scared me. Performing on the ice came naturally, but I have always been shy and afraid to speak in group settings.
One thing I’ve never been afraid of is competition. I get nervous, like everyone else, but never fearful. For me, skating has never been about beating others. It’s been about doing my best. I progressed rapidly and gave my first ice performance at age seven. I soon started to win local and regional competitions. That’s because being on the ice has always been the one place I can truly express my emotions. The ice is like home.
I began training seriously when I was nine years old. Mom and I would wake up at four o’clock in the morning, six days a week and skate for five hours. Then I’d go to school. Since education has always been important in my family, I had no choice but to find creative ways to fit in school studies throughout my amateur career.
After graduating from high school, I moved to Canada and set out to train full time to give my dreams a chance at reality. And several years later I was competing at the Olympic Games. Not my coach or even my family had ever talked to me about winning a gold medal. In fact, I wouldn’t even allow myself to think about it. I went with the attitude that I wanted to enjoy the Olympic spirit.
Finally, the day arrived. I took a deep breath and eased into a solid performance that placed me first going into the finals.
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1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Two days later, I was the first of the final six skaters to perform on the ice.
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When the medals were awarded, I found myself on the top step beyond expectation.
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8．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My teenage son, Jordan, always complained about having to be home earlier than all his friends. He would tell me that he was already seventeen, but still had a curfew (宵禁). He believed he was practically an adult. I pointed out that he was not an adult as he was still in high school.
“You don’t trust me!” he yelled. Before I continued, he rolled his eyes, slammed the door and walked away. I sighed. How could I make Jordan see that I only wanted to keep him safe
I decided to go for a walk, hoping the December air would clear my head. I opened the front door and nearly stepped on her: a small black cat, just like a meatball. “Hi, Meatball,” I said, bringing her into my arms. I walked back in, touching her neck gently. Meatball seemed happy enough to come in the house, but after an hour or two, she sat by the door, meowing to go back outside.
“Why won’t she just stay in with us all the time ” Nathan, my youngest son asked.
I explained to him that she was happy here but she liked being able to come and go as she pleased.
“That must be nice,” Jordan muttered from the other room, complaining why the cat, not him, could come and go. He even asked me to give Meatball a curfew.
Meatball became a regular.
One night, temperatures were unusually low. Meatball stood at the door, meowing to go outside.
I shook my head at her, afraid that she might freeze to death. She stared at me and meowed again. I patted her head, “I know you’re not happy, but it’s for your own good.”
“Mom’s not being mean to you,” Nathan told the cat. “She’s just trying to keep you from turning into a frozen meatball.” We both laughed at his joke.
The next morning, I couldn’t find Meatball. I asked the kids if anyone had seen her.
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Jordan nodded, “I let her out last night.”
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As I drove to the animal hospital, Jordan sat in the back, holding Meatball inside his coat.
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9．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Tim Robinson, a former junior officer of the British Army, was on holiday in Bridport, Dorset, a town in England. While enjoying a walk down the beach, Tim slipped on a piece of seaweed lying in the sand and fell, breaking his leg.
Unfortunately, Tim did not bring his cell phone with him when he left for his walk. No one was in site, but as Tim lay helpless he remembered his military training and tried to think about what was around to help him. After struggling around on the beach, the pain became too much to handle. He stopped and thought about what to do.
With no phone and no one around, and with his leg hurting greatly, Tim had a decision to make. He could either continue this way in pain and hope that someone happened to see him, or he could try something else. It didn’t matter that his leg had made him partially immobile, Tim still had the ability to crawl (爬行), and so he did.
The choice was easy, but the crawl was tough. Tim told the Daily Mail, “After I crawled to about a mile-and-a-quarter away from the car park, I started flashing my torch in SOS and spinning it over my head to create a Buzz-Saw signal which is a way of attracting helicopters in the armed forces.”
No one seemed to be around. At least, no one could read Tim’s signals for help. Once again, he had to either stay where he was and wait for help or get moving. In his mind he had no choice. There was no response to begin with, so he crawled for five minutes and covered about 50 meters before making the same signal three times. Most people couldn’t imagine crawling for any distance with a broken leg, but Tim wasn’t about to give up.
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1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Tim finally got a response from the distance.
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Tim’s condition was worse than Mrs. Robinson thought.
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10．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Great Monday
Monday started out great. I woke up on time, ate breakfast and did some last minute studying for my math test that day. I was confident that I would get a high mark. I left my house, and minutes later, I was sitting with my friends on the school bus. We were busy talking about how we spent our weekend. At one stop, a boy named Ryan got on hurriedly. He tripped(绊倒) over someone’s foot and THUMP! He fell flat onto the floor.
Every one of us on the bus looked on and laughed crazily. Ryan picked himself up, dusted his jacket and made his way to an empty seat. He tried to laugh with us, but his face was burning with embarrassment. The rest of the morning flew by. I did well in my math test. It wasn’t long before the lunch bell rang. I met my friends from the cheerleading team in the dining hall.
When we finished eating, we headed out to the courtyard to practice a cheer we would do at that night’s football game. After much practice, we finally managed to do the cheer perfectly. We decided to practice it again one last time. Again, just like the rest of my day so far, the cheer was going great. I raised my leg for one last toe touch. RIIPPP! I felt my jeans was torn down in the middle of my backside.
I froze(僵住了). I had no idea what to do but stand still. Then I heard people burst out laughing and I saw them pointing at my broken jeans. Trying to cover myself with my hands, I tried to laugh too, but I felt tears began to well up in my eyes.
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Then I saw Ryan running towards me.
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That night, after the cheer at the football game, I found Ryan.
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参考答案
1．One possible version:
“How much do you have ” asked the man from Chicago. “47 cents!” Tess replied without any hesitation. To her surprise, the man said that he was a doctor and that it was a fair price for a miracle. Overcome with excitement, Tess grasped his hand, leading him to her home. With doubt and hope, Dad and Mom had Andrew checked by the man, who declared that he would perform an operation on the boy and promised it wouldn’t be long before he could pick himself up. Hearing his words, the whole family burst into tears of joy.
The operation was completed. Hardly had Andrew been sent back home when his parents went to thank the doctor with Tess, for they knew that 47 cents was a joke for an operation. They promised to save enough money to pay for the bill only to be told that Tess had paid for it. “It’s a fair deal,” the doctor explained to the parents，and then looked into Tess’s eyes, smiling, “47 cents was what it cost—plus the faith of a little girl.”
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了八岁的小女孩Tess听到爸爸妈妈谈论她的弟弟，得知弟弟得了重病，需要动手术，但是家里没有钱。听到爸妈说“只有奇迹才能救他”时，她拿了自己的零花钱去药店买“奇迹”，幸运地遇到了能做手术的医生，医生真地给了她们家一个“奇迹”，为她弟弟做了手术的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘你有多少钱？’那个从芝加哥来的人问。”可知，第一段可描写医生和Tess之间的对话，并想要帮助她。
②由第二段首句内容“手术完成。”可知，第二段可描写Tess一家人对医生的感谢。
2.续写线索：回答——了解——承诺——高兴——手术完成——感谢
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.回答：answer/reply/response
②.承诺：promise/undertake
情绪类
①.感谢：thank/be grateful/appreciate
②.高兴：burst into tears of joy/burst into tears of pleasure
【点睛】[高分句型1]. With doubt and hope, Dad and Mom had Andrew checked by the man, who declared that he would perform an operation on the boy and promised it wouldn’t be long before he could pick himself up. (由关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句,省略了that的宾语从句，before引导状语从句)
[高分句型2]. Hearing his words, the whole family burst into tears of joy. (运用了现在分词作状语)
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With excitement, I started down the hill. The wind blew into my ears as the speed began to rise. The bike seemed to control itself as I sped down the hill. I thought I heard Timmy yelling behind me. But I figured he was just excited and enjoyed my ride as much as I did. But when I just rode into the bend, the screaming tires alerted my ears. A car was coming towards me. I could only hear my heartbeat.
I tried to stop the bike, but still ran into the coming car, though not violently. I fell from the bike. The car’s driver came out and I found that he happened to be my dad. He quickly came to check my body. After realizing I was just slightly injured, he walked me to our house and calmly asked Timmy to take his bike home. When reaching home, I waited for blame and punishment. Unexpectedly, my dad said with tears, “Son, I almost lost you. Please don’t do it again.” I finally understood my dad’s love for me.
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者的朋友教他骑自行车的经历，以及作者父亲因为担心安全问题而不让作者骑车，作者趁父母不在家和朋友偷偷骑车下山，结果作者撞到父亲的汽车了，最后父亲没有责怪作者，流泪说只是担心作者才不让他骑车，作者最终明白了父亲的苦心。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我兴奋地开始下山”可知，第一段可描写作者骑车下山过程的场景和内心感受。
②由第二段首句内容“我试图停下自行车，但还是撞上了迎面而来的汽车，尽管不是很猛烈。”可知，第二段可描写作者撞上汽车之后发生的事情以及最终感悟。
2.续写线索：下山——具体过程——兴奋——撞车——发现是父亲——回家——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.撞上：run into / collide with.
②.从……落下：fall from / drop from
③.出来：come out / get out
情绪类
①.兴奋的：excited / thrilled
②.平静地：calmly / imperturbably
【点睛】[高分句型1]. But I figured he was just excited and enjoyed my ride as much as I did.（运用了宾语从句）
[高分句型2].When reaching home, I waited for blame and punishment.（运用了时间状语从句）
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John realized the difference from Bobby. Shocked by Bobby’s perfect performance, John was lost in thought, unable to utter a single word. It was quite a while before John made his final decision. Instead of leaving the company like a drowned mouse, he decided to stay and prove his ability. “I am bound to make it!” John said to the boss with a determined look, taking back the resignation. After that, not only did John work harder than before, but he also learned from Bobby with an open mind. Thus, John made steady progress in his work.
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John and Bobby were good partners for the company. Thanks to their cooperation and hard work, the company made a rapid development. Fortunately, affected by John’s efforts, the boss promoted him to the position of manager, too. Now it occurs to John that details determine success or failure. As an old saying goes, “No gold is red, no man is perfect.” Only with a humble heart to learn from others, can we constantly surpass ourselves and finally achieve success.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了约翰和鲍比同年大学毕业后就一起加入了一家批发公司。他们俩都很努力地工作。然而，几年后。老板提升鲍比为经理，而约翰仍是一名普通雇员。约翰忍无可忍，向老板递交了辞呈，抱怨老板不懂得授权，不重视努力工作的员工，只提拔那些奉承他的人。最后老板通过寻找卖西瓜的人一事，让约翰认识到了自己和鲍比的区别。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“约翰意识到了和鲍比的区别”可知，第一段可描写约翰在认识到了自己的和鲍比的区别之后所采取的行动。
②由第二段首句内容“约翰和鲍比是公司的好伙伴”可知，第二段可描写约翰的感悟以及努力。
2.续写线索：意识到区别——决定留下——努力工作——得到提升——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①决定：decide to/be determined to
②成功：make it /succeed
③因为：thanks to/because of
情绪类
①吃惊：shocked /astonished
②不断地：constantly / continually
【点睛】[高分句型1] Instead of leaving the company like a drowned mouse, he decided to stay and prove his ability. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] After that, not only did John work harder than before, but he also learned from Bobby with an open mind. (运用了部分倒装)
4．One possible version:
I took my sister home and continued my search alone. Carrying the signs made by my mother, I kept posting them. In the meantime, whenever there were people passing by, I would ask if they had met such a dog. I even knocked from door to door, asking if they had seen it. No luck. Nobody claimed to have spotted our dog. What if I had taken the dog out for a walk Tears of regret welled up in my eyes. As the darkness fell, I decided to come back home to check if anybody had called.
When I returned, my mother was waiting for me, smiling broadly. There, behind my mother, was our lovely dog looking up at me eagerly. Upon seeing me, it raced towards me. I couldn’t hold my tears. “It just came back by itself,” my mother said gently. Hugging the dog with relief, I apologized to my mother sincerely. “I am sure you have learned your lesson today,” my mother replied in a comforting voice. I played with my sister and the dog again. Despite the freezing weather outside, my heart warmed up. It was on the day that I learned the value of responsibility.
【导语】本文以故事的发展为线索展开。一个星期六的早上，因为怕冷，作者没有出去遛狗，而是让狗自己出去了，然后导致自家的狗走丢了。所以，作者和妹妹带上妈妈做的牌子到街上去找他家的狗，费了很大周折，作者也没能找到他家的狗。当作者伤心的回家后，却发现狗自己回来了。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我把妹妹带回家，然后独自继续寻找。”可知，第一段可描写作者独自寻找他家的狗的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“当我回来的时候，我的母亲正在等我，笑容灿烂。”可知，第二段可描写走丢的狗回来了，它是如何回来的，以及作者一家人高兴的心情。
2.续写线索：放狗出去——狗跑走——出去追狗——狗跑丢——寻找狗——狗回来了
3.词汇激活
行为类
①走过：walk by/pass by/go by
②挨家敲门：knock from door to door/tap from door to door
③回家：return/go back home
情绪类
①渴望地：eagerly / urgently/enthusiastically
②真诚地：sincerely / honestly/genuinely/truly
【点睛】[高分句型1] Carrying the signs made by my mother, I kept posting them.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2] In the meantime, whenever there were people passing by, I would ask if they had met such a dog.（运用了whenever引导的状语从句和if引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型3] It was on the day that I learned the value of responsibility.（运用了强调句型）
5．One possible version:
The mother said, ”This chocolate is a reward for your imagination: a window-opening cat! “Hearing her sincere appreciation, Ben flushed, lowered his head and muttered a thank you. Surprisingly, the mother took out another chocolate and pressed it into his hand. ”This one is for the delicate repair work you did to the broken vase. “She also added that she was moved by how much the boy cherished the family possession. At these hearty remarks, Ben felt a flow of shame through his veins, and had to duck his head even lower. The mother then calmly encouraged Ben to reward himself with more chocolates for other merits he had displayed in this event. He did as he was told to, confessing that he was calm when facing the accident.
Now with some chocolates in his hand, the boy’s bad attitude disappeared. His palm and forehead sweating, nervousness welled up inside him. After what seemed a long time, he looked up at his mother, admitted that it was not the cat but he that had broken the vase accidentally and asked for punishment. ”I’m sorry I lied to you, Mum. Please take back the chocolates.“ Feeling so ashamed, Ben couldn’t hold back his tears. He opened his palm wide, ready to return the chocolates. To his surprise, however, his mother placed the whole box of chocolates in his hand, smiling. ”Honesty deserves the best reward, my dear."
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小男孩Ben一天放学后在客厅打篮球，不小心把球扔到了架子上的一个花瓶上，把妈妈的古董花瓶砸碎了，并进行修复，但还是被妈妈发现了， Ben谎称是邻居的猫砸碎了花瓶。妈妈知道是Ben砸碎的花瓶，并没有揭穿他，而是通过用巧克力奖励他在这件事上的优点，让Ben最终承认自己撒了谎的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“妈妈说：“这块巧克力是对你想象力的奖励：一只会开窗户的猫!”可知，第一段可描写妈妈通过用巧克力奖励Ben在这件事上的优点的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“现在手里拿着一些巧克力，男孩的坏态度消失了。”可知，第二段可描写Ben最终承认了错误，受到妈妈的奖励。
2.续写线索：妈妈奖励巧克力——Ben感到羞愧——妈妈继续鼓励Ben——Ben很紧张——承认错误——受到奖赏
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.低头：lower one's head / bow one's head/duck one's head
②.拿出：take out/fetch out
③.鼓励：encourage/arouse/ embolden
情绪类
①.脸红的：flushed / blush with shame
②.出人意料的：To one’s surprise /Surprisingly
【点睛】[高分句型1]. This one is for the delicate repair work you did to the broken vase. （运用了省略关系代词的定语从句）
[高分句型2]. He did as he was told to, confessing that he was calm when facing the accident. （运用了as引导的状语从句，现在分词作状语，连接词that连接的宾语从句和状语从句的省略）
[高分句型3]..After what seemed a long time, he looked up at his mother, admitted that it was not the cat but he that had broken the vase accidentally and asked for punishment.（运用了what连接宾语从句，that连接的宾语从句及强调句型）
6．范文
With hope, I started to train myself. For the first few days, I nearly gave up. Pushing my wheelchair made me feel great pain in my back and shoulders, but my love for Marshall kept me going. Instead of listening to my body, I focused on the voice in my heart. When I was training, I thought to myself. “One more lap. You can do this. Don’t stop. Marshall needs you.” After weeks of daily training, I could finish all fifteen miles.
The big day finally came and I went out at 6: 30 a.m. The first few laps were long and lonely. Slowly the donors and neighbors came to watch. Some even cheered as I passed them. With every mile, more people came and donated money. There was hope after all. Donations from the neighbors continued. Many hours passed, and I finished all fifteen miles. I succeeded in raising enough money for Marshall’s operation. I could never have made it without these kind people’s support.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了身患残疾的作者并不喜欢寻求帮助。然而当他的爱犬Marshall身患重病需要大笔钱做手术时，作者想到一个主意：推动轮椅15英里去筹钱。作者战胜身体的疼痛，刻苦训练，最终实现了自己的既定目标。在好心人的帮助下，成功筹到钱的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“带着希望，我开始训练自己。”可知，第一段可描写作者战胜疼痛刻苦训练。
②由第二段首句内容“重要的一天终于来了，我在早上6:30出门。”可知，第二段可描写作者成功跑完了15英里，为马歇尔的手术筹集了足够的资金。
2.续写线索：训练——疼痛——战胜疼痛——出发——捐款——筹款成功
3.词汇激活
行为类
①关注：focus on/center on/pay attention to
②完成：finish/complete
③捐赠：donate/contribute
情绪类
①爱：love/affection
②欢呼：cheer /be in high spirits/acclaim
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Pushing my wheelchair made me feel great pain in my back and shoulders, but my love for Marshall kept me going.(运用动名词作主语和现在分词作宾语补足语)
[高分句型2]. I could never have made it without these kind people’s support.(运用了without含蓄条件句的虚拟语气)
7．One possible version:
Two days later, I was the first of the final six skaters to perform on the ice. I was nervous, but not afraid. The air felt like a cool February, while my heart burned like July. This was it! This was the moment I had been training for! I struck a pose and then started my performance. Performing in the final round was like entering another realm, a realm of jumping and twizzling and gliding. Every muscle tensed and stretched according to my will, just like how I had practiced countless times before. The crowd exploded into cheers as I finished, bringing me back into the world. I tried to compose myself, appreciating others’ performance.
When the medals were awarded, I found myself on the top step beyond expectation. Words couldn’t describe the overwhelming mixture of emotions I felt. Hugging my fellow contestants, I felt relieved that all my hard work had paid off. My parents and coach waved wildly and attempted to contain their excitement, but the glittering tears failed them. It was only when my national flag rose to the top accompanied by the national anthem that I found my vision blurred by tears. Then I truly understand what matters most in achieving a dream is to strive hard to make it come true despite any challenges you are faced with instead of abandoning it easily.
【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者忽略医生判断坚持练习滑雪，每次滑雪虽然紧张，但从不害怕，经过多年努力最终参加奥运会的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写
①根据第一段首句“两天后，我是最后六名在冰上表演的选手中的第一人”可知，下文可描写作者参加决赛时的感受、心情和表现。
②根据第二段首句“当奖牌被授予时，我发现自己超越了预期”可知，下文可描写领奖时作者、家人和教练的反应，以及作者的感悟。
2.续写线索：进入决赛——保持平常心——完美表现——站上领奖台——众人感动——感悟
3.词类激活
行为类
①开始：start/begin
②欣赏：appreciate/enjoy/admire
③重要：matter/count
④实现梦想：make one’s dream come true/realize one’s dream
⑤拥抱：hug/embrace
情绪类
①紧张的：nervous/tense/anxious
②兴奋：excitement/thrill
【点睛】[高分句型1]This was the moment I had been training for!（运用了省略关系代词that/which的定语从句）
[高分句型2]Hugging my fellow contestants, I felt relieved that all my hard work had paid off. （运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型3]Then I truly understand what matters most in achieving a dream is to strive hard to make it come true despite any challenges you are faced with instead of abandoning it easily.（运用了what引导的主语从句）
8． Jordan nodded, “I let her out last night.” My mouth dropped open. “She was outside all night ” I was so furious, “It was freezing and she could die!” Jordan choked back his words, stunned. I grabbed my coat and rushed outside. Jordan followed, fear welling up in his eyes. Several minutes later, the poor thing was found, shaking and curling into a tiny ball. I picked her up, unsure whether she was alive or dead. Jordan was scared, “We need a vet! Now!”
As I drove to the animal hospital, Jordan sat in the back, holding Meatball inside his coat. I could hear him talking to the cat, apologizing repeatedly. Luckily, the vet saved Meatball. Seeing her eyes open, Jordan stroked her head, all tears. Then, surprisingly, he turned to me. He apologized for what he had done. “I know you just want to keep me safe,” he murmured. I felt a lump in my throat. He rubbed Meatball’s back, “Looks like we are both going to observe the curfew. It’s for our own good.”
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者的儿子抱怨作者不让他晚上外出，但是在通过猫被夜里放出而差点被冻死的事情后，他儿子终于明白作者不让他出去是为了他的安全着想。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①.由第一段首句内容：乔丹点点头，“我昨晚放她出来的。”可知，第一段可描写猫被放出去后他们去寻找的过程以及猫被找到后的状态。
②.由第二段首句内容：“当我开车去动物医院的时候，乔丹坐在后面，把肉球放在外套里。”可知，第二段可描写他们将猫送去救治的过程以及乔丹的懊悔。
2.续写线索：去找猫——发现猫——发现猫状态不对——送去救治——猫得救——乔丹懊悔
3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）
行为类
①.抓住：grab/grasp
②.轻抚：stroke/ pet
③.拯救：save/ rescue
情绪类
①.非常愤怒： so furious / so angry
②.恐惧的：scared/ terrified
【点睛】[高分句型1] As I drove to the animal hospital, Jordan sat in the back, holding Meatball inside his coat.（运用了as引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]. Seeing her eyes open, Jordan stroked her head, all tears.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
9．
One possible version
Tim finally got a response from the distance. He was excited to see a torch flashing back. It was his wife shining the torch in response to his signal. Thankfully his wife knew something must have been wrong and went looking for her husband. She kept moving toward her husband, shining her light. All the while, Mrs. Robinson called for help. As they got closer to each other she waited anxiously for help to arrive. She had no idea how hurt her husband actually was.
Tim’s condition was worse than Mrs. Robinson thought. Tim’s broken leg hurt increasingly worse and was at risk of infection. He needed medical care immediately. Luckily, the ambulance finally showed up. After checking his leg, the medical workers couldn’t believe what he had put himself through. This man had crawled such a long distance after suffering such a wound. If it hadn’t been for his training in the army, he might not have made it.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了退伍军官Tim Robinson 独自在海边散步，不小心踩到水草滑倒在地，摔伤了腿。不幸的是，他既没有带手机，也无人可以求救。他利用之前的部队知识进行自救，经过多次不懈的尝试只能选择爬行，并利用手电筒发出求救信号。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“蒂姆终于得到了来自远方的回应。”可知，第一段可描写是谁给Tim做出回应，是如何回应的，又是如何找到Tim的。
②由第二段首句内容“蒂姆的情况比罗宾逊太太想象的还要糟糕。”可知，第二段可描写Tim的伤情，得到的救助和医护人员感慨Tim的坚强意志。
2.续写线索：妻子回应——妻子找到Tim——Tim的伤情——救护车到来——感慨Tim的坚强意志
3.词汇激活
行为类
①照亮手电筒：shine the torch/light up the flashlight
②接近：get close to/come near to
③出现：show up/turn up
情绪类
①激动：be excited/be thrilled
②焦急：anxiously/fretfully
【点睛】[高分句型1] After checking his leg, the medical workers couldn’t believe what he had put himself through. (由what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] If it hadn’t been for his training in the army, he might not have made it. (由if引导的条件状语从句和虚拟语气)
10．One possible version
Then I saw Ryan running towards me. Suddenly the scene struck me where he fell flat and I laughed at him crazily, I thought he would join in with those laughing at me. I lowered, my head, my face burning with embarrassment. However, Ryan didn’t laugh. Instead, he approached me from behind, quickly took off his jacket and offered it to me, signaling to me to cover my torn jeans. Struggling against my tears, I did want to express my gratitude to him but courage failed me. I left the courtyard in total silence.
That night, after the cheer at the football game, I found Ryan. I thanked him for giving me his jacket and returned it to him. Gathering my courage, I sincerely apologized to him for my misconduct on the bus, and thanked him for helping me out of an equally embarrassing situation. Ryan, with a broad smile, patted me on the shoulder and told me to forget about it, joking he fell like that a lot. I admired his honesty and sense of humor, and realized that he was someone I could be great friends with. Honestly, Monday was a great day indeed!
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在公交车上见到同学Ryan被绊倒，引起大家，包括作者，一起哄笑，这使Ryan很尴尬。下午作者在准备足球赛进行训练时，不幸牛仔裤从屁股的中间撕开了，这也引起大家的哄笑，正在作者尴尬得无地自容的时候，Ryan跑过来，帮助作者解脱尴尬处境的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然后我看到Ryan朝我跑过来。”可知，第一段可描写Ryan帮助作者解脱尴尬处境。
②由第二段首句内容“那天晚上，在足球比赛的欢呼过后，我找到了Ryan。”可知，第二段可描写作者找到Ryan，为自己的不礼貌而道歉，为Ryan的帮助而表示感谢。
2.续写线索：尴尬——走近——帮助——离开——感谢——道歉——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.走近：approach/step close to
②.离开：leave/depart from
情绪类
①.尴尬：thank/be grateful/show gratitude
②.道歉：apologize/say sorry to
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Suddenly the scene struck me where he fell flat and I laughed at him crazily, I thought he would join in with those laughing at me. (由关系副词where引导的分隔式定语从句作the scene的定语)
[高分句型2]. Gathering my courage, I sincerely apologized to him for my misconduct on the bus, and thanked him for helping me out of an equally embarrassing situation. (运用了非谓语动词现在分词作状语)

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