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Continuation writing
--A Bowl of Noodles
Reading(读取信息)
continuation writing
Predicting
,(预测发展)
Writing
(续写故事)
Polishing
(润色定稿)
Step 1
Reading
Jenny was the only child in her home.She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of
the house angrily.She couldn't help weeping when she thought of the scolding from her mother.Having
wandered in the street for hours,she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat.She stood beside a
stand for a while,watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business.However,with no money in hand,
she sighed and had to leave.
The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked,"Hey,girl,you want to have the noodles "
"Oh,yes...but I don't have money on me,"she replied."That's OK.I'll treat you today,"said the man
"Come in."The seller brought her a bowl of noodles,whose smell was so attractive.As she was eating,
Jenny cried silently."What is it "asked the man kindly.
"Nothing,actually I was just touched by your kindness!"said Jenny."Even a stranger on the street will
give me a bowl of noodles,while my mother drove me out of the house.She showed no care for me.She is
so merciless compared to a stranger!"
Hearing the words,the seller smiled,"Girl,do you really think so I only gave you a bowl of noodles and
you thanked me a lot.But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby.Can you number the
times she cooked for you Have you expressed your gratitude to her "
Jenny sat there,speechless and numb with shock.She remembered Mother's familiar face and weathered
hands."Why did I not think of that A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful,but I have
never thanked my mum for what she has done for me."
On the way home,Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as
she arrived home.
Paragraph 1:Nearing the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath.
Paragraph 2:A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.

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