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Unit 1 单元话题满分范文必背
1．（2021·湖南·华容县教育科学研究室高一期末）袁隆平，一位伟大的中国科学家。他逝世后，受到无数
人的敬仰。以“I want to be a scientist”为题写一篇英语短文，要点如下：
１.愿望；2. 理由；3. 决心。
注意：1、词数 80 左右；2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】I want to be a scientist
I want to be a scientist. A good scientist can make a difference to the world. To be a scientist, I can help
people solve a large number of tough problems in certain fields and as for me, it is a great cause, bringing me a
sense of accomplishment. Science could push forward the economic and social development of a country.
Therefore it is great to be a scientist. I may have to face a lot of challenges to be a scientist. But I will develop
good study habits, thinking deeply and comprehensively. I will work hard, reading more and doing more.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“I want to be a scientist”为题写一篇英语短文，要点包含自
己想成为科学家的愿望、理由和决心。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有影响：make a difference→have an effect
许多： a large number of →a lot of
推动：push forward→promote
面对：face→confront
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I want to be a scientist. A good scientist can make a difference to the world.
拓展句：I want to be a scientist, because a good scientist can make a difference to the world.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】To be a scientist, I can help people solve a large number of tough problems in certain
fields and as for me, it is a great cause, bringing me a sense of accomplishment.(运用了不定式及现在分词作状
语)
【高分句型 2】Therefore it is great to be a scientist. (运用了 it 作形式主语)
2．（2022·江苏苏州·高一期中）假定你是苏华，你的英国朋友 Sam 对中医学很感兴趣，在邮件中向你询
问中国首位获得诺贝尔奖的女科学家屠呦呦以及她的贡献，请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.屠呦呦简介；2.她的贡献；3.你的希望。
写作要求：
1.词数 80 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
More than delighted to know that
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Yours,
Su Hua
【答案】Possible version:
Dear Sam,
More than delighted to know that you have a great interest in traditional Chinese medicine and Tu Youyou,
I’m writing to share with you what I know about her.
Tu Youyou has become the first female scientist of China to receive a Nobel Prize, awarded for her
contribution to the fight against malaria, one of the deadliest diseases in human history. Thanks to her discovery
of qinghaosu, malaria patients all over the world have had a greatly increased chance of survival and now about
200 million malaria patients have benefited from it.
I sincerely hope the information above can help you have a better understanding of Tu Youyou and
traditional Chinese medicine.
Yours,
Su Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友 Sam 写信介绍中国首位获得诺贝尔奖的女科学
家屠呦呦。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感兴趣：have a great interest in→be interested in
全世界：all over the world→around the world
高兴的：delighted→glad
因为：thanks to→because of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Tu Youyou has become the first female scientist of China to receive a Nobel Prize, awarded for her
contribution to the fight against malaria, one of the deadliest diseases in human history.
拓展句：Tu Youyou has become the first female scientist of China to receive a Nobel Prize, who was awarded
for her contribution to the fight against malaria, one of the deadliest diseases in human history.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] More than delighted to know that you have a great interest in traditional Chinese medicine
and Tu Youyou, I’m writing to share with you what I know about her. (运用了 that 引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型 2] Tu Youyou has become the first female scientist of China to receive a Nobel Prize, awarded for her
contribution to the fight against malaria, one of the deadliest diseases in human history. (运用了过去分词作状语)
3．（2022·北京昌平·高一期末）假设你是高一学生李华，近期你们班召开了一次主题为“我最敬仰的人”的
线上班会，你的英国笔友 Jim 对此很感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件介绍相关情况。
内容包括：1.班会举办的时间和主要内容；
2.你最敬仰的人及其主要成就；
3.你敬仰他/她的原因。
注意：1.词数 100 左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Our class held an online class meeting with the theme of “The Person I Admire Most” last Friday. The
students took an active part in it.
There are many great people who have contributed a lot to our world. Among those, I admire Yuan Longping
most. Dr. Yuan devotes himself to doing research on the rice output. Thanks to his great research, many less
developed countries have got rid of hunger.
It is Yuan Longping’s hard-working spirit and perseverance that make him succeed. He is my role model and
has been inspiring me to study hard.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友 Jim 写一封邮件，介绍你们班线上班会的内容
及你最敬仰的人。
【详解】1.词汇积累
主题：theme→topic
参加：take part in→participate in
幸亏，由于：thanks to→owing to
毅力：perseverance→willpower
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Our class held an online class meeting with the theme of “The Person I Admire Most” last Friday.
拓展句：Our class held an online class meeting whose theme was “The Person I Admire Most” last Friday.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】There are many great people who have contributed a lot to our world.（运用了 who 引
导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型 2】It is Yuan Longping’s hard-working spirit and perseverance that make him succeed.（运用了强
调句型，强调句子主语“Yuan Longping’s hard-working spirit and perseverance”）
4．（2022·江苏·苏州中学高一阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校英语报正在举办“The scientist I admire most”
征文活动。请你用英语写一篇文章投稿，内容包括：
1.概述我最敬佩的科学家
2.他/她的杰出事迹
3.我敬佩他/她的理由及他/她对我的影响
注意：1.词数不少于 80 字；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
The scientist I admire most
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【答案】The scientist I admire most
For this topic, different people may have different ideas. Among all the scientists, I admire Yuan Longping
most, who is the person with willingness to serve the country.
In my opinion, Yuan Longping is an excellent person. As a top scientist in the world, Mr. Yuan lived a very
simple life, but his contributions were invaluable to the field of science and agriculture. Without him and his team,
there would still be millions of people having to face the threat of hunger. He devoted his whole life to his country
and people, and even to the world.
So we should learn from Mr. Yuan. Love our country and serve our people.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写题为“我最敬佩的科学家”的短文投稿，参加征文活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想法：idea→view
不同的：different→various
优秀的：excellent→ outstanding
献身于：devote oneself to→be committed to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In my opinion, Yuan Longping is an excellent person
拓展句：In my opinion, Yuan Longping is an excellent person that deserves everyone's admiration.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Among all the scientists, I admire Yuan Longping most, who is the person with
willingness to serve the country with heart and soul.（运用了 who 引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型 2】Without him and his team, there would still be millions of people having to face the threat of
hunger. （运用了虚拟语气）
5．（2022·湖南省临湘市教研室高一期末）假设你是红星中学的高三学生李华。你在英国学医的朋友 Jim
想请你介绍中国科学家钟南山，请你根据以下要点给 Jim 回信介绍钟南山。
1. 钟南山于 1941 年出生在广州，毕业于北京医学院，并于 1979 年出国进修，是中国最著名的科学家和
医生之一。
2. 2003 年他奋战在抗击非典第一线；2020 年初，84 岁高龄的他再上新冠肺炎防疫最前线。
注意：1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：the SARS epidemic 非典；the novel coronavirus 新型冠状病毒
【答案】Dear Jim,
I am very glad to introduce Zhong Nanshan to you.
Zhong Nanshan is one of the premier scientists and doctors in China. He was born in Guangzhou in 1941 and
graduated from Beijing Medical College. Then, in 1979, he went abroad for further education. This ordinary but
great man has been working in the medical field for over 50 years. In 2003 Zhong Nanshan fought in the battle
against the SARS epidemic. And at the beginning of the year of 2020, Zhong Nanshan,although aged 84, fought
again on the front line against the novel coronavirus which broke out in Wuhan, Hubei Province. Dangerous as it
was, Zhong Nanshan with his medical team worked hard day and night doing research and treating patients.
Hope you can learn more about Chinese scientists.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在英国学医的朋友 Jim 写回信，介绍中国科学家钟南山
的生平事迹。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad →delighted
最著名的：premier→most famous
多于，大于：over→more than
有威胁的：dangerous→threatening
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Dangerous as it was, Zhong Nanshan with his medical team worked hard day and night doing research and
treating patients.
拓展句：Though it was dangerous, Zhong Nanshan with his medical team worked hard day and night doing
research and treating patients.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Dangerous as it was, Zhong Nanshan with his medical team worked hard day and night
doing research and treating patients. （运用倒装句，现在分词作状语）
【高分句型 2】Zhong Nanshan,although aged 84, fought again on the front line against the novel coronavirus
which broke out in Wuhan, Hubei Province. （运用了过去分词作定语，which 引导限制性定语从句）
6．（2022·全国·高三专题练习）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的老师为题，写一
篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The Teacher I Respect
There are many respectable teachers around us.
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【答案】There are many respectable teachers around us. My English teacher is definitely one of them. As a man
in his thirties, he is knowledgeable and pretty passionate about his own work.
I respect him from the bottom of my heart because he is not only a professional teacher, but also a good
guide in our lives, providing us with practical suggestions whenever we are troubled. Moreover, he treats every
student with equal attention and patience, which I find the most valuable.
In a word, I give all my love and respect to my English teacher and wish the best for him.
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。
【详解】根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇提纲类作文，介绍你身边值得尊敬和爱戴的老师，文章要包括
人物简介和尊敬和爱戴的原因。时态为一般现在时态。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）respectable；knowledgeable；passionate；from the bottom of my heart ；with
equal attention and patience；
第三步：连词成句
1. My English teacher is definitely one of them.
2. He is knowledgeable and pretty passionate about his own work.
3. I respect him from the bottom of my heart.
4. He is a professional teacher, a good guide in our lives.
5. He treats every student with equal attention and patience
第四步：连句成篇。句子之间加上合适的连接词以及更复杂的句式表达，使文章更出色。
【点睛】文章结构合理，思路清晰，使用了恰当的连接词及词组使行文连贯，如“because，not only...but
also...”，也运用了一些高级词汇和表达，以及定语从句 Moreover, he treats every student with equal attention
and patience, which I find the most valuable.状语从句和非谓语动词 I respect him from the bottom of my heart
because he is not only a professional teacher, but also a good guide in our lives, providing us
with practical suggestions whenever we are troubled.等，增加了文章的亮点，体现了学生较高的英语学科素
养。
7．（2022·全国·高二单元测试）请你用英文写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，介绍中国科学家屠呦呦，内容主
要包括.
1. 屠呦呦，女，1930 年生于浙江；
2. 因在青蒿素治疗疟疾方面的突出贡献于 2015 年获得诺贝尔生理学
3. 她是第一位获得诺贝尔科学奖项的中国籍科学家。
注意：1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:青蒿素 artemisinin 症疾 malaria
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【答案】Chinese woman scientist Tu Youyou, who won a share of the Nobel Prize for Physiology or Medicine in
2015, was born in 1930 in Zhejiang Province. She won the prize for her amazing contribution to the development
of artemisinin,a highly effective treatment for malaria.
Tu Youyou,whose drug has saved millions of lives across the globe, is the first Chinese scientist to win a
Nobel Prize in the science. Her winning the prize will help traditional Chinese medicine become better accepted in
other countries.
Her success proves that Rome is not built in a day,and we should stick to our dreams until they can be
realised.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，介绍中国科学家屠呦呦。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：说明文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.基本信息
2.获奖情况及意义
1）获诺贝尔奖。（winning Nobel Prize）
2）意义。（meaning）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
a share of; be born in; amazing contribution; effective; across the globe; become; stick to
第三步：连词成句
1. who won a share of the Nobel Prize for Physiology or Medicine in 2015,
2. was born in 1930 in Zhejiang Province.
3. She won the prize for her amazing contribution to the development of artemisinin,a highly effective treatment
for malaria.
4. Tu Youyou,whose drug has saved millions of lives across the globe, is the first Chinese scientist to win a Nobel
Prize in the science.
5.Her winning the prize will help traditional Chinese medicine become better accepted in other countries.
6. and we should stick to our dreams until they can be realised.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also),
including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one
hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关
系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Chinese woman scientist Tu Youyou, who won a share of the
Nobel Prize for Physiology or Medicine in 2015, was born in 1930 in Zhejiang Province.这句话运用了 who 引导
的定语从句；也使用了一些固定词组，如 a share of; be born in; stick to 等。全文中没有中国式英语的句
式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添
彩。
8．（2022·广西·柳州市第二中学模拟预测）假定你是李华，为纪念杂交水稻（hybrid rice）之父袁隆平院
士（academician），你校英语俱乐部打算征集相关活动的建议，你建议观看纪录片《袁隆平》。请你给俱
乐部负责人 Mary 写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.活动安排；
2.活动目的和意义。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mary,
I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student. Learning that our English Club is collecting some suggestions on the
activities in memory of academician Yuan Long ping, I’m writing to recommend watching the documentary Yuan
Long ping.
The activity is expected to be held in the school auditorium from 3 p.m to 5 p.m this Friday with all the
students in our school invited. The movie describes Yuan Longping’s dedication to Chinese Agriculture in a
touching and vivid way. By providing a platform for participants to have a better understanding of the whole life
of Yuan Long ping, the father of hybrid rice in China, this activity aims to arouse the science research spirits and
patriotic feelings of us students. I hold a firm belief that the activity will be so educational, impressive and
meaningful that our students will develop a strong sense of national pride and self-confidence.
Thanks for reading my letter. I hope my proposal will be taken into account. Looking forward to your early
reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，为纪念杂交水稻（hybrid rice）之父袁隆平院士
（academician），你校英语俱乐部打算征集相关活动的建议，你建议观看纪录片《袁隆平》。请你给俱乐
部负责人 Mary 写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→advice
纪念：in memory of→in honor of
举行：hold→host
相信：hold a belief→believe
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Learning that our English Club is collecting some suggestions on the activities in memory of academician
Yuan Long ping, I’m writing to recommend watching the documentary Yuan Long ping.
拓展句：Since our English Club is collecting some suggestions on the activities in memory of academician Yuan
Long ping, I’m writing to recommend watching the documentary Yuan Long ping.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] Learning that our English Club is collecting some suggestions on the activities in memory
of academician Yuan Long ping, I’m writing to recommend watching the documentary Yuan Long ping. (运用了
that 引导宾语从句)
[高分句型 2] I hold a firm belief that the activity will be so educational, impressive and meaningful that our
students will develop a strong sense of national pride and self-confidence. (运用了 that 引导同位语从句)

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