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成长感悟类
CONTENTS
01
02
03
04
语言积累
情节构造
真题解析
巩固练习
Part 1
语言积累
描写“犯错”
Considering there was no way to persuade my mother to let me take the watch, I decided to wait for her to step outside and _____________________________________(把手表塞进口袋).
slip the watch into my pocket
描写“犯错”
The white lie _______________________(像泡泡一样破碎)that day.
burst just like bubbles
描写“教育”
“That’s not the right way. Patience, Will.Patience,”______________________________________ (一个声音在我耳边回响)after the boys left.
a voice echoed in my ears
描写“醒悟”
We often ______________________________(那些值得我们感恩的事情我们经常当作理所当然).
take for granted the very things that most deserve our gratitude
描写“醒悟”
Through our lives, we can gain a lot and lose so much. But being honest should always be with us, as ____________________(诚实是一种美德).
honesty is always regarded as a virtue
描写“醒悟”
_________________________________________(勇敢是最重要的品质) that I wanted her to possess.
Bravery was the most significant quality
I knew for sure that every time I lost patience in the future I would remember my grandfather’s words.
升华美句
2.这是我第一次真正体会到这份礼物的意义——耐心。
1.我确信，将来每当我失去耐心时，我都会记住祖父的话。
It was the first time that Ihad truly realized the meaning of the gift --- patience.
Part 2
情节构造
成长前的苦恼
孤独
I never made friends easily(从不容易交朋友), and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys.
成长前的苦恼
伤心
我在口袋里什么也没发现，这个事实就像一把长矛刺进我的心脏，立刻开始流血。
I found nothing in my pocket, a fact that seemed like a spear piercing into my heart which started to bleed immediately.
成长前的苦恼
惭愧
A wave of guilt swept over me(一阵恐惧向我袭来) and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late.
成长前的苦恼
嘲笑
他们大声地笑着，像是在尖叫“多漂亮的破表啊！”
They laughed loudly with Crawley screaming words like “What a finest broken watch!”
成长前的苦恼
绝望
我妈妈不让我带，”我撒谎，绝望在我心中沸腾。
“My mother wouldn't let me bring it,” I lied, desperation boiling inside me.
成长前的苦恼
紧张
Having paced up and down restlessly(不安地来回走动) in front of the the teacher's office, she finally gathered courage and plodded in.
成长前的苦恼
害怕
I unknowingly (不知不觉地) avoided interacting (interact) with anyone because I was afraid they’d laugh in my face(我很害怕他们会当面取笑我) .
成长中的塑造
惊讶
Raising her eyebrows in surprise, Mrs Rossi froze, as if rooted on the ground（仿佛定格在那里）.
成长中的塑造
希望
ked up to him, his eyes sparkling with hope and determination（闪烁着希望和决心）.
成长中的塑造
教育
尽管愤怒、尴尬和悲伤重重地笼罩在空气中，但这个声音还是让我意识到我在试图给同学留下深刻印象时犯下的错误。
Though anger, embarrassment and sadness hung heavily in the air, the voice drew me to the awareness of the mistakes I had made when I attempted to impress the boys.
成长后的升华
喜悦
Hearing that, Karie grinned from ear to ear, a wave of happiness flooding over her（幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头）.
成长后的升华
感激
I looked at her, tears of love and gratitude(感动和爱的泪水)welling up in my eyes.
成长后的升华
升华
然而，从那时起，我保证这只破表会一直提醒我耐心等待，直到真相出现。
It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning of the gift --- patience.
成长后的升华
知识
学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。
It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.
成长后的升华
天赋
事实上，每个人都有天赋，发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹。
Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.
成长后的升华
梦想
追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。
It's never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.
成长后的升华
困难
通往成功的路不会平坦， 充满 挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标 （成功） 。
The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don’t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal (success) finally.
成长后的升华
恐惧
战胜恐惧和实现目标，需要决心和乐观。
Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal.
成长后的升华
自卑
我笑了，因为我最终意识到了自信的真正来源。 现在，我为我的样子感到骄傲，而且更快乐，因为我已经意识到，决定你真正是谁的是你的个性。
I smiled as I eventually realized the real source of confidence. Now, I am proud of what I look like and much happier, because I have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are.
Part 3
真题解析
I grew up in a small town where the elementary school was a ten-minute walk from my house and in an age when children could go home for lunch.
I used to believe that mothers were the sandwich-makers. I never questioned that this wise woman, who had had a career before I was born, would spend almost every lunch hour throughout my elementary school years just with me.
I only know that when the noon bell rang, I would race breathlessly home. My mother would be standing at the top of the stairs, smiling down at me with a look that suggested I was the only important thing she had on her mind. For this, I am forever grateful.
One lunchtime when I was in the third grade will stay with me always. I had been picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had patiently practiced my lines with me. But no matter how easily I delivered them at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every word disappeared from my head.
Finally, my teacher explained that she had written a narrator’s(旁白的)part to the play, and asked me to change roles. I didn’t tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But she sensed my upset, and instead of suggesting we practice my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in the yard.
It was a lovely spring day and the rose vine was turning green. Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions (蒲公英) popping through the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape.
I watched my mother casually bend down. “I think I’m going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, yanking(猛拉) a dandelion up by its roots, “From now on, we’ll have only roses in this garden”
“But I like dandelions! All flowers are beautiful-even dandelions.” “Yes, every flower gives pleasure in its own way, doesn’t it ” she asked thoughtfully. I nodded.
原文大意：
作者被选为学校话剧中的公主，但一上台，作者就忘词，老师就让作者做一名叙述者，回家后，作者妈妈看出作者的不安，妈妈提议把杂草挖掉，种蒲公英。
线索：陪走路—帮助—感谢—陪回家—拒绝—感悟
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“And that is true of people too,” she added.
妈妈举蒲公英的例子来安慰作者
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作者敞开心扉告诉妈妈学校里发生的事
我毫不犹豫地点了点头，仿佛浪费一秒钟会剥夺蒲公英的生命。
I nodded without hesitation, as if a second wasted could deprive the dandelions of their life.
我知道母亲已经意识到我的痛苦，我摘下整个午餐时间戴的面具，尽情地发泄了我的不安。
Knowing that my mother had realized my pain, I took off the mask that I had worn for the whole lunch time and poured out my unease heartily.
她耐心地听着我说话，温柔地拍着我的背。
She listened to me patiently and patted me on the back tenderly.
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Backstage on the night of the performance, I felt a bit nervous.
经过妈妈的鼓励
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作者受到了蒲公英也有自己的美这一事实的激发
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成功地作为一位叙述者完成了幕后解说任务
鼓励我克服它的是灵感来自于美丽的黄色蒲公英。
What encouraged me to overcome it was the inspiration from the beautiful yellow dandelions.
站在后台，紧张的情绪涌入我的心头。
Standing backstage, nervousness came flooding in me.
鼓励我克服它的是灵感来自于美丽的黄色蒲公英。
What encouraged me to overcome it was the inspiration from the beautiful yellow dandelions.
听到雷鸣般的掌声，我为自己的角色感到自豪，坚信甚至蒲公英也有自己的美。
Hearing the thunderous applause, I took pride in my role and firmly believed that even a dandelion had its own beauty.
Part 4
巩固练习
MY PAYCHECK
My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.
I didn't really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and l thought that I would surpass（超过） anything he had accomplished by the time l walked across the stage at high school graduation.
Summers in the mid, 70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone（长号）.
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and painted at a weed which we missed.
Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.
At home, my dad said, "A job's a big step to growing up. I'm glad you will be contributing to the household." My dad's words made me realize that my earning might not be mine to do with as wished.
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was not fair that l had to contribute my money.
The pay day arrived at last. I was glad that I finally got the payment after working hard for two weeks. While walking back home with an excited mind. I conceived many plans about how to dispose of it. I needed a new football because the old one we played had already worn out. I intended to purchase my favorite chocolates. Upon approaching the house, I noticed my dad and mom standing beside the old truck, looking sadly. It seemed as if something unpleasant happened. “How much do we still need to pay for a new truck ". asked my mother. Three hundred dollars, but we just had two hundred left.”
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. Really, the truck my dad drove often broke down on the way, which made my dad in trouble. My parents had intended to buy a new truck but couldn't afford it. Suddenly, I realized what I should do. Stepping forward, I said, “Dad, here is what I received for my work. I think it would help you a little.” A little surprised at what I said, my mom hugged me tightly. That night, before I went to bed, l thought I would tell the farmer the next day that I would continue my work, after all l grew up.
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