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歉 信
写作指导
道歉信应对自己具体的过失和疏忽作出解释，道歉的原因一定要真实而且容易接受，语言要得体委婉，表现出诚意。
道歉信由以下三部分组成：
1.表明写信意图，对某事表示歉意
2.说明道歉的具体原因
3.再次表示歉意，请求谅解，并提出补救措施
重难点：解释的理由需要让对方信服，情有可原，道歉要有诚心
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真题演练
假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约，请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
（2016全国卷Ⅲ）
02
首段
首段谋篇思路
寒暄问候+写信背景与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约，+写信目的表示歉意
寒暄问候
I hope this letter finds you well.
见信好/展信安
How is everything going
最近怎么样/最近还好吗
How is it going
最近怎么样/最近还好吗
写信背景+写信目的
Learning from my teacher that we will have a very important exam on the weekend , I am writing this letter to express my sincerest apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you as we planned earlier.
从老师那里得知，周末我们将有一个非常重要的考试，我写这封信是为了表达我最真诚的歉意，因为我们之前计划不能和你一起去书店。
首段其他表达方式
首段直接表达写信目的
I'm writing to apologize to you for being unable to accompany you to the bookstore tomorrow as planned.
I am writing this letter to express my sincerest apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you as we planned earlier.
用于开头段落的功能句:
1. I would like to express my deepest apology for not being able to go to the bookstore.
我要对未能和你一起去书店表示最深切的歉意。
表达我诚挚的歉意express my deepest apology
convey my sincere apology
make/offer an apology to sb. for (doing) sth.
为了（做）某事向某人道歉
express my deepest apology for (doing) sth.
为了（做）某事向某人表达诚挚的歉意
道歉
v.apologize
apologize (to sb.) for doing sth.
因做了某事（向某人）道歉
eg.
I must apologise for missing our appointment yesterday.
我必须为错过昨天的约会道歉
n.apology
make/offer an apology to sb. for (doing) sth.
为了（做）某事向某人道歉
仿写练习
我写信向你表达我诚挚的歉意，因为我没有在我们约定的时间陪你去画廊。
accompany/ k mp ni /v.陪伴，陪同；
在我们约定的时间at our appointed time .
I' m writing to convey my sincere apologies/express my deepest apology to you for not accompanying you to the gallery at our appointed time .
我写这封信是为了向你尔道歉，因为我没有照顾好你的狗。
I' m writing to convey my sincere apology /express my deepest apology to you for my failing to take care of your dog.
I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to take care of your dog.
仿写练习
我写信向你道歉，因为我说话欠妥。
I' m writing to apologize to you for a stupid choice of words .
我写信向你表达我深切的遗憾。
I ' m writing to show my deep regret .
仿写练习
I hope this letter finds you well. Learning from my teacher that we will have a very important exam on the weekend , I am writing this letter to express my sincerest apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you as we planned earlier.
首段
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中间段
中间段谋篇思路
说明原因
考试非常重要，不能考砸。需要整个周末备考
另约时间
询问下周是否可以
说明原因
考试非常重要，不能考砸。需要整个周末备考
So important is this exam that I can't afford to fail it.
As a consequence, I must spend the whole weekend preparing for it.
consequence/ k ns kw ns /n.结果，后果；
As a consequence因此，结果
另约时间
但是，我还是想和你一起去
However, I still want to make this trip with you.
我想知道下周末你是否方便和我一起去书店。
I wonder whether it is convenient for you to go to the bookstore with me next weekend.
我们不仅可以交换个人对书籍的看法，而且之后我们还可以吃顿像样的晚餐。
Not only can we exchange personal thoughts on books,
but also we can have a proper dinner after that.
中间段
So important is this exam that I can't afford to fail it.As a consequence, I must spend the whole weekend preparing for it. However, I still want to make this trip with you.I wonder whether it is convenient for you to go to the bookstore with me next weekend. Not only can we exchange personal thoughts on books,but also we can have a proper dinner after that.
考试非常重要，不能考砸。so...that..如此...以至于...
So important is this exam that I can't afford to fail it.
倒装语序
This exam is so important that I can't afford to fail it.
正常语序
倒装句是为了突出、强调某些成分而将句子原有语序过进行颠倒的句式。在写作时适当使用倒装句，一方面可以对重要信息进行强调，另一方面，在通篇正常语序中突然出现一两句倒装句，恰如“万花丛中一点绿”，会格外吸引阅卷人的眼球
倒装句
表达因果关系的倒装
so/such ... that ... (如此……以 至于……)
部分倒装的写法
将正常语序的句子改写为部分倒装句时，可以按照以下三个步骤来操作。
第一步:选取标志词及其修饰的成分，置于句首
第二步:将主句改为一般疑问句语序;
第三步:保持从句不变，将从句与改写后的主句进行整合
倒装句
示例
My teacher gave me so much help that I will never forget her.
→正常语序
我的老师给了我很多帮助，我永远都不会忘忘记她。
第一步，选取标志词中的 so/such 及其修饰的成分，置于句首;
So much help
第二步，将主句改为一般疑问句语序;改写时根据句意和时态选用正确的助动词或情态动词。
My teacher gave me
did my teacher give me
第三步，保持从句不变，将从句与改写后的主句进行整合。
So much help did my teacher give me that I will never forget her.
My teacher gave me so much help that I will never forget her.
So much help did my teacher give me that I will never forget her.
Tip:在“so/such ... that ...”倒装句 中，如果谓语动词为 be 的一般现在时或一般过 去时，则为完全倒装
倒装句
1.音乐节在我们学校很受欢迎，很多同学都会参加。
正常语序
The music festival is so popular that many students will attend it in our school.
倒装语序
So popular is the music festival that many students will attend it in our school.
倒装句练习
倒装句练习
在高中的第一年，英语对我来说太有挑战性了，我几乎要放弃。
正常语序
English was so challenging to me that I almost gave it up in my first year of high school.
倒装语序
So challenging was English to me that I almost gave it up in my first year of high school.
倒装句练习
我忙着准备期末考试，几乎没有时间查看电子邮件。
正常语序
I was so busy preparing for the final exam that I barely had time to check the e-mail.
倒装语序
So busy was I preparing for the final exam that I barely had time to check the e-mail.
04
尾段
尾段谋篇思路
重提主题+表达期待
Hopefully, you will accept my apology, and I look forward to your reply.
希望你能接受我的道歉，我期待着你的回复。
尾段功能句
1. Please allow me to say sorry again，and I'll try to make up for my fault.
请允许我再次致歉，我将尽力弥补我的过错。
2. Will you please accept my apology
你能接受我的道歉吗
3. I hope you can accept my apology
我希望你能接受我的道歉
4.I sincerely apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by the unexpected change.
对于这个意外的变化给您带来的不便，我深表歉意。
5.Hope you can accept my apologies for this unhappy experience and understand my situation.
对于这次不偷快的经历，希望你能接受我的道歉并理解我的处境。
6.Please forgive me and I assure you that such a matter will never happen again.
请原谅我，我向你保证这样的事情不会再次发生。
尾段功能句
05
Sample
Dear Bob
I hope this letter finds you well. Learning from my teacher that we will have a very important exam on the weekend , I am writing this letter to express my sincerest apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you as we planned earlier.
So important is this exam that I can't afford to fail it.As a consequence, I must spend the whole weekend preparing for it. However, I still want to make this trip with you.I wonder whether it is convenient for you to go to the bookstore with me next weekend. Not only can we exchange personal thoughts on books,but also we can have a proper dinner after that.
Hopefully, you will accept my apology, and I look forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
06
小练笔
真题演练练 19:2013年山东卷
假如你是新华中学的学生李华， 你的美国朋友 Tom 一周前给你发电子邮件，询问 你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件:
1.未及时回信的原因;
2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。
注意:
1.词数 120~150;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
I hope this letter finds you well. Learning from your last e-mail that you are curious about my plan for the summer vacation,I am writing to share with you some personal ideas.
First,I'd like to make a formal apology for my late reply. So busy was I preparing for the final exam that I barely had time to check the e-mail. What's more, as for my holiday,I may find a part-time job, in which case, I can make money for a trip afterwards. Additionally,volunteering is also my plan. Not only can I help others, but also I can improve social skills in the process.
Hopefully, you will forgive me for the belated reply, and I look forward to knowing about your vacation plan,
Yours,
Li Hua
Thanks for your listening
授课人：dudu
2022.12.07

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