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山西省临汾市
2020-2022届（三年）高三二模英语试题分类汇编
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山西省临汾市2022届高三二模英语试卷
第二节 书面表达（满分25分）
《感动中国（Touching China）》播放之后，你校决定举办以“Follow the lead”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1．感动你的人物事迹；2．如何践行优秀品质。
注意：
1．词数100左右；2．题目和首句已为你写好。
Follow the lead
It's a great honor for me to stand here and address my speech entitled “Follow the lead”.
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山西省临汾市2021届高三二模英语试卷
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
你所在社区开展了“学雷锋·共享书架”捐助活动, 鼓励大家捐赠闲置书籍。请你写一篇英文周记, 记述捐书活动的整个过程, 并谈谈你的感受。
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山西省临汾市2020届高三二模英语试卷
第二节书面表达（满分25分）
52. 假定你是李华，你校交换生Jim回国后，想通过形象的手绘图片教他同学学习汉字。他 向你求助，希望你能帮他画出图片。请你回信询问以下内容：
1.所教汉字； 2.着色与否； 3.截止日期。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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答案：
山西省临汾市2022届高三二模英语试卷
Follow the lead(1)
It's a great honor for me to stand here and address my speech entitled “Follow the lead”. As we all know, many high-profile figures were honored as inspirational role models in Touching China awards. One of the figures deeply touching my heart is Jiang Mengnan. Deaf almost since birth, she has overcome a large number of obstacles to achieve her dream of studying for a PhD at Tsinghua University.
As a Gen Zer, I'd like to acquire a good knowledge of English, which is not only a tool widely used in life, but also a carrier to influence and understand the world. Though life can throw challenges on my way, I'll regard them as “gifts of fate” to realize my ambition as a messenger to spread Chinese and Chinese culture.
Follow the lead(2)
It's a great honor for me to stand here and address my speech entitled “Follow the lead”. Many inspirational role models have been brought to the national audience by Touching China. The person I admire most is Liu Wei, an armless pianist. Liu took two gold medals in the National Paralyzed Swimming Championship at 14. Unfortunately, he gave up swimming due to illness and then began to learn the piano. Strong and optimistic, he carried on a daily 7-hour practice and eventually ended up playing with his toes at level seven for normal people.
Life is full of thorns. As long as we are brave and tough, difficulties can be chances. As an ordinary person, I am unlikely to do astonishing feats, but if confronting challenges, I am bound to live with them to be a person of value.
Follow the lead(3)
It's a great honor for me to stand here and address my speech entitled “Follow the lead”. Over the past 20 years, many inspirational role models have been honored in Touching China awards. Among them, Peng Shilu, the father of nuclear submarines, played an indispensable role in developing and building China's first nuclear submarines. He dedicated his life to the cause of nuclear power. Moreover, he once said: “As long as the motherland needs, I am willing to contribute everything.”
As one of the Chinese Youth of the new era, taking Peng as an example, I will cherish time and develop capabilities to serve the people with my professional skills. Furthermore, with a social sense of mission and responsibility, I will go where the motherland needs me and do whatever I can to contribute to realizing the Chinese dream.
Follow the lead(4)
It's a great honor for me to stand here and address my speech entitled “Follow the lead”. Among the role models worthy of respect, what impresses me most is Yuan Longping, known as the “father of hybrid rice”. He is a national hero and a symbol of dogged scientific pursuit in China, devoted to rice plants to help alleviate famine and poverty across the world. Though receiving numerous awards both in China and abroad, Yuan considers himself a farmer at heart.
“Chance favors the prepared mind,” he quoted. Inspired by his words, I will focus on studies, sharpen skills and cultivate the mind to fulfill my dream. What's more, making impossible possible is the motivating force for Yuan. I will keep it in mind and seek after potentials on the path to the future.
山西省临汾市2021届高三二模英语试卷
Last weekend, an activity entitled "Learning from Iei Feng, Sharing a Bookcase” was organized by my community and it went on smoothly.
Early in the morning, people from all walks of life came to the scene of the event in twos and threes, some holding a few latest best sellers while others carrying a pile of classics. People introduced their own donations and recommended others to give it a try while lining up in a line. Before sunset, about two thousand books were registered and sent to the community library.
In my opinion, not only will the activity convey the spirit of sharing, but also will enhance the bond among local residents. I just can't wait to borrow the first book from the library.
山西省临汾市2020届高三二模英语试卷
【答案】Dear Jim,
I hope this email finds you well. It impresses me greatly that you plan to teach your classmates some basic Chinese characters with hand-drawn pictures. I'm willing to lend a helping hand, but I need to inquire about some details.
To start with, would you please give me a list of Chinese characters you want to teach, which helps me make preparations in advance Moreover, it's necessary for me to know whether you prefer the pictures in colors or in black and white. The last point I'm not certain about is the deadline for this.
Please do feel free to let me know if you have other requirements. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yous sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，为了帮助交换生Jim画出手绘图片而向他咨询有关图片的信息。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：三段式结构。第一段写信背景和目的；第二段咨询有关信息；第三段寒暄结束。
要求：1.写信背景和目的（plan to teach your classmates some basic Chinese characters with hand-drawn pictures; inquire about some details）
2.咨询有关信息
1）所教汉字内容（give me a list of Chinese characters）
2）着色与否（the pictures in colors or in black and white）
3) 截止日期（the deadline）
3.寒暄结束（Looking forward to your early reply）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
impress sb. greatly that…; plan to do; teach sb. sth; be willing to do; lend a helping hand; inquire about; to start with; make preparations; in advance; feel free to do; look forward to .
第三步：连词成句
1. It impresses me greatly that you plan to teach your classmates some basic Chinese characters with hand-drawn pictures.
2. I'm willing to lend a helping hand, but I need to inquire about some details.
3. To start with, would you please give me a list of Chinese characters you want to teach, which helps me make preparations in advance.
4. Please do feel free to let me know if you have other requirements.
5. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：first of all; firstly/first; to start with; secondly/second…; and then; finally; in the end; at last
2.表并列补充关系：what is more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1）作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：
It impresses me greatly that you plan to teach your classmates some basic Chinese characters with hand-drawn pictures.( 你打算用手绘的方式教你的同学一些基本的汉字，这给我留下了很深的印象。)这句话运用了it做形式主语，that引导主语从句。
I'm willing to lend a helping hand, but I need to inquire about some details.( 我很愿意帮忙，但我需要询问一些细节。)这句话运用了but并列连词连接两个并列句。
To start with, would you please give me a list of Chinese characters you want to teach, which helps me make preparations in advance ( 首先，你能给我一个你想教的汉字的列表吗？这有助于我提前做准备。)这句话中包含省略引导的定语从句“you want to teach”修饰先行词a list of Chinese characters，以及which引导的非限制定语从句。
Moreover, it's necessary for me to know whether you prefer the pictures in colors or in black and white.( 另外，我想知道你是喜欢彩色的还是黑白的。)这句话中包含whether引导的宾语从句。
2）使用了一些固定词组，如impress sb. greatly that…; plan to do; teach sb. sth; be willing to do; lend a helping hand; inquire about; to start with; make preparations; in advance; feel free to do; look forward to等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

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