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(共16张PPT)
Writing
Protection
.
Writing
animals
in the wild
in danger
Wildlife
.
Protection
15 minutes
13 hours
73 million
<3200
bloody seawater
How do you feel after watching the video
and these pictures
Do you think only feeling sorry for those animals is enough
Take action !
Read for writing
wildlife protection
A growing number of species around the globe are endangered now. People kill them without mercy for their meat, fur, horns, and teeth.
Here we, WWF(World Wildlife Fund) are trying best to do something different to help protect wildlife. First, we are making more ordinary people realize this serious problem. What's more, we are training and educating officials about the wildlife crimes(犯罪). Last but not the least, we are also helping countries carry out laws effectively.
We cannot do this alone.We strongly advise that more people join us to save these animals before it is too late. Only when all humans choose to protect, will we create a bright and hopeful future.
writer purpose
Read for the structure and content
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
vice
a social pr + reason
oblem
a. Conclusion(结语)
b. A general statememt(总述)
c. Details
A general statememt(总述)
Details
Conclusion(结语)
opinion+ some ad
appeals(号召)
Tip1: It's helpful to make an outline before writing.
outline(提纲)
Read for beautiful words, phrases & sentences
A growing number of species around the globe are endangered now. People kill them without mercy for their meat, fur, horns, and teeth.
Here we, WWF(World Wildlife Fund) are trying best to do something different to help protect wildlife. First, we are making more ordinary people realize this serious problem. What's more, we are training and educating officials about the wildlife crimes(犯罪). Last but not the least, we are also helping countries carry out laws effectively.
We cannot do this alone.We strongly advise that more people join us to save these animals before it is too late. Only when all humans choose to protect, will we create a bright and hopeful future.
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Transitions(连接词)
A growing number of species around the globe are endangered now. People kill them without mercy for their meat, fur, horns, and teeth.
Here we, WWF(World Wildlife Fund) are trying best to do something different to help protect wildlife. First, we are making more ordinary people realize this serious problem. What's more, we are training and educating officials about the wildlife crimes(犯罪). Last but not the least, we are also helping countries carry out laws effectively.
We cannot do this alone.We strongly advise that more people join us to save these animals before it is too late. Only when all humans choose to protect, will we create a bright and hopeful future.
To start with,...
Then,...
Besides,.../In addition,...
On the one hand,...;
On the other hand,...
At Last,.../Finally,...
In a word,.../In short,...
Tip2:Proper transitions can
make writing more fluent.
Rock carp岩原鲤
Little Bustard小鸨
Shizhu has thousands of wildlife. But because of human activities, some are endangered now, especially rock carps and little bustards.
Discuss:
How can we help these animals
Help me!
Help me!
1. protect the environment and their habitats.
2. set up more nature reserves
3. limit hunting and stop buying products(产品)
made out of them.
4. call on more people to protect wildlife
5. carry out some rules and laws to protect
the endangered wildlife
How can we help these animals
Tip3: Brainstorming(头脑风暴) is a vital process.
Writing Practice
Wildlife Protection
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Write a letter to Wildlife Conservation Society(野生生物保护学会) in Shizhu to offer some advice on wildlife protection.
Presentation and Assessment
After this class, I hope you can go on
to care about wildlife protection and
do your best to help them.
Everyone can make a little effort, but it will make a big difference to wild animals.
Love them; love our common world!
Homework
Beautify your writing, and send it to my QQ710600543 or @WCS..
Thank you!

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