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第五部分　高三复习——读后续写
练习二　模拟演练
成长型故事
1.2022年1月浙江卷
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
When Dr.Henderson was assigning(指定) project mates for his psychology class,I secretly hoped he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with.Above all,I hoped he wouldn’t assign me to work with the fiercely competitive,extremely serious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to match.As fate(命运) would have it,Dr.Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid.
I went up to my new teammate and introduced myself.He looked at me as though I weren’t there.I felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably make him fail to get an A in the course. He wasn’t mean or abusive;he just gave me the impression he could do whatever project we dreamed up better if he did it alone.
Needless to say,I didn’t look forward to an entire term of being brushed off,but I tried to make the best of it and didn’t say anything for fear that I would make things worse.
The project required each team to develop a hypothesis(假说),set up an experiment to test the hypothesis,do the statistical analysis and present the findings.Whatever grade the team received would be shared by both students.
When my teammate and I met to discuss our project,I was uneasy. Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good grades—the exact opposite of me.I was outmatched.I actually wanted to drop the class at one point,but stopped short because I didn’t want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out.I decided to stick to it no matter what.
After long discussions we somehow agreed to do a study on the psychological well-being of teenagers.I wasn’t sure what it meant exactly,but at least we had a topic.
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We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.
One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease.
We started to meet regularly to draw up our panion as I was in the project,I still had no sense of participating in the project. My teammate kept his brain occupied in developing the hypothesis, setting up an experiment to test it,and running the tests alone,leaving me just standing beside him as if I were a fool.“What a dull project it is!” I murmured to myself.However,something changed gradually,as I became aware what the tactile-kin esthetic perception of space meant. Thanks to the intense,fiercely competitive,singularly serious fellow, the whole procedure went smoothly,close to the final stage.
One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease.Without any delay,I packed up my school bag,took all the experiment statistics and rushed to the hospital.Seeing the pale fellow
wearing pure white clothes instead of the annoying dark clothes,I felt a sense of sympathy and mercy welling up in my heart.With his guidance,I finished the statistical presented the findings.It turned out to be such an amazing and persuasive study that my teammate and I did win the best grade.Now,we have been most reliable cooperative partners ever since!It was true that everyone had his potential to be better,both in academy and personality when fueling passion for them.
步骤一　阅读通篇文章,掌握主旨方向。
步骤二　梳理已知情节,把握故事走向。
步骤三　分析关键词句,构建情节发展。
前文情节
续写段落一
主要情节1
主要情节2

续写段落二
主要情节3
主要情节4
步骤四　借力特殊技法,润色文章语言——高级句型,修辞手法。
如强调句、倒装句、定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句、with复合结构,非谓语结构、独立主格等;还可以使用比喻、拟人、排比、夸张、移就,通感。
步骤五　运用三种结尾,升华文章主题。
如强调句,名人名言,比喻修辞等。
2.2021年6月浙江卷
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
My dad,George,only had an eighth grade education.A quiet man, he didn’t understand my world of school activities.From age 14,he worked.And his dad,Albert,took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.
I didn’t really understand his world either:He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass(超过) anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.
Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball,or throwing a football,preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team.In poor weather,I read about sports or practiced my trombone(长号).
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field.He explained our basic task,the tractor fired up and we were off,riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals.After a short way,the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed.Then we began again. This happened over and over,but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs,lamb’s-quarters,foxtails,and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle.It was tiring work,but I looked forward to the pay,even though I wasn’t sure how much it would amount to.
At home,my dad said,“A job’s a big step to growing up.I’m glad you will be contributing to the household.” My dad’s words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.
My labors lasted about two weeks,and the farmer said there might be more work,but I wasn’t interested.I decided it was unfair that I had to contribute my money.
When I brought my paycheck home-it was dad wanted to talk to me.

I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished.

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When I brought my paycheck home—it was dad wanted to talk to me.Realizing where this conversation was heading,I pulled a long face,muttering under my breath.“Congratulations,son!” Dad exclaimed, “I hope you can use the money wisely.” My heart sank.What I had been looking forward to a brand-new trombone would finally give way to family expenses.Reluctantly,I took out the paycheck and laid it on the table.However,Dad slid the paycheck back into my hand, saying in a tender voice,“You’ve grown up.You can keep it yourself.”
I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished. Excitement blossomed in my heart.With this money,I could buy whatever I desired.I stepped closer and hugged him tightly.Just at that moment I noticed his gray hair and stiff neck.I suddenly realized how much he had contributed to the family through his tiring work of being a trucker.Tears began to blur my vision,“Dad,I shouldn’t have been so selfish.” It’s true that for a grown man,supporting his family is an essential step.
3.2022年湖北八市
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
A Precious Present
Wrinkles of confusion spread across Angela’s forehead as she unwrapped the gift from her best friend,Susan.
“I...I thought you could use it for something.” Susan’s stammered explanation did nothing to help us understand why a twelve-by-eighteen-inch old blue carpet was being presented as a birthday gift.
My heart went out to our daughter.Starting out at a new school during her freshman year had been a difficult adjustment.Until she met Susan,Angela had experienced little success making new friends.
The murmured “thanks” was barely heard as Angela tried hard not to allow her disappointment to show.She laid the piece of carpet on the kitchen counter,and the two girls headed outside to play with the family dogs.
The next morning,I carried a garbage bag outside.My heart sank as I lifted the lid of the garbage can and saw Susan’s carpet lying there.Hesitating only a moment,I picked it up.After giving it a light brushing,I brought it into the house and put it away in the hall closet.
“Susan invited us to go over to her house after school tomorrow and she’d like us to meet her foster mom(养母).” Several days later Angela announced as,she arrived home.Although her voice carried a so-what attitude,I sensed she was pleased by the invitation.
The following day we drove to the destination along the winding country road.
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A kind-looking woman greeted us as we approached the small farmhouse.

On the way home Angela pleaded me to drive faster.

A kind-looking woman greeted us as we approached the small farmhouse.The house was shabby but neatly decorated with used furniture.From the chat with the woman we knew Susan had long been separated from her parents and it was she who adopted little Susan.A warm light shone in her eyes when she revealed her love for Susan to me.I came to respect this generous-hearted woman who had opened her home to a young girl and attempted to make a difference in her life.As day light began to fade,I picked Angela up from Susan’s home.
On the way home Angela pleaded me to drive faster.When we got home,Angela immediately looked for the carpet eagerly.She was
running to the garbage can when I put the carpet on the table in front of her.In a split second,she was overjoyed.She jumped up,screaming in an excited voice,and wrapped her arms around me tightly.Then she gave the carpet a light brush.Watching it hang in the yard,Angela smiled with satisfaction.She called Susan,apologized for her behavior and expressed her sincere gratitude.She said the carpet was the most precious birthday gift she had ever received in the whole world.
4.2022年山东日照
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
We were out to change the world.This was our time,our senior year.My best friend Beth and I had big dreams and hopes for our last year in high schoo1.
“Kristi,did you see the girl standing by us in the lunch 1ine—she looks so lost,so out of place.” We had heard of a family that had just moved to our town from the country of Cambodia.We knew there was supposed to be a new girl at our school from that family,but we had yet to meet her until now.
Leourn was a small dark-haired beauty.She was starting her freshman year in this new country.She struggled with the little English she knew and that made it very hard for her to get to know people in our small town.
We watched in the lunchroom from our “Senior Table”.This table was reserved for our “senior sports jock(运动健将) friends,” and no one else.Leourn would get her lunch tray with the rest of we students but she always kept her head down with her eyes focused on the floor. She would then head to the only table of girls she recognized. Unfortunately,it was the table for the most popular girls in the freshman class.Every single day Leourn would sit at the very edge of her seat and eat as fast as she could.She kept her eyes fixed on her food and
we never,ever saw her look up.We would watch quietly as the other girls were interacting with each other at her table.They would make gestures to one another and laugh at Leourn while she ate.
As we paid attention over the next week,we never heard anyone so much as say “Hi” to Leourn.We decided to try our hardest to let one lonely girl know that there were people who knew she existed.
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We sat with Leourn at the freshman girls’ table.

From then on,Leourn began to change.

We sat with Leourn at the freshman girls’ table.The other girls tried to let us join in their jokes on Leourn.But Beth and I said “Hi” to Leourn and tried to engage her in our conversation.The girls were not ready for what they saw,their mouths half-open in surprise.Leourn still kept her head down,but we knew that just spending time with Leourn was good enough.
From then on,Leourn began to change.Sometimes she would respond to us with smiles and small talk.She would often come to our table and had lunch with us.One day,Leourn invited Beth and I to the hall,where she did something amazing.She took her eyes off the floor,looked up at us with beautiful eyes and in a clear whisper:“Thank You.” It was really a life-changing moment for us.Our small act of kindness made all the difference.
5.2022年山东济南
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Ella’s First Fashion Creation
Ella was wearing a new dress and she felt like a famous model. Even better,it was a dress she made!Her very first piece of fashion!
“What do you think ” she asked her family.They were all gathered at the kitchen table for breakfast.“It’s very pretty.I can’t believe you designed and sewed that all by yourself!” Mom said.“I’m so proud of you!How long did that take ” Dad asked.Ella pulled out her chair and sat down.“Two weeks!But I think I could make the next one faster.I had a few problems.”
Ella smiled.She had so many problems making the dress,but right now it was all worth it.It was going to be a great day.
The kids at school weren’t quite as excited about her dress as she thought they would be,but she did get some nice comments from some of the girls,so she was happy about that.The day went by quickly, and before she knew it,she was outside for the last break of the day. What a perfect day,she thought to herself as she swung on the swings.
The school bell rang and the break was over.When the swing was close to stopping,Ella jumped off.When she landed,she heard a loud rip(撕裂).She moved her hand to the back of her dress.It was ripped all the way down the back!Her very first fashion creation fell apart! Ella was so embarrassed.
Ella spotted her teacher,Miss Miller,near the door.Ella took one hand from her dress and waved for Miss Miller to come to her.Miss Miller came up and looked at the back of Ella’s dress.“Oh no!And it is such a beautiful dress!” “I made it myself,” Ella said. “You must be very proud!You did a great job!”“Not really.Or it wouldn’t have ripped.”“Well,that happens sometimes.Even with clothes you buy in the store!”
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Miss Miller took off her sweater and helped Ella to pull it on.

“We can’t avoid problems,” said Mom.

Miss Miller took off her sweater and helped Ella to pull it on.She helped Ella up and walked her back to the classroom.As soon as she sat down,she heard a girl laughing at her torn clothes.Ella was very sad and felt very defeated.Miss Miller came to Ella and said,“Your clothes are very beautiful.You shouldn’t deny yourself because it is broken.” After hearing this,Ella called her mother and asked her mother to pick her up.Because her clothes were broken,she couldn’t walk home by herself.When her mother came,she saw what had happened and was distressed.
“We can’t avoid problems,” said Mom.“When the problem arises,we should find a way to solve the problem instead of complaining about ourselves.Now your dress is broken and you just need to sew it”.After saying that,mother took out the sewing bag and handed it to Ella,who took over the sewing bag and nodded to her mother.Then she stitched up the broken part of the dress.
生活型故事
1.2021年全国新高考
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day.How pleased and proud mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m..The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.

The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.

As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.Father’s appearing was like a savior to the two children.Under the guidance of their father,they took positive actions and started all over again.They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge.Father helped them adjust the fire,which was the key to success.It was all right this time.Delicious breakfast was ready.How happy they were!
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her,she was very surprised.It was not only the gift,but the love of the children for her that moved her very much.The two children could finish cooking a breakfast,which she didn’t expect.The children said loudly,“Happy Mother’s Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.
步骤一　阅读通篇文章,掌握主旨方向。
步骤二　梳理已知情节,把握故事走向。
步骤三　分析关键词句,构建情节发展。
前文情节
续写段落一
主要情节1
主要情节2

续写段落二
主要情节3
主要情节4
步骤四　借力特殊技法,润色文章语言——高级句型,修辞手法。
如强调句、倒装句、定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句、with复合结构,非谓语结构、独立主格等;还可以使用比喻、拟人、排比、夸张、移就,通感。
步骤五　运用三种结尾,升华文章主题。
如强调句,名人名言,比喻修辞等。
2.2020年1月浙江卷
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
“I’m going to miss you so much,Poppy,” said the tall,thin teenager.He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye.He stood up,hugged his parents,and smiled,trying not to let his emotions(情绪) get the better of him.
His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control.They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying.It was time to say goodbye for now at least.The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder,and flashed a bright smile.“I guess this is it,” he said.“I’ll see you back home in a month, okay ” His parents nodded,and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents.The boy’s mother turned to the dog,“Okay,Poppy,time to go back home.”
The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week,Poppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner,her favorite toy,or even in her daily walk.Her owners were sad too,but they knew their son would be back to visit.Poppy didn’t.
They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats.They even let her sit on the sofa,but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self.Her owners started to get worried.“What should we do to cheer Poppy up ” asked Dad.“We’ve tried everything.”
“I have an idea,but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mom.“Without anybody left in the house but us,this place could use a bit of fun.Let’s get a little dog for Poppy.”
It didn’t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box.Poppy welcomed them home as usual but when she saw the box,she stopped.She put her nose on it.Her tail began wagging(摆动) ever so slowly,then faster as she caught the smell.
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Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.

A few weeks later,the boy arrived home from university.

Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.Poppy approached with caution,attempting not to scare the puppy.Sure enough,it was only moments later that the ball of fur lifted its head out of the box to peek at its new home and its new friend.Mom and Dad watched delightedly as the two made acquaintances.They were relieved to see Poppy coming back to her usual self,guiding the little dog on daily walks and even introducing to it her favorite toys.
A few weeks later,the boy arrived home from university.Hearing his bags unloaded on the driveway,Poppy’s ears pricked up and suddenly she was on all fours.The boy was greeted with a cheerful high-pitched bark.Then the front door popped open and Poppy darted to his embrace,followed by the little one who licked his fingers fondly.Smiling ever so bright,he called out to his parents,who tugged him in for a long hug.Regardless of chill autumn wind,the house was lit up with the warmth of affection and reunion.
3.2022年广东2模
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Probably,most of you had the feeling before,at least once—you had been waiting for a long time,yet being afraid of getting.It was exactly my state of mind before the first day at college.I had been working hard to pass the necessary tests and have my application to the undergraduate programme in management approved.And when the time had come for me to visit the college for the first day of the study,I couldn’t sleep all night because of being anxious about how to look good physically in front of the whole new world I was about to enter.However,the positive attitude and readiness to accept support from others helped a lot in a new environment.
It was Monday morning.Being too excited to sleep the night before, I came to the college half an hour earlier for the first lecture and was walking nervously through the hallway.About 15 minutes after I came, the hallway started to be full of students.Professors who walked on their business probably didn’t pay attention to me.I knew which hall to go to and had already checked that it was open.However,I was hesitant to enter the hall and sit there alone.People were moving around me as if they hadn’t seen me.I felt disappointed with the fact that I had nobody to talk to in the new and seemingly unfriendly place.
Suddenly,a well-dressed man who seemed to be in his late twenties approached me.He introduced himself as Mathews and asked whether I was lost and whether he could help me with anything.In that situation,
I realized it was very kind of him and that he was exactly the person I wanted to ask in my thoughts a minute before,but then I was too nervous for a friendly chat.As a result,instead of welcoming the opportunity to make the first acquaintance(相识),I told the man to mind his business and leave me alone since I was an adult capable of finding my class without anybody’s assistance.
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Luckily,the man didn’t seem to be angry.
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Professor Mathews turned out to be an excellent speaker and the lecture went really well.
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Luckily,the man didn’t seem to be angry.He just shrugged,smiled a bit and went to the room where my first lecture was about to take place.Quite a lot of people had entered the room,so I didn’t care about having an unhappy experience with one of my future peers.I was embarrassed,however,when I finally learned that the man to whom I had been rude minutes before was our professor of the first lecture.
Professor Mathews turned out to be an excellent speaker and the lecture went really well.After the class was dismissed,I came to him to apologize for my bad manners earlier in the day.Professor Mathews said that he was not unhappy and on his first day as the student of our college,he was afraid and nervous,too.The incident helped me realize that I should not let emotional strain and anxiety prevent me from communicating with people openly and pleasantly.
4.2022年大连模拟
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was dark,cold and raining on December 24.James left his office and walked slowly across the street to the parking place.He was very tired.He took out his car key and put down his umbrella.He put the key into the lock and turned it.Nothing happened.The door would not open.Then James realized that it was the wrong car.His car was red, but this one was dark blue.“Oh dear!I must have parked in a different place this morning,” thought he.Putting up his umbrella,he set off to look for his car.The rain poured down and the evening got colder and colder.
Having walked round all the side streets,James didn’t find his car. He was exhausted and angry.“Someone must have stolen my car,” he thought.“Now I shall have to go to the police station and report it.” The policeman there was very helpful.He wrote down a description of James car and then took his address and telephone number.As James was leaving,the policeman wished him a merry Christmas.
“Christmas!” thought James.“Oh no!I’ve forgotten all about Christmas.I haven’t bought my wife a present and now all the shops are shut.What shall I do ” When waiting for the bus,he got wetter and more miserable(难受的).He had no umbrella and the rain flowed down into his collar.He felt like bursting into tears.
When James got home,he found his wife standing on a chair and looking for something in a very high cupboard.“What are you doing,Jessica ” he asked.“The big gold star for the Christmas tree,” Jessica replied.“Just a moment.I’ll go into the garage(车库) and fetch the stepladder(梯子) for you,” said James.When James saw the well-decorated Christmas tree and lots of presents under it,he felt even more unhappy.“What a lovely tree!” he thought as he went downstairs,“I haven’t even got one present for Jessica.I’ve lost my car and I’m completely wet.I must have lost my umbrella,too.”
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As James opened the garage door,he spotted something,frozen in amazement.
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Pleased to know his car was there,James entered the room with the present.
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As James opened the garage door,he spotted something,frozen in amazement.Inside the garage was his red car.He suddenly remembered that it wouldn’t start this morning so he just took a taxi to work.James was overjoyed.He was just about to rush upstairs and tell Jessica the good news when he heard,“Meow!Meow!” He looked inside the car and there sat a small kitten with pointed ears and green eyes.James’ eyes were glued to the kitten for a few minutes and a brilliant idea struck him.“This is for Jessica.” He picked the kitten up.
Pleased to know his car was there,James entered the room with the present.“This is your present,” said to Jessica happily.“Oh,thank you,darling.I’ve always wanted a kitten,” her face lit up.Just then the telephone rang.It was the policeman.James was told that his car hadn’t been found but his umbrella was got in the police station.Putting the phone down,James gazed at Jessica,joy welling up inside him.Bathed in the warm Christmas atmosphere,James walked over to Jessica and hugged her tightly.
5.2022年河北模拟
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
When my father reported that he had just purchased a new house in new housing development,we were all overjoyed.For a long time, he had wished to purchase his own home.My parents had been living in several rental houses since they married.Finally,his fantasy had come true.We began moving our belongings into our new home on a bright and sunny Sunday morning.My father hired a lorry to transfer our goods,and I was amazed at how much we had.The lorry had to make three journeys before most of our belongings arrived at our new home.I enjoyed sitting in the back of the lorry while it made the excursions. My parents,grandmother,elder sister,and I were the only members of our family.However,the number of goods was surprising.
We had a busy day loading the items onto the lorry and then unloading them at our new home,but that was not the end of the story.We had to move the things into the house and arrange them properly before we could call the house a home.Our new house was a single-story house.It contained three bedrooms,a living room,a dining room,two bathrooms,a small kitchen,a small front porch,and an even smaller garden.Modern dwellings(住宅) are extremely small for room,but it was better than nothing.In any case,it was a significant improvement over our former home,which was much smaller than the new one.
The kitchen was the first area we started organizing things.We needed to take care of our tummies(胃) before we could do any more
work,so my mother set about creating her first meal in her brand-new kitchen,making the greatest tasting instant lunch I’d ever tasted.We moved on to the rest of our belongings after lunch.My parents got the largest bedroom,my grandmother and sister got the second largest,and I got the tiniest,right close to the kitchen.
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I was totally overjoyed at getting my own room for the first time in my life.

That evening,we enjoyed our first formal meal in the house.

I was totally overjoyed at getting my own room for the first time in my life.It even had a ceiling fan to keep me cool.We had most of the furniture,mattresses,and larger items in by the evening.The only thing left to do was hang up the portraits and other wall decorations,curtains,and other such items.We put off the remaining work till the next day because we were all tired from working all day.
That evening,we enjoyed our first formal meal in the house.By nine o’clock,I was in my new bedroom,which still smelled like new paint.I gladly lay on the bed,taking in everything my senses got in my new surroundings.It was fantastic.I quickly fell asleep in my new room.I even smiled in the dream and I woke up several times with great joy.
助人型故事
1.2020年新高考山东卷
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
The Meredith family lived in a small community.As the economy was in decline,some people in the town had lost their jobs.Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet.People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.
Mrs.Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman.She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor.She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help.When she had time,she would bring food and medicine to them.
One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before.There was a man sick in bed,his wife,who took care of him and could not go out to work,and their little boy.The little boy—his name was Bernard—had interested her very much.
“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children,John, Harry,and Clara.“He is such a help to his mother.He wants very much to earn some money,but I don’t see what he can do.”
After their mother left the room,the children sat thinking about Bernard.“I wish we could help him to earn money.” said Clara.“His family is suffering so much.”
“So do I,” said Harry.“We really should do something to assist them.”
For some moments,John said nothing,but,suddenly,he sprang to his feet and cried,“I have a great idea!I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).”
The other children also jumped up all attention.When John had an idea,it was sure to be a good one.“I tell you what we can do,” said John.“You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us Well,we can make popcorn(爆米花),and put it into paper bags,and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”
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2.请按如下格式作答。
When Mrs.Meredith heard of John’s idea,she thought it was a good one,too.

With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.

When Mrs.Meredith heard of John’s idea,she thought it was a good one,too.So,they went to the local supermarket together.They bought a bag of corn and some special bags for popcorn.When they got home,they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags. With the popcorn,they went to Bernard’s home.They told Bernard how to sell the popcorn.Bernard and his parents were very grateful. And the Meredith family also felt very happy to help this family.
With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.He took the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcorn.He earned a lot of money.Then,he wanted to be self-dependent. Therefore,he asked Mrs.Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn. After that,not only did he sell popcorn,but he also added cream and salt to the popcorn to make it taste better.Bernard grew up to be a remarkable man.He did not forget the help of Meredith’s family,and he also did what he could to help those in need.
When Mrs.Meredith heard of John’s idea,she thought it was a good one,too.So,they went to the local supermarket together.They bought a bag of corn and some special bags for popcorn.When they got home,they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags. With the popcorn,they went to Bernard’s home.They told Bernard how to sell the popcorn.Bernard and his parents were very grateful. And the Meredith family also felt very happy to help this family.
With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.He took the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcorn.He earned a lot of money.Then,he wanted to be self-dependent. Therefore,he asked Mrs.Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn. After that,not only did he sell popcorn,but he also added cream and salt to the popcorn to make it taste better.Bernard grew up to be a remarkable man.He did not forget the help of Meredith’s family,and he also did what he could to help those in need.
步骤一　阅读通篇文章,掌握主旨方向。
步骤二　梳理已知情节,把握故事走向。
步骤三　分析关键词句,构建情节发展。
前文情节
续写段落一
主要情节1
主要情节2

续写段落二
主要情节3
主要情节4
步骤四　借力特殊技法,润色文章语言——高级句型,修辞手法。
如强调句、倒装句、定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句、with复合结构,非谓语结构、独立主格等;还可以使用比喻、拟人、排比、夸张、移就,通感。
步骤五　运用三种结尾,升华文章主题。
如强调句,名人名言,比喻修辞等。
2.2022年6月浙江卷
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
I need to do something in my community in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate from high school. Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a soup kitchen,so I did,too.It seemed like a good thing to do.
I thought that we would just be passing out dinners to those in need,but I found out we would be doing everything—mix the salad dressing and assign vegetable and meat.
As the line of people came toward me,I got a little scared.I’d come face to face with the homeless.How should I act How would they
treat me Would they hate me for having more than they did While some of the people looked very friendly,some of them looked so dangerous. I didn’t have too much time to worry about it.I was assigned(分配) to serve the salad with the lady next to me.She smiled at me and said if I needed help,she’d be right there,which I found quite comforting.
I had never seen so many people wanting food.They were of all ages and nationalities.Most of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty.Some looked like they had totally given up on life,while others seemed to be making the best of the situation,smiling and joking. Some were better off than others,but they all needed a good meal to eat and a warm place to live in.It saddened me to think of how many people there were who didn’t have a place to call home and the only food they got came from a soup kitchen.
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2.请按如下格式作答。
When they came in my direction,I tried to show them the prettiest and happiest smile.

I was happy to finish my serving time in this way.

When they came in my direction,I tried to show them the prettiest and happiest smile.Although I still felt a little scared of these dangerous people,I knew the burden on their shoulder—without a place called home,without a proper meal.So I truly hoped my smile could be some of the comfort.But hardly could I imagine that serving the salad could become so challenging and tough when facing a number of guests. They were almost like bees,coming one by one,never stopping!My smile froze gradually as one after another worn-out clothes were coming and pouring—now I was too busy to see their faces!Mixing the salad dressing and assigning one by one,I was almost like a cat on hot bricks,my hands racing.Fortunately,the helpful lady came to assist me,who took some loads off my shoulder.With her assistance,I finished my serving time smoothly.
I was happy to finish my serving time in this way.In this both-side beneficial way.I successfully catered to the need of the poor.Reflecting the whole experience throughout the evening with my friends,we found we enjoyed ourselves a lot by helping those in need.And I came to the realization that the poor held the same heart of kindness just like us.They were also friendly.Although they might look dangerous sometimes,they still left saying a “thank you” when taking the food,which was so comforting to us all.I also said a “thank you” to the lady who helped me out,for I knew it was the kindness we shared together,not only for graduating but also for warming each other,bonded us closer together.
3.2022年深圳2模
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a hot September afternoon,Peter and his friend Isabel were on their way to the library.When they passed by Tubman park,Isabel suggested cutting through it to get to the library.As they entered the park,the sight of the swings(秋千) and the merry-go-round brought back a flood of memories of their childhood spent there.But now everything looked so old,sad,and dirty.Litter lay on the ground next to an overflowing trash bin.There were still young schoolchildren playing there but they had to avoid the trash that littered the playground. A little boy told them that the city took the other trash cans away and the remaining one never got emptied often.
As they headed toward the library,the two high school students wrinkled their forehead.In the library,they encountered Mrs.Evans, their kind-hearted fifth-grade teacher,retired yet still passionate.Mrs. Evans listened as Isabel and Peter eagerly explained what they’d seen.Finally,she recommended them to go to the City Hall to voice their concerns.
The next day,Isabel and Peter went into the building of the City Hall but were met with an impatient officer.They were informed that the city couldn’t help with their problem due to a tight budget.Discouraged, they left and turned to Mrs.Evans for help.
Under her guidance,they decided to ask Go Green,a non-profit organization whose goal is to protect the environment,for help.“This
group is good at raising money for projects just like yours,” said Mrs. Evans.She promised to arrange them to present their ideas to Go Green. Hearing this,their face lit up.
Two main tasks remained ahead:researching ways to clean up the park and preparing a convincing presentation.As Isabel was good at researching while Peter always had a talent for speaking,they cooperated quite well.Isabel learned from a science magazine that a new type of trash bin can squeeze the trash down without being emptied often,which saves time,money,and energy.Based on this, Peter practiced his presentation over and over again.
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2.请按如下格式作答。
A week later,Peter stood nervously at the back of the hall where Go Green was meeting.

After the meeting,Isabel excitedly told Peter the good news.

A week later,Peter stood nervously at the back of the hall where Go Green was meeting.He could feel nothing but his hands shaking and heart pounding.“You’ll be great,Peter,” Isabel encouraged him. Just then,Peter heard his name being announced.It was time to present! Peter took a deep breath and then went on the stage.“Tubman Park needs a new kind of trash can,” Peter explained,pointing to a poster of a trash can.Then Peter explained the working principle of the trash can in detail.The judges nodded as they listened,seeming interested in the project.
After the meeting,Isabel excitedly told Peter the good news.Go Green had agreed to buy new trash cans for the park!Hearing the inspiring news,they both leaped into the air with joy.Peter barely had
time to savor the moment before Isabel started sharing the news with Mrs.Evans and showing their gratitude to her.Learning the result,Mrs. Evans smiled through misty eyes.“I know you can do it!Tubman Park is sure to become one that is clean and green again!” Never before had Peter and Isabel been so proud of themselves.
4.2022年山东临沂
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
As a nurse at the cancer care center where I’ve worked for seven years,I’ll do almost anything to make a patient feel better.But when I met Patty at the center,in 2011,she didn’t want my help.
She was a tiny 44-year-old single mom battling an aggressive head and neck cancer.Unlike many of our other patients,Patty was alone during her treatment,but no matter what I did.I couldn’t get her to open up.She just buried herself in book or pulled a blanket over her head to fend off conversation.
Eventually I hit on a reliable way to make Patty smile:mentioning her nine-year-old son,Stephen.She’d tell me how well he did in school,how he’d been selected to read a poem he wrote at a local bookstore.She desperately wanted to live for him.With three kids myself,I totally understood how she felt.
After a year and a half of treatment,in August 2012,Patty was told her cancer had spread,and I learned she wouldn’t live much longer. My first thought was,“What’s going to happen to Stephen ”
Nurses at the center shared stories at their meetings about how bright and unusual the boy was.But no one seemed to know how to resolve the issue of what would happen to him when his mom died.My husband, Michael,who too works at the center,started hearing about Patty and Stephen.
One morning in October,Patty quietly slipped away.Michael and I picked Stephen up after school,drove him to a nearby park,and sat on a bench by a pond.I finally managed to say,“Stephen,we’re sorry to have to tell you this,but your mom came to an end this morning.” The sound that came out of his mouth was like nothing I’d ever heard before.This skinny little guy sat between the two of us and just wailed(哀号) and wailed.It was as if his whole world was just destroyed.
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2.请按如下格式作答。
Something inside me was telling me what to do.

Finally,we took him home with us.

Something inside me was telling me what to do.I wanted to help the poor boy.Although I had three children of my own and a modest family income,I decided to adopt the boy.I told my husband what I thought,and he immediately agreed,saying,“That’s exactly what I wanted to tell you.” I told the boy we would give him a home and take care of him for his mother.The boy nodded,crying.
Finally,we took him home with us.We introduced Stephen to our three children and told them that he would live with us in the future. My children happily accepted and warmly took Steven to visit his new home and discussed making room for Steven.I was glad that my children were so kind and willing to share everything with other children.Stephen soon integrated into our family and lived a happy life with us.
5.2022年株洲模拟
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
DRUMMING WITH GRANDPA
Roger was filled with excitement as his mother told him his grandfather was on his way over.He always had fun together with his grandfather who once drummed in a band.They could make the whole house shake with their joyful music.Roger got excited and practiced drumming all morning.
Finally,Dad’s car pulled up in front of the house.Upon hearing the car door opened.Roger shouted for joy from his bedroom window, “Hi,Grandpa!Listen to this!” Taking a deep breath,he raised his drumsticks
and began rocking and rolling,just like Grandpa had taught him. Jumping up.He raced outside to his grandfather and asked,“Grandpa. what do you think Are you ready to drum together ” Grandpa,giving Roger a hug,said.“It was wonderful,but I’m afraid I can’t play right now.” Dad smiled at Roger,telling him some of Grandpa’s finger joints were hurting him and that maybe he would want to play after a short rest.Roger didn’t ask again.
After lunch,Roger went to his room to get his skateboard,finding someone had already stepped into the room.It was Grandpa who stood near the drum set.He picked up a drumstick and began to play.Thump! Thump!But just with two thumps,the drumstick fell onto the floor. Grandpa reached for it,trying to pick it up,but the drumstick fell out
of his hand.He tried again and the same thing happened.Grandpa moved his red and swollen fingers,looking upset.Seeing this,Roger shut the door noiselessly.He walked to the sitting room where Dad was reading and asked Dad to drive him to his friend’s house.“David has a drum with the pedal(踏板) and I’d like to borrow it,” Roger told Dad about his plan.Dad got the car keys and off they went.
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2.请按如下格式作答。
“Grandpa,a surprise!” Roger shouted when they returned with a big box.
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Slowly,Grandpa reached out his foot and pushed the pedal as Roger did.
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“Grandpa,a surprise!” Roger shouted when they returned with a big box.Roger led Grandpa to his room in delight.Dad followed,carrying the big box.With great joy Roger opened the box together with Dad. When Grandpa saw the drum with the pedal,his eyes were shining with excitement.“Grandpa,you can play this drum with your foot,” Roger said and then pressed the pedal with his foot.The drumstick swung forward.Thump!Thump!Thump!The pedal worked smoothly and the thumps filled the whole room.“Would you like to have a try ” Roger turned to Grandpa with his eyes full of expectation.
Slowly,Grandpa reached out his foot and pushed the pedal as Roger did.Thump!Thump!Grandpa smiled and continued with greater enthusiasm. “Join in,Roger!” Grandpa shouted to Roger excitedly and his cheerful
voice was even louder than the drum rolls.Roger grinned from ear to ear as he picked up his drumsticks.He rocked and rolled,and so did Grandpa.With the drums beating merrily,their joyful music shook the whole house like before,not only the whole house,but also the hearts of the grandfather and the grandson.
脱险型故事
1.2020年7月浙江卷
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”—the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance.When I’m face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,and smelled our garlic bread.
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit pots hard,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though—he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).
I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter(相遇),I took some pictures of the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bears’ eyes,but doesn’t hurt them.So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar(吼叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
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2.请按如下格式作答。
A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.

At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.

A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.Mounting anger mingled with hunger overwhelming him,he smashed his paws frantically against the wire fence,thrusting his sharp claws at us. Panicked as we were,Eill and I squealed at the top of lungs,waved our fists at him and stamped heavily on the ground in an attempt to intimidate and scare him away.To our dismay,all these efforts were in vain.This sturdy bear relentlessly banged and shoved the wooden posts which were evidently on the verge of collapsing!This bulky and furious beast within a stone’s throw,I flinched back and huddled with Elli tightly.Chilly winds whipping our faces,I could hear nothing but the sound of our hearts throbbing violently in our chests.
At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.The gusting wind from the hovering vehicle swept away our choking fear immediately.Out of the helicopter descended a rope to haul us up.Thrilled yet relieved, we clutched the rope and eventually landed on the helicopter safe
and sound.While overlooking the chunky bear from high above,I was amazed to spot this stubborn guy had crushed the fence and headed toward our camp for the inviting garlic bread.At this once-in-a-lifetime moment,I reached into my backpack and pulled out the camera,photographing that impressive scene.Gazing at his broad back in the melting ice field,I wondered if it was the warmer planet that had forced the bear to hunt for food from the human regions.
步骤一　阅读通篇文章,掌握主旨方向。
步骤二　梳理已知情节,把握故事走向。
步骤三　分析关键词句,构建情节发展。
前文情节
续写段落一
主要情节1
主要情节2

续写段落二
主要情节3
主要情节4
步骤四　借力特殊技法,润色文章语言——高级句型,修辞手法。
如强调句、倒装句、定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句、with复合结构,非谓语结构、独立主格等;还可以使用比喻、拟人、排比、夸张、移就,通感。
步骤五　运用三种结尾,升华文章主题。
如强调句,名人名言,比喻修辞等。
2.2018年6月浙江卷
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer,and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque,a big city in the state of New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend,picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the
river nearby.Very early in the morning,Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said.After breakfast,I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens,while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草).I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.They looked really cool.
In the afternoon,I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes,as long as my dad went with me.I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So,my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats,got on our horses,and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried,“and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!”“OK!” my dad cried back.After a while,Uncle
Paul and his farm house were out of sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks,the deep green pine trees,and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
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2.请按如下格式作答。
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.

We had no idea where we were and it got dark.

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Startled by the white fluffy rabbit,the horse almost threw me off its back.I hurriedly tightened my grip and couldn’t help letting out screams.But after we regained our calm,I was amused both by the thrill and the innocence of the little creature.Seeing it fleeing,cheerily,I turned to my dad,“Dad,can we follow it ” My dad nodded with a tolerant smile. Soon without consciousness,we were miles away up into the mountain and we lost track of the rabbit and of course,the track Uncle Paul had asked us to keep to.
We had no idea where we were and it got dark.We had to get off the horses and tried to figure out the way back,but after many attempts, we still failed—we got lost.I grew a bit anxious,but with dad around,
I felt all right.As darkness thickened,dad believed it was safer to stay on the spot and waited for help.It was then that we enjoyed a symphony of nature—the warm breeze ruffling through the trees,the insects buzzing and other animals contributing their unique sounds....This serenity ended as we heard shouts and torches came into our sight.At this time,I felt extremely grateful,to Paul and Tina,to this vacation with my dad,and to nature.
3.2022年广东1模
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a Sunday afternoon,Kiana French was having fun fishing with her father and younger sister,not knowing the next minute,they would struggle not to sink in the freezing water.Their 12-foot boat was taking in water little by little,and the wind was picking up.Her father,Gary French,hurried to operate the engine,while Kiana,16,was in the middle with Cierrah,her sister,frightened but still able to keep calm.
Kiana asked Cierrah to take off one of her cowboy boots,with which she got some of the water out.Hard as she tried,that little effort would not help stop the boat sinking.Moments later,the unthinkable
happened.The boat was full of water and then it flipped over.Kiana and her sister were dumped in the water.Their father,who had had a surgery six months ago,managed not to be thrown into the water but seemed to have great pain in the chest due to the sudden change.
Kiana quickly put on her life jacket and saw Cierrah’s and her father’s life jackets floating away.She reacted quickly to get them back and held her sister onto the boat.They were so far out in the middle of the lake that they could not see the shore clearly.What’s worse,it was getting harder to stay above the waves.Their father swam over and hugged his two girls.Cierrah crying silently.Kiana heard her beloved sister murmur,“I can’t feel my feet.”
Kiana knew the only thing to do was to get to shore herself and find help.She looked up at her father,exchanging a concerned glance, turned round and swam as hard as she could towards the shore.
Fighting against the strong currents and cold wind,she screamed for help at the top of her lungs every three minutes or so.A strong wind blew,and she looked back only to see her sister’s and father’s heads bobbing(浮动) in the water.She burst into tears,thinking her sister and dad were dead,because she was taking too long.
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2.请按如下格式作答。
With desperate tears,she suddenly spotted a boat with a figure walking on it.

Once rescued,they were rushed to shore,where a concerned group waited for their arrival.

With desperate tears,she suddenly spotted a boat with a figure walking on it.She waved and cried for help with all her strength.It seemed like a century later when she heard someone yelling back to her.As the boat was approaching,Kiana pointed to her father and sister and someone screamed,“They are in the water!Help!” She was soon picked up and taken towards where her father and sister were. Fortunately,they didn’t drown but her father seemed to be giving out,with one hand holding tight to the boat,the other holding Cierrah.
Once rescued,they were rushed to shore,where a concerned group waited for their arrival.They gave clothes and blankets to the three poor people,and then the ambulance arrived.Kiana,her sister and her father were cheeked on the spot and finally sent to the nearest hospital.
Later,when asked what gave her the strength and perseverance to continue,both in the cold water and in great fear.Kiana thought it had to do with family.“I just wanted to save my family,and I didn’t want anything bad to happen to them.So I couldn’t spare a second to worry or fear.” she said.
4.2022年深圳1模
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Last March,Margarito drove to visit his mother who lived in the countryside.When he set off for home,Margarito’s mother looked at the dark sky and noticed the sign of a coming storm.Worried about her son’s safety,she told him to drive as carefully as possible on his way home and he promised to give her a call upon his arrival.
With his mother’s words in mind,Margarito approached the main road carefully.Soon,it started to rain heavily.Eager to get home, Margarito began to drive faster.Two hours later,he came to a bumpy mountain road that had been flooded by a creek(小溪).Margarito, driving a four-wheel drive truck,figured that he would be OK.At that moment,he didn’t realize that such a thought would be a big mistake.
It was halfway across the creek that an unfortunate incident took place:The rushing waters grabbed hold of his vehicle,pushing it off the road and sending it down a rocky creek bed.The truck finally stopped some 80 feet away.Margarito’s problems only grew from there as the water had somehow positioned the truck into the creek bank at a 45-degree angle,making it difficult for him to open the driver’s side door.Injured and trapped inside with the muddy water rising quickly,Margarito was certain he was going to die.Shaking with fear,he was at a loss about what to do.
On the road right behind Margarito were a delivery worker named Steve and his nephew Mike,who were on the way to deliver furniture to customers in the countryside.They witnessed the horrible incident,
and when Margarito’s truck came to rest in the middle of the overflowing creek,Steve quickly began to take action.First,he grabbed a rope from the back of his vehicle and used it to ensure he could safely approach the truck.
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2.请按如下格式作答。
Next,he turned to Mike and yelled,“Give me a rock!”

Margarito was about to thank Steve and Mike when the mobile phone in his jacket pocket rang.

Next,he turned to Mike and yelled,“Give me a rock!” With the rock,he hit the window over and over but had little success.Steve then shouted to Margarito to move away from the window.He balanced himself on the truck,leaned back and threw the rock at the window. Finally,the glass broke and Steve kicked in the remaining pieces of glass.Relieved,Margarito reached out for Steve’s hand and was rescued. The two men escaped and returned to safety.
Margarito was about to thank Steve and Mike when the mobile phone in his jacket pocket rang.With trembling hands,Margarito took out the phone and pressed it to his ear.His mother’s anxious voice came over the phone,“Are you home yet ”“Everything’s good.” Tears welled up in his eyes at the familiar sound of concern.Margarito choked up as he explained the accident to his mom and comforted her.Hanging up the phone,he turned to Steve and Mike and sincerely thanked both of them.Cold as the rain was,great warmth filled his heart like never before.(共54张PPT)
第五部分　高三复习——读后续写
一、高考考情分析
读后续写任务要求考生阅读一段350词以内的故事性短文,根据其中的情节和所给的段落开头语,续写一段150词左右的故事,使之发展成一篇逻辑衔接,情节完整的短文。
读后续写主要考查考生四方面能力;
1.把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力;
2.语言运用的准确性和丰富性的能力;
3.对语篇结构的把控能力;
4.创造性思维能力。
评分要点:
1.篇章内使用了自然有效的衔接手段,使段落内部意义连贯;
2.续写符合逻辑,使文章内容完整、丰富、合理;
3.表达流畅,使用的词汇和语法结构丰富、恰当;
4.书写具有可读性,字数不少于120字。
二、高考解题方略
首先,考生通读原文,边读边画出文章发展的关键信息,即5W。 然后,考生阅读给定两个段落的首句,判断第一续写段落的情节发展;根据第二个给定段落首句,和对文章中心的判断,确定如何续写第二段。接下来,考生计划如何丰富续写内容,通过:一、计划续写人物的行为、情感描写丰富情节,二、计划高级句型和修辞表达,提升文章语言运用效果。最后,策划结尾落脚点,完成续写构思,开始写作。
三、思路指引
步骤一　阅读通篇文章,掌握主旨方向。
考生通读原文,搞清五个W的问题:人物是谁(who),故事发生的场景设置在哪(when&where),情节事件是什么(what),原由是何(why),在文中划出与人物、时间、地点、事件相关的词语,掌握文章大意。
步骤二　梳理已知情节,把握故事走向。
考生深入阅读原文以及两个给定段落的首句,梳理清楚原文的情节线以及情感线,明确故事的整体走向。
步骤三　分析关键词句,构建情节发展。
考生具体分析前文情节和给定段落的首句,找到续写的主要情节线索,拟定情节框架,推测人物的言行举止。
前文情节 ...
续写段落一 ...
主要情节1(来源前文情节和续写第一段第一句)
主要情节2(来源续写第二段第一句)
续写段落二 ...
主要情节3(来源续写第一段)
主要情节4(故事结局和主题升华)
步骤四　借力特殊技法,润色文章语言——高级句型,修辞手法。
考生在计划文章段落内容时,还需提前计划将使用的高级句型,增加句式的多样性,如使用强调句、倒装句、定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句、with复合结构,非谓语结构、独立主格等,让表达更加多样;还可以使用比喻、拟人、排比、夸张、移就,通感,反衬让文章富有文采。
高级句型 例句
强调句 It was a piece of broken glass that cut into his left leg.
分词做状语 Puzzled,Polly approached her.
倒装句 Out dashed the boy.
非谓语 I open the letter,hoping to find some clues.
with复合结构 With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time.
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修辞手法 例句
拟人 The moon washed the woods in a gentle light.
比喻 The stars twinkled like a child’s curious eyes.
夸张 Sally was so happy that she felt as if she had been in heaven.
反衬 Though the night was freezing cold,it seemed like spring to Bob.
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步骤五　运用三种结尾,升华文章主题。
考生在续写结尾部分,可以挑选以下三种简单易学的结尾方式:强调句型结尾,名言名句结尾,修辞手法结尾。
强调句型结尾 例1:It was Tom’s selflessness that taught me the value of kindness.
例2:It was their love and support that saw me through different odds all these years.
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名言名句结尾 例1:Roses given,fragrance in hand.
例2:A friend in need is a friend indeed.
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修辞手法结尾 例1:His words floated in the wind like a bird’s happy song.
例2:Follow your heart/dream and the universe will open doors where there are only walls.
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四、2022全国新高考Ⅰ卷真题分析
第二节(满分 25 分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was the day of the big cross-country run.Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route(路线) through thick evergreen forest.
I looked around and finally spotted David,who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence.He was small for ten years old.His usual big toothy smile was absent today.I walked over and asked him why he wasn’t with the other children.He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run.
What was wrong He had worked so hard for this event!
I quickly searched the crowd for the school’s coach and asked him what had happened.“I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him,” he explained uncomfortably.“I gave him the choice to run or not,and let him decide.”
I bit back my frustration(懊恼).I knew the coach meant well—he thought he was doing the right thing.After making sure that David could run if he wanted,I turned to find him coming towards me,his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward.
David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children,but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid.He always participated to the best of his ability
in whatever they were doing.That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team.It just took him longer—that’s all.David had not missed a single practice,and although he always finished his run long after the other children,he did always finish.As a special education teacher at the school,I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
We sat down next to each other,but David wouldn’t look at me.

I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.

步骤一　阅读通篇文章,掌握主旨方向。
步骤二　梳理已知情节,把握故事走向。
步骤三　分析关键词句,构建情节发展。
前文情节 As a special education teacher at the school,I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination.
续写段落一 We sat down next to each other,but David wouldn’t look at me.
主要情节1:“我”鼓励了David。What would I say to encourage David How would he react What would he say What would he do
主要情节2:David重拾信心,准备投入比赛。How would I feel
续写段落二 I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.
主要情节3:David在比赛。What would I see Would David encounter any difficulty How would he deal with it
主要情节4:David完成了比赛。How would the audiences,especially the children,react to the result What’s the theme of the passage
步骤四　借力特殊技法,润色文章语言——高级句型,修辞手法。
高级句型 例句
分词做状语 (非谓语) He looked at me,his eyes widening.
Classmates all appeared on the racing track,cheering for him.
Having thought it over,I mentioned some events...
Inspired by the enthusiasm and encouragement,David quickened his pace in high spirits.
倒装句 There you go!
with复合结构 With the power to conquer himself,he can conquer anything on the way to a promising future.
虚拟语气 But he ran as if he had forgotten all his weaknesses.
... ...
修辞手法
比喻 My heart sank.
His face began to lighten like sunshine.
夸张 When he came into sight,the spectators burst into thunderous cheers and applause.
... ...
步骤五　运动三种结尾,升华文章主题。
强调句型结尾 It’s his strong will that enables him to succeed.
名言名句结尾 To him,that was worth a whole lot more than an award.
修辞手法结尾 With the power to conquer himself,he can conquer anything on the way to a promising future.
【参考范文一】
We sat down together on some steps,but David wouldn’t look at me.I turned him around and looked him in the eye sincerely.I quietly said,“David,if you’re not running because you’re afraid someone is going to laugh,that’s not a good enough reason.Are you going to let them get in your way If you really want to run,David,run!” I held my breath as David took this in.Then he looked at the field and said with a fierce but quiet determination,“I’m gonna run.”
I watched as David moved up to the starting line.The starter’s gun sounded.But he had only gone a few meters before he tripped and fell flat on the ground.My heart sank.As I started to shout encouragement,other voices around me took up the call.“Come on,David,you can do it!” David picked himself up and started again until he crossed the finish line with wild cheers and applause.That day,David got a special award for his courage.He also got respect of all students.To him,that was worth a whole lot more than an award.
【参考范文二】
We sat down next to each other,but David wouldn’t look at me.He hung his head,trying to avoid eye contact with me.It was a tricky moment,calling for a good choice of words.Having thought it over,I mentioned some events which won people’s praise for his determination and perseverance.His face began to lighten like sunshine.He added that even the judges thumbed up at him.The whistle went off and the competitors began to take their places.To my joy,David slowly rose to his feet.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. David stood firmly in his position,ignoring anything around.Pushing forward without balance,he was left behind.However,when he came into sight,the spectators burst into thunderous cheers and applause.Inspired by the enthusiasm and encouragement,David quickened his pace in high spirits.It turned out that he achieved his best record ever.Seeing his confident smiles,I sighed in relief.With the power to conquer himself,he can conquer anything on the way to a promising future.
练习一　句式升级
将以下汉语句子翻译成英文。
一、It 句型
A.It was/will be not long before sb.did sth.过不了多久,就……
1.Jerry很快就告诉了我们事情的经过。
2.Jack很快就恢复了知觉。
【答案】It was not long before Jerry told us everything.
【答案】 It was not long before Jack regained consciousness.
B.It was+时间点+when 当……时,是几点
1.那只小猫出现的时候刚好是8点钟。
2.他刚好是5年前离开了故乡。
【答案】 It was 8 o’clock sharp when the cat showed up.
【答案】 It was 5 years ago when he left his hometown.
C.It is...who/that 强调句
1.正是他Jerry教会了我态度决定一切。
2.正是这次经历让我更加珍惜我所拥有的一切。
【答案】 It was Jerry who/that taught me attitude determines everything.
【答案】 It is the experience that makes me treasure everything I own.
D.It is+adj.+that
1.他这样做真是太聪明了。
2.安装前请仔细阅读说明书。
【答案】 It was so smart of him that he should have done so.
【答案】 It is necessary that the manual should be read thoroughly.
二、定语从句
1.他是个极为有趣的人。
2.政府采取的紧急措施收效甚佳。
3.这份工作让他交到很多朋友。
【答案】 He is a person who interests others.
【答案】 The government took emergency measures which gained a good feedback.
【答案】 This is a job where he made a lot of friends.
三、状语从句
A.As引导的让步状语从句
1.虽然他这次比赛失败了,但他并没有气馁。
2.尽管他很痛苦,但他并没有表现出来。
【答案】 Failed as he did,he didn’t lose his courage.
【答案】 Painful as he was,he didn’t show it at all.
B.一……就
1.我刚一到家,天就开始下起大雨。
2.他刚刚关上门就意识到把钥匙落在了家里。
【答案】 Hardly when I arrived home it started to rain heavily.
【答案】 The moment he closed the door he realized he had left the key inside.
四、名词性从句
A.what+情绪类动词+sb.was that
1.让我惊讶的是,他居然能在这么短的时间内出色地完成任务。
2.让我失望的是,她已经不再记得我了。
【答案】 What surprised me was that he should be able to finish the work excellently in such short time.
【答案】 What disappointed me was that she remembered me no more.
B.抽象名词+动词+that引导的同位语从句
1.消息传来,他已经成功当选主席了。
2.有传闻称,他已经做好了辞职的打算。
【答案】 News came that he had been elected as the president successfully.
【答案】 Rumor has it that he has made up his mind to resign.
五、感叹句
A.What+a+n. (it was)!
1.这次经历多么奇妙啊!
2.再次遇到你真是巨大的惊喜啊!
【答案】What an amazing experience it was!
【答案】What a surprise it was that I should run into you again!
B.How+adj.+n.+be!
1.这次经历多么奇妙啊!
2.再次遇到你真是巨大的惊喜啊!
【答案】How amazing this experience was!
【答案】How surprised I was that I should run into you again!
六、倒装句
A.Only+副词/状语从句/介词短语+一般疑问句
1.只有在那一刻我才意识到,他多年来的坚持是多么难能可贵。
2.只有和妈妈在一起的时候,他才感到安心。
【答案】 Only at that moment did I realize how precious it was that he insisted all those years.
【答案】 Only when he was with his mom did he feel at ease.
B.Not only 结构前面倒装,后面是正常语序
1.这不仅是孩子们的礼物,更是一份爱心。
2.传统文化不但历史悠久,在现代社会也受到欢迎。
【答案】 Not only is this a gift from the kids,also their love.
【答案】 Not only is our traditional culture centuried,but also welcomed in modern times.
C.否定词+一般疑问句
hardly/barely/seldomly/rarely/nowhere else/never/scarcely/at no time/by no means/under no circumstances/on no condition/at no point+倒装句
1.无论如何我们都不会放弃。
2.无论何时都要相信自己。
【答案】 Under no circumstances will we give up.
【答案】On no condition should you stop believing in yourself.
D.So+adj.+be+主语+that+完整句子
1.他的表情太夸张了,以至于我不禁笑了出来。
2.她如此紧张,双手不停颤抖。
【答案】 So dramatic were his expressions that I couldn’t help laughing.
【答案】So nervous was she that her hands kept shaking.
七、非谓语
A.非谓语动词与逻辑主语为被动关系
1.被批评和责备并不一定是坏事。
2.在终于揭开神秘面纱后,这幅画赢得了所有人的注意。
【答案】 Being criticized and scolded isn’t necessarily a bad thing.
【答案】Uncovered at last,the picture gained every one’s attention.
B.非谓语动词与逻辑主语为主动关系
1.听到她的故事后,我流下了感动的泪水。
2.虽然知道事实,我还是缄口不言。
【答案】Hearing her stories,I was moved to tears.
【答案】Knowing the truth,I kept my mouth shut.
C.分词作后置定语(n.+doing/being done/done)
1.最近,一部名为《觉醒年代》的电视剧受到了一致好评。
2.我校将于下周举办一场题为《科学伴我同行》的讲座。
【答案】Recently,a TV show named TheAwakeningAge is well received.
【答案】 Our school is going to hold a speech titled ScienceAccompaniesMe next week.
八、虚拟语气
A.as if
1.他说得就好像他去过那里一样。
2.她很是紧张,好像有什么危险一样。
【答案】He talked as if he had been there.
【答案】She is so nervous as if something dangerous were about to happen.
B.wish
1.我多希望我是个百万富翁。
2.她多希望此刻妈妈也在场。
【答案】How I wish I were a millionaire.
【答案】She wishes her mom were present.
C.Without/But for+n.
1.要是没有你,我一定不会成功的。
2.要不是天气不好,我们早就出发了。
【答案】Without you,I wouldn’t have succeeded.
【答案】But for the bad weather we would have left already.
D.otherwise
1.你一定要诚实,不然会有很严重的后果。
2.如果你不道歉,我将报警。
【答案】You must be honest.Otherwise,there would be severe consequences.
【答案】Apologize.Otherwise,I would call the police.
九、with复合结构
A.with/without+n./pron.+adj.
窗子开着,风吹了进来。
B.with/without+n./pron.+adv.
她走的时候,水龙头还是开着的。
【答案】Wind came in with the window open.
【答案】She left with the faucet on.
C.with/without+n./pron.+prep.phrase
老师手里拿着书走了进来。
D.with/without+n./pron.+non-predicate
由于还有很多工作要做,他没有时间吃晚饭。
【答案】The teacher came in with a book in her hand.
【答案】With much work to do,he doesn’t have time for dinner.
E.with/without+n./pron.+补语
随着春天的到来。
F.with+O(n./pron.)+n.
他离开时,父亲已经是一位鳏夫。
【答案】with the spring coming.
【答案】He left with his father a widower.
十、独立主格
1.天气不好,我们只能推迟计划。
2.如果时间允许,我们就早些出发。
【答案】Weather being bad,we had to postpone our schedule.
【答案】Time permits,we are going to leave earlier.
美词美句(修辞)
一、比喻(simile)
比喻是一种常见的修辞方法,不管是在中文里,还是在英文里,比喻这一手法的使用频率都很高。根据事物间的相似之处,将其进行对照,赋予语言更加强烈的情感色彩。我们在写作时,可以适当采用比喻的方法,为文章增色。
例句:
1.他心硬如铁。
2.She is as lonely as a leaf.
试翻译以下句子:
1.她的心灵犹如金子一般纯净。
2.别担心。这次失败不过是一则插曲。
【答案】Her heart is as pure as gold.
【答案】Don’t worry.This failure is merely an interlude.
二、夸张(hyperbole)
夸张是指为了达到某种写作效果,将事物的某种程度特地夸大或缩小的修辞手法,突出事物的某一特质,可以体现出写作人的强烈情感。这一手法在文学作品和日常对话中均有所使用。
例句:
1.他力大如牛。
2.I was scared to death!
试翻译以下句子:
1.他跑起来像兔子一样快。
2.她哭得犹如世界末日了一般。
【答案】He runs like a rabbit.
【答案】She is crying like it was the end of the world.
三、拟人(personification)
拟人的手法,顾名思义就是将无生命的东西比拟作人,给予该物体以人的特征。这样的手法可以使文章更加生动,对事物的描述更加具体,使读者能够更加清楚地了解这一描写对象的特征。
例句:
1.鸟儿在树上歌唱。
2.The building we are looking for is greeting us at a distance.
试翻译以下句子:
1.秋天辞别了这个城市。
2.微风袭来,同我问候。
【答案】Autumn said goodbye to the city.
【答案】The breeze whispered hello to me.
四、平行结构(parallelism)
平行结构是将结构或意义相近的几个词汇、短语、句式等并列使用的方法。使用平行结构,可以增强文章的气势,美化文章的结构,使其更具有可读性。
例句:
1.读书足以怡情,足以傅彩,足以长才。(《论学习》,弗朗西斯·培根)
Studies serve for delight,for ornament,and for ability.(王佐良译)
2.It was the best of times,it was the worst of times,it was the age of wisdom,it was the age of foolishness.(A Tale of Two Cities,Charles Dickens)
那是最美好的时代,那是最糟糕的时代;那是个睿智的年月,那是个蒙昧的年月。(宋兆霖译)
试翻译以下句子:
1.她既是我的朋友,也是我的老师。
2.读书使人充实,讨论使人机智,笔记使人准确。(王佐良译《论学习》)
【答案】She is not only my friend but also my teacher.
【答案】Reading makes a full man;conference a ready man;and writing an exact man.(OfStudies,Francis Bacon)

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