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高考英语应用文
本次整理的应用文常见类型17类：
一、求助信 P2 十一、道歉信 P28
二、告知信 P5 十二、投诉信 P30
三、通知 P8 十三、慰问信 P34
四、申请信 P11 十四、祝贺信 P37
五、推荐信 P14 十五、求助信 P41
六、报道 P16 十六、短文投稿/征文/说明文 P46
七、邀请信 P19 十七、演讲/发言稿 P53
八、感谢信 P22
九、建议信 P24
十、倡议信 P26
求助信
求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。
首段：表明写信目的，请求帮助；
中间段：要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容；
结尾段：希望得到帮助。
注意：语气委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。
首段：请求帮助
1.Now I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/do me a favor/lend me a hand.
现在我写信请你帮我一个忙。
2.I am writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.
我希望你能帮我一个忙。
3.I wonder if you could do me a favour, this is the first time that my uncle visits us.
我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙，这是我叔叔第一次来访，所以我希望你能到机场接他。
4.I wonder if you some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials.
我想知道你是否能帮我出售一些中国结，这是我自己用 红丝线、布等材料做的
5.Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished
你愿意帮我润色草稿吗？
中间段：描述具体困难
1.1am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with,… What’s more, … What troubles me most is …
我遇到的三个间题很困扰我，首先 ……另外……最困扰我的是……
2.Unfortunately,I find/feel it quite/extremely difficult/hard to do with(使用形式宾语)
不幸的是，我觉得做某事十分/非常难。
3.lt is difficult/challenging for me to do sth.
做某事是困难的/有挑战性的。
4.I have trouble/difficulty/problems (in)doing sth.
我做某事有困难。
5.Doing sth.is another terrible headache for me.(使用动名词做主语）
做某事是另一件让我很头痛的事。
6.I find myself struggling with sth.(使用find复合结构）
我发现自己做某事有困难。
7.Faced with the above problems,I am anxious to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on...
面对上述问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。请你给我一些建议。
结尾段：希望得到帮助：
1.I wonder if can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me
我想知道你能不能帮我解决这些困难。如果你能帮助我，我真的很感激。
2.I would appreciate it very much if you can offer me some necessary/timely help(give/lend me some practical/valuable advice)
如果你能给我一些必要的帮助/及时的帮助（给我一些实用的/有价值的建议）。我会很感激。
常见困难：
【生活方面】
与人相处
get along well with my classmates/ the new teacher / my parents.和我的同学/新老师/父母相处
把握时间
arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things. 安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情
明确目标
know the purpose of my life and the destination of my future in order to passionately live a purpose-driven life everyday.
知道我生命的目的和未来的目标，以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活
【学习方面】
不懂语法
have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them into use in my speaking and writing. 进步太慢
find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a long time. 精力有限
can’t be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every moment meaningful and splendid.
模板①
Dear ______ ,
I am writing to formally request to ______（请求的内容）.The reason for _____________is that_____________（给出原因）. I___________ , so I _____________（给出细节）.I would also like to request ___________（提出进一步的要求）. I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at __________（电话号码）.
I look forward to a favorable reply.
Yours sincerely, Li Ming
模板②
Dear________,
My name is _______________(自我介绍). I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met difficulty in _______________(求助内容). First, I find ___________(困难1). Besides, ________(困难2). What’s more, __________(困难3).
Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to ____________(委婉提出请求)？In the meanwhile, I beg you to (请求内容) so that ___________(请求目的). Also, I would like you to (请求内容).
I’m sure that I can make great progress in _____________(表达期待).
Yours,
Li Hua
(2018年11月，浙江卷）假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：
1. 行程信息；
2. 钱包特征；
3. 联系方式。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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二、告知信
无论是回复他人提问或咨询的告知信还是直接的告知信,具体化告知内容是关键——选择自己有话可说且可以说好的要点进行内容拓展
【告知信结构】
1. 点明告知内容（原因、背景等）；
2. 告知具体事宜（时间、地点等）；
3. 表达期待愿望。
一、常用句式
1. 告知信首段：写信目的。
（1）I’m writing to inform you that...
（2）Its my great pleasure to provide you with...
（3）I feel much honored to tell you something about...
（4）I’m more than delighted to give you some information concerning ...
（5）Knowing that you have a keen interest in...， I’m delighted to inform you that ...
How delighted I am to write in response to your care about One Hundred-day Pledging Conference（百日誓师大会） held in my school !
(感叹句远比陈述句有震撼力，本句就比其陈述句 I’m delighted to write in response to your care about ... 更亮)
2. 主体段落：告知具体内容（以告知活动安排为例）。
（1）活动的时间地点
It is going to be held +地點+时间
It is scheduled to be shown +地点+时间
As scheduled， it will kick off +地点+时间
I’m wondering if you could turn up +地点+时间
Would you please be so kind as to arrive +地点+时间
（2）活动目的和内容
The theme of the campaign is...
The activity is aimed to promote...
The exhibition is to be shown for the purpose of promoting...
There is a wide range of .... on display， including ...
You’ll enjoy a diverse collection of ...， ...included.
（3）活动的意义
I’m pretty sure that you’ll have a deeper understanding of ...
I’m fully convinced that you’ll have a better command of ...
Not only can it help broaden your horizons but it can also bring you great fun.
（4）如何适当增加细节（以全国I卷书面表达为例）。
增加与要点相关的状语或状语从句
By tradition， the hosts prefer their guests to arrive early and give some help when the family are preparing the dinner.
It will be better if the gifts are made by yourself.
列举具体事例
Besides， what is strongly suggested is bringing some gifts， like red wine or cakes.
People often consider that putting food onto others plates is polite， especially the elders and the guests.
增加which非限制性定语从句
Also don’t feel surprised at the conversation at the table， which is really common and traditional in China.
3. 告知信尾段：期待建议和回复
（1）I do hope to meet you there.
（2）Your timely reply will be highly appreciated.
（3）If you have any other questions， don’t hesitate to turn to me.
（4）I would be very grateful if you could share with me your good idea.
（5）Should you have any questions， I would be more than delighted to offer help.
告知信完整参考模板
Dear________(称呼),
How is everything going 问候语（可不写） I’m writing to let you know that we will have a . Knowing that you are interested in , Now，I am writing to tell you some relevant details about it．(写信目的)
The details are as follows. First of all,it is scheduled to be held at the school hall from 3 pm to 6 pm on next Sunday. Secondly, _______. Additionally, it is strongly recommended that you make some preparations before the class. You’d better________.(活动准备）Not only can it help broaden your horizons but it can also bring you great fun.（活动意义可适当增减）
（表达期待）So excited am I that I can’t wait to join in it.How about you Looking forward to your reply.
练习：
（2019年新课标全国卷II）
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：
1.比赛信息；
2.赛前准备；
3.表达期待。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
三、通知
通知可分为口头通知和书面通知。
1.口头通知所使用的语言具有明显的口语特征，句子短小，通俗易懂。
常用开头语：May I have your attention, please 或Attention please. I have an announcement to make.
常用结束语：That's all. Thank you (for your attention).
2.书面通知措辞较正式和严谨，语言需简明扼要，信息需精准无误。使用的句式要复杂些。常常将若干的信息通过一个句子表达出来。为避免命令之嫌，书面通知中常采用被动语态或“please＋祈使句”表示要求。
如请准时到会。口头：Be sure not to be late.
书面：Everyone is required to be present on time. /Please be there on time.
All teachers are required to meet in the school meeting room at 4 pm on Friday to celebrate Teachers' Day.
（二）写通知需要注意的两个问题
1.审题清晰，确定是书面通知还是口头通知。
2.时间，地点，注意事项一定要交待清楚准确。此类写作，月份，星期的拼写是免不了的，试试看：
一月——十二月：_____________________________________________________
星期一——星期天：____________________________________________________
Keys : January(Jan.) ; February(Feb.); March (Mar.); April (Apr.); May; June (Jun.); July (Jul.); August (Aug.); September (Sept.); October (Oct.); November (Nov.); December (Dec.)
Monday (Mon); Tuesday (Tue./ Tues.); Wednesday(Wed./ Weds); Thursday (Thur./ Thurs.); Friday (Fri.); Saturday (Sat.); Sunday (Sun.)
1.提醒和引入话题常用语
①May I have/call your attention, please 请大家注意一下，好吗？
②Attention, please, everybody! 请大家注意！
③I have an announcement（宣布，通知） to make. 我有一件事情要宣布。
④I have something to tell you. 我要告诉大家一些事情。
2.通知具体事项部分常用语
①There will be a talk（或者speech contest） this afternoon. 今天下午将有一场讨论会(演讲比赛)。
②The Student Union has decided that ... 学生会已决定……
③We shall have a lecture on ... 我们将举行关于……的研讨会。
④It has been decided that we'll pay a visit to ... 已经决定我们将参观……
3.结尾部分常用语
①Please attend it on time and don't be late. 请按时到场，不要迟到。
②I hope you can have a good time. 我希望你们玩得开心。
③Everyone is welcome to attend/take part in it. 欢迎所有人参加。
④That's all.Thank you. 就这些，谢谢。
模板①
Notice(或者 Notice)
An exciting / interesting event “ (给定的活动名称)” is around the corner / is coming / drawing closer / taking place. Every one of /All of you is / are expected to be part of / participate in / take part in the event which (举办活动的目的/益处等)
①You are required / asked / demanded to do / that you (should) do (活动要求).
②You’ll do (活动内容). (此处①②取二者之一即可)
The event will be held / take place (活动时间、地点). For any questions, call / ring (联系人) at (联系的电话号、QQ号、地址等)
Li Hua(发布通知的人签名)
模板②
STUDENTS UNION(发布通知的单位、组织名称)
Sep 22, 2019(发布日期。如果没给可不写)
Notice
An exciting / interesting event “ (给定的活动名称)” is around the corner / is coming / drawing closer / taking place. Every one of /All of you is / are expected to be part of / participate in / take part in the event which (举办活动的目的/益处等)
①You are required / asked / demanded to do / that you (should) do (活动要求).
②You’ll do (活动内容). (此处①②取二者之一即可)
The event will be held / take place (活动时间、地点). For any questions, call / ring (联系人) at (联系的电话号、QQ号、地址等)
Li Hua(发布通知的人签名)
开头用语
书面通知：
There be… to be held on…,in… Problem to be talk about… include… You/ They should…
Everyone is demanded to be present on time.
口头通知：
Ladies and gentlemen,
Attention, please. I have something to tell you.
(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together，内容包括：
1.短片内容：学校的发展；
2.放映时间、地点；
3.欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
NOTICE
Boys and girls，
The Students' Union
申请信
【文章结构】
第一步：介绍自己，说明信息来源，并提出申请
第二步：表明自己特点，具体说明胜任理由
第三步：请求给予机会，期望尽快回复
【万能句式】
一 篇首句
1. Learning from the advertisement you have posted that you're in need of...to do sth, I'm writing for a chance to work as...从你发布的广告中得知你需要……，我写信给你是为了应聘……。
My name is...I graduated from...university in...，majoring in...我的名字是……。我毕业于……大学，专业是……
I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain the precious opportunity to....我写信给你是希望我可以获得……的宝贵机会。
4.. I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be... The following are my advantages.我写信申请……的宝贵机会。以下是我的优势。
二 篇中句
1. As an outgoing.., I feel it easy to get along well with others and I can….作为一名外向的……,我感觉与真他人友好相处很容易，我能……
I had good performance in every course，especially in... 我每门课成绩都很好，特别是……
As an outgoing student, not only can I get along well with interviewees but also I have a sense of duty and cooperation.作为一名外向的学生，我不仅能与面试者相处融洽，而且我有很强的责任心和合作精神。
I shall be glad to provide you with any further information concerning my education and personal experience.
我很乐意提供关于我的教育及个人经验方面的更多信息。
Sociable and honest, I have a gift for communication with others. 善于交际，有责任心，我的确相信我自己完全符合志愿者工作的条件。
What satisfies me most is that I have no difficulty communicating with others in English.最使我满意的是我用英语和别人交流起来毫不费力。
With responsibility and patience, I'll show passionate enthusiasm toward this job.我有责任心和耐心，会对这份工作表现出满腔热忱。
What makes me confident is that I have learned a lot on different fields, which broadens my horizons.让我感到自信的是我已经在不同的领域学到了很多，这使我拓宽了视野。
6. Having been learning English for many years, I have a good command of English, especially spoken English.已经学了很多年的英语，我精通英语，尤其是英语口语。
I am confident that I’m suitable for the job./I'm qualified to do../I'm equal to doing...我相信这份工作适合我。/我有做……的资格。/我能胜任做……
三 篇尾句
1. I would appreciate it if my application could be favorably considered.如果我在申请能够被积极的考虑，我将感激不尽。
2. I will be more than grateful if I am given a chance and I am convinced that I will perfectly live up to your expectations.如果给我一个机会，我将感激不尽。我也相信我不会辜负你们的期望。
3. I am sure I will do well if you give me the chance to be a member of your company.如果您给我一个机会成为公司的一员的话，我相信自己会做的很好。
4. I would greatly appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。
5. Should you treat my application favorably, I would spare no effort to offer my best service.如果您能看中我的申请，我将不遗余力地提供我的最佳服务。
I am confident my professional knowledge has prepared me to handle the job. 我相信我的专业知识能让我 胜任这份工作。
I believe that I am well qualified for the position as... 我相信我定能胜任作为……的工作。
【满分模板 】
Dear ______ (称谓)
Learning from _________(信息来源) that you're in need of a_______to do sth，I am more than happy to apply for the position and I feel this ______(职位或机会) is specially tailored to me.从你发布的_____中得知你需要一个……，我写信给你是为了应聘这个职位，我觉得这个_______是为我特别量身定做的。
To start with, my advantage first lies in the fact that as an outgoing student, I feel it easy to get along well with others and I can______. Furthermore, ______(优势二) . In addition, there is no problem with ______(优势三) . 首先，作为一名外向的学生, 我感觉与他人友好相处很容易，我能…….。 此外，........。 并且.......
I do hope my ______(资质或能力) will win me a favorable consideration from your side. Should you need any details related to my application, feel free to contact me at______(联系方式).Your timely reply will be highly appreciated. 我真的希望我的(资质或能力）将为我赢得你们的青睐。 如果您需要关于我申请书的任何相关细节，请随时与我联系：______。 您的及时回复我将非常感谢。
【真题演练】
（1）假设你是李华，你作为交换生正在英国学习，你所在城市博物馆正在展出来自中国的文物(relics)因而需要招聘懂一定中国文化的自愿者作为讲解员，需要写一封信给博物馆申请做一名讲解员。
要点如下:
1.写信目的。
2.个人能力优势。
3.能做的事情。
注意:
1.词数80左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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五、推荐信
【考情分析】
1.推荐物：推荐电影，书，歌曲，说明你喜欢的理由。
2.推荐人：推荐历史人物，老师，主持人，学生会主席，受尊敬的人等，介绍人物，并说明你推荐的理由。
3.推荐事（行为）：推荐来中国旅游（景点，线路，特色）、来中国留学、过中国节日等，说明推荐理由。
【布局思维导图】
【必备词句】
1. 词汇
能力：have a gift for, be skilled in, be experienced in, be an expert in, speak fluent English, creative, a boy with great ability, efficient, intelligent, etc.
经历：graduate from, be a graduate from, major in, gain/win/get the first grade scholarship, get good grades, an all-around student with excellent grades in, excellent grades in all subjects, be given the title of, gain/win the first prize/place, win a gold/silver/copper medal, etc.
性格：outgoing, easy to get along with, enthusiastic, enthusiasm is part of his character, etc.
2. 经典句型
(1) He is an all-around student with excellent grades in all subjects. He has been given the title of the ＂excellent student＂.
(2) As a boy with great potential, he is good at solving difficult problems.
(3) Li Ming, a graduate from Peking University, majors in computer software design.
(4) He has enjoyed the reputation/title of the Excellent Graduate.
3. 写作套路
开头：
(1) I am writing to recommend to you…
(2) I would like to recommend to you…
(3) It is a great honor for me to recommend to you…
(4) I take the pleasure in recommending to you…
结尾：
(1) If he can join your company, he will give full play to his talent. And your company will also be greatly benefited. So I strongly recommend… to you.
(2) In a word, he would be a good choice. I would be grateful if you would like to consider my recommendation.
(3) I hope you can give him a chance. I believe he will make a great contribution to your company.
(4) I hope that you would take my recommendation into consideration/account.
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
In response to your request for ______(推荐事由), I would like to recommend ______(具体推荐事项). I recommend it mainly for the following three reasons.
Initially, ______(推荐理由一) . Additionally/Aside from it, ______(推荐理由二) . Plus, ______(推荐理由三) . If you want details, please______(联系方式) .
Your taking my recommendation into consideration will be highly appreciated/expected.
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely, Li Hua
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jimmy,由于COVID-19不得不宅在家里，所以他想利用这段时间学习汉语， 想让你给他推荐一个汉语老师。请你给他写封回信,简单介绍一下你绐他推荐的情况。内容包括：
1. 表示关心；
2. 介绍汉语老师的情况。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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六、“报道类”英语作文
一、正文框架：
★第一段：事件发生的时间、地点、目的以及参与者。
★第二段：详细叙述调查或活动的经过和意义。
★第三段：对事件的评价或自己的感悟或事件的意义。
二、参考模板:
(一)、调查报道模板
In order to _____________(调查目的), I have recently made a survey among_______________(调查对象). In this survey, _____________(被采访人物)were interviewed. They were asked _________________(调查内容)。
Here are the results./That chart shows that________________(调查结果). There are some reasons for it.________________( 陈述原因)。
To conclude/In conclusions,__________________( 结论)。
（二）、活动报道模板
In order to______________(目的)，Our school organized_______________________(活动时间、地点)。
As scheduled，________lasts_______________,(活动延续时间),__________________(参与者)。First of all,____________(活动内容一)。Besides, ___________________(活动内容二)。At last __________________(活动内容三)。___________________________(结果).__________________(活动意义)。
Undoubtedly， this ____________ not only_________________, but also________________(评价或自己的感悟)。
三、常用句式：
（一）、 词汇:1.encourage sb. to do 2.take an active part in3.be required to do4.be good at5.have a better understanding of 6.attend 7.witness 8.draw one’s attention 9. manage to do sth. 10.measure 12.speak highly of 13. provide sth. for sb. petition→contest 15.have a good command of → have a good knowledge of 16.thrilled→excited 17.evident→obvious 18.flavor →help 19.raise →improve 20.theme →topic 21.situation= condition
（二）、写作套路
第一段：事件的目的、时间、地点和参与者。
1.To help...build...,the Students' Union of our school organized a volunteer activity last weekend. 为了帮助……建设……，我们学校的学生会上周末组织了一次志愿者活动。
2.In order to provide the students with a colorful school life，our school held...last week.为了给学生们提供丰富多彩的学校生活，我们学校上周举办了……
3.In an attempt to mourn sb/mark sth ,our school held an activity on...,which received great attention.为了悼念某人/纪念某事，我们学校在……（时间）举行了一次活动，受到了极大的关注。
4.Recently the issue/problem of...has been brought into focus/brought to public attention.最近……的问题成为焦点/引起公众注意。
5. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.
6. Last week witnessed the first Culture Festival themed “the Beauty of Chinese Traditional Culture” held by our school.
第二段：叙述事件的经过。
1.As scheduled, the activity started at 8 o’clock on Saturday morning and it lasted for three hours.
2.It was not until half past six in the evening that the activity came to an end.
3.The activity was so popular with the students and teachers that it attracted hundreds of them.
4.After a while, some students were so tired that they couldn’t keep up with their classmates.
5. After the heated competition, the student who gave superb performance was presented an award by our head teacher.
6. Looking at these pictures, all people realized the importance of ---protection and they all said they would do whatever they can to protect --- and to make the oceans cleaner.
7. Finally, some students shared their personal feelings and experiences in front of the class, which impressed us deeply.
8.At the beginning,a lecture related to...was arranged, after which our school teachers showed us how to...开始时，我们安排了一场关于……的讲座，之后我们学校的老师向我们展示了如何……。
9.It was a nice day. At 8：00 am，we gathered at... and set out for...in high spirits.天气很好。早上8点，我们在……集合，兴高采烈地动身去……。
10.At the beginning of the activity，a short film was shown，helping us students know...活动开始时，放映了一部短片，帮助我们学生了解……
11.The opening ceremony started at 9：00 am，and the schoolmaster delivered a speech about...开幕式上午9点开始，校长发表了关于…的演讲。
12.The activity was so fascinating that more than 500students signed up for it.活动如此具有吸引力以至于有500多名学生报名参加。
13.All the volunteers were divided into several groups and then they went to the nearby communities, where they helped the residents do... 所有志愿者被分成几个小组，然后他们去附近的社区，在那里帮助居民做……
14.About 2 hours later，we all reached... Bathed in sunshine，we cheered with joy.大约两小时后，我们都到了……。沐浴在阳光下，我们高兴地欢呼起来。
第三段：自己的感悟或评价或事情的意义。
1.The activity was indeed extremely successful, and the students involved realized that even small acts could make a difference to the earth.
2.In my opinion, the activity relieved our mental pressure. More importantly, it is a good chance to strengthen our will, which is beneficial to our life and study in the future.
3.Undoubtedly, this event can not only enrich our school life, but offer us opportunities to learn more daily practical skills!
4、The activity was highly spoken of because not only did it enrich our school life but also developed our feeling of love for English language.
5、Through the activity,not only did we master some basic and practical skills,but also our awareness of safety was raised.通过这次活动，我们不仅掌握了一些基本的实用技能，还增强了我们的安全意识
6、There is no denying that the activity benefits us a lot. It not only provides us with a chance to..., but allows us to... as well.不可否认，这次活动使我们受益匪浅。它不仅给我们提供了……的机会，而且让我们可以……
四、写作案例：
（一）【2020新高考卷I】假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1. 参加人员；2. 跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；3. 活动反响。
A Cross-Country Running Race
【目的】To enrich school life and build up our body, 【活动和参与者】last weekend our school organized a 5km cross-country running activity, in which both students and teachers participated.
【活动时间和地点】The route started from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. As scheduled, we started at 8 o’clock in the morning. The whole course was extremely challenging. 【过程】Every participant tried their best. To every participant’s surprise, however difficult it was, nobody gave up halfway. And when some fell behind, others would come and offer help immediately. Finally, all the runners held on to the finish line.
【反响和意义】The activity was highly thought of, because not only did it strengthen the friendship between us, but was also of great benefit to us, physically and mentally.
（二）【报道文化活动】假设你是李华，你们学校组织了一次校园文化节活动。请你就本次活动给校园英语报写一篇报道。谈谈你对此次活动的印象、感受和评价。内容包括: 1.活动时间、地点、参与者; 2.活动内容; 3.活动的意义。
【范文】A Campus Cultural Festival
【活动时间、地点、参与者】The school Cultural Festival was held by the Students Union in the school stadium on the afternoon of Last Friday.
【活动内容】There were various activities, such as singing English songs, History speeches, Math competition and so on. Hundreds of students took an active part it. 【评价】The activity made a huge success. Not only did it bring us great pleasure and promoted friendship, but also gave us relaxation and relieved stress from school work.
【意义】Both of participants and organizers hoped that such meaningful and colorful activity would be held in the future.
（2023年浙江省高考真题）
上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动的过程；
2. 收获与感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
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七、邀请信
第一段：（写作背景+写作目的）
1.写作背景：
I can't wait to inform you a _________ will be held in our school.我迫不及待地告诉你，我们学校要举办一个....。
(I'm delighted to inform you a__________ has been formed recently in our school.我很高兴地告诉你，我们学校最近成立了一个......
2写作目的：
(Knowing that you are keen on__________,) I'm delighted to invite you to participate in it.
知道你喜欢________，我很高兴邀请你参加这个活动。
2 (Learning that you are enthusiastic about __________, I'd like to invite you to join it.知道你喜欢____，我想邀请你加入这个俱冠部
“喜欢”的高级表达汇总：
be keen on
be crazy/enthusiastic about be fond of
be fascinated with
have a passion/affection/preference for show your keen/passionate interest in
第二段：介绍活动/俱乐部（目的/具体时间和地点/内容/意义/报名方式等）
1.活动的目的
The activity is to promote the traditional Chinese culture as well as improve our ability to appreciate art.这个活动是为了弘扬中国传统文化，提高我们欣赏艺术的能力。
The aim of the activity is to enrich our after-class这个活动的目的是丰富我们的课后生活，
2.具体时间和地点
As scheduled, the activity will take place in the school hall at 9 am next Sunday.
按计划，这个活动将于下周日上午九点在我们学校大厅举行。
2 The activity is scheduled to last approximately three hours, from 8 am to 11 am.
活动从上午8点到11 点，大约三小时。
3. 活动的内容
①To begin with,活动内容1
首先，活动内容1
②Additionally，活动内容2
其次，活动内容2，
4 活动的意义(可和活动内容放一起写，也可以分开写）
Not only can it help you gain some insight into traditional Chinese culture, but also it can enrich your experience. This is such a golden opportunity that it can't be missed.它不仅能让你更加了解中国传统文化，而且也能丰富你的经历。这种绝佳的机会，不容错过。
常用表达：
gain some insight into traditional Chinese culture 了解中国传统文化
have a better understanding of traditional Chinese culture了解中国传统文化
enrich your knowledge 丰富你的知识
enrich your experience 丰富你的经历
broaden your horizons/perspective 拓展你的视野
show your talent and ability 展示天赋和才能
show you fluent English 展示你流利的英语
make some new friends 交到新朋友
build up your body 强身健体
stay healthy and energetic 保持健康和活力
cultivate the team/sports spirit 培养团队运动精神
sharpen your swimming skills 提高你的游泳技能
reduce your stress 减轻压力
have a well-lived day 拥有充实的一天
5. 报名方式
If interested, register for it by July 10th. Don't miss the deadline.如果你感兴趣，请在6月10号前报名参加。千万不要错过截止日期。
第三段：期望
I'm convinced it will live up to your expectation.
我相信它将不会辜负你的期待。
2 I sincerely long for your attendance if you are available. Eagerly looking forward to your early reply.
如果你有时间，我希望你能来。热切期待你的早日回复。
3 I'd appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early convenience.
如果你能尽早确认参加，我会不胜感激。
I do hope you can take my invitation into serious consideration. Eagerly looking forward to your participation.
我希望你能把我的邀请认真考虑一下。热切期待你的参加。
5 Eagerly looking forward to your early reply to confirm your participation.
热切期待你尽早确认确认参加。
邀请信完整模板
Dear ，
Knowing that you have a passion for , I’m writing to invite you to take part in it. We would be honored to have you there with us.
Some details about this activity are as follows. First of all, it is scheduled to be held at school hall from 3 pm to 6 pm on next Sunday(活动地点和时间）. What’s more, (活动内容1). last but not least,_______ (活动内容2). It is obvious that this is a golden opportunity to show__________. Not only can it help you__________, but also it can enrich your experience.(活动的意义) If interested, register for it by this Friday. Don’t miss the deadline.
I would very appreciate if you could receive our invitation. Eagerly looking forward to your early replay.
Yous,
Lihua
练习
假如你是李华，你校跳绳俱乐部将举行活动， 想邀请新西兰交换生Mary 参加。现请你给她写一封邮件，包括以下内容：
活动时间和地点 2、活动内容(准备，奖励） 3、邀请参加
注意：词数80左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇: rope skipping跳绳
八、感谢信
【布局（思维导图】
段落要点 首段 表达感激之情，简单陈述的原因
正文 说明要感谢的事由或介绍一些的情况
结尾 再次表感谢及真诚祝福
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am eagerly writing to extend my heartfelt gratitude to you for ______(感谢的原因). Undoubtedly，had it not been your assistance in ______(对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been______ (没有对方帮助时的后果).
Whenever I encounter difficulties, you ______(具体事由和感想) .
Again, no words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. Many thanks to you. I wish ______(表达祝愿或者回报意愿).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【必备词句 】
Thank you so much for...非常感谢……
I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for...我由衷地感谢你……
I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude for... 写此信来表达我的诚挚谢意……
I'm grateful to you for...因你……，我深表谢意。
I truly appreciate your...我真诚感谢你……
Words fail to convey my gratitude to you. 我对你的感激之情难以用言语表达。
I take the opportunity to express to you my deep appreciation for... 我借此机会向你表达我深深的谢意……
It's kind and generous of you to do this for me and I do appreciate it more than I can say.你如此善良和慷慨地帮助我，我不胜感激。
【写作实操】
假定你是李华，现在是中山大学(Sun Yat-sen University)大一新生，高三时在李老师的帮助下，英语进步很大，为表示感谢，给李老师写一封感谢信。
要点如下：
1. 梦想成真，考上理想大学；
2. 因为李老师的辅导和鼓励，英语由差变好；
3. 对老师祝福。
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九、建议信
一.理论
1.建议类应用文构思：
①描述建议背景+建议概括语句
②具体建议2-3个——建议句式+建议效果：我建议你做...... ，这样就可以 ......
③总结语句＋交际式语句
不要用first，太僵硬。用to begin with, besides, what's more, last but not least, eventually
二.建议句式
1.特定句式
①I strongly suggest you do sth, which will help you do sth / the purpose of which is to do sth
②doing sth or doing sth will also help,the more ... ,the more .../is a good choice
③I would like to remind you that...（背景，问题描述）
④I think the best way of doing sth to do sth
⑤If you are unsure what to do铺垫，it is wise to do sth建议，and you 'll do sth 正面结果 or you 'll do sth 负面结果 重点在do sth
⑥sb should do sth so as to do sth
⑦you'd better (not) do sth
⑧祈使句 do sth
⑨If it is ... ,which I believe will do sth.正面
If it is not,I advise you to think twice.反面
2.表示建议的动词: advise/suggest/recommend that you do sth 情态动词：you should do sth /ought to do sth/can/mey (禁用must)
3.非谓语-动名词 /形式主语句式 doing sth is a good choice/a better way/ a valuable experience
4.形容词sth is adj. = sth is of+ n. 重要 important/ vital/ essential 必要 necessary 好处 beneficial
有用 useful/ meaningful/ valuable/ worthy
动词短语sth do sth
三.套话
1.开头套话：
①It's great to konw that you have begun to do sth/plan to do sth(背景)
②Knowing that you are going to do sth,I am writing to give you some suggestions.(背景+概括)
结尾套话：
①I wish you every success in doing sth!鼓励 If you have any further questions, feel free to ask.Good luck!
②I sincerely hope my suggestins are of great help to you. And don't hesitate to tell me if you have any problems. (总结+交际)
建议信完整模板：
Dear ,
Knowing that , I’m writing to give you some suggestions. My suggestions are as follows.
First of all, I feel that it would be useful if you stick to . What’s more, it is important to . Last but not least, it would be a better choice to .
I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you. Looking forward to your early replay.
Yours,
Lihua
练习：
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Steve被当地一所孔子学院录取，即将入学，不知道如何做学业方面的准备，请你给他写份邮件，内容包括：
表示祝贺 2、你的建议
注意：词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：孔子学院 the Confucius Institute
倡议信
考情分析
如何出题
①爱护环境：1.节约用水save water，2.节约食物save food，3.公车出行take bus，4.拼车car-pooling 5.low-carbon life 低碳生活
②身体健康（倡导吃早餐，倡导公共卫生等）；
③公益类（如：号召大家给希望工程捐款）
【布局布局思维导图】
【基本模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
It is common to see that ______(陈述现象). Not only ______, but also______ (现象的影响). I’m writing to call on us students to ______(呼吁) .
Firstly, we are supposed to ______(建议一). What’s more, it is suggested that ______(建议二). Eventually, whatever possible it’s good to______(建议三) .
Such measures can definitely make a marked improvement in______(在什么方面提高), we would like all of you to attach importance to______(主题)!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
(二) 首尾段亮点句背诵
开头：
With the development electric products, an increasing number of students tend to use electric products for taking notes, rather than writing on the paper. As a consequence, our handwriting is not as good as it was in the past. To solve the problem , we should do as follows.
2.It can be said with certainty that/No one can deny the fact that/There’s no denying that/There’s no doubt that/Undoubtedly,/Without doubt, the environment is getting polluted more and more seriously.In order to ease the present serious situation, we had better do as follows.
3.I’m writing to appeal to/ call on everyone to take an active part in building a beautiful campus. An attractive campus can make our learning pleasant , thus improving our grades.
易错点：appeal to sb to do sth = call on / upon sb to do sth 呼吁
结尾：
1.Such measures/action can surely improve air quality, so let’s take action right now! I’m convinced our efforts will eventually pay off.
2. Please keep in mind that a small action can make a huge difference. Let’s start with small things now to make our environment better and better
3. Like all great events, kindness begins slowly with every single act. Let it be yours!
4.Every effort counts/matters/makes a difference.Let’s make joint efforts to help those in need.
5.From my point of view/From my perspective, it is up to us ourselves to make a reasonable plan for our future.Hopefully, you can join in the action and create a green and harmonious environment .
6.This club is fairly suitable for sports lovers like you.If you have an attempt to come,please contact the students union to fill in some forms.Every afternoon is available.
易错点： take action (to do sth )
【写作实操技巧】
在日常生活中,浪费粮食的现象随处可见。假定你是校学生会的主席，请用英语为学校写一篇关于“节约粮食，杜绝浪费”的倡议书。要点包括：
1. 你身边浪费粮食的现象；
2. 倡议大家节约粮食；
3. 你对节约粮食的建议。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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道歉信
文体概述：道歉信是指因失约、损坏或弄丢别人东西, 给别人带来了麻烦或损失,给对方赔礼道歉时写的信件。
道歉信要写清楚三个方面：
1.道歉的原因
2.补救措施
3.再次道歉
常用语块：
1.make an apology to sb.向某人道歉
2.apologize to sb.for sth.因某事某人道歉
3.express one's heartfelt apology表达真诚的道歉
4.feeI indeed sorry for因某事感到十分歉意
5.be awfully sorry to do sth.感到十分抱歉
6.keep one's promise/words遵守诺言
7.have no choice 别无选择
8. cause sb. to much inconvenience: 给某人带来很大不便
开头句
背景：1. We have planned to do sth, but unfortunately, I can't keep my words.
2. l am awfully sorry to tell you that I have damaged/lost your...
目的：1. So l am writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.
2.As a result, I am writing to apologize to you for my carelessness.
篇中句
主题句：I am indeed sorry for what I did.
讲述原因：1. It is mainly because...... Therefore, I have no choice but to say sorry to you.
2.The reason why...is because...l understand it will certainly put you in a very bad mood.
补救措施: 1. By the way, is it possible for you and me to fix another time to do sth. How about... .
2.Anyway, I promise l will makeup for your loss./I will cover all the relevant costs.
3. You know I have no intention to break our appointment,so shall we make it next Sunday if you're available？您知道我并非有意爽约，如果您有空的话，我们下周日再约如何？
结尾句
再次道歉: 1.Once again, l am sorry for any inconvenience caused by me.
2.I sincerely hope that you can accept my apology again.
3. I'm in the sincere hope that you can think in my situation and accept my apology.我真诚地希望你能理解我的处境并且接受我的道歉。
请求原谅: I would appreciate it if you can understand my situation and forgive me.
盼望回复: l am looking forward to your reply.
(2016年全国3卷)
假定你是李华, 与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店, 因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件内容包括：
1.表示歉意
2说明原因
3另约时间。
十二、投诉信
【文章结构】
第一段：我要投诉这次服务。
第二段：写明投诉原因
第三段：阐述要求，并表示自己期望回复。
【万能句式】
一 篇首句
I am writing to you about... which I received/bought... 我写信给你是关于...我收到/买了...
I am going to complain about... 我要投诉......
I am writing to inform you that I am dissatisfied with your. 我写信通知你，我不满意你的.....
4. I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about.很抱歉，打扰你了，但我恐怕不得不向你投诉...
5. I wish to draw your attention to the problem that I bought.我想提醒您注意我购买......的问题
I am writing to make a complaint about…我写信是要投诉……
I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid I have to make a serious complaint.我很抱歉打扰你，但恐怕我必须提出严重的投诉。
二 篇中句
1. When I took... out of the bag and examined... closely, I found...当我拿…从包里出来检查……仔细地看，我发现……
When I unpacked...and tried to use it,it did not work.当我打开时……我试过了，但没有用。
I will appreciate it very much if you could...如果你能......的话，我将非常感激
I would be grateful if you could...如果你能......的话，我将感激不尽
I trust you will take my complaints seriously and...我相信你会认真对待我的投诉和......
三 篇尾句
I would be grateful if you could...如果你能……我会很感激。
I look forward to your dealing with these problems without delay.我期待着你毫不拖延地处理这些问题。
I hope that my problem will get your consideration.我希望我的问题能得到您的关注。
We do hope that you'll take measures to solve the problem.我们希望你们能采取措施解决这个问题。
5.　I will appreciate it very much if you could…如果你能……我将非常感激。
6. I must have you fully understand that without a satisfying solution, I will reserve my right to take legal action.
我必须让你完全明白，如果没有令人满意的解决方案，我将保留采取法律行动的权利。
【满分模板】
To whom it may concern.
I am________(自我介绍）. ②1 feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about________.
The reason for my dissatisfaction is________（总体介绍）. In the first place,________（抱怨的第一个方面）.In addition,________(抱怨的第二个方面).Under these circumstances, I find it________(感觉）to________(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).
I appreciate it very much if you could________（提出建议和请求），preferably________（进一步的要求),and I would like to have this matter settled by________(设定解决事情最后期限）Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
【真题演练】
假如你是李华，周末在书店购买了一本英文小说。回家后你发现书本有质量问题，与店员理论，其服务态度不好，因此你决定给书店经理写一封投诉信。内容包括：
1. 反映存在问题；2. 提出解决方案。
注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Manager,
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（2022年1月浙江卷）
假如你是中学生李华，最近在某个购物网站上购买了一双运动鞋，但到货后发现了一些问题，请给该网站写一封投诉信，投诉信内容如下表：
要点：1.写信目的；
2. 不满之处；
3. 表达期望（重新邮寄或退款）。
注意:1.书信内容包括以上要点；
2.词数80左右（书信格式已给出，不计入总词数）；
3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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2.（2022年全国甲卷书面表达）
假设你是李华，最近你在使用某中学生英文报的过程中发现了一些问题。请你用英语给该报美籍负责人Smith写一封投诉信，内容包括：
1.写信的目的；
2.投诉的问题（有语法与拼写错误、一些阅读材料陈旧、纸张质量不如以前）；
3.希望得到的结果。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：投诉 complain
Dear Mr. Smith,
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十三、慰问信
文体概述
慰问信是指在日常学习和生活中，当对方发生了一些不好的事，表达慰问的信件。通常包括以下内容：介绍自己——引出事实——表达慰问和鼓励——表达愿望和祝福
话题句型
⊙开头引人入胜⊙
I’m deeply sorry to hear that... I’m filled with deep sorrow. Please convey my deepest sympathy to...
听到…，我深感难过。我心中充满悲伤，请向…转达我最深切的慰问。
2 I just can’t tell how sorry I was to learn that you didn’t ...and that you are very worried about... I quite understand how you feel now.
听到你没能………和你对……很担心，我说不出我有多难过。我非常理解你现在的感受。
3. When hearing that ... I feel shocked and sorry
听到……时，我感到十分震惊和难过。
◇篇中精编细织◇
1.Thinking about your present situation, we can’t wait to spare no efforts to help you
考虑到你目前的处境，我们迫不及待想不遗余力地帮你。
2. At this moment, you’ re supposed to make efforts to...so that you can attempt to make up for
此刻，你应该努力...以便你可以尝试弥补…
Besides, we express our sincere care for you, expecting that we can assist you in getting through the difficulty
另外，我们对你表示诚挚的关心，也希望我们能帮你渡过难关。
◇收尾简练到位◇
1. I hope that by the time this letter reaches you, you’ll be feeling much better
希望在收到这封信的时候，你能感觉好
2. Anyway, if you have any other difficulties, please don’t hesitate to tell me in time and I’ll spare no efforts to help you.
无论如何，如果你有任何问题，请及时告诉我。我会尽全力去帮助你。
Please accept my deepest sympathy again and I would like to send you my best wishes for your speedy recovery
请再次接受我最深切的慰问，我謹向您致以最美好的祝愿，祝您早日康复。
写作模板：
Dear ______ (称谓)
Words fail me to convey my worry when I heard that ______(写信原由). I am writing to extend sincere pity and care for you (I hope that the unexpected failure/trouble won’t let you down).
You must ______(表达对遭遇的理解). However，if you were brave enough not to ______(悲观失望等), which is admirable. Anyway，It can’t be better if you can lift your spirits to face up to the result. Plus, ______(提供建议或帮助) . Remember, I won’t be far away.
I hope you can find my encouragement helpful（Hope you can have your troubles removed soon）.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
练习：
假定你是李华，你的同班同学王刚的家乡遭受台风(Typhoon Mujigae)的袭击，洪水毁坏了家园。你作为班长给他写一封信，内容如下：1. 表示安慰和关心；2. 提供帮助。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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祝贺信
日常生活中，无论是亲朋好友毕业、晋升、获奖、开业，还是订婚、结婚、生日，都需要写上一封信向对方表示祝贺。信中应表示为对方而高兴。祝贺信应当充满真诚和热情，收信人读后会感到喜悦和振奋。祝贺信既可以正式写，也可以随便写，具体视场合而定。对不太熟悉的朋友适合正式写，以表示礼貌和尊重；对熟悉的朋友则可以随便一些。但无论采用哪种方式，祝贺信必须表达由衷的感情，而且写信要及时。
1. 布局思维导图
开头常用句式
It was exciting news for me to learn of …
Please accept my sincere/hearty/warm congratulations on …
It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations on …
I was delighted to learn of your success /achievements in …
I am really happy to learn that you have been elected…
结尾常用句式
Wish you good luck!
We wish to share your honor and joy.
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.
May all go wonderfully in your new post!
May every happiness be yours!
All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future/successful career!
May each succeeding year bring you great happiness and prosperity.
Every good wish to you for much health, happiness, and prosperity!
模板①
Dear_______, (1)I have learned with delight that you______. (2)I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on __ __. (3)You must be very proud of your ______. (4)And I feel very happy for you. (5)____ _ is quite exciting news! (6)You are really__ . (7)I know this is surely owing to__ _ . (8)It is a reward you deserve for your __ . (9)With your___ __, I am sure that you will be a success in whatever you undertake. (10)Kindly let me know when you____ . (11) I hope . (12)My best wishes for your further success. Sincerely Yours, Li Ming (1)获悉值得祝贺的消息，说出祝贺事由 (2)表达祝贺 (3)描述对方的心情 (4)表达自己的心情 (5)被祝贺人所取得的成绩 (6)对对方的赞美 (7)对方取得成绩的原因 (8)对对方取得成绩的肯定，说出被祝贺人的优点 (9) 被祝贺人的优秀品质，表达对对方的祝福 (10)咨询对方的情况和时间 (11)表达愿望 (12)表达自己真诚的祝福
模板②
Dear ______ ,
I have learned with delight that you ______（祝贺事由）. I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______. You must be ______. And I feel very happy for you. ______（所取得的成绩）is quite exciting news! I know this is surely owing to ______（被祝贺人过去的努力）.It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______（被祝贺人的优点）. Kindly let me know when you ______（咨询对方何时有空）.
I hope ______（表达自己的愿望）.
My best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
模板③
Dear_____________,
Congratulations on your _______ . I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you for your achievement. I understand for sure that it is your hard work / your excellent ability that leads you to the current success. This new position, on the other hand, adds a new dimension to your life and is bound to ________ . What’s more, I also believe that .
May all goes beautifully in your new post!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
模板④
Dear_____________,
Good news travels fast! It was delightful for me to hear that ______________ . Please accept my sincere congratulations to your ___________. I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I know more than anyone else how much effort you have put in. Now you prove to me a matured and well-rounded________ in every respect. Judging from your current success / achievement, I am confident that in the future ___________ .
May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
模板⑤
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am writing to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______(祝贺事由). As ______(身份关系), I just want you to know how delighted I was when______(祝贺事由) .
For these years, you ______(被祝贺人过去的经历). Not only did/have/were______(被祝贺人的努力), but also______(被祝贺人的努力). It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______(被祝贺人的优点) .
All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
练习：
假设你是李华，来自美国的交流生Peter 在你班学习半年，与你成为好朋友。目前，他即将完成学成回国，请你用英语给他写一篇临别留言。要点包括：
1.祝贺Peter学习汉语取得的成绩；
2. 取得成绩的原因；
3. 你们的友谊和对他的祝愿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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十五、求助信
①第一种类型：请求提供信息
如：“我”要去海外求学，请求对方提供相关学校的学费、住宿等信息。这种请求信也叫“咨询信”，
【内容分析】
a.客观描述（靠翻译）
b.喜爱/推荐原因
重点准备：中国文化类，如节日，中国结，唐诗等中国元素相关的内容。
②第二种类型：请求对方付出建议或者某种行为（脑力或体力）
如：“我”要参加竞赛，请对方给“我”建议；
“我”是校报编辑，请求对方写文章。此种请求信也叫“约稿信”。
约稿信的变体：“我”是主办方代表，请求对方为某次展览提供摄影或绘画作品。
2. 布局思维导图
3. 写作模板
模板①
Dear ______ ,
I am writing to formally request to ______（请求的内容）.The reason for _____________is that_____________（给出原因）. I___________ , so I _____________（给出细节）.I would also like to request ___________（提出进一步的要求）. I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at __________（电话号码）.
I look forward to a favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
模板②
Dear________,
My name is _______________(自我介绍). I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met difficulty in _______________(求助内容). First, I find ___________(困难1). Besides, ________(困难2). What’s more, __________(困难3).
Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to ____________(委婉提出请求)？In the meanwhile, I beg you to (请求内容) so that ___________(请求目的). Also, I would like you to (请求内容).
I’m sure that I can make great progress in _____________(表达期待).
Yours,
Li Hua
模板③
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am ______(自我介绍) . I am writing to seek for your help in______(写信目的).
Now, I struggle a lot in ______(遇到的困难). I’ve found that ______(描述自己的困难). For one thing, ______(困难一). For another, ______(困难二).
Therefore, could you please put forward some practical suggestions I am convinced that I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
I would appreciate it if you could respond at your earliest convenience.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【必背词句】
常用句型：
（做某事有困难）
1.I have trouble in doing sth.
2.I find it extremely hard for me to do sth. 3.Doing sth is another terrible headache for me.
常见困难：
【生活方面】
与人相处
get along well with my classmates/ the new teacher / my parents.
和我的同新老师/父母相处
把握时间
arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things.
安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情
明确目标
know the purpose of my life and the destination of my future in order to passionately live a purpose-driven life everyday.
知道我生命的目的和未来的目标，以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活
【学习方面】
不懂语法
have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them into use in my speaking and writing.
进步太慢
find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a long time.
精力有限
can’t be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every moment meaningful and splendid.
4. 写作实操技巧
假设你是高三学生李华，今年的高考阅读量加大，而你的阅读能力较差，因此学习的压力越来越大。请你根据你下内容向你的前外教Mr Jackson 求助。希望得到他的帮助。
注意：词数 80 左右，可合理添加细节。
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2020全国III）
假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；2. 指导内容；3. 商定时间地点。

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