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(共21张PPT)
2023合肥一模英语
读后续写
Plot Creating
先读P1P2首句
The next day the three men brought their instruments to the busy street corner.
Will was finally admitted to hospital three months later.
读原文，划线索
collect/raise money to cover Will's heart surgery
old and wrinkled;limited influence
sing in sincerity; the video is unloaded to the Internet
recovered; showed gratitude;meet in the gabage/street to practice/perform
定第一段结尾句
The next day the three men brought their instruments to the busy street corner.
Will was finally admitted to hospital three months later.
第一段结尾句：历时近三个月,筹够足够钱.
定第一段首句
方法一：衔接原文最后一段(Money isn't an issue,”Sam said as an idea occurred to him).
解释想法：
Their intention/idea is that they can encourage donations through their band performance.
定第一段首句
方法二：接心理描写
害怕、担忧、紧张：
With their palms sweating and hearts pounding, they stood frozen for fear of getting cold response.
They feel so stressed because it's been more than 40 years since they performed in front of a huge audience.
用原文句式
定第一段首句
方法三：接动作
竖牌，克服紧张，开始演奏：
Having put up a sign “Please save Will, our fourth band member” , the three men cheered each other on and started their performance.
方法四：动作+心理
They stood in front of the passing crowd, having butterflies in their stomaches for fear of making a mess. But at the thought of the poor Will, their nervousness melted away.
推动情节发展
路人反应 (感动，掏钱）----拍视频，上传到网上-----得到更多捐款
The stirring music flowed in the air, quickly attracting many passers-by to pause, watch and appreciate. Touched by their story, many people made generous donations. One audience even shot their marvelous performance and uploaded it to the website, pushing the fundraising campaigh to a new peak.
With three month's/constant/joint efforts,they finally collected enough money to cover the surgery.
After that, donations from all sides came pouring in, successfully reaching $ 15000.
Finally, the three men collected the money needed after adding their own savings,remitting it to Jenny together with their best wishes.
第一段结尾句：历时近三个月,筹够足够钱.
第二段 情节构思
康复 ---感动，感激--约定
The operation went successfully and Will soon regained consciousness. Seeing his three friends awaiting beside his sickbed, Will's eyes misted over,choking out“Thank you”.Sam immediately reached out to grab Will's hands, saying they have got more-vitality. Together, they promised to continue their music rehearsal and set a date for the next gathering.
打造结尾
1. 回忆体
①The +adj.+experience still lingered in one's mind. / was engraved in my mind.
The experience made me realize....
② Looking back on the story, sb still feel.../a strong sense of....,( thinking of the saying that ....)
2. 悟道理
From then on,sb always do sth, hoping to ....
The person who did sth will stick with me, inspiring me to ...
名言。Sb felt it deep in his/her heart.
3 写景式
①sb do sth, with +wind/air/sunlight +非谓语+人身体部位+副词
with the wind blowing sb's hair and whipping sb's face
with the light air whispering in sb's ears.
with the sun/sunlight/wind greeting gently and warmly
② Feeling+the+adj+wind+非谓语，sb do sth
eg. Feeling the warm sunlight breaking through the window, the whole family hugged in happiness.
第二段 写结尾
方法一：回忆体
Soon arrives another appointment at the dusty old garage. Different from the last time,Will appeared with a bright face. Together, they played the drums, danced to the rhythm and sang to their hearts' content, as if they were back to the golden days when they were 18 years old. It was yesterday once more.
方法二：悟道理
The four men had deep insights into the saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
It turned out that friendship can stand the test of time.
方法三：写景式
The sunlight flooded into the garage and laid on their wrinkled but bright faces. Eyes glittering with excitement, Will performed the most enthusiastically. Drumstick in hand, he laughed,“my heart is beating louder than the drum.”

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