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Unit12 What did you do last weekend
Section B Writing
Last Sunday, Li Hua’s parents weren’t at home. She looked after(照顾) her 5-year-old sister all day. She wrote a passage to record(记录) what she did.
Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister at home.
In the morning, I told her many funny and interesting stories. Then we sang and played the guitar together. I also taught her some simple English words and she learned well. At noon, I cooked noodles with tomatoes and eggs. She said the noodles were so delicious that she ate them all. In the afternoon, we had a good time playing games. It was very relaxing.
All in all, I felt a little tired, but I was happy to spend a nice day with my sister.
Q1: What’s the tense of this passage
Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister at home.
In the morning, I told her many funny and interesting stories. Then we sang and played the guitar together. I also taught her some simple English words and she learned well. At noon, I cooked noodles with tomatoes and eggs. She said the noodles were so delicious that she ate them all. In the afternoon, we had a good time playing games. It was very relaxing.
All in all, I felt a little tired, but I was happy to spend a nice day with my sister.
Q2: How many paragraphs are there
Para1:引出主题，照顾妹妹
Para2: 描述上中下午的具体活动
Part3: 表达感受
In the morning, I told her many funny and interesting stories. Then we sang and played the guitar together. I also taught her some simple English words and she learned well. At noon, I cooked noodles with tomatoes and eggs. She said the noodles were so delicious that she ate them all. In the afternoon, we had a good time playing games. It was very relaxing.
Q3: Which para. is the most important
What did Li Hua do in the morning
What did Li Hua do at noon
What did Li Hua do in the afternoon
These activities are written in the order of_______
time
How does Li Hua enrich her writing (如何丰富写作)
1.善用形容词
2.扩结果
3.扩结果(so..that)
4.善用短语have a good time/have fun doing
5扩感受
Let’s practice!
Fill in the blanks.
did my homework
helped my mom
went to a library
played soccer
watched TV
structure (结构）
order (顺序）
tense (时态）
enrich (丰富）
扩感受
扩例子
Translate the sentences.
善用形容词
1. 我帮我外祖父母喂羊。
I helped my grandparents feed lovey sheep.
善用短语
2.我和爸爸喜欢放风筝。
My father and I enjoy flying a kite.
My father and I are fond of flying a kite.
My father and I are crazy about flying a kite.
My father and I had fun flying a kite.
Translate the sentences.
扩结果、感受
3. 我们摘了苹果和梨。
We picked apples and pears.
The apples were so delicious that we ate a lot of them.
The apples were very delicious, so we ate a lot of them
4.我和妈妈打了羽毛球。
扩时间、感受
I played badminton with my mom for 2 hours.
It was relaxing.
扩结果
I played badminton with my mom for 2 hours.
My mom said it was good for our health.
Writing Task:
Outline & Start your writing
善用形容词
善用短语
扩感受
扩结果
Sample:
Last Saturday, my parents took me to visit my grandparents in a small village. We got there fast by car.
In the morning, I helped my grandparents feed the lovely sheep first. Then, my father and I flew a kite in the field and we had so much fun. At noon, we came back to our grandparents’ home and had a good lunch. In the afternoon, we picked apples and pears. The apples were so delicious that we ate lots of them. Then, I played badminton with my mom for 2 hours. It was relaxing.
All in all, I felt a little tired, but I spent a nice day in the village.
Self Check
Complete the phrases. Then use some of them in the past forms to write a story.
_______ out with friends _______ for a walk _______ apples _______ photos fly a _______
milk a _______
camp _______ the lake
study _______ a test
for
go
go
pick
take
kite
cow
by
完成短语。然后用其中一些单词的过去式来写一个故事。
Complete the conversation.
A：I had a school trip last week.
B：Really. ___________________(go)
A：I visited the fire station.
B：_____________________(go with)
A：I went with my classmates.
Where did you go
Who did you go with
B：__________________ (do)
A：We watched the firefighters work.
What an interesting job they have!
B：_____________________ (learn anything)？
A：Sure. We learned how to call the fire station and what to do when there is a fire.
Did you learn anything
What did you do
以及发生火灾时该怎么办。
我们观看了消防队员工作.
他们的工作多有趣啊！
我们学到了如何给消防局打电话
Thank you!

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