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选择性必修第四册unit3作文训练
以海洋探索为话题的写作
写作题目
最近,你班同学就“探索海洋是否值得”这一话题展开了一场讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息,用英语写一篇日记记录讨论的情况,并谈谈自己的看法。
30%的同学认为 70%的同学认为 你的 观点
1.不值得探索 2.会对海洋造成污染 3.一些人残忍猎杀一些海洋动物,导致它们灭绝 1.值得探索 2.为了更好地了解我们的星球,必须进行海洋探索 3.海洋拥有丰富的资源,有助于解决能源短缺问题 ……
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Recently our class had a heated discussion on whether the sea is worth exploring. Students hold different ideas about it.
思路点拨
主题 探索海洋是否值得 体裁 应用文
人称 第一人称、第三人称 时态 以一般现 在时为主
布局 首段:点明主题; 中段:反对方观点及支持方观点; 尾段:个人观点。
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1.　　　　 v.猎杀
2.　　　　 adj.海的;海产的;海生的
3.　　　　　　残忍地
4.　　　　　　为了……的利益
5.　　　　 adv.与此同时;(比较两方面)对比之下
6.　　　　 vt.开发;利用;剥削
答案　1.hunt　2.marine　3.without mercy
4.for the benefit of　5.meanwhile　6.exploit
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
(1)我们中百分之三十的人认为海洋探索是不值得的。
30% of us think 　　　　 　　　　is not worthwhile.
(2)他们认为这样会污染海洋。
They 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　that it will pollute the sea.
(3)一些人残忍地猎杀海洋动物,导致它们灭绝。
Some people 　　　　 　　　　animals 　　　　 　　　　and cause them to die out.
(4)然而,我们中百分之七十的人认为海洋值得探索,这对人类有好处。
However, 70% of us think the sea is 　　　　 　　　　, which is 　　　　 　　　　human beings.
(5)为了更好地了解我们的星球,我们必须探索海洋。
　　　　 　　　　 　　　　our planet, we must explore the sea.(6)而且,海洋富有各种资源。
Moreover, the sea is abundant in 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　resources.
(7)这使我们能够解决能源短缺问题。
This enables us 　　　　 　　　　the problem of energy shortages.
(8)同时,我们应合理地开发海洋。
Meanwhile, we 　　　　 　　　　the sea properly.
答案　(1)sea exploration　(2)hold the opinion　(3)hunt marine;without mercy　(4)worth exploring;beneficial to　(5)To better understand　(6)a variety of　(7)to solve　(8)should exploit
2.句式升级
(9)用现在分词合并句(1)和句(2)
(10)用现在分词改写句(3)
(11)用定语从句合并句(6)和句(7)
答案　(9)30% of us think sea exploration is not worthwhile, holding the opinion that it will pollute the sea.
(10)Some people hunt marine animals without mercy, causing them to die out.
(11)Moreover, the sea is abundant in a variety of resources, which enables us to solve the problem of energy shortages.
参考范文
Recently our class had a heated discussion on whether the sea is worth exploring. Students hold different ideas about it.
30% of us think sea exploration is not worthwhile,holding the opinion that it will pollute the sea. Some people hunt marine animals without mercy, causing them to die out. However, 70% of us think the sea is worth exploring, which is beneficial to human beings. To better understand our planet, we must explore the sea. Moreover, the sea is abundant in a variety of resources, which enables us to solve the problem of energy shortages.
As far as I am concerned, it's worthwhile to explore the sea for the benefit of future generations. Meanwhile, we should exploit the sea properly.
写作积累
1.引出讨论话题
(1)Recently...had a heated discussion about whether...or not.
(2)People hold different opinions about...
2.对比双方观点及陈述理由
(1)表达支持的:
①Some are in favour of it.(be for/approve of/agree with/support...)
②There are many advantages of...
③...play an important part in...
④be of vital significance
⑤benefit a lot from...
(2)表达反对的:
①Others are against...
②Some hold the different view that...
③There are also some disadvantages of...
3.表明作者的看法及理由:
(1)In my opinion/In my view/Personally, I think...
(2)Taking everything into consideration, we should make good use of...
(3)Only in this way can we...
(4)The reasons for that are as follows...
概要写作
写作题目
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Have you ever felt that you are training for hours on end but not getting the results you are hoping for If you mostly feel that way, then you should know the training's quality is more important than its length in terms of improving your abilities. Practicing deliberately can transform the way you train, thus sharpening your skills.
Practicing deliberately is practicing with intention and attention, as opposed to a mindless and unintentional way of just repeating the same things over and over again, leading to the same results on many occasions. If we want to see a real improvement, especially in our areas of weakness, we should be more mindful of how we train. Practicing deliberately is practicing purposefully and systematically, meaning that staying focused, even for a short period, is an essential aspect of the training. As we've mentioned before, it's not about how long you can practice; it's merely about the quality of the training, the consistency of your training, and your ability to stay on a task.
So how can we practice more deliberately Firstly, feedback is vital, whether it is self feedback or from someone else. Examining and analyzing your performance is crucial for your improvement. Secondly, set appropriate goals, not too high as we have to keep ourselves motivated, yet not too low as we must consistently expand our comfort zone. For example, if you think your boxing game is weak, then invest your time there. Lastly, start practicing slowly and then pick up the pace. Starting slowly and building good foundations will help you to improve in practically every aspect. If you want to build good foundations and improve muscle memory, you should go slow. When going slow, we have a chance to analyze and process our movements.
In conclusion, deliberate practice is one of the most useful techniques you can apply to improve your skills. Following the guidelines above will help you get the most out of your practice time. More than anything, the quality of your efforts and the perseverance (坚持不懈) of your actions will determine how well you will do.
文本分析
一、语篇解读
主题语境:人与自我——学习方法;
语篇类型:说明文;
文章大意:刻意练习可以改变你的训练方式,从而提高你的技能。
二、段落主题
本文首先提出问题,接着分析、解决问题,结构明确,要点清晰。全文共分四段。每段主旨如下:
第一段:Practicing deliberately can transform the way you train, thus sharpening your skills.
第二段: Practicing deliberately is practicing with intention and attention, as opposed to a mindless and unintentional way of just repeating the same things over and over again, leading to the same results on many occasions.
第三段:So how can we practice more deliberately Firstly, feedback is vital. Secondly, set appropriate goals. Lastly, start practicing slowly and then pick up the pace.
第四段:More than anything, the quality of your efforts and the perseverance of your actions will determine how well you will do.
筛选、整合信息、转换表达
要点1:第一段最后一句“Practicing deliberately can transform the way you train, thus sharpening your skills.”为该段主题句,可概括为要点1。整合该段内容可知,刻意练习可以改变你的训练方式,从而提高你的技能,可提炼概括为Deliberate practice improves the quality of your training, and thus 　　　　　　　　　　　　　.
要点2:第二段第一句“Practicing deliberately is practicing with intention and attention, as opposed to a mindless and unintentional way of just repeating the same things over and over again, leading to the same results on many occasions.”为该段主题句,可概括为要点 2。整合该段内容可知,刻意练习的定义是有意识地、用心地练习,这要求你保持目的明确和专注(mindless and unintentional的反面),可提炼概括为It is defined as practicing intentionally and attentively, which requires you to 　　　　　　　　　　　　　.
要点3:第三段中的“So how can we practice more deliberately Firstly, feedback is vital... Secondly, set appropriate goals... Lastly, start practicing slowly and then pick up the pace.”为该段主题句,可概括为要点3。整合该段内容可知,刻意练习有三种策略,比如获得反馈、设定适当的目标和慢慢开始然后加快速度,可提炼概括为There're 　　　　　to master it:gaining feedback, 　　　　　　　　　　　, and starting slowly and then speeding up.
要点4:第四段主题句为该段最后一句“More than anything, the quality of your efforts and the perseverance of your actions will determine how well you will do.”,可概括为要点4。说明如果你努力并坚持下去,你会得到一个好结果。该要点总结前面的要点1、2、3,可利用过渡词提炼概括为　　　　　　　　/In short/In summary/In brief, you will achieve a good result if you endeavor and stick to it.
答案　要点1:develops your skills
要点2:remain purposeful and concentrated
要点3:three strategies; setting a proper target
要点4:In a word
参考范文
Deliberate practice improves the quality of your training, and thus develops your skills. (要点1) It is defined as practicing intentionally and attentively, which requires you to remain purposeful and concentrated. (要点2) There're three strategies to master it: gaining feedback, setting a proper target, and starting slowly and then speeding up. (要点3) In a word, you will achieve a good result if you endeavor and stick to it. (要点4)
写作积累
概要写作常用语
词汇 especially adv.特别;尤其 very adv.非常,很 indeed adv.真正地;的确,确实 particularly adv.特别;尤其 even adv.甚至;甚至更;其实 good adj.相当大的,相当多的 single adj.仅有一个的
短语 at (the) least 至少 at (the) most至多;不超过 not at all (用于否定)一点也不 above all首先;尤其是;最重要的是 in particular特别;尤其 or rather更确切地说 worse still/to make matters worse 更糟的是　good and完全,彻底 on the contrary 正相反 in contrast to和……形成对比 in fact/as a matter of fact 其实;事实上;实际上;确切地说 to sum up 概括起来说 in short/in a word/in brief/in summary 总之;简言之 on the whole大体上说 in conclusion最后 what's more 而且;更重要的是
句式 结构 It is/was+被强调部分+that/who...(强调句型:强调主语、宾语或状语) do/does/did+动词原形 (强调谓语) not only...but also...不仅……而且…… in order that.../so that...为了…… What...is/was... ……的是…… In no case/Under no circumstances should you...你无论如何都不……(否定词置于句首时用部分倒装)

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