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(共31张PPT)
Continuation writing
2）How to create a new plot
1）How to read
Teaching stages :
5）Appreciation
3）How to write well
4）Writing
the story of me and a calf
for the language
Stage 1 How to read
for two lines
Read
Shallowly
/deep
Plot(情节) line
emotional (情感) line
for the theme
How to read deep
1.In order of time/space to get the development of the story
2.Mark the emotional words and action
description to get the emotional line
_______________
in early spring
from my ______ to a camping site
I, Tiny, Dad
step 1—Read for the plot line .
Tip 1：The continuation writing must be consistent with(保持一致)the original characters (人物）, place, and time.
01
02
03
Who
When
Where
home
Task :Find out the 4 elements of the story and figure out the plot .
_______________________
04
What
Take a ____________ （in your own words）
short trip
Step 2—Read for the emotional line:
Task 1: underline the characters’ actions and infer their feelings.
mixed up.. used ...
wet…put …in…
sniffed, licked ,sucked
lifted, moved around
Para 2 I
Para 2 calf
Para 4 Dad
Tip 2：The continuation writing must be consistent with(保持一致)the original passage’s emotional line.
affectionate ( 疼爱的） romantic thoughtful
be attached to(依恋的） patient encouraging
be fond of uninterested caring afraid
Task 2: read out the words showing their feelings.
love between
father and me
Love between the calf and me
love between
father and the calf
(A)
(B)
(C)
Step 3—Read for the theme .
love between the calf and me
Tip 3：The theme should go through the continuation writing .
Step 4—Read for the language .
figure of speech(修辞手法）: simile(明喻）
(Para. 2) _________________________________________________________
sentence appreciation
She started sucking them like there was no tomorrow.
doing作状语 (Para. 5)：
______________________________________________________________
I lifted her up as far as I could, burying my nose in her soft hair
Tip 4：The continuation writing should be consistent with(保持一致)the original passage’s language characteristic (语言特色） .
Stage 2 : How to create a story plot
A story plot running mode
(故事情节运行模式）
emotional line
go camping
climax
(main conflict)
Tip 5: When there is a conflict, solve it.
When there is no conflict, make it up and solve it.
So what is the main problem/conflict to settle
leave Tiny
at home
take Tiny
to camp
Then we went on vacation camping, which I’d been expecting for so long.
the two lines
the first given sentence
the first sentence in Para.1
Paragraph 1:
Then we went on vacation camping, which I’d been expecting
for so long. 1) I had to leave Tiny at home.
Paragraph 2:
I arrived home at last .
I wanted to __________.
go home
the second given sentence
the key words
the last sentence in Para.1
STEP 3
I wanted to go home.
I had to leave Tiny at home .
How to create the middle part in Para 1
create the plots in Para. 1
Step 3
infer new plot based on a mind map
actions
predictions
emotions
ending1
language features
characters
How did the I feel/think？
Who is the main character in this paragraph
What did father and I do on camping
Is there dialogue or inner thoughts(独白)？
How did we get home
Father and I
We arrived at..I saw/smelt/felt
I jumped up and down out of excitement and dad couldn’t help but sing his favorite song.
Father made some meal for me.
At first,I was happy/excited.
And then I started to miss/worry Tiny.
“ How is Tiny Is she alright Is she hungry”
“Can we go back home dad I’m just so worried about Tiny and I miss her so much.”
Looking at my eyes, dad had no choice but to agree.
We got our belongings and started to travel back by a car.
Para 2 I arrived at home at last.
1. Where did I go after I arrived
2. What did I see and what did I do
3. What did Tiny do and
how did she feel on seeing me
4. How did I feel
Para. 2: I arrived home at last !
actions
predictions
emotions
ending
characters
How did they feel/think？
Who are the main characters in this paragraph
What did they do next
Is there any conversation between them
positive and closely connected with the theme
language features
How to create a story plot
4 W
+
1 H
+
details
What did I see(所见)
What did I hear(所听)
What did I do(所做)
What did I think of(所思)
How did I feel(所感)
G----N
Show, don’t tell!
Stage 3: How to write well
action
couldn’t help missing Tiny
be eager to see Tiny immediately
1)tears welling up in my eyes
2) tears running/rolling/streaming
down my cheeks
3)tears blurring/clouding my eyes
Upon seeing many lovely calves and sheep eating grass,
I ____________________________(想念Tiny),
_______________________________(表达哭）.
couldn’t help missing Tiny
tears welling up in my eyes
Show, don’t tell
tears “sadness”
see many lovely
calves and sheep
how to express “sadness ” （独立主格结构）
action How to express “happiness”
1.hug my father tightly/firmly
2.kiss my father gently
3.throw myself into his arms
Show, don’t tell
1） jumped up and down with excitement
2） wore a smiling smile on my face
couldn’t help but grin from ear to ear
(忍不住咧开嘴笑了）
jumped up and down with excitement
hugging my father tightly
Agree to go home
At the thought of going home immediately to see Tiny ,
I ________________________________（表达高兴）,
__________________________(doing 做状语）.
leave Tiny
at home
arrive at
a grassland
see calves
and sheep
agree to
give up camping
go home
immediately
Make a mind map
rush to Dad
asking/saying…
word bank: set off, after a long time/after what seemed a century,
can’t help doing, in surprise/with his mouth wide open, hesitate
Paragraph 1:
Then we went on vacation camping , which I'd been expecting for so long. _______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Stage 4: Writing
We just enjoyed the piece of comfort with a light breeze blowing.
Drowned in the pleasant floral fragrance, we lingered there.
Then we went on vacation camping, which I’d been expecting for so long. 1. Considering/Thinking that we had a long distance to cover and it was inconvenient to take Tiny, we had no alternative but to leave her at home. 2. When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin.（沐浴在阳光下‘琥珀色的阳光亲吻着全身的肌肤）3. Upon seeing many lovely calves and sheep eating green grass, I couldn’t help missing Tiny. 4. Quickly, I ran to Dad saying “How about going home now ” “Crazy idea!”answered Dad. 5. After many rounds of arguments with Dad, Dad agreed to give up camping.
I arrived home at last! 1. Rushing into the barn where I saw Tiny, slightly thinner. I couldn’t wait to feed her. 2. I hugged her tightly, like there was no tomorrow. 3. As usual, Tiny started sucking my fingers, tears welling up in her eyes. 4. What a delightful thing it was to have such a friend, who can always cheer me up in my depressed times.

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