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7B U5 写作讲解
句型积累，直击高分5
牛津译林七年级下册
写作（满分20分）
假设你叫李明，上周六上午，你和朋友张军一起去动物园，你们玩得很开心。在回家的途中，你听到灌木丛中有低语声，但是里面没有人。你感到很害怕，便把情况告诉了张军。然后，你们一起在灌木丛中搜寻。不久，你们找到了一只小狗…
请你根据以上信息写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
要求：
1.条理清楚，语句通顺；
2.补充省略号之后的内容，可适当发挥。
7B U2 写作讲解
句型积累，直击高分3
审题 体裁 记叙文 话题 介绍事件
时态 过去时 人称 第一人称
段落 布局 开篇交代事件时间、地点、人物等记叙文基础要素（第一段） ； 具体描述事件（第二段）； 表达喜悦的心情和感想（第三段）。
基础范文
Last Saturday morning,I went to the zoo with my friend Zhang Jun.We had a good time there.
On the way home,I heard a whisper from the bushes,but there was nobody there.I was afraid and told Zhang Jun about it.Then,we searched the bushes carefully.Soon,we were surprised to find a little dog there.It was lying in the bushes and looked very weak.We picked up the dog and took it to the animalcentre.
We were both happy to help the little dog.
修改范文
Last Saturday morning,I went to the zoo with my friend Zhang Jun.We had a good time there.
高分亮点：
插入with引导的状语从句
With different kinds of cute animals，the zoo is a great place to relax and get close to the nature。
修改范文
On the way home,I heard a whisper from the bushes,but there was nobody there.I was afraid and told Zhang Jun about it.Then,we searched the bushes carefully.Soon,we were surprised to find a little dog there.It was lying in the bushes and looked very weak.We picked up the dog and took it to the animal centre.
高分亮点：
插入细节描写
It seemed that it was sick。Maybe the poor dog hasn't eaten for a few days。
高分亮点：
插入心理描写
We all worried about it。We must did something to help it！
基础范文
We were both happy to help the little dog.
高分亮点：
插入总结性的语言，插入谚语
In a word，action speaks louder than words。Animals are our friends。When they are in trouble，we must take action to help them。
高分范文
Last Saturday morning,I went to the zoo with my friend Zhang Jun.With different kinds of cute animals，the zoo is a great place to relax and get close to the nature。We had a good time there.
On the way home,I heard a whisper from the bushes,but there was nobody there.I was afraid and told Zhang Jun about it.Then,we searched the bushes carefully.Soon,we were surprised to find a little dog there.It seemed that it was sick。Maybe the poor dog hasn't eaten for a few days。It was lying in the bushes and looked very weak.We all worried about it。We must did something to help it。We picked up the dog and took it to the animal centre.
We were both happy to help the little dog.In a word，action speaks louder than words。Animals are our friends。When they are in trouble，we must take action to help them。
Do you have any pets
Do you see wildlife in the park
Is there a river or stream near where you live
What wild animals live in your town or city
How can you help to keep all of these animals safe
Think about times in your daily life when you see animals.
Be a Friend to Animals
Everyone can be a friend to animals and there are lots of small
things that you can do to keep animals safe.
Put your rubbish in the bin so that animals do not eat it.
Grow flowers so that insects have something to eat.
Leave seeds for the birds to eat in winter.
Raise money for charities that help to keep animals safe.
Thanks！

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