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读后续写之连接词的使用
一 、副词（表时间，程度，逻辑，评价等）
suddenly (all of a sudden)
fortunately/unfortunately
luckily for me
thankfully
then
however
finally
gradully
actually
indeed
unexpectedly
surprisingly/amazingly
apparently/obviously
微场景示例
1. They bought just about everything on the Christmas wish list and several dolls for good measure. Then they drove for 40 miles crossing the border into Nogales.
他们买了圣诞愿望单上的所有东西，另外还买了几个洋娃娃。然后他们驱车40英里越过边境进入诺加利斯。
2. In the boundless search, she found it impossible to find a way out, which threw her into desperation. Fortunately, a helicopter flew overhead just at that moment. In no time Jane rushed to the rock and climbed onto it. She waved her yellow blouse madly to the passing helicopter.
在无尽的寻找中，她发现找不到出路，这使她陷入了绝望。幸运的是，这时一架直升飞机从头顶飞过。简立刻冲到岩石上，爬上它。她疯狂地向飞过的直升机挥动着她的黄色上衣。（2016，浙江）
二 、介词短语（表时间、逻辑、情绪等）
not long after this
after a while/moment
shortly afterwards
in a split second 一瞬间，一刹那
several minutes/a moment later
After what seemed like an
eternity, ... 在漫长的时间之后
to one's surprise/ amazement
to one's relief
despite my great effort to do ...
at that critical moment
在紧要关头
at the sight of ...
一看到......
with that （= then）
紧接着，随即，然后
after a two-hour ride/drive
经过两个小时的车程
微场景示例
1.In that split second, the kitten dashed toward the attic. She quickly spotted the disgusting mouse and pounced on it without hesitation. She pinned it to the ground before it could flee. （来源：吴缪佳同学的获奖作文片段）
就在那一刹那，小猫向阁楼冲去。她很快发现了那只恶心的老鼠，毫不犹豫地扑了上去。在它逃跑之前，她把它按倒在地。
2. They waited anxiously outside the consulting room. After what seemed like an eternity, the nurse returned with the results of the test.
他们在诊室门外焦急地等待着。过了漫长的一段时间后，护士才拿着检验结果回来。
提醒：红笔标识的这个句式不能滥用。尤其在描述节奏快紧张惊险刺激的冒险故事中，不利于推进情节的发展。在表示焦急的等待（如等待考试、面试、体检等结果时）使用比较恰当。
3. After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. To my amazement, a luring red apple, on which capital letters "LOVE" were carved, came into sight. Beside it was a heart-shaped note saying “Thank you for your kindness. Best wishes!" （2021，八省联考“墨西哥女孩”）
他们走后，我上了吉普车，打开纸袋。令我惊讶的是，一个诱人的红苹果出现了，上面刻着大写的“爱”两个字。旁边是一张心形的纸条，上面写着“谢谢你的好意。最好的祝福!” (来源：龚路老师范文)
4.That video was posted the day before Halloween. To our surprise, the video managed to catch much attention from people online, racking up hundreds of thousands of views. （2021，浙江“南瓜卡头”）
这段视频是万圣节前一天发布的。令我们惊讶的是，这段视频吸引了很多网友的关注，浏览量达到了数十万。
三 、各种句式的衔接(非谓语，状语从句，名词性从句，倒装句，强调句型等)
Noticing Susan's unhappiness, Mary suggested making a crown with flowers to please her.
Looking around the room, Sophie was surprised to find the sofa was well tidied up.
It was not long before I made a full recovery.
Mike was about to leave when a beautiful creature on the grass caught his attention .
Before she had the time for relief, ...
Just as I pulled away, ...
What came into my sight was ...
Standing in the room was a
middle-aged man ...
Only then did Alix realize that ...
It was my cousin who/that helped me out at that critical moment.
微场景示例
1. I followed what Dad told me and stopped my horse with all my strength. But before we had the time for relief, we found we had been off the track and got lost. (来源：骑马迷路)
我按照爸爸的话去做，用尽全力把马止住。但是，还没等我们松一口气，我们就发现我们已偏离了轨道，迷了路。
2. I hung my head, saying that my grandpa wouldn't pay the fifteen dollars. I was about to leave silently when the principal sighed loudly and went straight to me. "Okay. We'll make an exception in your case. I'lI tell the Board and you'll get your Jacket." (来源：a scholarhsip jacket)
我低下头，说我爷爷不会付那15美元的。我正要默默地离开，校长大声叹了口气，径直向我走来。“好吧。我们会对你破例的。我会告诉董事会，你会得到夹克衫的。”
重要提醒
在写作时，所有连接成分的使用要适可而止，要顺故事情节发展自然使用，不要刻意过度使用，如果给人矫揉造作，胡乱堆砌的感觉，就适得其反，赢不了阅卷老师的芳心，反而丢了分！
下面欣赏一篇读后读写范文（注意黑体字部分，没有过多使用连接成分，不影响文章的连贯）
Later, as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm, we considered our difficult situation. The snow on the trees was gradually melting, making a sound on the ground. Only large and endless forests came into our view. We had no idea about which direction to go. As our campsite and supplies burnt into ashes, we were so hungry that we were trembling in the cold and quiet surroundings. Steve searched for nothing and felt at a loss for what to do next. Only then did my emotions start pouring out, and a sense of fear enveloped me.
后来，当我们站在燃烧着的帐篷旁取暖时，我们考虑到我们的困难处境。树上的雪正在慢慢融化，在地上发出声响。只有一望无际的大片森林映入我们的眼帘。我们不知道该往哪个方向走。当我们的营地和物资被烧成灰烬时，我们非常饥饿，在寒冷而安静的环境中瑟瑟发抖。史蒂夫什么也没找，也不知道下一步该怎么办。直到那时，我的情绪才开始倾泻而出，一种恐惧感包围了我。
原作回味
大家还记得那篇“阿拉斯加大灰狼”的读后续写吗？不妨读一读原作体会一下故事的衔接和连贯吧！
The exhilarating (令人兴奋的) Alaskan jungle air feels so good. Then I saw that hanging from the red cedar (雪松) I had placed it four years before was the rusty iron trap that had once ensnared (诱捕）the wolf. At the sight of it, I had a strange feeling that something had led me up the hill of Kuprana to the grassy spot where I had last seen her. There, standing on a high windowsill, I let out a long, low Wolf cry, something I had done many times before. There was an echo in the distance.
Then, far away, I saw a dark figure moving slowly in my direction. When it went through the grass, I saw it was a big wolf. A chill ran through me. I knew the familiar shape right away, even four years later. "Hello, old girl," I whispered. The wolf leaned in, ears pricked up (竖起), body tense, and stopped a few yards away, his bushy tail wagging slightly. After a while, the wolf went away. I left Kuprana shortly after that and never saw the animal again. But the memory she left me is vivid, haunting(萦绕), a little weird, and it will always be there to remind me that there is something in nature that exists outside of human rules and understanding.
译文：
阿拉斯加丛林里令人兴奋的空气让人感觉很好。然后我看到，四年前放置的红雪松上挂着一个生锈的铁陷阱，曾经诱捕过那只狼。一看到它，我就有一种奇怪的感觉，好像有什么东西把我带到库普拉那山，把我带到我最后一次见到她的草地上。我站在高高的站台上，发出一声长长的、低沉的狼叫声，以前我也曾多次这样做过。远处传来了回声。
然后，我看见远处有个黑影慢慢地朝我这边移动。当它穿过草地时，我看到它是一只大灰狼。我浑身一阵寒意。我立刻就认出了那个熟悉的身影，即使是四年之后。“你好，老姑娘，” 我低声说。狼俯下身来，竖起耳朵，绷紧身体，停在几码远的地方，毛茸茸的尾巴微微摇摆着。过了一会儿，狼走了。不久后我就离开了库普拉那，再也没见过那只动物。但她留给我的记忆是生动的，萦绕不去，有点怪异，它将永远在那里提醒我，自然界中存在着人类规则和理解之外的东西。

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