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基于前文，
定位协同点，构思合理续写情节
Conflict
Theme
Who, When, Where, What, Why, How
Who
A Story
Shape
塑造人物
Resolve
解决冲突
揭示主题
Reveal
How can we make the writing match the reading in terms of plot
Compose
完整故事
1
Make the characters consistent.
Resolve the conflict.
2
Reveal the intended theme.
3
Conflict
Theme
Who, When, Where, What, Why, How
Who
A Story
The gallery owner, I
Hesitant,
Not confident
I wanted my paintings to be seen but was too afraid to try.
Trying is important.
矛盾冲突凸显主题！
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Change
Assess whether the writing has matched
the reading well.
续写文中塑造的人物性格是否符合原文？ 是，否
续写文中的解决方案是否能解决原文冲突？ 是，否
续写文中揭示的主题是否符合原文？ 是，否
TASK 1
Conflict
Theme
Who, When, Where, What, Why, How
Who
A Story
How can we make the writing match the reading in terms of plot
1
Make the characters consistent.
Resolve the conflict.
2
Reveal the intended theme.
3
I, father , the farmer
My father wanted me to contribute my money for family expenses but I was unwilling to do so.
I thought my father and I didn’t understand each other.
Read for who, conflict and theme.
Who
Conflict
Theme
Misunderstanding
Growth
TASK 2
understanding
When I brought my paycheck home---it was $119---my Dad wanted to talk to me.
I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished.
What did we talk about
My change
首句顺应
TASK 3
找协同点，确定如何回应
My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.
如何回应：
I came to realize that my father actually understood my world.
Misunderstanding understanding
Growth
Sharing Time
在续写第一段爸爸对我表示理解（与主题相关），如：
“I can understand your feelings. When I was young, I also thought it unfair that my father took my money away from me.” He then added that he really wanted to spend the money on his education as he wished at that time.
在续写第二段提及爸爸的性格特点，如：
Though he was a man of few words, I could still felt his profound love towards me from his understanding.
在续写第一段告诉爸爸我为什么不想交钱（揭示冲突的原因）,即:我想把钱花在自己的兴趣爱好上，为自己将来做准备。如：
Without any hesitation, I blurted, “I want to spend the money on my future as a quarterback
on a football team.”
Borrow
在续写第一段告诉爸爸自己不想交钱的原因(引起冲突的原因)，如：
I earned it through hard work. I should have the right to use it as I wish.
在续写第二段体谅到爸爸工作不易（解决冲突的原因），如：
I thought my labor really exhausting though it lasted only two weeks. However, my father, who had been working hard almost all his life to support the family, never complained.
Contrast
Summary
Conflict
Theme
Who, When, Where, What, Why, How
Who
A Story
Shape
塑造人物
Resolve
解决冲突
揭示主题
Reveal
How can we make the writing match the reading in terms of plot
Compose
完整故事
1
Make the characters consistent.
Resolve the conflict.
2
Reveal the intended theme.
3
Change
Homework
基于课堂所找的协同点，
完成该文的读后续写。
THANK
YOU~
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