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Protecting wild animals
Writng task
—— Protecting wild animals
地球不能没有他们
What makes a good composition
Activity 1:
Writing Practice
(2023 专家联考卷3)
假定你是李华，你校将以“保护野生动物”为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 野生动物的现状；
2. 保护野生动物的重要性；
3.保护野生动物的措施。
注意: 1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Step 1 Analyze the requirements.
Main points + structure
Group work: (3mins)
3/4 students in one group.
Discuss, analyze and draw an outline based on the key points and structure.
Endling：
保护措施
Step 2 Draw an outline.
Para 1:
Para 2:
Para 3:
点题：
介绍野生动物现状
1
present situation
be in trouble,
habits are being destroyed,
population --- has crashed sharply
due to various reasons
Body：
保护野生动物重要性
2
significance
essential part of the living environment
important natural resources
3
effective measures
government: make laws & regulations
set up nature reserves
raise people’s awareness of protection ...
Step 3 Organize the sentences.
_________________ some wild animals
_________________ now, _______ habitats ________________(destroy). ________________,
the population of wild animals has _________(crash) sharply _________ various factors, ________(include)
_____________, disasters and _______________.
Para.1
As is know to all,
It is known to all that
What is known to all is that
are in serious danger
whose
are being destroyed
To make matters worse,
/ Worse still, / Even worse,/What’s worse,
crahsed
due to
including
climate change
human activities
__________, it is ___ significance for us to protect wild animals because they are not only essential ____________________________ where animals live in, ________ ___________________.
Para.2
Therefore/Thus
of
part of the living enviornment
but(also)
important natural resources
______________, _____________________
1)we______________________________________
to __________________________ the issue.
2)_________________________________________
to handle the issue.
____________, our government should ______________________________ to protect them. ____________, nature reserves should __________(set up) to ensure they have a safe habitat. ____________,
_____________________________________________.
Para.3
Therefore/Thus
it’s high time that
should take effective measures
address/settle/solve/deal with
effective measures should be taken
For one thing
make laws and regulations
For another
be set up
More importantly
we should further raise our awareness of protecting the wild animals
Assessment time:
Group work(3mins):
4 students in one group.
1)Read and focus on one composition.
2)Grade the composition based on our criteria.
Assignment
Finish another writing task and try to make adjustments to the mistakes related to our criteria.
Thank you!

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