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两个的万能情感句
第一个情感万能句：
To one's +情绪名词，主句
这个句式，非常简单。属于入门级的情感描述句。主句是用来描述情绪产生的原因。
首先我们来看例句： To my surprise,Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.令我惊讶的是Tom 居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。
要想这个句子学好，必须积累情绪名词，比如：
【正态度】amazement惊奇, delight高兴, joy高兴, satisfaction满足，excitement兴奋,
【负态度】annoyance烦恼, disappointment失望, horror恐怖, shame,羞耻 sorrow悲伤
【中性态度】puzzlement迷惑, regret后悔, relief欣慰, surprise/ amazement惊讶
下面我们把这个简单句型，进行升级。
【升级1】加强情绪的语气 比如我想要表达的是：非常令我吃惊的是，汤姆在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。
你可以这样写：Much / Greatly to my surprise,Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest. 也就是在to前面加上much, greatly，或者在名词前面添加great这个形容词： To my great surprise, Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
【升级2】to the +情绪名词+ of sb（名词或者代词），比如我想要表达的是：
令他的父母感到吃惊的是，他在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。 To the surprise f his parents, he won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
这里把To my surprise改成了To the surprise f his parents ，本质上，是两种所有格的变换。
【升级3】情绪名词叠可以加使用。
比如我要表达：令他惊讶和高兴的是，他在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖 To his surprise and joy, he won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
【升级4】“to one’s +情绪名词”位置可变换 这个短语的位置可以句首，句中，句末。请看下面例句：
I，to my surprise, found that Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest
第二个情感万能句：
sb. felt a great sense of + 情绪名词+ welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb. 表示“某人感到一股强烈的......在内心升腾、奔涌。”
这个万能句也可以用来描写情绪和心理，比句式结构比第一个句子要复杂，表现力也要更丰富。well up表示“涌出”，我们可以这样记忆well表示“好”以外，还可以表示“井”。“涌出”是用到了“井”这个含义。surge表示“汹涌”。这个句子的亮点是后半句welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb.，把情绪的描写形象化，具体化了。
我们先来看两个例句：
举例1：Sunny 感到一股强烈的恐惧，在她心中升腾，奔涌。
Sunny felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her.
举例2：Jessica感到一股强烈的嫉妒，在她心中升腾，奔涌。
Jessica felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her.
（jealous嫉妒的，jealousy是“嫉妒”的名词形式。）
我们再来看看，这个句型还可以如何拓展升级。非常简单，就是加上非谓语动词，在不同的位置，发挥的作用不同。
升级一：句首可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生的原因。
举例：看到一把斧子破门而入 ，Sunny感到一股强烈的恐惧在内心升腾，奔涌
Seeing an ax piercing through the door, Sunny felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her.
升级二：句尾可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生后的结果。
请看下面的例句：
杰西卡感到一种强烈的嫉妒感在她心中涌出来，把罐头扔向女人。
Jessica felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her ,throwing the can at the woman.（这句话里的can是名词，罐头。）
What+情绪动词+sb +was +that从句
What 主语从句描述情绪，that表语从句描述情绪产生的原因，在续写里我通常和学生说的是故事发展情节。
【举例】 让我惊讶的是Tom 居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。 What surprised me was that Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
【归纳整理】
【高兴类】delight, please, excite, cheer, amuse, satisfy,pleasure / happiness / joy
【生气类】annoy, upset
【惊讶类】surprise, astonish, shock, amaze,astonishment
【害怕类】frighten, scare, terrify,fear / fright
【失望类】depress, disappoint, discourage, bore, disappointment
【忧虑类】worry, concern，
【其他类】
puzzle, confuse, interest, relax, touch, move, embarrass, impress
沮丧 depression / frustration
哀伤 sadness / sorrow
困惑 puzzlement / confusion
着急 anxiety
疲惫 tiredness / exhaustion
紧张 tension
尴尬 embarrassment
后悔 regret
【其他类】
puzzle, confuse, interest, relax, touch, move, embarrass, impress
9. 愤怒 anger / rage
10. 内疚 guilt
11. 感激 gratitude
12. 如释重负 relief
13. 羞愧 shame
14. 激动 excitement
素材积累：情感描写高级句型
一、人物情绪描写之一：
开心（通过心理、表情、动作来表达）
平庸版：He was happy.
进阶版:
1. Her eyes shone/glittered/sparkled /twinkled with joy.
2.Her face lit up with pleasure.（容光焕发）
3.Her heart was pounding with excitement. （砰砰直跳）
情感描写高级句型
4.Happiness/joy/pleasure/delight took hold of him.(极度开心)
5.She was overflowing with happiness/joy/pleasure/delight.(幸福洋溢)
6.He shed tears of joy.（流下开心的泪水）
第一组例句：
1. His eyes twinkled with pleasure when he saw the news.
当他看到新闻，他的眼里闪耀着快乐。
2.He grinned with delight when he saw us. 当他看到我们，咧开嘴开心地笑了。
情感描写高级句型
3.The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪耀。
4.I couldn’t restrain my joy and jumped into the house.我抑制不住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。
5.He cast us a look/glance,with his face wearing a broad/wide/ radiant/ warm smile.她看向我们，面带灿烂/温暖的笑容。
6.When his mother kissed him on the cheek,it seemed as if the baby were on the top of the world.当妈妈亲吻他的脸颊时，小婴儿开心极了。
情感描写高级句型
第二组例句：
1.Bathed in sunshine, we all cheered and jumped with joy. 沐浴在阳光下，我们都高兴地欢呼和跳了起来。
2.The crowd became restless(骚动), excitement filling the room.人群变得焦躁不安，房间里充满了兴奋。
3.Tears of happiness poured down Susan’s cheeks. 幸福的眼泪顺着苏珊的脸颊流了下来。
4.I felt the warmth surging through me.我感到温暖在我心中涌动。
5.I think he’d mighty(及其) happy that ...我想他会很高兴的。
情感描写高级句型
第二组例句：
His eyes twinkle with pleasure every time he remembers last winter. 每当他想起去年冬天，就喜上眉梢。
Smiles are dancing in his eyes./Her eyes danced with joy and happiness.微笑在他的眼睛里跳动着。/她的眼睛里闪烁着喜悦和幸福。
I laughed out loud/laughed heartily (哈哈大笑) when I saw that funny video. 当我在看有趣的录像的时候我大声笑了。
情感描写高级句型
第三组例句：
Eyes light up. 精神振奋、高兴
I beamed at(对...微笑) him, “Welcome back,...” 我微笑着对他说，“欢迎回来，……”
Her smile hit the deepest of my heart. 她的微笑触动了我内心深处。
Hearing this, everybody was wild with joy(欣喜若狂)
One’s eyes brim over with warm excited tears热泪盈眶
One evening, standing under a jeweled sky, I found myself thankful for all the hardships. 一天晚上，站在珠光宝气的天空下，我发现自己对所有的苦难都心存感激。
人物情绪描写之二：
平庸版：He was sad.
进阶表达：不同的哭：
①　cry 哭（泛指，哭出声）
②　sob 呜咽，啜泣
③　wail 嚎啕大哭
④　weep 小声/无声流泪
⑤　burst into tears 放声大哭
⑥　fight back tears 抑制住泪水
⑦　be close to tears / be on the verge of tears 快要哭了
⑧　be in tears 含泪
⑨　Her eyes were wet with tears 她的眼睛被眼泪弄湿了
1.He sighed with disappointment. 他失望地叹了口气。
2.He struggled to fight back his tears. 他试图控制住自己的泪水。
3.His eyes brimmed with tears of sorrow. 他的眼里噙满了悲伤的泪水。
4.He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks. 他静静地站着，眼泪流下他的脸颊。
5.I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness. 我感觉自己漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
第一组例句：
6.I saw an old lady wailing with fist beating her chest in the street corner. 我看到一个老奶奶在街角捶胸痛哭。
7.When he embraced me with his arms open wide, I felt my throat choke with sob. 当他张开双臂拥抱我时，我觉得自己喉头哽咽。
8.Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly. 一听到这个坏消息，她就被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣。
第一组例句：
第二组例句：
1.Jack is overcome with grief. 杰克悲痛欲绝。
2.Grief comes in waves. 悲伤如潮水一般涌来。
3.The last word went like a bullet(子弹) to my heart. ---伤心、扎心
4.A ripple of sadness welled up inside him 涌起阵阵悲伤
5.The gloom（忧郁）deepened as the result came in. 更加难过
第二组例句：
6.My heart seemed to be torn.(心都要撕碎了)
7.Her eyes are flooded with tears.她的眼睛里充满了泪水。
8.Tears are rolling down from her eyes. 眼泪从她的眼睛里流下来。
9.Eyes begin to water. 眼睛开始流泪。
10.I sobbed bitterly, tasting the salt from the tears that streamed down my face.我痛苦地抽泣着，品尝着眼泪流下的盐分。
第二组例句：
11.I felt so sad that I found myself crying unconsciously, unable to hold back my tears. 我感到很难过，我发现自己不知不觉地哭了起来，忍不住眼泪。
12.There was clearly nothing left to do but drop herself onto the shabby little couch and weep.显然没有什么可做的，只能躺在破旧的小沙发上哭着。
13.An air of sorrow and depression settled over the crowd.人群中笼罩着一种悲伤和沮丧的气氛。
14.Her tears seemed to grieve （使伤心）the kindhearted others, for they immediately took out their handkerchiefs and began to weep also. 她的眼泪似乎使善良的其他人感到伤心，因为他们立刻拿出手帕，也开始哭泣。
人物情绪描写之三：
Nervous/Frightened（紧张、害怕）
1.I said nervously, my voice trembling a bit.我紧张地说，声音有点颤抖。
2.I was seized by a sudden impulse （冲动）to run.我突然有了一种想逃跑的冲动。
3.Fear took hold of me. / Panic seized us. 我们惊慌失措。
4.My body tensed as I heard...我的身体紧张，因为我听到。。。
5.I chewed my lip.我咬了咬嘴唇。
人物情绪描写之三：
6.I tossed and turned all night.彻夜难眠。我整夜翻来翻去。
7.... I replied, feeling a lump(块状物) rise in my throat.我回答说，觉得有点恶心在我的喉咙里。
8.I felt that the blood in my body cooled\froze rapidly because of the terrible sight.我觉得我体内的血液因为那可怕的景象而迅速地冻住了
9.With a pounding heart and cold, moist palms, I felt faint. 心怦怦直跳，手掌冰冷潮湿，我感到头晕。
10.I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.我吓得僵住了，害怕得一英寸也不敢动。
四、其他情绪
Never get conceited(骄傲自满的) because of victory or lose heart in case of failure. 胜不骄、败不馁
A unique sense of accomplishment arises. 产生了一种独特的成就感
The police wrote a ticket with a tricky smile(狡黠的微笑).
I feel soft and gentle and caring and my heart feels really warm.我感到温柔和关心，我的心感觉非常温暖。
I feel like there are hundreds of butterflies dancing in my heart. (感觉到爱)我觉得有数百只蝴蝶在我的心中翩翩起舞。
四、其他情绪
6.The actor playing the father was too wooden.饰演父亲的演员太呆板。
7.I've just been to the dentist and my face is still numb.我刚刚去看了牙医，脸上现在还没知觉呢。
8.Steve looked blank and said he had no idea what I was talking about.史蒂夫显得很迷惑，说他不知道我在说什么。
9.She passed by with only a distant nod. 她冷漠的点了一下头就过去了。
10.Holly smiled distantly.霍利恍惚地笑了笑。
五、情感描写词句积累
① The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
② A smile of understanding flashed across his face.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。
③ A ripple of excitement ran through them.一阵激动声穿过他们。
④ Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦绕。
⑤ His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
五、情感描写词句积累
⑥ A wild gaiety（快乐） took hold of her.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。
⑦ Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。
⑧ I was wild with joy.我欣喜若狂。
⑨ I was pleased beyond description.我高兴得难以形容。
⑩ She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
五、情感描写词句积累
Her smile lit up the whole room.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。
She shed tears of joy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。
Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。
She was overflowing with happiness.她洋溢着幸福。
Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她激动得满脸通红。
五、情感描写词句积累
Joy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悦。
I was floating on air.我漂浮在空中。
Amusement gleamed in his eyes.他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。
五、情感描写词句积累
愤怒：
I was seized by anger.我充满了愤怒。
He was fuming with rage.他气得大发雷霆。
His anger boiled over.他的愤怒爆发了。
He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。
He was breathing fire and fury.他充满着怒火。
His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
He gave me a look of burning anger.他愤怒地看了我一眼。
He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
He flared up at the word.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。
His face clouded with anger.他气得脸色阴沉。
五、情感描写词句积累
3.悲伤烦恼
①He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
② I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
③ Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears.她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。
④Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。
⑤ She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。
⑥She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.她掩面哭泣。
五、情感描写词句积累
⑦I tried to fight back tears. /My eyes were filled with tears.我努力忍住眼泪。/ 我的眼里充满了泪水。
⑧A frown（皱眉）now stood on his face.他皱起了眉头。
⑨They sat there with glum looks on their faces. 他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。
⑩ The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。
He brimmed over with sorrow when...他满是悲伤……
They were immersed in sorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。
These days he was in low spirits.这些日子他情绪低落。
五、情感描写词句积累
4.害怕：
①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。
②Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。
③She was struck with horror when...她感到恐惧……
④She was choked by fear.她因恐惧而窒息。
⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。
五、情感描写词句积累
⑥A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。 / 恐惧淹没了他。
⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated（窒息）.她的心跳得厉害，几乎窒息而死。
⑧She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. 她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。
五、情感描写词句积累
5. 感动：
① Touched deeply/immensely, we…被深深感动，我们……
② Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。
③ With tears streaming down her face, she... 泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来，……
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