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读后续写—助人型
急救篇
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文A young and successful manager had a new Jaguar, whose side* door was dented（凹陷的）. The damage was very noticeable, but the manager never bothered to repair it. He kept the dent there to remind him of one afternoon as well as this message：Don't go through life so fast that someone has to throw a brick at you to get your attention!The manager was traveling down a neighborhood street, going a bit too fast in his new. Jaguar. He was watching for kids rushing out from between parked cars and slowed down when he thought he saw something. As his car passed, no children appeared. Instead, a brick crashed into the Jag's side door! He braked sharply and drove the Jag backward to the spot where the brick had been thrown. The angry driver then jumped out of the car, grabbed the nearest kid and pushed him up against a parked car, shouting, “What was that all about and who are you ”阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文The young boy apologized. "Please mister ... please, I’m sorry. . . I didn't know what else to do," he begged.“I threw the brick because no one else would stop. . ." With tears corning down his face, the little boy pointed to a spot just around a parked car.“My elder brother fell out of his wheelchair and I can't lift him up. he said.Still crying, the boy asked the astonished manager, "Would you please help me get him back into his wheelchair He's hurt and he's too heavy for me. ”Moved beyond words, he hurried to the spot with the boy. Another boy was lying on the, ground bleeding. He took out his clean handkerchief and touched lightly at the fresh scrapes（擦 伤）and cuts. A quick look told him that the wound was serious, the disabled must be taken to the hospital at once.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car.___________________________________________________________________________In fifteen minutes, they arrived at the nearest hospital.___________________________________________________________________________ A young and successful manager had a new Jaguar, whose side* door was dented （凹陷的） . The damage was very noticeable, but the manager never bothered to repair it. He kept the dent there to remind him of one afternoon as well as this message：Don't go through life so fast that someone has to throw a brick at you to get your attention!
The manager was traveling down a neighborhood street, going a bit too fast in his new Jaguar. He was watching for kids rushing out from between parked cars and slowed down when he thought he saw something. As his car passed, no children appeared. Instead, a brick crashed into the Jag's side door! He braked sharply and drove the Jag backward to the spot where the brick had been thrown.
The side door of the manager’s car was dented, maybe because someone threw a brick
light-hearted
The angry driver then jumped out of the car, grabbed the nearest kid and pushed him up against a parked car, shouting, “What was that all about and who are you ”
The young boy apologized. "Please mister ... please, I’m sorry. . . I didn't know what else to do," he begged.
“I threw the brick because no one else would stop. . ." With tears coming down his face, the little boy pointed to a spot just around a parked car.
“My elder brother fell out of his wheelchair and I can't lift him up. he said.
Still crying, the boy asked the astonished manager, "Would you please help me get him back into his wheelchair He's hurt and he's too heavy for me. ”
The young boy threw a brick at the car
furious
apologetic
Moved beyond words, he hurried to the spot with the boy. Another boy was lying on the ground bleeding. He took out his clean handkerchief and touched lightly at the fresh scrapes （擦 伤）and cuts. A quick look told him that the wound was serious, the disabled must be taken to the hospital at once.
The reason of his throwing a brick is that his elder brother fell out of wheelchair and he threw a brick to stop the manager.
moved
The manager despite the dent, helped them kindly.
Manager: Kind; helpful
The young boy: quick-witted
动作描写；语言描写；心情描写
描写
Design the plot
Para 1: Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car.
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Para 2: In fifteen minutes, they arrived at the nearest hospital.
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两段首句定一段
二段二首正能量
Design the plot
Para 1: Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car.
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Para 2: In fifteen minutes, they arrived at the nearest hospital.
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两段首句定一段
对伤者进行急救
动作链：拿出急救设备(绑带）—包裹伤口—止血了
启程去医院
和告知父母
帮助伤者坐上轮椅和坐上汽车
Design the plot
Para 1: Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car.
__________________________________________________
Para 2: In fifteen minutes, they arrived at the nearest hospital.
____________________________________________________
二段二首正能量
送往急救中心
感激(心理描写）+升华
医生进行救治+告知伤者无危险(心理描写relief)
动作链：拿出轮椅-帮助其坐上-推到急救中心
Paragraph 1: Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car. Immediately, he took out a bandage from the kit, wrapped it lightly around the wound and stopped the bleeding. Slowly, he lifted the wounded up in his wheelchair and him into the back seat of the car, while the younger brother sat beside to take care of him. Then the manager folded the wheelchair and put it into the trunk. Starting the car quickly again, he rushed toward the nearest hospital. On the way, he handed his smart phone to the younger brother to call their parents, and constantly comforted the two brothers to take it easy.
Paragraph 2: In fifteen minute, they arrived at the nearest hospital. The manager got out the wheelchair, lifted the disabled into it and hurriedly pushed him to the emergency center. When the doctor declared life safe, they breathed a sigh of relief. At this time, the two boy’s parents arrived and they gave him heartfelt gratitude. Finally he drove his car to work, with the side door still dented and with an old saying lingering in his ears : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）
助人型故事构造
助人型-升华万能句
I made up my mind(下定决心) to pass on “love” to others(传递爱给其他人）/ pass on the kindness （ 传递善意）.
Just as an old saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）. ”
3. Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference（有时候，一个小小的善举可能足以产生巨大的影响。
4. It is love that makes the world go round（是爱让世界运转）

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