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读后续写技能:两个的万能情感句（解析版）
Part 1 第一个情感万能句：
To one's +情绪名词，主句
这是一个很简单的句子。这是一种很基础的感情描写。主体句用于说明情感的发生。首先我们来看例句：
To my surprise,Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.令我惊讶的是Tom 居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。
要想这个句子学好，必须积累情绪名词，比如：
【正态度】amazement惊奇, delight高兴, joy高兴, satisfaction满足，excitement兴奋,
【负态度】annoyance烦恼, disappointment失望, horror恐怖, shame,羞耻 sorrow悲伤
【中性态度】puzzlement迷惑, regret后悔, relief欣慰, surprise/ amazement惊讶
下面我们把这个简单句型，进行升级。
【升级1】加强情绪的语气
比如我想要表达的是：非常令我吃惊的是，汤姆在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。你可以这样写：Much / Greatly to my surprise, Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
也就是在to前面加上much, greatly，或者在名词前面添加great这个形容词：
To my great surprise, Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
【升级2】to the +情绪名词+ of sb（名词或者代词），比如我想要表达的是：
令他的父母感到吃惊的是，他在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。
To the surprise f his parents, he won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
这里把To my surprise改成了To the surprise f his parents ，本质上，是两种所有格的变换。
【升级3】情绪名词叠可以加使用。
比如我要表达：令他惊讶和高兴的是，他在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖
To his surprise and joy, he won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
【升级4】：“to one’s +情绪名词”位置可变换
这个短语的位置可以句首，句中，句末。请看下面例句：
I，to my surprise, found that Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest
Part 2 第二个情感万能句：
sb. felt a great sense of + 情绪名词+ welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb. 表示“某人感到一股强烈的......在内心升腾、奔涌。”
这个万能句也可以用来描写情绪和心理，比句式结构比第一个句子要复杂，表现力也要更丰富。well up表示“涌出”，我们可以这样记忆well表示“好”以外，还可以表示“井”。“涌出”是用到了“井”这个含义。surge表示“汹涌”。这个句子的亮点是后半句welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb.，把情绪的描写形象化，具体化了。我们先来看两个例句：
举例 1：Sunny 感到一股强烈的恐惧，在她心中升腾，奔涌。
Sunny felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her.
举例2：Jessica感到一股强烈的嫉妒，在她心中升腾，奔涌。
Jessica felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her.
（jealous嫉妒的，jealousy是“嫉妒”的名词形式。）
我们再来看看，这个句型还可以如何拓展升级。非常简单，就是加上非谓语动词，在不同的位置，发挥的作用不同。
升级一：句首可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生的原因。
举例：看到一把斧子破门而入 ，Sunny感到一股强烈的恐惧在内心升腾，奔涌
Seeing an ax piercing through the door, Sunny felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her.
升级二：句尾可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生后的结果。
请看下面的例句：
杰西卡感到一种强烈的嫉妒感在她心中涌出来，把罐头扔向女人。
Jessica felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her ,throwing the can at the woman.（这句话里的can是名词，罐头。）
What+情绪动词+sb +was +that从句
What 主语从句描述情绪，that表语从句描述情绪产生的原因，在续写里我通常和学生说的是故事发展情节。
【举例】
让我惊讶的是Tom 居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。
What surprised me was that Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
【归纳整理】
【高兴类】delight, please, excite, cheer, amuse, satisfy,pleasure / happiness / joy
【生气类】annoy, upset
【惊讶类】surprise, astonish, shock, amaze,astonishment
【害怕类】frighten, scare, terrify,fear / fright
【失望类】depress, disappoint, discourage, bore, disappointment
【忧虑类】worry, concern，
【其他类】puzzle, confuse, interest, relax, touch, move, embarrass, impress
沮丧 depression / frustration
哀伤 sadness / sorrow
困惑 puzzlement / confusion
着急 anxiety
疲惫 tiredness / exhaustion
紧张 tension
尴尬 embarrassment
后悔 regret
愤怒 anger / rage
内疚 guilt
感激 gratitude
如释重负 relief
羞愧 shame
激动 excitement
Part 3 素材积累：情感描写高级句型
人物情绪描写之一：
开心（通过心理、表情、动作来表达）
平庸版：He was happy.
进阶版:1. Her eyes shone/glittered/sparkled /twinkled with joy.
Her face lit up with pleasure.（容光焕发）
Her heart was pounding with excitement. （砰砰直跳）
Happiness/joy/pleasure/delight took hold of him.(极度开心)
She was overflowing with happiness/joy/pleasure/delight.(幸福洋溢)
He shed tears of joy.（流下开心的泪水）
第一组例句：
1. His eyes twinkled with pleasure when he saw the news.
当他看到新闻，他的眼里闪耀着快乐。
He grinned with delight when he saw us.
当他看到我们，咧开嘴开心地笑了。
The smile on her face shone like a diamond.
她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪耀。
I couldn’t restrain my joy and jumped into the house.
我抑制不住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。
He cast us a look/glance,with his face wearing a broad/wide/radiant/warm smile.
她看向我们，面带灿烂/温暖的笑容。
When his mother kissed him on the cheek,it seemed as if the baby were on the top of the world.
当妈妈亲吻他的脸颊时，小婴儿开心极了。
第二组例句：
Bathed in sunshine, we all cheered and jumped with joy. 沐浴在阳光下，我们都高兴地欢呼和跳了起来。
The crowd became restless(骚动), excitement filling the room.人群变得焦躁不安，房间里充满了兴奋。
Tears of happiness poured down Susan’s cheeks. 幸福的眼泪顺着苏珊的脸颊流了下来。
I felt the warmth surging through me.我感到温暖在我心中涌动。
I think he’d mighty(及其) happy that ...我想他会很高兴的。
His eyes twinkle with pleasure every time he remembers last winter. 每当他想起去年冬天，就喜上眉梢。
Smiles are dancing in his eyes./Her eyes danced with joy and happiness.微笑在他的眼睛里跳动着。/她的眼睛里闪烁着喜悦和幸福。
I laughed out loud/laughed heartily (哈哈大笑) when I saw that funny video. 当我在看有趣的录像的时候我大声笑了。
第三组例句：
Eyes light up. 精神振奋、高兴
I beamed at(对...微笑) him, “Welcome back,...” 我微笑着对他说，“欢迎回来，……”
Her smile hit the deepest of my heart. 她的微笑触动了我内心深处。
Hearing this, everybody was wild with joy(欣喜若狂)
One’s eyes brim over with warm excited tears热泪盈眶
One evening, standing under a jeweled sky, I found myself thankful for all the hardships. 一天晚上，站在珠光宝气的天空下，我发现自己对所有的苦难都心存感激。
人物情绪描写之二：
伤心（心理、表情、动作）
平庸版：He was sad.
进阶表达：不同的哭：
cry 哭（泛指，哭出声）
sob 呜咽，啜泣
wail 嚎啕大哭
weep 小声/无声流泪
burst into tears 放声大哭
fight back tears 抑制住泪水
be close to tears / be on the verge of tears 快要哭了
be in tears 含泪
Her eyes were wet with tears 她的眼睛被眼泪弄湿了
第一组例句：
He sighed with disappointment.
他失望地叹了口气。
He struggled to fight back his tears.
他试图控制住自己的泪水。
His eyes brimmed with tears of sorrow.
他的眼里噙满了悲伤的泪水。
He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.
他静静地站着，眼泪流下他的脸颊。
I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.
我感觉自己漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
I saw an old lady wailing with fist beating her chest in the street corner. 我看到一个老奶奶在街角捶胸痛哭。
When he embraced me with his arms open wide, I felt my throat choke with sob. 当他张开双臂拥抱我时，我觉得自己喉头哽咽。
Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly. 一听到这个坏消息，她就被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣。
第二组例句：
Jack is overcome with grief. 杰克悲痛欲绝。
Grief comes in waves. 悲伤如潮水一般涌来。
The last word went like a bullet(子弹) to my heart. ---伤心、扎心
A ripple of sadness welled up inside him 涌起阵阵悲伤
The gloom（忧郁）deepened as the result came in. 更加难过
My heart seemed to be torn.(心都要撕碎了)
Her eyes are flooded with tears.她的眼睛里充满了泪水。
Tears are rolling down from her eyes. 眼泪从她的眼睛里流下来。
Eyes begin to water. 眼睛开始流泪。
I sobbed bitterly, tasting the salt from the tears that streamed down my face.我痛苦地抽泣着，品尝着眼泪流下的盐分。
I felt so sad that I found myself crying unconsciously, unable to hold back my tears. 我感到很难过，我发现自己不知不觉地哭了起来，忍不住眼泪。
There was clearly nothing left to do but drop herself onto the shabby little couch and weep.显然没有什么可做的，只能躺在破旧的小沙发上哭着。
An air of sorrow and depression settled over the crowd.人群中笼罩着一种悲伤和沮丧的气氛。
Her tears seemed to grieve （使伤心）the kindhearted others, for they immediately took out their handkerchiefs and began to weep also. 她的眼泪似乎使善良的其他人感到伤心，因为他们立刻拿出手帕，也开始哭泣。
人物情绪描写之三：
Nervous/Frightened（紧张、害怕）
I said nervously, my voice trembling a bit.我紧张地说，声音有点颤抖。
I was seized by a sudden impulse （冲动）to run.我突然有了一种想逃跑的冲动。
Fear took hold of me. / Panic seized us. 我们惊慌失措。
My body tensed as I heard...我的身体紧张，因为我听到。。。
I chewed my lip.我咬了咬嘴唇。
I tossed and turned all night.彻夜难眠。我整夜翻来翻去。
... I replied, feeling a lump(块状物) rise in my throat.我回答说，觉得有点恶心在我的喉咙里。
I felt that the blood in my body cooled\froze rapidly because of the terrible sight.我觉得我体内的血液因为那可怕的景象而迅速地冻住了
With a pounding heart and cold, moist palms, I felt faint. 心怦怦直跳，手掌冰冷潮湿，我感到头晕。
10.I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.我吓得僵住了，害怕得一英寸也不敢动。
其他情绪
Never get conceited(骄傲自满的) because of victory or lose heart in case of failure. 胜不骄、败不馁
A unique sense of accomplishment arises. 产生了一种独特的成就感
The police wrote a ticket with a tricky smile(狡黠的微笑).
I feel soft and gentle and caring and my heart feels really warm.我感到温柔和关心，我的心感觉非常温暖。
I feel like there are hundreds of butterflies dancing in my heart. (感觉到爱)我觉得有数百只蝴蝶在我的心中翩翩起舞。
The actor playing the father was too wooden.饰演父亲的演员太呆板。
I've just been to the dentist and my face is still numb.我刚刚去看了牙医，脸上现在还没知觉呢。
Steve looked blank and said he had no idea what I was talking about.史蒂夫显得很迷惑，说他不知道我在说什么。
She passed by with only a distant nod. 她冷漠的点了一下头就过去了。
Holly smiled distantly.霍利恍惚地笑了笑。
情感描写词句积累
1.喜乐
① The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
② A smile of understanding flashed across his face.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。
③ A ripple of excitement ran through them.一阵激动声穿过他们。
④ Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦绕。
⑤ His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
⑥ A wild gaiety（快乐） took hold of her.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。
⑦ Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。
⑧ I was wild with joy.我欣喜若狂。
⑨ I was pleased beyond description.我高兴得难以形容。
⑩ She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
Her smile lit up the whole room.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。
She shed tears of joy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。
Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。
She was overflowing with happiness.她洋溢着幸福。
Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她激动得满脸通红。
Joy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悦。
I was floating on air.我漂浮在空中。
Amusement gleamed in his eyes.他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。
2.愤怒：
① I was seized by anger.我充满了愤怒。
② He was fuming with rage.他气得大发雷霆。
③ His anger boiled over.他的愤怒爆发了。
④ He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。
⑤ He was breathing fire and fury.他充满着怒火。
⑥ His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
⑦ He gave me a look of burning anger.他愤怒地看了我一眼。
⑧ He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
⑨ He flared up at the word.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。
⑩ His face clouded with anger.他气得脸色阴沉。
3.悲伤烦恼
①He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
② I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
③ Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears.她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。
④Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。
⑤ She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。
⑥She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.她掩面哭泣。
⑦I tried to fight back tears. /My eyes were filled with tears.我努力忍住眼泪。/ 我的眼里充满了泪水。
⑧A frown（皱眉）now stood on his face.他皱起了眉头。
⑨They sat there with glum looks on their faces. 他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。
⑩ The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。
He brimmed over with sorrow when...他满是悲伤……
They were immersed in sorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。
These days he was in low spirits.这些日子他情绪低落。
4.害怕：
①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。
②Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。
③She was struck with horror when...她感到恐惧……
④She was choked by fear.她因恐惧而窒息。
⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。
⑥A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。 / 恐惧淹没了他。
⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated（窒息）.她的心跳得厉害，几乎窒息而死。
⑧She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. 她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。
5. 感动：
① Touched deeply/immensely, we…被深深感动，我们……
② Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。
③ With tears streaming down her face, she... 泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来，……
Part 4 综合模拟演练
（2023·全国·高三专题练习）2
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
ALEX pedaled his bike along the country lane that led to his house. As he rounded a bend, the tips of the cattails that grew around Johnson’s Pond came into view. His dad took him canoeing there sometimes, and Alex loved it. The pond was always so alive with activity. Frogs croaked along the shore, dragonflies hunted among the cattails, and sometimes Alex discovered turtles(乌龟) basking(晒太阳) on sunny rocks.
Alex was curious about the turtles he saw. One week, when it was too rainy to go canoeing, he and his dad went to the library to check out books on turtles. Alex learned that turtles don’t have warm blood like people do. That’s why they have to sit in the sun to warm themselves. Now it looked like tomorrow might be another sunny day. He decided he would ask Dad if they could go canoeing and look for turtles again.
Just then Alex saw something in the road up ahead. It looked like a big gray rock. But it was a funny place for a rock to be.
And then, as Alex watched, the rock started to move.
When he rode his bike up to get a closer look, he saw that it wasn’t a rock at all. It was a large turtle crawled its way across the road. It had a bony, beak-shaped mouth and a long, jagged tail. Alex knew right away it was a snapping turtle.
He also knew not to get too close. He had read that a snapping turtle has a powerful bite even though it doesn’t have teeth. It could even bite off someone’s finger. He stood at a distance and watched the turtle move slowly over the road.
Out of the corner of his eye, he saw a car approaching. The turtle was still only halfway across the road. Alex knew he couldn’t pick it up to move it safely to the grass. What could he do
注意：
1.续写词数应为150词左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Thinking fast, he started jumping up and down and waving both hands wildly.
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To make the warning sign, Alex hurried back home and started his work with some leftover wood and paint.
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【答案】One possible version:
Thinking fast, he started jumping up and down and waving both hands wildly. “Stop! Stop!” he cried. The car slowed to a stop, and the driver stuck his head out of the window with a puzzled look. Alex darted forward and pointed at the moving turtle. “I’m just trying to save it.” he explained. With an understanding smile, the driver applauded his efforts. Seeing the car pulling away, Alex was lost in deep thoughts. “Maybe I could put up a sign to warn people there were turtles crossing the road,” he said to himself.
To make the sign, Alex hurried back home and found some leftover wood and paint. He hammered nails into the wood to make a flat board, after which he painted a vivid picture of a turtle in the middle and added “Slow! Turtles Crossing” at the bottom. He had completed all his work when Dad arrived home, who offered to carry the sign to the spot. Together they fixed the sign into the ground by the side of the road. With their work done, they both breathed a sigh of relief and headed home with great satisfaction.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Alex沿着乡间小路骑自行车回家时，看到有一只啮龟在路上慢慢移动，他在书上读到过，啮龟的咬合力很强，甚至能咬掉人的手指，所以他不能把它捡起来安全地转移，这时一辆汽车驶来，啮龟还在半路上，他能怎么办呢？
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“他快速地思考着，开始上蹿下跳，疯狂地挥舞着双手。”可知，第一段可描写Alex示意司机停车，并想出立牌子提醒人们的办法。
②由第二段首句内容“为了制作标牌，Alex匆忙赶回家，找到了一些剩余的木头和油漆。”可知，第二段可描写Alex回家制作牌子并和爸爸一起钉在路边的地上。
2.续写线索：
司机停车——解释原因——想出办法——回家制作牌子——把牌子钉在路边——满足
3.词汇激活
行为类
①呼喊：cry/shout
②称赞：applaud/praise
③陷入沉思：be lost in deep thoughts/fall deep into thought
情绪类
①困惑：puzzled/confused
②心满意足：with great satisfaction /feel very satisfied
【点睛】[高分句型1]. He hammered nails into the wood to make a flat board, after which he painted a vivid picture of a turtle in the middle and added “Slow! Turtles Crossing” at the bottom.（由“介词after+关系代词which”引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]. He had completed all his work when Dad arrived home, who offered to carry the sign to the spot. （由从属连词when引导的时间状语从句和关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句）
（2023·全国·高三专题练习）3
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
My husband, Donald, took our daughter Sarah out for some ice cream the night before driving her to college. As they were walking back to the car, they saw a young man sitting on the ground and giving his puppy a cone.
“A cute dog,” Donald said as they walked by. “A free dog,” the young man replied. Donald asked him what he meant by that and the man explained. He was moving away from Vermont and did not think the travel would be good for the dog. He had raised her from a small puppy. The man said she was a 6-month-old cross between the Doberman and the Labrador named Rhubarb. Donald took his phone number. The rest, as they say, is history.
Rhubarb was a sweet dog and very friendly and loved everyone. Whenever someone came to the house, she was always happy. She also got along with Willie, an older Samoyed we had. Willie was not well and died about a year later, but, fortunately, Rhubarb’s company helped him keep going for longer than that if he had been alone. But the interesting thing about Rhubarb was that she never barked. She would sometimes get excited when she saw a chipmunk (花栗鼠) and make a little crying sound.
One hot night when she was about 4 years old, we went to bed with the windows open and the doors unlocked. At about 3 a.m., I woke up to the sound of Rhubarb barking. I woke Donald and we got out of bed.
Rhubarb was coming toward us. We turned on the lights and noticed the door to the kitchen was open. Then we saw the door leading into the house from the garage was also open. We quickly locked all the doors, and we did not get any sleep that night. It was deep into the night, so we didn’t call the police.
Paragraph 1:
The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor.
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Paragraph 2:
My purse was right next to the door.
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【答案】One possible version:
Paragraph 1:
The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor. Actually, it was a thief who entered our kitchen and garage. Much to our relief, thanks to Rhubarb, the thief stole nothing. I called the police to report the break-in. I also told them nothing had been taken, but they sent a police officer over to talk with us anyway. In fact, recently many local homes had been broken in on the weekend. Most people’s wallets and purses had been stolen.
Paragraph 2:
My purse was right next to the door. However, Rhubarb had scared the thief away before he or she could steal it. When the police officer left, he said we should reward Rhubarb with a big steak dinner. Rhubarb lived to be almost 12 years old, but that night was the only time she barked in her entire life. Fortunately, she never saw the need to warn us of any other danger. We were very thankful to Rhubarb. We loved her like a member of the family.
【导语】本文以作者家里的一条狗为线索展开，讲述了作者收养了一条名叫大黄的拉布拉多杂交犬。这条狗和家人相处愉快，在她大约4岁的时候，她成功吓跑了小偷，保护了作者一家的财物的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“第二天，我们注意到地板上有烟灰。”可知，第一段可描写作者一家发现晚上有人闯入，随后报警的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“我的钱包就在门边。”可知，第二段可描写作者一家发现并没有丢失财物，更加感激狗狗大黄。
2.续写线索：发现有人闯入——报警——警员查看——财物没有丢失——对大黄充满感激
3.词汇激活
行为类
①进入：enter/break into
②打电话：call/ring up/phone
③把……吓跑：scare away/scare off
情绪类
①感激的：thankful / grateful
②幸运地：fortunately/luckily
【点睛】[高分句型1] Actually, it was a thief who entered our kitchen and garage. (运用了强调句型)
[高分句型2] When the police officer left, he said we should reward Rhubarb with a big steak dinner. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句和省略连接词的宾语从句)
（2022秋·山东临沂·高三统考开学考试）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，续写词数应为150左右。
Malachi Bradley doesn’t show signs of being panicked or worried when he talks about how he spent 29 hours lost in a rough area of the High Uintas. “I didn’t really feel scared. I was just trying to get back to my family,” the 10-year-old said Tuesday in a quiet, almost matter-of-fact way just one day after he was rescued. When asked what happened to him, he simply replied: “A lot of things. I hiked a long way.”
Malachi confidently believes he could have survived two or three weeks on his own, dressed in only his jeans and his shoes, and with no food, tent or blankets. But the look in the eyes of Malachi’s father, Danny Bradley, told a different story, one of much deeper concern, when he realized his son was missing. “It’s a horrible feeling, just knowing how vast the Uinta Mountains are,” he said, “I quickly felt how severe the situation was.”
Malachi recalled his great adventure Tuesday. He showed no signs of going without food for a day or sleeping between rocks for an hour at night to block the cold wind. But he admitted when he got home to his own bed on Monday night that he was asleep within a minute of his head hitting his pillow and stayed there for 12 hours.
His adventure began Sunday when Malachi, his father, two siblings(兄弟姐妹), and a family friend were about to leave their campsite near Paul Lake to go home. “We were just going to cook up a fish he caught and head out, and,” Danny Bradley paused, “it ended up being a lot longer.”
Malachi said he went to look for mushrooms about 10:30 a.m. He had just walked a long way when he encountered a snake. He was so frightened that he decided to get back but he could no longer see the lake where his campsite was set up. He knew he was lost.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Malachi didn’t have his whistle with him that he normally carries in case he gets lost when exploring.
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But on Monday afternoon, Malachi took off his shoes to take a break in an open area and heard another helicopter nearby.
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【答案】Malachi didn’t have his whistle with him that he normally carries in case he gets lost when exploring. He didn’t know what to do but to walk along the road and call out his families while walking. However, nobody answered him. Not knowing how long he had walked for, he suddenly heard a helicopter nearby. He began to shout as loudly as he could so that he could be heard. Unfortunately, the helicopter flied away for it was too dark to see him. Feeling a little bit depressed, he tried his best to follow the helicopter though he lost it very quickly. Not until the sun rose did Malachi realize that he had walked for the whole night, hungry, tired and cold.
But on Monday afternoon, Malachi took off his shoes to take a break in an open area and heard another helicopter nearby. He tried to yell for help again with his clothes waving in his hand. To his disappointment, the helicopter began to fly away too. He thought he was about to stay here for another night when the helicopter turned back.
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章以倒叙的手法讲述了主人公Malachi在山上走丢的故事。10岁的Malachi在走失了29个小时后终于被找到了，他云淡风轻的讲述了自己走丢这段时间的经历，但从他父亲的反应来看，事情远非如此简单。Malachi在周日上午和家人一起露营的时候不小心走失，一直到周二才被找到。回忆起自己这两天的经历，Malachi虽然没有表现得很惊慌，但回到家后却倒头就睡，并且一睡就睡了12个小时。
【详解】1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容“Malachi没有带他的哨子，他通常会带着哨子以防在探险时迷路。”可知，第一段可描写Malachi走失后的经历及心里想法。
由第二段首句内容“但在周一下午，Malachi脱下鞋子，在一个开阔的地方休息，听到附近有另一架直升机。”可知，第二段可描写Malachi遇到直升机后的反应。
2.续写线索：走失但没带哨子——不知所措只能大喊家人的名字——遇到一架直升机但未被救——第二天下午再次遇到直升机——有幸被救
3.词汇激活
行为类
①呼救：shout for help / call for help / cry for help
②返回：turn back / come back / fly back
情绪类
①感到有点沮丧：feel a little bit depressed / feel a little bit frustrated
②令某人失望：to one’s disappointment / to one’s depression
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not until the sun rose did Malachi realize that he had walked for the whole night, hungry, tired and cold. (运用了部分倒装和that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】He began to shout as loudly as he could so that he could be heard.(运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
（2022春·江苏盐城·高三江苏省阜宁中学校考期中）
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One Saturday afternoon, I was watching TV in the living room with my grandpa when a blinding flash of lightning flashed across the sky, followed by a deafening sound, and the pictures on TV disappeared with that sound. Before I realized what had happened, a gray-white shadow rushed in through the open window and flew over my head. Bang! It hit the wall and slid off to the floor. Shaking with fear, I approached it cautiously and saw that it was a pigeon. It looked at me in fear, trying to open its wings and struggling its feet, but apparently powerless.
So I called my grandpa and immediately set out to give it a helping hand. Taking it in my hands, I felt a few drops of warmth on my hands. It was blood! I gently spread its wings and there were a few red feathers inside. “Don’t worry. We’ll get it out alive,” Grandpa said to me. Then he got the first-aid kit. With some cotton, we dried the blood, cleaned the wound and then put it under a hairdryer to dry. All went smoothly, for the pigeon had no strength left to resist. There happened to be an empty birdcage at home, so I put it in gently and added a little water and some grains.
For the next few days, the moment I got home from school, I would run to feed the pigeon. And Grandpa helped a lot, tidying up the cage daily. Little by little, its strength returned. One evening, I fed it with the biscuit I was eating. It enjoyed it! One week later, its wound almost healed (痊愈); its feathers grew and it became brave. Whenever I sat at the table eating biscuits, it looked up at me, cooing (咕咕地叫) constantly. To my joy, I could also reach into the cage to touch it. When I gently fingered its head, it playfully pecked (啄) at me. Finally it completely recovered. But every time I was with it, it seemed restless in the cage. To make it happy and pretty, I tied an orange string (线)around its leg.
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
One day, however, when I returned home, Grandpa met me at the door, looking embarrassed.
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Sure enough, I saw a pigeon flying into the house the next afternoon!
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【答案】One possible version:
One day, however, when I returned home, Grandpa met me at the door, looking embarrassed. I asked him what had happened. He turned around and pointed to the birdcage, apologizing to me that the pigeon slid out when he was tidying up the cage and flew away through the open window. Gone! I couldn’t believe my ears. I rushed over to the birdcage. Just empty! I stared at the remaining water and grains, tears streaming down my cheeks. “Where has it gone Will it be hurt again Will it come back ...” I asked Grandpa, sobbing. “It will fly back!” he convinced me, wiping away my tears gently.
Sure enough, I saw a pigeon flying into the house the next afternoon! It perched near the birdcage, cooing. Despite great excitement, I approached it quietly. It was gray-white and had an orange string tied to one leg. My pigeon came back! “It must be hungry,” Grandpa grinned. Immediately, I fed it with grains and then tiptoed to the window and closed it, urging Grandpa to cage it. But he didn’t. “Pigeons need freedom,” he explained to me patiently. I was hesitant but looking at the pigeon wandering and pecking at the grains peacefully, I realized Grandpa was right! I turned back to the window and opened it.
【分析】本文以鸽子为线索展开，讲述了作者在爷爷的帮助下救治了一只受伤的鸽子，在作者的精心照料下，鸽子渐渐恢复。有一天鸽子飞走了，引起作者的伤心。第二天，鸽子好像不忘救命之恩，又飞回家中。在爷爷的教育下，作者意识到鸟儿的快乐是要自由飞翔，果断地放飞鸽子的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然而，有一天，当我回到家，爷爷在门口迎接我，看起来很尴尬。”可知，第一段可描写鸽子飞走了，作者的无限伤心，爷爷的极力安慰。
②由第二段首句内容“果然，第二天下午我看见一只鸽子飞进了房子！”可知，第二段可描写作者重新见到鸽子的喜悦，以及作者新的认识，放飞鸽子。
2.续写线索：难过哭泣——伤心——（爷爷)道歉安慰——喜悦照顾鸽子——明理——放飞
3.词汇激活
行为类
①哭泣：cry/weep/ tears streaming down my cheeks
②道歉：say sorry to/apologize to
③照顾：look after/take good care of
情绪类
①.伤心： feel sad/get upset
②.喜悦：feel excited/get delighted
【点睛】[高分句型1]. He turned around and pointed to the birdcage, apologizing to me that the pigeon slid out when he was tidying up the cage and flew away through the open window.（非谓语动词apologize现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]. I stared at the remaining water and grains, tears streaming down my cheeks.（独立主格结构）
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读后续写技能:两个的万能情感句（解析版）
Part 1 第一个情感万能句：
To one's +情绪名词，主句
这是一个很简单的句子。这是一种很基础的感情描写。主体句用于说明情感的发生。首先我们来看例句：
To my surprise,Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.令我惊讶的是Tom 居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。
要想这个句子学好，必须积累情绪名词，比如：
【正态度】amazement惊奇, delight高兴, joy高兴, satisfaction满足，excitement兴奋,
【负态度】annoyance烦恼, disappointment失望, horror恐怖, shame,羞耻 sorrow悲伤
【中性态度】puzzlement迷惑, regret后悔, relief欣慰, surprise/ amazement惊讶
下面我们把这个简单句型，进行升级。
【升级1】加强情绪的语气
比如我想要表达的是：非常令我吃惊的是，汤姆在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。你可以这样写：Much / Greatly to my surprise, Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
也就是在to前面加上much, greatly，或者在名词前面添加great这个形容词：
To my great surprise, Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
【升级2】to the +情绪名词+ of sb（名词或者代词），比如我想要表达的是：
令他的父母感到吃惊的是，他在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。
To the surprise f his parents, he won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
这里把To my surprise改成了To the surprise f his parents ，本质上，是两种所有格的变换。
【升级3】情绪名词叠可以加使用。
比如我要表达：令他惊讶和高兴的是，他在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖
To his surprise and joy, he won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
【升级4】：“to one’s +情绪名词”位置可变换
这个短语的位置可以句首，句中，句末。请看下面例句：
I，to my surprise, found that Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest
Part 2 第二个情感万能句：
sb. felt a great sense of + 情绪名词+ welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb. 表示“某人感到一股强烈的......在内心升腾、奔涌。”
这个万能句也可以用来描写情绪和心理，比句式结构比第一个句子要复杂，表现力也要更丰富。well up表示“涌出”，我们可以这样记忆well表示“好”以外，还可以表示“井”。“涌出”是用到了“井”这个含义。surge表示“汹涌”。这个句子的亮点是后半句welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb.，把情绪的描写形象化，具体化了。我们先来看两个例句：
举例 1：Sunny 感到一股强烈的恐惧，在她心中升腾，奔涌。
Sunny felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her.
举例2：Jessica感到一股强烈的嫉妒，在她心中升腾，奔涌。
Jessica felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her.
（jealous嫉妒的，jealousy是“嫉妒”的名词形式。）
我们再来看看，这个句型还可以如何拓展升级。非常简单，就是加上非谓语动词，在不同的位置，发挥的作用不同。
升级一：句首可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生的原因。
举例：看到一把斧子破门而入 ，Sunny感到一股强烈的恐惧在内心升腾，奔涌
Seeing an ax piercing through the door, Sunny felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her.
升级二：句尾可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生后的结果。
请看下面的例句：
杰西卡感到一种强烈的嫉妒感在她心中涌出来，把罐头扔向女人。
Jessica felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her ,throwing the can at the woman.（这句话里的can是名词，罐头。）
What+情绪动词+sb +was +that从句
What 主语从句描述情绪，that表语从句描述情绪产生的原因，在续写里我通常和学生说的是故事发展情节。
【举例】
让我惊讶的是Tom 居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。
What surprised me was that Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
【归纳整理】
【高兴类】delight, please, excite, cheer, amuse, satisfy,pleasure / happiness / joy
【生气类】annoy, upset
【惊讶类】surprise, astonish, shock, amaze,astonishment
【害怕类】frighten, scare, terrify,fear / fright
【失望类】depress, disappoint, discourage, bore, disappointment
【忧虑类】worry, concern，
【其他类】puzzle, confuse, interest, relax, touch, move, embarrass, impress
沮丧 depression / frustration
哀伤 sadness / sorrow
困惑 puzzlement / confusion
着急 anxiety
疲惫 tiredness / exhaustion
紧张 tension
尴尬 embarrassment
后悔 regret
愤怒 anger / rage
内疚 guilt
感激 gratitude
如释重负 relief
羞愧 shame
激动 excitement
Part 3 素材积累：情感描写高级句型
人物情绪描写之一：
开心（通过心理、表情、动作来表达）
平庸版：He was happy.
进阶版:1. Her eyes shone/glittered/sparkled /twinkled with joy.
Her face lit up with pleasure.（容光焕发）
Her heart was pounding with excitement. （砰砰直跳）
Happiness/joy/pleasure/delight took hold of him.(极度开心)
She was overflowing with happiness/joy/pleasure/delight.(幸福洋溢)
He shed tears of joy.（流下开心的泪水）
第一组例句：
1. His eyes twinkled with pleasure when he saw the news.
当他看到新闻，他的眼里闪耀着快乐。
He grinned with delight when he saw us.
当他看到我们，咧开嘴开心地笑了。
The smile on her face shone like a diamond.
她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪耀。
I couldn’t restrain my joy and jumped into the house.
我抑制不住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。
He cast us a look/glance,with his face wearing a broad/wide/radiant/warm smile.
她看向我们，面带灿烂/温暖的笑容。
When his mother kissed him on the cheek,it seemed as if the baby were on the top of the world.
当妈妈亲吻他的脸颊时，小婴儿开心极了。
第二组例句：
Bathed in sunshine, we all cheered and jumped with joy. 沐浴在阳光下，我们都高兴地欢呼和跳了起来。
The crowd became restless(骚动), excitement filling the room.人群变得焦躁不安，房间里充满了兴奋。
Tears of happiness poured down Susan’s cheeks. 幸福的眼泪顺着苏珊的脸颊流了下来。
I felt the warmth surging through me.我感到温暖在我心中涌动。
I think he’d mighty(及其) happy that ...我想他会很高兴的。
His eyes twinkle with pleasure every time he remembers last winter. 每当他想起去年冬天，就喜上眉梢。
Smiles are dancing in his eyes./Her eyes danced with joy and happiness.微笑在他的眼睛里跳动着。/她的眼睛里闪烁着喜悦和幸福。
I laughed out loud/laughed heartily (哈哈大笑) when I saw that funny video. 当我在看有趣的录像的时候我大声笑了。
第三组例句：
Eyes light up. 精神振奋、高兴
I beamed at(对...微笑) him, “Welcome back,...” 我微笑着对他说，“欢迎回来，……”
Her smile hit the deepest of my heart. 她的微笑触动了我内心深处。
Hearing this, everybody was wild with joy(欣喜若狂)
One’s eyes brim over with warm excited tears热泪盈眶
One evening, standing under a jeweled sky, I found myself thankful for all the hardships. 一天晚上，站在珠光宝气的天空下，我发现自己对所有的苦难都心存感激。
人物情绪描写之二：
伤心（心理、表情、动作）
平庸版：He was sad.
进阶表达：不同的哭：
cry 哭（泛指，哭出声）
sob 呜咽，啜泣
wail 嚎啕大哭
weep 小声/无声流泪
burst into tears 放声大哭
fight back tears 抑制住泪水
be close to tears / be on the verge of tears 快要哭了
be in tears 含泪
Her eyes were wet with tears 她的眼睛被眼泪弄湿了
第一组例句：
He sighed with disappointment.
他失望地叹了口气。
He struggled to fight back his tears.
他试图控制住自己的泪水。
His eyes brimmed with tears of sorrow.
他的眼里噙满了悲伤的泪水。
He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.
他静静地站着，眼泪流下他的脸颊。
I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.
我感觉自己漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
I saw an old lady wailing with fist beating her chest in the street corner. 我看到一个老奶奶在街角捶胸痛哭。
When he embraced me with his arms open wide, I felt my throat choke with sob. 当他张开双臂拥抱我时，我觉得自己喉头哽咽。
Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly. 一听到这个坏消息，她就被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣。
第二组例句：
Jack is overcome with grief. 杰克悲痛欲绝。
Grief comes in waves. 悲伤如潮水一般涌来。
The last word went like a bullet(子弹) to my heart. ---伤心、扎心
A ripple of sadness welled up inside him 涌起阵阵悲伤
The gloom（忧郁）deepened as the result came in. 更加难过
My heart seemed to be torn.(心都要撕碎了)
Her eyes are flooded with tears.她的眼睛里充满了泪水。
Tears are rolling down from her eyes. 眼泪从她的眼睛里流下来。
Eyes begin to water. 眼睛开始流泪。
I sobbed bitterly, tasting the salt from the tears that streamed down my face.我痛苦地抽泣着，品尝着眼泪流下的盐分。
I felt so sad that I found myself crying unconsciously, unable to hold back my tears. 我感到很难过，我发现自己不知不觉地哭了起来，忍不住眼泪。
There was clearly nothing left to do but drop herself onto the shabby little couch and weep.显然没有什么可做的，只能躺在破旧的小沙发上哭着。
An air of sorrow and depression settled over the crowd.人群中笼罩着一种悲伤和沮丧的气氛。
Her tears seemed to grieve （使伤心）the kindhearted others, for they immediately took out their handkerchiefs and began to weep also. 她的眼泪似乎使善良的其他人感到伤心，因为他们立刻拿出手帕，也开始哭泣。
人物情绪描写之三：
Nervous/Frightened（紧张、害怕）
I said nervously, my voice trembling a bit.我紧张地说，声音有点颤抖。
I was seized by a sudden impulse （冲动）to run.我突然有了一种想逃跑的冲动。
Fear took hold of me. / Panic seized us. 我们惊慌失措。
My body tensed as I heard...我的身体紧张，因为我听到。。。
I chewed my lip.我咬了咬嘴唇。
I tossed and turned all night.彻夜难眠。我整夜翻来翻去。
... I replied, feeling a lump(块状物) rise in my throat.我回答说，觉得有点恶心在我的喉咙里。
I felt that the blood in my body cooled\froze rapidly because of the terrible sight.我觉得我体内的血液因为那可怕的景象而迅速地冻住了
With a pounding heart and cold, moist palms, I felt faint. 心怦怦直跳，手掌冰冷潮湿，我感到头晕。
10.I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.我吓得僵住了，害怕得一英寸也不敢动。
其他情绪
Never get conceited(骄傲自满的) because of victory or lose heart in case of failure. 胜不骄、败不馁
A unique sense of accomplishment arises. 产生了一种独特的成就感
The police wrote a ticket with a tricky smile(狡黠的微笑).
I feel soft and gentle and caring and my heart feels really warm.我感到温柔和关心，我的心感觉非常温暖。
I feel like there are hundreds of butterflies dancing in my heart. (感觉到爱)我觉得有数百只蝴蝶在我的心中翩翩起舞。
The actor playing the father was too wooden.饰演父亲的演员太呆板。
I've just been to the dentist and my face is still numb.我刚刚去看了牙医，脸上现在还没知觉呢。
Steve looked blank and said he had no idea what I was talking about.史蒂夫显得很迷惑，说他不知道我在说什么。
She passed by with only a distant nod. 她冷漠的点了一下头就过去了。
Holly smiled distantly.霍利恍惚地笑了笑。
情感描写词句积累
1.喜乐
① The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
② A smile of understanding flashed across his face.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。
③ A ripple of excitement ran through them.一阵激动声穿过他们。
④ Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦绕。
⑤ His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
⑥ A wild gaiety（快乐） took hold of her.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。
⑦ Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。
⑧ I was wild with joy.我欣喜若狂。
⑨ I was pleased beyond description.我高兴得难以形容。
⑩ She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
Her smile lit up the whole room.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。
She shed tears of joy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。
Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。
She was overflowing with happiness.她洋溢着幸福。
Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她激动得满脸通红。
Joy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悦。
I was floating on air.我漂浮在空中。
Amusement gleamed in his eyes.他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。
2.愤怒：
① I was seized by anger.我充满了愤怒。
② He was fuming with rage.他气得大发雷霆。
③ His anger boiled over.他的愤怒爆发了。
④ He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。
⑤ He was breathing fire and fury.他充满着怒火。
⑥ His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
⑦ He gave me a look of burning anger.他愤怒地看了我一眼。
⑧ He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
⑨ He flared up at the word.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。
⑩ His face clouded with anger.他气得脸色阴沉。
3.悲伤烦恼
①He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
② I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
③ Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears.她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。
④Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。
⑤ She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。
⑥She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.她掩面哭泣。
⑦I tried to fight back tears. /My eyes were filled with tears.我努力忍住眼泪。/ 我的眼里充满了泪水。
⑧A frown（皱眉）now stood on his face.他皱起了眉头。
⑨They sat there with glum looks on their faces. 他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。
⑩ The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。
He brimmed over with sorrow when...他满是悲伤……
They were immersed in sorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。
These days he was in low spirits.这些日子他情绪低落。
4.害怕：
①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。
②Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。
③She was struck with horror when...她感到恐惧……
④She was choked by fear.她因恐惧而窒息。
⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。
⑥A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。 / 恐惧淹没了他。
⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated（窒息）.她的心跳得厉害，几乎窒息而死。
⑧She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. 她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。
5. 感动：
① Touched deeply/immensely, we…被深深感动，我们……
② Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。
③ With tears streaming down her face, she... 泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来，……
Part 4 综合模拟演练
（2023·全国·高三专题练习）2
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
ALEX pedaled his bike along the country lane that led to his house. As he rounded a bend, the tips of the cattails that grew around Johnson’s Pond came into view. His dad took him canoeing there sometimes, and Alex loved it. The pond was always so alive with activity. Frogs croaked along the shore, dragonflies hunted among the cattails, and sometimes Alex discovered turtles(乌龟) basking(晒太阳) on sunny rocks.
Alex was curious about the turtles he saw. One week, when it was too rainy to go canoeing, he and his dad went to the library to check out books on turtles. Alex learned that turtles don’t have warm blood like people do. That’s why they have to sit in the sun to warm themselves. Now it looked like tomorrow might be another sunny day. He decided he would ask Dad if they could go canoeing and look for turtles again.
Just then Alex saw something in the road up ahead. It looked like a big gray rock. But it was a funny place for a rock to be.
And then, as Alex watched, the rock started to move.
When he rode his bike up to get a closer look, he saw that it wasn’t a rock at all. It was a large turtle crawled its way across the road. It had a bony, beak-shaped mouth and a long, jagged tail. Alex knew right away it was a snapping turtle.
He also knew not to get too close. He had read that a snapping turtle has a powerful bite even though it doesn’t have teeth. It could even bite off someone’s finger. He stood at a distance and watched the turtle move slowly over the road.
Out of the corner of his eye, he saw a car approaching. The turtle was still only halfway across the road. Alex knew he couldn’t pick it up to move it safely to the grass. What could he do
注意：
1.续写词数应为150词左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Thinking fast, he started jumping up and down and waving both hands wildly.
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To make the warning sign, Alex hurried back home and started his work with some leftover wood and paint.
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（2023·全国·高三专题练习）3
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
My husband, Donald, took our daughter Sarah out for some ice cream the night before driving her to college. As they were walking back to the car, they saw a young man sitting on the ground and giving his puppy a cone.
“A cute dog,” Donald said as they walked by. “A free dog,” the young man replied. Donald asked him what he meant by that and the man explained. He was moving away from Vermont and did not think the travel would be good for the dog. He had raised her from a small puppy. The man said she was a 6-month-old cross between the Doberman and the Labrador named Rhubarb. Donald took his phone number. The rest, as they say, is history.
Rhubarb was a sweet dog and very friendly and loved everyone. Whenever someone came to the house, she was always happy. She also got along with Willie, an older Samoyed we had. Willie was not well and died about a year later, but, fortunately, Rhubarb’s company helped him keep going for longer than that if he had been alone. But the interesting thing about Rhubarb was that she never barked. She would sometimes get excited when she saw a chipmunk (花栗鼠) and make a little crying sound.
One hot night when she was about 4 years old, we went to bed with the windows open and the doors unlocked. At about 3 a.m., I woke up to the sound of Rhubarb barking. I woke Donald and we got out of bed.
Rhubarb was coming toward us. We turned on the lights and noticed the door to the kitchen was open. Then we saw the door leading into the house from the garage was also open. We quickly locked all the doors, and we did not get any sleep that night. It was deep into the night, so we didn’t call the police.
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The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor.
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My purse was right next to the door.
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（2022秋·山东临沂·高三统考开学考试）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，续写词数应为150左右。
Malachi Bradley doesn’t show signs of being panicked or worried when he talks about how he spent 29 hours lost in a rough area of the High Uintas. “I didn’t really feel scared. I was just trying to get back to my family,” the 10-year-old said Tuesday in a quiet, almost matter-of-fact way just one day after he was rescued. When asked what happened to him, he simply replied: “A lot of things. I hiked a long way.”
Malachi confidently believes he could have survived two or three weeks on his own, dressed in only his jeans and his shoes, and with no food, tent or blankets. But the look in the eyes of Malachi’s father, Danny Bradley, told a different story, one of much deeper concern, when he realized his son was missing. “It’s a horrible feeling, just knowing how vast the Uinta Mountains are,” he said, “I quickly felt how severe the situation was.”
Malachi recalled his great adventure Tuesday. He showed no signs of going without food for a day or sleeping between rocks for an hour at night to block the cold wind. But he admitted when he got home to his own bed on Monday night that he was asleep within a minute of his head hitting his pillow and stayed there for 12 hours.
His adventure began Sunday when Malachi, his father, two siblings(兄弟姐妹), and a family friend were about to leave their campsite near Paul Lake to go home. “We were just going to cook up a fish he caught and head out, and,” Danny Bradley paused, “it ended up being a lot longer.”
Malachi said he went to look for mushrooms about 10:30 a.m. He had just walked a long way when he encountered a snake. He was so frightened that he decided to get back but he could no longer see the lake where his campsite was set up. He knew he was lost.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Malachi didn’t have his whistle with him that he normally carries in case he gets lost when exploring.
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But on Monday afternoon, Malachi took off his shoes to take a break in an open area and heard another helicopter nearby.
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（2022春·江苏盐城·高三江苏省阜宁中学校考期中）
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One Saturday afternoon, I was watching TV in the living room with my grandpa when a blinding flash of lightning flashed across the sky, followed by a deafening sound, and the pictures on TV disappeared with that sound. Before I realized what had happened, a gray-white shadow rushed in through the open window and flew over my head. Bang! It hit the wall and slid off to the floor. Shaking with fear, I approached it cautiously and saw that it was a pigeon. It looked at me in fear, trying to open its wings and struggling its feet, but apparently powerless.
So I called my grandpa and immediately set out to give it a helping hand. Taking it in my hands, I felt a few drops of warmth on my hands. It was blood! I gently spread its wings and there were a few red feathers inside. “Don’t worry. We’ll get it out alive,” Grandpa said to me. Then he got the first-aid kit. With some cotton, we dried the blood, cleaned the wound and then put it under a hairdryer to dry. All went smoothly, for the pigeon had no strength left to resist. There happened to be an empty birdcage at home, so I put it in gently and added a little water and some grains.
For the next few days, the moment I got home from school, I would run to feed the pigeon. And Grandpa helped a lot, tidying up the cage daily. Little by little, its strength returned. One evening, I fed it with the biscuit I was eating. It enjoyed it! One week later, its wound almost healed (痊愈); its feathers grew and it became brave. Whenever I sat at the table eating biscuits, it looked up at me, cooing (咕咕地叫) constantly. To my joy, I could also reach into the cage to touch it. When I gently fingered its head, it playfully pecked (啄) at me. Finally it completely recovered. But every time I was with it, it seemed restless in the cage. To make it happy and pretty, I tied an orange string (线)around its leg.
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
One day, however, when I returned home, Grandpa met me at the door, looking embarrassed.
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Sure enough, I saw a pigeon flying into the house the next afternoon!
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