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Ben 打破古董花瓶
2021广州一模读后续写
It took place in a teacher’s family. One day, Ben was playing basketball in the living room after school, when he accidentally threw the ball at a vase sitting on the shelf. The vase dropped to the floor and a large piece broke off. What made Ben more upset was that the vase was not a common decoration but an antique, which was handed down through generations from the 18th century. It was also his mother’s favourite possession. To cover his terrible action, the terrified boy glued the pieces together hastily (匆忙地) and put the vase back to its place.
As the mother herself dusted the vase every day, she naturally noticed the cracks (裂纹) that evening. To her surprise, the repair work was actually very good. At dinner time, she asked her boy if he broke the vase. Fearing punishment, the suddenly inspired boy said that a neighbour’s cat jumped in from the window and he couldn’t drive it away no matter how hard he tried. It raced around the living room and finally knocked the vase off its shelf. His mother was quite clear that her son was lying, for all the windows were closed before she left for work each morning and opened after she returned.
However, in the face of her son’s nervous eyes and the suspicious (表示怀疑的) looks of the other family members, Ben’s mother remained calm. She realized she shouldn’t just simply blame and punish her son for lying. She came up with another idea.
Before going to bed, the boy found a note from his mother in his room, asking him to go to the study at once. The boy thought he would no w be punished but, as he had already lied, he was determined to deny everything to the end, no matter how angry his mum became.
In the study, calmly bathed in the light, his mother’s face showed no sign of anger. On seeing her son push open the door and cautiously enter, she took a chocolate box out of a drawer and gave him one.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The mother said, “This chocolate is a reward for your imagination: a window-opening cat!” ______________________________
Now with some chocolates in hand, the boy’s bad attitude disappeared. ______________________________________________
根据你对原材料的理解，判断以下表述是正确（T）还是错误（F）。
1. Ben broke the vase that had been in the family for hundreds of years.
2. An antique specialist did a perfect job at repairing the vase.
3. Ben’s mother was so angry that she punished him for lying.
T
F
F
Mother told Ben the chocolate was a reward for his imagination …
1. Opening
Ben accidentally broke his mother’s favorite antique vase, but he glued the pieces together.
Mother noticed the cracks and asked Ben about them. Ben lied and blamed the neighbour’s cat for the accident.
Mother asked Ben to go to the study and gave him a piece of chocolate.
Ben’s bad attitude disappeared …
2. Build-up
3. Climax
4. Resolution
5. Ending
Para. 1: The mother said, “This chocolate is a reward for your imagination: a window-opening cat!”
Q1: How did Ben feel upon hearing his mother’s words Nervous Surprised Embarrassed
Q2: How can we write anything in Para.1 to show Ben’s “bad attitude” mentioned in Para. 2
Q3: Why did Ben have some chocolates in his hand in Para. 2 What other rewards might be mentioned in Para. 1
→ 在构思第一段的续写内容时，务必参照第二段首句，寻找续写线索。
研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？
Para. 2: Now with some chocolates in hand, the boy’s bad attitude disappeared.
Q4: How did Ben feel now Ashamed Regretful
Q5: How would Ben tell his mother the truth
Q6: What was the mother’s reaction to the truth
Q7: How can we design the ending to teach the readers a moral
→ 第二段是全文的结尾段，在延续情节发展的同时，要注意对主题的升华。
研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？
The mother said, “This chocolate is a reward for your imagination: a window-opening cat!” ___________________ (Ben十分尴尬，满脸通红) as he realised what he had made up didn’t hold water. “You know, all the windows were closed.” ___________________ (妈妈似乎识破了他的谎言) but continued calmly, “Aren’t you imaginative to tell me the amazing cat ” Still reluctant to give in, the boy held his head high, _________________ (坚持声称是猫把花瓶打碎的，动词-ing作伴随状语). Instead of laying bare the truth, the mother pulled him close and pressed another two chocolates into his hand, “A reward for the perfect repair.”
Now with some chocolates in hand, the boy’s bad attitude disappeared. _________________ (他多希望能找个地缝钻进去啊！How引导的感叹句) “Mom, I’m sorry. It was not the cat; it was me ... ” he stammered out the truth, _________________ (不敢看他妈妈的眼睛，动词-ing作伴随状语). “If so, I have to take back these chocolates,” the mother hardened her voice. “But your honesty deserves an award — a box of chocolates.” _________________ (妈妈忽然把他搂在胸前) and spoke gently to him, “My little sweetheart, _________________ (诚实比任何一件古董都值钱。)”
根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分。
The mother said, “This chocolate is a reward for your imagination: a window-opening cat!” Ben blushed with embarrassment as he realised what he had made up didn’t hold water. “You know, all the windows were closed.” The mother seemed to see him through but continued calmly, “Aren’t you imaginative to tell me the amazing cat ” Still reluctant to give in, the boy held his head high, insisting it was the cat that broke the vase. Instead of laying bare the truth, the mother pulled him close and pressed another two chocolates into his hand, “A reward for the perfect repair.”
Now with some chocolates in hand, the boy’s bad attitude disappeared. How he wished the ground could open up and swallow him! “Mom, I’m sorry. It was not the cat; it was me ... ” he stammered out the truth, daring not to look his mother in the eye. “If so, I have to take back these chocolates,” the mother hardened her voice. “But your honesty deserves an award — a box of chocolates.” The mother suddenly gathered the boy to her chest and spoke gently to him, “My little sweetheart, honesty values more than any antique.”
阅读以下参考范文。
The mother said, “This chocolate is a reward for your imagination: a window-opening cat!” Ben blushed with embarrassment as he realised what he had made up didn’t hold water. “You know, all the windows were closed.” Mother seemed to see him through but continued calmly, “Aren’t you imaginative to tell me the amazing cat ” Still reluctant to give in, the boy held his head high, insisting it was the cat that broke the vase. Instead of laying bare the truth, the mother pulled him close and pressed another two chocolates into his hand, “A reward for the perfect repair.”
Now with some chocolates in hand, the boy’s bad attitude disappeared. How he wished the ground could open up and swallow him! “Mom, I’m sorry. It was not the cat; it was me ... ” he stammered out the truth, daring not to look his mother in the eye. “If so, I have to take back these chocolates,” the mother hardened her voice. “But your honesty deserves an award — a box of chocolates.” The mother suddenly gathered the boy to her chest and spoke gently to him, “My little sweetheart, honesty values more than any antique.”
范文赏析——生动的语言
感叹句
动词-ing作状语
with介词短语
形容词置于句首作状语
使用多样化的语言形式描写人物的心理和动作
带有感彩的动词
带有感彩的动词
范文赏析——合理推测人物心理和动作
The mother said, “This chocolate is a reward for your imagination: a window-opening cat!” Ben blushed with embarrassment as he realised what he had made up didn’t hold much water. “You know, all the windows were closed.” The mother seemed to see him through but continued calmly, “Aren’t you imaginative to tell me the amazing cat ” Still reluctant to give in, the boy held his head high, insisting it was the cat that broke the vase. Instead of laying bare the truth, the mother pulled him close and pressed another two chocolates into his hand, “A reward for the perfect repair.”
Now with some chocolates in hand, the boy’s bad attitude disappeared. How he wished the ground could open up and swallow him! “Mom, I’m sorry. It was not the cat; it was me ... ” he stammered out the truth, daring not to look his mother in the eye. “If so, I have to take back these chocolates,” the mother hardened her voice. “But your honesty deserves an award — a box of chocolates.” The mother suddenly gathered the boy to her chest and spoke gently to him, “My little sweetheart, honesty values more than any antique.”
Mother: 呼应原材料第二段中的“quite clear that her son was lying”、第三段中的“remained clam”、“She came up with another idea”、第五段中的“showed no sign of anger”
范文赏析——合理推测人物心理和动作
The mother said, “This chocolate is a reward for your imagination: a window-opening cat!” Ben blushed with embarrassment as he realised what he had made up didn’t hold much water. “You know, all the windows were closed.” The mother seemed to see him through but continued calmly, “Aren’t you imaginative to tell me the amazing cat ” Still reluctant to give in, the boy held his head high, insisting it was the cat that broke the vase. Instead of laying bare the truth, the mother pulled him close and pressed another two chocolates into his hand, “A reward for the perfect repair.”
Now with some chocolates in hand, the boy’s bad attitude disappeared. How he wished the ground could open up and swallow him! “Mom, I’m sorry. It was not the cat; it was me ... ” he stammered out the truth, daring not to look his mother in the eye. “If so, I have to take back these chocolates,” the mother hardened her voice. “But your honesty deserves an award — a box of chocolates.” The mother suddenly gathered the boy to her chest and spoke gently to him, “My little sweetheart, honesty values more than any antique.”
Ben: 呼应原材料第一段中的“upset”、“terrible action”、“terrified”和第二段中的“Fearing punishment”，第三段中的“nervous eyes”
The mother said, “This chocolate is a reward for your imagination: a window-opening cat!” Ben blushed with embarrassment as he realised what he had made up didn’t hold much water. “You know, all the windows were closed.” The mother seemed to see him through but continued calmly, “Aren’t you imaginative to tell me the amazing cat ” Still reluctant to give in, the boy held his head high, insisting it was the cat that broke the vase. Instead of laying bare the truth, the mother pulled him close and pressed another two chocolates into his hand, “A reward for the perfect repair.”
Now with some chocolates in hand, the boy’s bad attitude disappeared. How he wished the ground could open up and swallow him! “Mom, I’m sorry. It was not the cat; it was me ... ” he stammered out the truth, daring not to look his mother in the eye. “If so, I have to take back these chocolates,” the mother hardened her voice. “But your honesty deserves an award — a box of chocolates.” The mother suddenly gathered the boy to her chest and spoke gently to him, “My little sweetheart, honesty values more than any antique.”
将诚实的品质与价值不菲的古董作比，呼应前文，升华主题
范文赏析——小故事，大道理
妈妈口中的巧克力含义逐渐变化：
one chocolate:
a reward for yourgination
↓
another two chocolates:
A reward for the perfect repair
↓
a box of chocolates:
an award for Ben’s honesty
几代相传
为某人的行为找借口
没有……的迹象
合情合理；说得通
不愿屈服
结结巴巴地说出真相
亮点语块
hand down through generations
cover one’s action
show no sign of (anger/fear/interest)
hold water
reluctant to give in
stammer out the truth
素材积累
Para. 1 His heart was pounding wildly … His heart was beating like a drum. His heart was beating like a wild animal trying to escape his chest. 男孩内心十分紧张
The boy insisted he was telling the truth. “Believe it or not,” the boy yelled, “it was the cat that broke the vase.” 男孩坚持自己没有撒谎
The mother put another chocolate in his hand as a reward for his topping ability to restore the broken vase. 妈妈又给了他一块巧克力，奖励他完美修复了花瓶
Para. 2 The boy hung his head in shame. He now could do nothing but feel the regret burning his heart. A heavy burden of guilt weighed him down. 男孩觉得羞愧、后悔、内疚
“But, Mom, I …” the boy tried to make something clear, but he only managed to utter some words awkwardly. 男孩不知道该如何辩解
He finally admitted his mistake. That was a great weight off his mind. 男孩终于承认错误，如释重负
“I was waiting for you to speak the truth yourself.” “I’m glad you told me the truth.” 男孩勇敢认错，妈妈很欣慰
Honesty far outweighs anything else. These chocolates rang the alarm in Ben’s heart every time he intended to lie, reminding him to be honest. Sometimes, rewards speak louder than punishments. Sometimes, no punishment itself is a kind of punishment. 升华主题

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