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ADVERSITY AND COURAGE
Using Language
Reading for Writing
写作
Amelia
Learning Objectives
1. To read a continuation story of the rest men on the island with 5W1H.
2. To know how to use proper words and phrases to express emotions and describe the environment.
3. To write a continuation story with 5W1H.
have an optimistic attitude towards adversity.
Watch the video about Shackleton and his crew on the Endurance
Prediction
In Pairs, predict
what might happened to the crew members.
After Shackleton left to look for rescue, his crew members were left on Elephant Island.
1.2 商业模式
no drinking water
food
water
no vegetables or fruit
the dangers of living in the island
dangerous wild animals,
savage,
changing temperatures.
What might happen
Problems
people remaining on Island might face
not able to make fire;
easily ill
Writing
Task: Continue the story.
After Shackleton left to look for rescue, his crew members were left on Elephant Island.
We watched as Shackleton and the boat sailed away from Elephant Island. It was easy to imagine the danger ahead of them. Would they ever turn to find us What might happen to them What if they were delayed We felt so alone and desperate. But it was not for long.
Life fell into a regular pattern and staying alive took all our time and energy. ____________________________________________
When we were finally rescued,___________________________.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Read for the structure with 5W1H
When
Where
What
Who
Why
How
As Shackleton and the boat sailed away from Elephant Island
On the Elephant Island
Shackleton and the men left on the Island.
Shackleton left and the rest men tried to survive on the Island and waited for him to rescue them.
They were rescued and felt grateful and joyful.
Their optimism and faith in Shackleton had helped them persevere in staying alive.
What
1. Read for the structure to complete the 4 squares
Find the details to support the main idea of each paragraph.
Plot: results (Para. 2)
Characters and settings
Plot: problems and solutions (Para.1)
Plot: problems and solutions (Para. 1)
1
3
4
when, where, who, what to think
what to do (problems)
what to do (solutions)
how and why
2
When: as Shackleton and the boat sailed away
Who: crew members on the Endurance
Where: Elephant Island
What to think: alone, desperate, worried
Problems
①got drinking water;
②made fire;
③food problem;
④were ill
Solutions
①melted ice from the ocean;
②used animal fat as the only fuel;
③varied the meals of sea animals;
④not to go outside
What: being rescued
How: relieved, grateful, joyful
Why: discipline, team spirit, optimism, faith in Shackleton
Use the clues above to continue the writing
Para 1: Life fell into a regular pattern and staying alive took all our time and energy.
Para 2: When we were finally rescued,
①描述问题：水、生火、食物、生病；
②如何解决问题；
③Shackleton前来营救。
①获救的反应：放松，喜悦；
②总结获救原因；
③对Shackleton表示感激。
Find out useful expressions in the passage to continue the writing
Para 1: Life fell into a regular pattern and staying alive took all our time and energy.
水：
生火:
食物：
生病：
Find out useful expressions in the passage to continue the writing
Para 2: When we were finally rescued,
获救：
Combine the sentences连词成句
We watched as Shackleton and the boat sailed away from Elephant Island. It was easy to imagine the danger ahead of them. Would they ever turn to find us What might happen to them What if they were delayed We felt so alone and desperate. But it was not for long.
Life fell into a regular pattern and staying alive took all our time and energy. With no water to drink, we could melt ice from the ocean and drink the water from it. If it weren’t for sea animals, we would all starve. But how could we make fire The only fuel we could use was animal fat. This stayed burning even in strong wind but it gave off oily, black smoke. Besides, we had to be careful not to go outside too often, as the changing temperatures could make us ill. It was almost as dangerous to become too cold from wearing too few. The sweat could freeze very quickly.
When we were finally rescued, we felt such relief and joy that many of us could not hide our tears. We were at last free to go home to warm beds, good food, and the care of our family and friends. So our optimism and faith in Shackleton had helped us persevere in staying alive. And he paid us back by his commitment to save us from a slow but painful death.
Read for writing methods
We felt so alone and desperate. (para 1)
When we were finally rescued, we felt such relief and joy that many of us could not hide our tears. (para 3)
1
What’s the function of underlined expressions
A. give opinions
B. express emotions
C. describe environment
so +adj. (+ that)
such + adj. + n + that
Practice
She was ____________ (excite) _______ she couldn’t fall asleep.
她兴奋得睡不着觉。
so excited
that
Emotional description
(情感描写)
Read for writing methods
...with no water to drink, we could melt ice from the ocean and drink the water from it. (Para 2)
2
Practice
没路可走，他只能返回来。
她转过身，泪流满面。
Environment depiction
(环境描写)
(with的复合结构)
_____________________________, he had to come back.
She turned around, _______________________________.
with tears streaming down her face
With no path to go
Emotional description
(情感描写)
（with的复合结构）
Read for writing methods
The only fuel we could use was animal fat. This stayed burning even in strong wind but it gave off oily, black smoke, which made many of us ill. .... The sweat could freeze very quickly. (para 2)
3
Practice
他冒着炎炎烈日跑向了终点线。
modifiers
(巧用adj. 或adv. 作修饰语)
He ran towards the finish line in the ____________(burn) heat.
burning
Environment depiction
(环境描写)
Summarize the writing methods
Writing methods
情感描写
环境描写
so+ adj. / such + n. that +句子
with的复合结构
modifiers (巧用adj.或adv.作修饰语)
with的复合结构
升级词汇
Para 1:
①由于没有水可喝，我们只能喝海洋中融化的冰。
②如果不是因为海洋动物，我们都会饿死的。
③至于生火，我们得到的唯一燃料是动物脂肪，即使在强风中也能燃烧，但会释放出油腻的黑烟。
With no water to drink, we could melt ice from the ocean and drink the water from it.
句式整合升级版
With no water to drink, what we could do was drink the melted ice from the ocean.
If it weren’t for sea animals, we would all starve.
If it weren’t for sea animals, we would all starve to death.
But how could we make fire The only fuel we could use was animal fat. This stayed burning even in strong wind but it gave off oily, black smoke.
As for making fire, the only fuel we got was animal fat, which stayed burning even in the strong wind but gave off oily, black smoke.
④更糟糕的是，不断变化的温度使我们无法经常外出。
⑤幸运的是，多亏Shackleton带着救援队回来，我们才最终看到了希望的迹象。
Fortunately, thanks to Shackleton, who returned with the rescue team, we eventually saw signs of hope.
Fortunately, it wasn’t until Shackleton returned with the rescue team that we eventually saw signs of hope.
Besides, we had to be careful not to go outside too often, as the changing temperatures could make us ill. It was almost as dangerous to become too cold from wearing too few. The sweat could freeze very quickly.
Worse still, the changing temperatures prevented us from going outside too often.
Para 2:
①当我们终于获救时，我们感到如此的欣慰和喜悦，以至于我们中的许多人都忍不住流下了幸福和感激的泪水。
②筋疲力尽但喜出望外的我们回到了家，那里有温暖的床铺、美味的食物和亲友相伴。
When we were finally rescued, we felt such relief and joy that many of us could not hide our tears.
When we were finally rescued, such relief and joy did we feel that many of us couldn’t help shedding tears of bliss and appreciation.
We were at last free to go home to warm beds, good food, and the care of our family and friends.
Exhausted but overjoyed, we got back home to warm beds, good food, and the care of our family and friends.
③要是没有对Shackleton的乐观和信念，我们就没办法坚持下去。
④我们首次意识到我们有多么幸运遇到了Shackleton，他坚定地将我们从缓慢但痛苦的死亡中拯救出来。
And he paid us back by his commitment to save us from a slow but painful death.
We realized how fortunate we were to meet Shackleton, who committed to saving us from a slow but painful death.
Never once had we realized how fortunate we were to meet Shackleton, who committed to saving us from a slow but painful death.
So our optimism and faith in Shackleton had helped us persevere in staying alive.
Without our optimism and faith in Shackleton, we wouldn’t have persevered in staying alive.
Version 1
Version 2
Summarize the structure
Structure
场景 settings
情节
plot
人物 characters
When
Where
Who
What
Why
How
What to think
What to do
What to hear
What to say
feelings
results
Homework
Task: Continue the story according to what we’ve learned just now.
高考链接 ——(2016年浙江卷10月改编)
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snow-capped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom! ”she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落)somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. 注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1:
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. ________________
Paragraph 2:
It was daybreak when Jane woke up. __________________________
Read for the structure with 5W1H
When
Where
What
Who
Why
How
What
Jane quarrelled with her husband Tom.
one weekend in July
by a lake in the forest
Jane and her husband Tom
Jane got lost in the forest without the phone, food and water.
tired, hungry, thirsty and sleepy
Solutions
①found some berries to eat;
②slept;
③walked along the stream; hoped the helicopter would take her away
Plot: problems and solutions (Para.1)
Plot: Results (Para. 2)
Plot: problems and solutions (Para. 1)
Characters and settings (阅读)
3. Learn to write the structure with 4 squares
1
2
3
4
why, when, where, who
what + how (problems)
what + how (solutions)
what and how
How to change the structure to fit our article
When: One weekend
Who: Jane and her husband Tom
What: went camping by a lake →had quarrels→Jane got lost
Where: In the forest
Problems
①made fire;
②got food;
③found the way out.
What: After some time, her husband Tom found her.
How: excited
Use the clues above to continue the writing
Para 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
①描述感受：后悔，绝望，疲惫；
②角色反应：跟丈夫的回忆，给予勇气继续前进；
③如何解决问题：生火，水，食物；
④休息。
①获救前：解决饮食问题，继续上路；
②获救中：到空地等待救援，Tom找到她；
③获救后：角色反应——欣喜，激动。
5. 成文：Write the story on your own
Para 1 What to do: problems and solutions — feelings, food , fire , sleep
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Feelings + What to think
what to do — fire
What to do —food and sleep
Jane感到绝望和筋疲力竭，在附近的一块石头上躺下。突然，与丈夫的回忆涌上心头，这让她有勇气应对这种可怕的情况。
Desperate and extremely exhausted, Jane lay down near a stone. Suddenly, the memories with her husband crowded in, which made her take the courage to cope with the terrible situation.
她感到有点安心并充满希望，于是立刻生了火。
Feeling a bit settled and hopeful, she managed to make a fire at once.
在那之后，她匆忙地去找了一些莓子来吃。Jane她抵不住睡意，睡着了。
After that, she hurried to find some berries to eat. Soon Jane couldn't resist the nap and fell fast asleep.
句子升级：
当夜幕开始降临时，Jane感到如此疲惫以至于她抵不住睡意，睡着了。
例句1：
Soon Jane couldn't resist the nap and fell asleep.
With night beginning to fall, soon Jane felt ______________ couldn't resist the nap and fell fast asleep.
Learn to use writing methods
so tired that
Emotional description (情感描写)
使用so+ adj. / such + n. that +句子
句子升级：
Jane感到绝望和筋疲力竭，在附近的一块石头上躺下，泪流满面。
例句2：
Desperate and exhausted, Jane lay down near a stone.
Desperate and extremely exhausted, Jane lay down near a stone, __________________________________.
Learn to use writing methods
with tears streaming down her face.
Emotional description (情感描写)
（with的复合结构）
句子升级：
在那之后，借着微光，她匆忙地去找了一些莓子来吃。
例句3：
After that, she hurried to find some berries to eat.
After that, she hurried to find some berries to eat when there was still ______________.
Learn to use writing methods
dim light
Environment depiction
(环境描写)
modifiers (巧用adj. 或adv. 作修饰语)
5. 成文：Write the story on your own
Para 1 What to do: problems and solutions — feelings, food , fire , sleep
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Feelings + What to think
what to do — fire
What to do —food and sleep
Jane感到绝望和筋疲力竭，在附近的一块石头上躺下，泪流满面。突然，与丈夫的回忆涌上心头，这让她有勇气应对这种可怕的情况。
Desperate and extremely exhausted, Jane lay down near a stone, with tears streaming down her face. Suddenly, the memories with her husband crowded in, which made her take the courage to cope with the terrible situation.
她感到有点安心并充满希望，于是立刻生了火。
Feeling a bit settled and hopeful, she managed to make a fire at once.
在那之后，借着微光，她匆忙地去找了一些莓子来吃。当夜幕开始降临时，Jane感到如此疲惫以至于她抵不住睡意，睡着了。
After that, she hurried to find some berries to eat when there was still dim light. With night beginning to fall, soon Jane felt so tired and sleepy that she couldn't resist the nap and fell fast asleep.
5. 成文：Write the story on your own
Para 2 Results (what, how)
It was daybreak and Jane woke up.
What to do
What to hear
How to feel+ What to say
Results + Feelings
在吃了一些莓子和喝水后，她沿着小溪走着，希望很快能找到她的丈夫。令她非常高兴的是，她终于到达了一个空地。Jane祈祷直升机能再次回来，于是坐下来耐心地等待。
After eating some berries and drinking water, she walked along the stream, hoping to find her husband soon. To her great joy, she finally arrived at an open area. Praying that the helicopter would come back again, Jane sat down waiting patiently.
似乎过了很长一段时间，她听到远处传来一个声音。
After what seemed like a long time, she could hear a voice somewhere at a distance.
她内心充满了喜悦，挣扎着站起来喊道：“我在这里！”
With joy welling up inside her, she struggled to her feet and shouted, “I'm here!”
看到Jane，Tom感到非常兴奋，他无法抑制自己的喜悦，赶紧紧紧地拥抱他的妻子。
Seeing Jane, Tom felt such excitement that he couldn’t contain his joy and rushed to hug his wife tightly.
Summary
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