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2021年浙江三地市统测读后续写
兄弟之间应宽容以待
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Carter enjoyed riding the school bus home. The ride home gave him some time to relax after a busy day of fifth grade. He usually sat alone and enjoyed that too. With four siblings (兄弟姐妹) he didn’t get much time alone. Sometimes he sat with his younger brother, Jackson, but Jackson was sick at home today.
The bus stopped and the tallest boy in his class, Dexter, stepped off followed by his younger brother, Billy. As the bus pulled away, Carter looked back over his shoulder to watch the boys. Dexter was yelling and waving his hands at his little brother. Billy said something Carter could not hear. Dexter yelled, gave his younger brother a hard push and knocked him to the ground. Billy was on the ground wiping his eyes, but Dexter walked away.
Carter turned in his seat, feeling disgusted (反感的). He hated seeing little kids get picked on (欺负). The sight of Billy on the ground crying was burned into his memory. He tried to think of something else.
He thought of the model car he was working on at home, a 1967 Corvette. He started building it over a week ago and just finished putting it together last night. Tonight, as soon as he finished his homework, he could start painting the car.
That was his favorite part. He already had the perfect color of blue picked out.
He hurried off the bus, ran through his yard, and rushed through the kitchen with a quick hello to his mom. She was making dinner, which smelled delicious. He ran up the stairs two at a time and rushed into his room.
“Surprise!” his brother Jackson said, throwing his arms into the air.
“What are you doing in my room I thought you were sick!”
“I feel better!”
“What’s on your face Are you bleeding ”
“No! I’m not bleeding.” Jackson wiped his face. “It’s probably just paint. Look! Look what I did!” He pointed at the desk in the corner of Carter’s room.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: Carter looked down at his desk in horror.
Paragraph 2: Carter took a deep breath and then unfolded his fists.
1.What did Carter see on his way home
2. How did Carter feel when he saw the sight
3. What did Carter think of to get rid of the bad feeling
He saw Dexter picking on his young brother.
He felt disgusted and hated it.
He thought of his model car and he wanted to paint it blue.
理解材料
4. What did Carter see when he rushed into his room
His younger brother Jackson painted his model car red.
理解材料
Carter looked down at his desk in horror…
1. Opening
On his way home, Carter saw Dexter pick on his younger brother Billy, which made Carter feel disgusted.
The sight of Billy crying on the ground was burned into Carter’s memory. He tried to think of his model car to get rid of the bad feeling and wanted to paint his car blue.
Carter rushed into his room and saw his younger brother Jackson, whose face looked like bleeding.
Carter took a deep breath and then unfolded his fists…
2. Build-up
3. Climax
4. Resolution
5. Ending
Paragraph 1: Carter looked down at his desk in horror.
According to “Are you bleeding ” in the text and “horror” here, we can learn that Jackson painted the model car red, so this paragraph should be mainly about the conflict between Carter and Jackson.
Paragraph 2: Carter took a deep breath and then unfolded his fists.
According to “unfolded his fists” here, we can infer that Carter forgave Jackson in the end.
研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？
Carter looked down at his desk in horror. His Corvette! Jackson had painted it red. An awful dull shade of red! “Why would you do that ” Carter shouted. Carter could feel the anger growing, bubbling up inside him, _____________________(他的双手攥成了拳头 独立主格). Frightened by the loud voice of his brother, Jackson lowered his head and murmured, “I ... I just wanted to give you a surprise!”______________________________
________________________________________________(卡特突然意识到，他刚刚的所作所为与德克斯特在街上的行为一样。it作形式主语)
Carter took a deep breath and then unfolded his fists.__________________(想到比利坐在地上抹眼泪，而德克斯特却扬长而去的情景 动词-ing形式作状语), Carter stepped toward the desk where the car was still drying. He apologized to his brother, “I’m sorry for yelling at you, but I had planned to paint it blue.” Hearing this, Jackson smiled and embraced Carter tightly, “Let’s paint it together! Together!” ___________________________________________________(他们刚涂完这辆独一无二的汽车，妈妈就喊他们吃晚饭了。No sooner than)There was no denying now that siblings could get on well by being tolerant of each other.
根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分。
独立主格结构
动词-ed形式作状语。
动词-ing形式作状语。as Dexter walked away是时间状语从句。
固定句式It suddenly dawned on sb. that …，意为“某人突然意识到……”。
固定句式No sooner… than… ，意为“一……就……”。
where 引导定语从句修饰desk。
固定句式There was no denying that…，意为“不可否认。此句为文章的点睛之笔……” ，点明了文章的主题——兄弟姐妹间要宽容相待。
Carter looked down at his desk in horror. His Corvette! Jackson had painted it red. An awful dull shade of red! “Why would you do that ” Carter shouted. Carter could feel the anger growing, bubbling up inside him, his hands curling into fists. Frightened by the loud voice of his brother, Jackson lowered his head and murmured, “I ... I just wanted to give you a surprise!” It suddenly dawned on Carter that what he did just now was like Dexter’s action on the street.
Carter took a deep breath and then unfolded his fists. Picturing the scene of Billy sitting on the ground and wiping his eyes as Dexter walked away, Carter stepped toward the desk where the car was still drying. He apologized to his brother, “I’m sorry for yelling at you, but I had planned to paint it blue.” Hearing this, Jackson smiled and embraced Carter tightly, “Let’s paint it together! Together!” No sooner had they painted the unique car than their mom called them to have dinner. There was no denying now that siblings could get on well by being tolerant of each other.
范文赏析——精彩语言
亮点语块
（车）开走
抹眼泪
一步两个台阶跑上楼
他低下了头
渐渐明白
想象那个场景
朝着桌子走去
向他的弟弟道歉
相处融洽
对……宽容
pull away
wipe one’s eyes
run up the stairs two at a time
lower his head
dawn on
picture the scene
step toward the desk
apologize to his brother
get on well
be tolerant of
续写素材积累
1. What came into sight was an ugly red car, which really annoyed him.
2. His eyebrows were knotted together and his face was flushed with anger.
3. “I wanted to surprise you!” Jackson grinned, with his eyes gleaming.
4. Looking at Jackson, Carter couldn’t help imagining his little brother spending the whole day carefully painting the car.
5. He stroked Jackson’s clown-like face and comforted him, “What a sweet surprise!”...
6. “Do you Do you like it ” Jackson asked.
7. As the clouds between them were swept away, they played with this amusing but lovely car together. It was nothing but love that filled the room.
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