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高考英语读后续写语篇练习
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——做玫瑰还是做蒲公英
题目分析
读后续写
题目再现
范文呈现
努力方向
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Part 1
题目再现
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续写原文
I grew up in a small town where elementary school was a ten-minute walk from my house and in an age, not so long ago, when we children could go home for lunch and find our mothers waiting. At the time, I didn’t consider this to be so important, although today it certainly would be. Actually, our lunch time together in the past years had had a great influence on my life before I realized it.
Our lunch time when I was in the third grade will stay with me always. I had been picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had painstakingly practised my lines with me. But no matter how easily I delivered them at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained patiently that she needed a narrator and had written a narrator’s part to the play, and asked me to switch roles. Her words, kindly delivered, still hurt me, especially when I saw my part go to another girl.
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续写原文
I didn’t tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But she sensed my unease, and instead of suggesting we practice my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in the yard. It was a lovely spring day and the rose vine(藤) was turning green. Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions(蒲公英) appearing unexpectedly through the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with small amounts of gold. I watched my mother casually bend down by one of the bushes. “I think I'm going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, pulling a blossom up by all its roots. “From now on, we’ll have roses in this garden.” I immediately protested, “But I like dandelions. All flowers are beautiful — even dandelions.”
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段首句
Para 1: “Do you mean that every flower has its own beauty ” asked my mother thoughtfully.
Para 2: “But you will be a beautiful narrator,” Mom said.
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Part 2
题目分析
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已知短文内容
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者被选为学校话剧中的公主，但一上台，作者就忘词，老师就让作者做一名叙述者，回家后，作者妈妈看出作者的不安，妈妈提议把杂草挖掉，种蒲公英。
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点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；
点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；
点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；
点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。
情节构建的重点
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续写建议
第一段：
由第一段首句内容““你是说每朵花都有它自己的美丽吗 ”母亲若有所思地问。”可知，第一段可描写妈妈举蒲公英的例子来安慰作者，作者敞开心扉告诉妈妈学校里发生的事。
第二段：
由第二段首句内容““但你会成为一名出色的叙述者，”妈妈说。”可知，第二段可描写经过妈妈的鼓励，作者受到了蒲公英也有自己的美这一事实的激发，成功地作为一位叙述者完成了幕后解说任务。
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续写线索：陪走路——帮助——感谢——陪回家——拒绝——感悟
续写建议
语境词汇
行为类
意识到：realize/ recognize
失去：deprive / lose
鼓励：encourage / pull for
情绪类
成功：a big success / successful
耐心：patiently / with patience
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Part 3
范文呈现
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范文呈现
“Do you mean that every flower has its own beauty ” asked my mother thoughtfully. I nodded without hesitation, as if a second wasted could deprive the dandelions of their life. “The same to you,” she added, her voice soft. “Not everyone can be a rose, and it is also an honour to be a dandelion.” Knowing that my mother had realized my pain, I took off the mask that I had worn for the whole lunch time and poured out my unease heartily. She listened to me patiently and patted me on the back tenderly. Suddenly she stopped, as if to say something.
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范文呈现
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” Mom said. She reminded me of how fluently I could deliver my part at home. It was at that time that I understood that maybe I was more suitable for a role back stage like a narrator. From then on, I practiced my lines heart and soul with my mother at lunch time for weeks. And the performance approached ultimately. Standing backstage, nervousness came flooding in me. What encouraged me to overcome it was the inspiration from the beautiful yellow dandelions. The performance that night was eventually a big success. Hearing the thunderous applause, I took pride in my role and firmly believed that even a dandelion had its own beauty.
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Part 4
努力方向
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高级结构
名词性从句
高级结构
三连动
虚拟语气
形容词做状语
无灵主语
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定语从句
状语从句
（包含倒装句）
强调句
副词做状语
非谓语
（包括独立主格）
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低头是题海，抬头是前途。终将上岸，阳光万里!
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