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2021漳州一模读后续写
滑雪被困山中
On Sunday, Nicholas, a teenager, went skiing with his father at Sugarloaf Mountain in Maine. They had a wonderful day and decided to drive home to Massachusetts after a final run. They took a chairlift to the top of the mountain, where they split up to go down in different trails. When the father finished his run, he headed to the parking lot to wait for his son. However, Nicholas never showed up.
It turned out that a fierce snowstorm had swept into the area as Nicholas was on his way down. Unable to see far, he accidentally turned off (拐出) the path and ventured down the west side of the mountain. Before he knew it, Nicholas was lost and all alone. His way back to the ski trails was blocked. What’s worse, he didn’t have any food or water with him, let alone his cell phone or other supplies. The sun began to sink and he was getting colder by the minute.
Nicholas had no idea where he was. He tried not to panic. He thought about Bear Grylls’ survival show Man vs. Wild that he used to watch on TV. In the show, Grylls is abandoned in a wild area and has to help himself out. It was time to put the tips he had learned to use.
He decided to stop moving around. He needed the energy, and the winds weren’t as strong in the valley where he stood as they were up on the mountain. Plus, there was a better chance of someone finding him if he stayed put. The first thing he did was to seek shelter from the freezing wind and snow. Using his skis, Nicholas built a snow cave. He gathered a huge mass of snow and dug out a hole in the middle. Then he piled branches on top of himself, like a blanket, to stay as warm as he could.
When evening came, Nicholas was really hungry. He ate some snow and drank some water from a nearby stream so that he wouldn’t dehydrate (脱水). Then he returned to his cave and slept.
试题重现
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
When Nicholas didn’t show up, his father realized there must be something wrong.
The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile
理解材料
Q1 : Who are the main characters in the story
Nicholas and his father.
Q2 : Why was Nicholas trapped in the mountain
A fierce snowstorm had swept into the area as Nicholas was on his way down. Unable to see far, he accidentally turned off the path and ventured down the west side of the mountain. Before he knew it, Nicholas was lost and all alone. His way back to the ski trails was blocked.
Q3 : How did Nicholas save himself
He stopped moving around to preserve strength.
Then he built himself a snow cave to keep the freezing wind and snow out.
He ate some snow and drank some water from a nearby stream so as not to dehydrate.
理解材料
Nicholas overcame the panic and managed to save himself.
1. Opening
Nicholas and his father went skiing.
Nicholas and his father split up to go down different trails.
On his way down, Nicholas was trapped in the mountain because of a fierce snowstorm.
The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile. …
2. Build-up
3. Climax
4. Resolution
5. Ending
Para. 2: The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile.
研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？
Para. 1: When Nicholas didn’t show up, his father realized there must be something wrong.
Q1: Who did Nicholas’ father turn to for help Who was on the search and rescue mission
Q2: What difficulties did the searchers experience when searching for Nicholas
Q3: How did the searchers improve the efficiency of the rescue work What plot should be set in para. 1 to relate to “snowmobile” in para. 2
Q4: What did Nicholas do when hearing the sound of the snowmobile
Q5: How was Nicholas when he was found
Q6: How did Nicholas feel when he was saved
根据括号中的汉语，补出句子中缺失的部分。
1. The father (报警), and a search team was gathered …
2. Hurrying to the office of (滑雪场), the father …
3. (坐立不安), the father rushed to …
2. The white stuff remains powdery and easily stirred by even (微风), which made the searchers completely disoriented.
1. Although (天气情况) were poor and the wind was still fierce …
moderate breezes
the weather conditions
Having ants in his pants
the ski resort
contacted the police
Q1: Who did Nicholas’ father turn to for help Who was on the search and rescue mission
Q2: What difficulties did the searchers experience when searching for Nicholas
2. The searchers (分成几个小组) going in different directions.
The team split up. One of the searchers who knew the area better decided to
(扫出一条山路) ...
sweep a mountain trail
separated into groups
根据括号中的汉语，补出句子中缺失的部分。
Q3: How did the searchers improve the efficiency of the rescue work What plot should be set in para. 1 to relate to “snowmobile” in para. 2
Q4: What did Nicholas do when hearing the sound of the snowmobile
1. He (走出来) and followed the sound to find help …
2. He (脱下外套), put it on top of a long stick and waved the stick hard.
took off his coat
went out
1. Despite feeling weak, Nicholas was generally (状态不错)…
1. He was carried back to the ski resort to (与家人重聚), feeling really happy.
2. Although being (冻僵), Nicholas was conscious.
2. He smiled with a warm blanket around him, (松了一口气).
letting out a sigh of relief
reunite with his family
numb with cold
in good condition
语言准备
根据括号中的汉语，补出句子中缺失的部分。
Q5: How was Nicholas when he was found
Q6: How did Nicholas feel when he was saved
When Nicholas didn’t show up, his father realized there must be something wrong. The father contacted the police, and a search team was gathered to look for the missing teenager. Although the weather conditions were poor and the wind was still fierce, they didn’t lose hope of finding Nicholas alive. They knew the clock was ticking, and Nicholas stood a better chance of survival the earlier they found him. The team split up. One of the searchers who knew the area better decided to sweep a mountain trail he used to hike up.
The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile. He went out and followed the sound to find help. He had walked for about a mile when he heard someone calling his name. He moved towards the sound, and sure enough, a few minutes later, he came face to face with the searcher. Despite feeling weak, Nicholas was generally in good condition. Then, he was carried back to the ski resort to reunite with his family, feeling really happy.
阅读以下参考范文，学习范文的精彩表达。
When Nicholas didn’t show up, his father realized there must be something wrong.
The father contacted the police, and a search team was gathered to look for the missing teenager. Although the weather conditions were poor and the wind was still fierce, they didn’t lose hope of finding Nicholas alive. They knew the clock was ticking, and Nicholas stood a better chance of survival the earlier they found him. The team split up. One of the searchers who knew the area better decided to sweep a mountain trail he used to hike up.
对比鲜明，两段形成有机衔接。
与前文照应，结局圆满。
侧面描写和正面描写相结合，天气恶劣、时间紧迫，但搜救者决心救出受困者。
He went out and followed the sound to find help. He had walked for about a mile when he heard someone calling his name. He moved towards the sound, and sure enough, a few minutes later, he came face to face with the searcher. Despite feeling weak, Nicholas was generally in good condition. Then, he was carried back to the ski resort to reunite with his family, feeling really happy.
The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile.
与材料中“他在没有食物及其他生活必需品的情况下，在山上过了一夜”相照应
与材料中他积极采取的自救措施相照应
主人公遇险不惊、积极自救，因此故事结局设置应尽量轻松愉快
对比鲜明，两段形成有机衔接。
When Nicholas didn’t show up, his father realized there must be something wrong. The father contacted the police, and a search team was gathered to look for the missing teenager. Although the weather conditions were poor and the wind was still fierce, they didn’t lose hope of finding Nicholas alive. They knew the clock was ticking, and Nicholas stood a better chance of survival the earlier they found him. The team split up. One of the searchers who knew the area better decided to sweep a mountain trail he used to hike up.
定语从句
一般过去时
范文赏析——生动的语言
The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile. He went out and followed the sound to find help. He had walked for about a mile when he heard someone calling his name. He moved towards the sound, and sure enough, a few minutes later, he came face to face with the searcher. Despite feeling weak, Nicholas was generally in good condition. Then, he was carried back to the ski resort to reunite with his family, feeling really happy.
动词-ing形式作伴随状语
过去完成时
介词短语
一般过去时
范文赏析——生动的语言
滑雪
玩得很开心
分开
朝停车场走去
出现
证明是
在下山的路上
更糟糕的是
挖了一个洞
报警
坐立不安
是治愈者而不是麻烦
微风
分成若干组
朝不同的方向
冻僵
松了一口气
失去希望
时间在流逝
有更好的机会
面对面
have a wonderful day
go skiing
head to the parking lot
split up
It turns out that …
show up
what’s worse
on the way down
dig out a hole
have ants in his pants
contact the police
separate into groups
moderate breezes
more a healer than a bother
let out a sigh of relief
numb with cold
in different directions
the clock was ticking
lose hope of
face to face
stand a better chance of
语言准备
材料词块
范文词块
范文亮点语块
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