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2023年广州一模应用文
3 作答示范及下水作文
1 考题、考情分析
2 写作要点设计
目录
4 类似真题拓展
1
考题分析
Part one
考题命题分析
你校英文报“Teenage Life”专栏本期的主题为“Sports and Health”。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，
内容包括：
1．运动的重要性；
2．你的运动建议。
提出问题：运动与健康的关系（以下两个列点必须紧扣回答两者关系）
命题特点：提出问题、开放作答、合理论证：鼓励学生多角度主动思考、深入探究，降低“死记硬背”和“机械刷题”的收益。
合理论证：运动的重要性
开放作答：个人对运动注意事项的看法
答题分析
你校英文报“Teenage Life”专栏本期的主题为“Sports and Health”。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，
内容包括：
1．运动的重要性；
2．你的运动建议。
论证运动的重要性
提出运动注意事项
语言组织：
定义法、举例子法、排比句、对照法、比喻句。
考情分析
你校英文报“Teenage Life”专栏本期的主题为“Sports and Health”。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，
内容包括：
1．运动的重要性；
2．你的运动建议。
考生答题典型问题：
1. 答题结构不均，轻“重要性”，重“建议”；
2. sports重要性部分的解释与health无关
2
写作要点设计
Part Two
写作要点设计
使用定义法论证
Being physically active can improve your brain health, help manage weight, reduce stress, strenghthen bones and muscles, and improve your efficiency to do everyday activities.
写作要点设计
使用举例子论证
Doing exercises regularly has numerous benefits. For example, exercises help control your weight, because to maintain weight one must burn the extra calories throught doing workout.
写作要点设计
使用排比句论证
Physical activities not only lower your risks of developing diseases and enhance your immune system, but also boost one’s level of energy and miligate mental stress.
写作要点设计
使用对比法论证
Exercise is crucial to support a healthy metabolism, while the lack of it will lead to fatigue and diseases.
写作要点设计
使用定义法给建议
Consistency is the key to reap any benefit of doing any form of exercises -- be it moderate or mild.
写作要点设计
使用排比句给建议
Without exercises, one will not know the best state of his body. Without self-discipline and efforts, one will not taste the sweet part of the process.
写作要点设计
使用对比法给建议
The benefits will not be generated in a short time. They are accumulated over a long run.
写作要点设计
使用比喻句给建议
Rome wasn’t built in a day, so does a strong body.
3
作答示范
下水作文
Part three
作答示范：It is commonly acknowledged that sports are significant to our health. This is especially true for us teenagers.As we are still in the critical stage of growing up, doing sports can build up our bodies, thus helping us stay energetic and fit. What is also worth mentioning is the role sports play in maintaining our mental health.While working out, we may become more contented, confident and determined.
To fully enjoy these benefits, here are some tips.First, choose the sport that interests you most and suits you best. Second,find some good workout partners. That way, it's more likely that you'l exercise regularly. Lastly, exercise properly to prevent injuries.
I hope everyone will enjoy sports and live a healthy life. (122 words)
作答示范：As highschool students,we lead busy livesjuggling schoolwork and extracurricular activities It's crucial to maintain good health, both physical and mental
Having sports not only helps us stay fit andstrong, but also boosts our mood and relieves stress It's a great break from our workload that also benefits our bodies. Just find a form of physical activity that you enjoy and make it a part of your routine. Joining a school sports team or club can provide you with the necessary workout and a sense of belonging
Remember,taking care ofour bodies is just as important as taking care ofour minds. Make an effort each day, and your body and mind will thank you for it! (121 words)
Exercises play a vital role in regulating one’s health. Being physically active can improve your brain health, help manage weight, reduce stress, strenghthen bones and muscles, and improve your efficiency to do everyday activities.
Consistency is the key to reap any benefit of doing any form of exercises -- be it moderate or mild.Rome wasn’t built in a day, so does a strong body.
Zoe下水作文
Doing exercises regularly has numerous benefits. For example, exercises help control your weight, because to maintain weight one must burn the extra calories throught doing workout.Exercise is crucial to support a healthy metabolism, while the lack of it will lead to fatigue and diseases.
Without exercises, one will not know the best state of his body. Without self-discipline and efforts, one will not taste the sweet part of the process.
Zoe下水作文
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类似真题拓展
Part Four
2022年全国甲卷
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1. 海洋的重要性；
2. 保护海洋的倡议。
应用议论修辞中的“阐述关系”写对海洋的重要性：
Oceans feed us with fish populations, regulate the global climate, and generate most of the oxygen we breathe. They also serve as the foundation for much of the world’s economy, from tourism to fisheries to international shipping.
Oceans feed us with fish populations, regulate the global climate, and generate most of the oxygen we breathe. They also serve as the foundation for much of the world’s economy, from tourism to fisheries to international shipping.
When it comes to the annual World’s Ocean Day, June the 6th, it is the right time to appeal to the policymakers and fishermen for the conservation of special marine habitats, for the prevention of the collapse of fish species, and for the intervention of the damage to the sea life resulted from overfishing and pollution. The improvement of the world oceans will be achieved if we are dedicated enough to this mission. (114词)
Zoe下水作文
2021·全国乙卷
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 分析优势与不足；
2. 提出学习建议。
应用议论修辞中的“ 对照关系”写分析优势与不足：
As with most learning methods, online learning also has its own set of positives and negatives. It allows learners to attend classes from any location of their choice, especially beneficial to those being restricted by geographical boundaries. Yet its biggest challenge is the struggle with focusing on the screen for long period of time without distractions.
As with most learning methods, online learning also has its own set of positives and negatives. It allows learners to attend classes from any location of their choice, especially beneficial to those being restricted by geographical boundaries. Yet its biggest challenge is the struggle with focusing on the screen for long period of time without distractions.
In order to become a smart online learner, a good solution to this would be to take plenty of breaks from the screen to refresh one’s mind and body once we have to adopt online learning.
(94词)
Zoe下水作文
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