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A Vacation with My Mom
理解材料
A vacation with my mother
I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother — loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨) while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids ” “What ! Oh, Gosh … I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections (反对). If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.
Paragraph 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.
根据短文内容完成下面的对话。
A: What’s the most unforgettable trip you’ve taken
B: I believe it would be the trip with my ________________________ when I was eleven. It was interesting but ________ due to my mom’s _____________.
A: Really Were you well prepared before departure？
B: We thought we were. We brought almost everything we needed on the road including ____________________. But two hours after departure we returned to get the ________________________.
A: Was there a chance to use the tent
B: Not at the beginning. On the fourth or fifth night, we couldn’t find a hotel with vacancy. My mom suggested setting the tent up at __________________________.
A: Did your father agree with that idea B: Of course not.
parents and younger brother
strange
forgetfulness
camping gear and tent
someone else’s backyard
purse and traveler’s checks
理解材料
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.
1. Opening
My childhood was filled with surprise and amusements because of my sweet absent-minded mother.
We planned a trip to my two sets of grandparents. Two hours after departure we returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.
On the fourth or fifth night, we were unable to find a hotel with vacancy. Mom suggested setting up the tent at someone’s backyard. We all disagreed. Finally we found a hotel in another town.
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.
2. Build-up
3. Climax
4. Resolution
5. Ending
Para1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.
Para2：We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.
原文划线单词对后面情节发展做了铺垫和提示：absent-minded, forgetful, nice 点明了妈妈的性格特征；camping, tent, trip, trouble 提示了重点情节信息；David, Mom, Dad 说明了故事人物信息。
研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？
Q1: Did we use it Was there any disagreement about using the tent
Q2: Where did we put up the tent How was the camping place
Q3: How did we feel about the camping
Q4: How can the great sights be described in detail
Q5: What else did we experience along the trip apart from the great sights
Q6: Did we successfully make it to our grandparents’ place
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. ______________________________（妈妈坚持要用帐篷，我和David朝爸爸看了看，他笑着同意了。非限制性定语从句）Then we spent a whole afternoon seeking a nice camping place and finally set up our tent before night fell. ____________________________ （这是我第一次觉得妈妈睿智，因为我非常喜欢这个帐篷。It作形式主语）“Oh, I forgot the pillows!” Mom screamed. Despite the ache in my neck, we had an unforgettable night.
根据汉语提示补充范文所缺内容，使情节连贯，衔接合理。
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. The limitless green grass, the wandering sheep, the setting sun and the countless stars above the curtain of night kept me spellbou__________________________（我们不仅欣赏到了如画的风景，也非常开心有个健忘的妈妈陪伴我们，她让旅途充满了欢乐。非限制性定语从句）I really love her. Eventually, we arrived at our grandparents’ place, all four of us and not a single one left behind.
根据汉语提示补充范文所缺内容，使情节连贯，衔接合理。
Paragraph 1:
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Mom insisted that we should make full use of it. David and I looked at Dad, who smiled and nodded in agreement. Then we spent a whole afternoon seeking a nice camping place and finally set up our tent before night fell. It was the first time that I had thought Mom could be wise as I admired our stunning tent. “Oh, I forgot the pillows!” Mom screamed. Despite the ache in my neck, we had an unforgettable night.
找出回答“首句精研”中问题的句子。
Paragraph 2:
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. The limitless green grass, the wandering sheep, the setting sun and the countless stars above the curtain of night kept me spellbound. Not only did we enjoy the picturesque scenery, but we were also happy to have forgetful and absent-minded Mom around, who brought lots of laughter to our trip. I really love her. Eventually, we arrived at our grandparents’ place, all four of us and not a single one left behind.
找出回答“首句精研”中问题的句子。
范文赏析——生动的语言
Paragraph 1:
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Mom insisted that we should make full use of it. David and I looked at Dad, who smiled and nodded in agreement. Then we spent a whole afternoon seeking a nice camping place and finally set up our tent before night fell. It was the first time that I had thought Mom could be wise as I admired our stunning tent. “Oh, I forgot the pillows!” Mom screamed. Despite the ache in my neck, we had an unforgettable night.
时间线
范文赏析——生动的语言
Paragraph 2:
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. The limitless green grass, the wandering sheep, the setting sun and the countless stars above the curtain of night kept me spellbound. Not only did we enjoy the picturesque scenery, but we were also happy to have forgetful and absent-minded Mom around, who brought lots of laughter to our trip. I really love her. Eventually, we arrived at our grandparents’ places, all four of us and not a single one left behind.
时间线
范文赏析——生动的语言
Paragraph 1:
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Mom insisted that we should make full use of it. David and I looked at Dad, who smiled and nodded in agreement. Then we spent a whole afternoon seeking a nice camping place and finally set up our tent before night fell. It was the first time that I had thought Mom could be wise as I admired our stunning tent. “Oh, I forgot the pillows!” Mom screamed. Despite the ache in my neck, we had an unforgettable night.
精彩闪现
It was the first time
动词短语固定搭配
定语从句
范文赏析——生动的语言
Paragraph 2:
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. The limitless green grass, the wandering sheep, the setting sun and the countless stars above the curtain of night kept me spellbound. Not only did we enjoy the picturesque scenery, but we were also happy to have forgetful and absent-minded Mom around, who brought lots of laughter to our trip. I really love her. Eventually, we arrived at our grandparents’ places, all four of us and not a single one left behind.
精彩闪现
not only… but also
定语从句
nod in agreement
set up our tent
an unforgettable night bring lots of laughter to
把车开走
放哨
充满了
令我们欣慰的是
拒绝
当旅行第一天临近
我们准备离开的时候
be filled with
as the first day of our trip approached
the moment of our departure arrived
drive off
play lookout
to our great relief
turn down
点头同意
一个难忘的夜晚
搭起我们的帐篷
给……带来许多欢乐
原材料&范文亮点语块
◎ Obviously, the tent was nowhere to be found and Mom insisted on going back to fetch it.
◎ Thinking of the tent, Mom excitedly suggested that we go camping.
◎ Considering Mom’s enthusiasm, we all agreed.
◎ It was a clearing in the woods by a small lake, where Dad could catch some fish for dinner.
◎ We had no trouble setting up our tent, but we were disappointed to find that Mom forgot to pack pillows.
◎ Needless to say, we all woke up with a sore neck the next morning.
◎ That starry night, admiring the moon rising above the distant mountain and accompanied by the amusing stories of naughty David, we felt we’d had the most enjoyable camping trip.
◎ We crossed big rivers and vast plains, climbed high mountains, and overlooked deep valleys.
◎ During the trip, Mom’s being absent-minded not only got us into much trouble, but also gave us many funny moments.
◎ However, it was hard to deny that those incidents actually added laughter to our journey.
◎ We all arrived at our grandparents’ home safe and sound.
◎ This strange family trip would definitely be a cherished memory for the rest of our life.
◎ There is no person that can match her — my loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful mom.
◎ It was Mom that made my childhood colorful. It was also she that showed me the true meaning of giving.
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