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高考英语读后续写语篇练习——搬家之后状况百出，齐心协力制服老鼠题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目再现续写原文It was a beautiful sunny day when the moving van pulled onto the tree-lined street. Mark and Mindy stepped out of the van and looked at their new home with pride. They had both been saving for a long time to purchase their first house together and were very excited to go on a new venture.Within an hour they had unloaded a number of boxes and were pleased with their progress. The sky had begun to darken slightly, but the weather was still pleasant. Then Mindy heard it – even felt it. There was a large clap of thunder and then a bolt of lightning. Mindy and Mark immediately froze and looked at each other, then looked at the boxes scattered (分散) on their lawn. They hastily raced to get their belongings indoors, but not before getting caught in heavy rain.The couple stood in their living room, wet from head to toe, surrounded by what were now very wet boxes. Then, Mark noticed a pool of water in the hallway.He went to inspect (检查) and found that there was water dripping from the ceiling. “We can have someone fix it,” Mindy said. “I’ll grab a bucket to catch the water for now.”续写原文A moment later Mark heard a scream and raced into the kitchen just in time to see a mouse running across the floor.Mindy was frozen with fright.“Don’t worry. We can take care of that!” Mark said, trying to sound as reassuring (安心的) as possible. “Let’s go unpack some of the boxes. That will make us feel better.”Mark and Mindy made their way to the living room, but when they opened a box holding their kitchen utensils (器皿) and dishes, they found that all of their plates, bowls and cups were broken. They looked at each other in dismay (沮丧).“What do we do now ” Mindy asked.Their first day in their new home was not turning out to be the joyous occasion they had expected. Just then, they both heard a noise.段首句Paragraph 1: There was a knock at the door.Paragraph 2: It was coming from the attic.Part 2题目分析已知短文内容本文讲述了Mark和Mindy乔迁新居，搬家过程中状况百出。当他们从小货车上卸打包行李时，突然乌云密布，电闪雷鸣，两人手忙脚乱地把箱子都挪到室内，浑身淋得透湿。检查箱子时，又发现了天花板在漏水。Mark去拿水桶接漏水，这时厨房传来了Mindy的尖叫声，一只老鼠窜了出来。他们打包好的厨房用品也碎了。他们正准备坐下来聊一聊这糟心的一天，门口传来了一阵骚动和敲门声......点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写建议第一段：第一段应围绕闻敲门声开门后所出现的角色来描写，主要描写角色和两位主人公之间发生的事情，自然过渡到第二段。第二段：第二段则应该根据听到阁楼传来的声音，大体可推断为老鼠，如何制服老鼠，一切回归平静来写。Part 3范文呈现范文呈现There was a knock on the door. Confused and exhausted, they opened the door slowly,only to finda little kitten before their eyes. Mindylowered a bit of her body,hesitated for a whileand finally decided tofeed the starving but adorable little kitten. Mark immediatelydug out some snacks from the wet boxesscattered on the floor. Fortunately, the snacks were dry. The couple felt happy to see the kittenenjoy the treats. They were about to put the boxes away when they heard a noise. “Squeak! Squeak!” It was the mouse!范文呈现It was coming from the attic. Mindystood upright,frozen with fright.In that split second, the kittendashed toward the attic. She quicklyspotted the disgusting mouseandpounced (猛扑) on it without hesitation. Shepinned it to the groundbefore it could flee. Mindyfelt greatly relievedand started tomop up the waterin the hallway, making the room dry and comfortable. Mark went on to open other boxes, glad to find that the other delicate items were undamaged.Together with their new companion, they waited for the rain to stop. After all, everything would turn out to be fine.Part 4努力方向高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）低头是题海，抬头是前途。终将上岸，阳光万里!祝大家前程似锦!

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