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2023年中考英语热点话题写作-神舟系列与航空航天
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1．（2022春·北京朝阳·九年级统考期中）星河曙天，彩云当归，举世瞩目，英雄回家。2022年4月16日，神州十三号载人飞船返回舱成功着陆。“太空出差三人组”在空间站组合体工作生活了183天，刷新了中国航天员单次飞行任务太空驻留时间的记录。本学期学校开展“见字如面——对话航天英雄”学科活动，请你根据以下材料，写一篇作文，同时表达你对三位航天英雄的敬意。
材料/提示词语：
提示问题：
How long did they stay in the Space Station What do you think of it
What did they do in the Space Station Which one do you like best Why
What do you think of three taikonauts(中国航天员) What do you want to say to them
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2．（2022春·八年级单元测试）“神舟潇洒有天骄，科研硕果领风骚”，2022年6月5日10时44分，中国神舟十四号载人飞船发射成功。那时，你和你的同学在做什么？“英姿飒爽挂银袍，慷慨出征星汉遥”，由三位航天英雄的伟大壮举，你想到了什么？“黑发不知勤学早，白发方悔读书迟”，为实现“中国梦”而贡献自己一份力量，你打算做些什么？
事项 内容
做什么 列举你和你三位同学所做的事情
感想 1. 为了祖国，不怕死的精神； 2. 为他们感到骄傲； 3. 想到你以前的不良状况：在读书方面，比班上任何一名同学都懒；不会友好待人，已经和同学打架五次；最擅长打电子游戏。
打算 1. 向三位航天英雄学习； 2. 认真学习，多读书，向老师寻求帮助；和同学友好相处，帮助老师和同学；只在周末花一个小时玩电子游戏。
要求：
1. 短文内容应包括以上要点，可做适量拓展；
2. 书写工整、语句通顺、句意连贯、字数 80词左右。
参考词汇：英雄 hero 对……感到骄傲 take pride of（be proud of）
On June 5, Shenzhou 14 manned spacecraft was launched at Jiuquan Satellite Launch Center on time. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【3】
3．（2022秋·广东深圳·八年级统考期末）2022年6月5日，搭载三名宇航员的“神舟十四号”飞船顺利升空。将来去太空遨游成为了很多人的梦想，因为太空对我们来说是一个很神秘的地方。假如你是李华，上周去太空旅游了一趟。请发挥你的想象力，根据以下要点提示，以“My space travel”为题，写一篇文章描述你的太空之旅。
要点：
1. 旅行的同伴是谁？
2. 旅行的方式及花费的时间？
3. 在太空看到了什么？
4. 你的感受。
要求：
1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2. 不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息；
3. 80词左右，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
My space travel
I had a great time last week and I was so excited because I had a journey into space. ______________
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4．（2022·广西贵港·统考三模）4月16日，中国“神舟十三号”成功返回地球在世界上引起了极大反响，也让大家知道中国空间站建设的成功，不仅仅依靠我国强大的科学技术实力，也依靠训练有素、自我要求严格的航天员。作为一名中学生，想实现我们的梦想，我们首先要有一个强壮的体魄，更要有不怕困难的精神和较强的责任心。请根据以下表格内容以“How to be a better person”为话题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法。
健康生活 食物、运动、睡眠等
不怕挑战 尽力解决学习、生活中的问题等
对人友善 乐于助人、与人和睦相处等
牢记责任 照顾父母、帮助弱者等
你的想法 ……
要求：
1．内容必须包括所给的要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；
2．条理清楚、语句连贯；
3．词数：80个左右（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）；
4．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
How to be a better person
As a middle school student, if we want to be a better person, I think we should
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5．（2022·湖南邵阳·统考三模）一月三十一日，农历除夕，神舟十三号的三名航天员在遥远的太空专门发来视频，向祖国和人民送上祝福。这是中国人首次在距离地球400公里的“中国宫”里过新年。虽然我国的航天事业在发展中经历了许多困难，但是我国航天人不断钻研，将我国航天事业发展到世界领先地位。
作为一名中学生，也应该为祖国的繁荣富强贡献我们的一份力量，那我们应该怎么做呢？请结合下面的要点提示简要谈谈你的看法，可适当发挥。
要点提示：1. 了解中国历史，学习中国文化；2. 学习不同国家的优秀文化和知识；3. 刻苦学习，掌握各种技能……
写作要求：
1. 词数不少于80词；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
This Spring Festival, I was so excited when I received a blessing from the astronauts in Shenzhou 13. How amazing China is! __________________________________________________________________
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参考答案：
1．例文
The stars are rising in the sky, colorful clouds are coming home, attracting worldwide attention, and heroes go home. On April 16, 2022, the return capsule of Shenzhou XIII manned spacecraft landed successfully. The “space travel trio” has worked and lived in the space station assembly for 183 days, setting a new record for the time spent in space by Chinese astronauts on a single mission. They gave us a space lesson in space. They celebrated the Spring Festival for us in space. They ate and played sports in space, too. I like their space class best, and I learned a lot of scientific knowledge. I am proud of their work and thank them for their efforts.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示问题完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍三名航天员在空间站待了多长时间以及你的看法；
第二步，介绍他们在空间站做了什么以及你最喜欢哪一个；
第三步，最后介绍你认为中国航天员怎么样，你想对他们说什么。
[亮点词汇]
①play sports做运动
②like...best最喜欢
③be proud of为……骄傲
[高分句型]
The “space travel trio” has worked and lived in the space station assembly for 183 days, setting a new record for the time spent in space by Chinese astronauts on a single mission.（现在分词作状语）
2．例文：
On June 5, Shenzhou 14 manned spacecraft was launched at Jiuquan Satellite Launch Center on time. I thought the three astronauts were heroes of our country. I was proud of them, because they were not afraid of death for our country. However, my friends and I were watching TV and playing cards. At the same time, I thought of what I did badly before. I was lazier than any other student in our class in the study. I was good at playing video games. I was not friendly to my classmates, I fought with them five times. I was very ashamed for this.
I think I should learn from the astronauts. I will try my best to study hard. I will ask my teachers and the top students for help. I will get on well with my classmates. I will also help my teachers, students and family. I will only spend one hours playing video games on the weekend.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是材料类书面表达，根据提示内容，结合自身实际，谈一谈自己的感想和计划，可适当拓展。
2.写作指导：该题目主要使用第一人称，时态以一般过去时和一般将来时为主；第一段写中国神舟十四号载人飞船发射成功时，自己和同学在做什么，以及由此引发的感想；第二段写向航天英雄学习，并写出自己的计划。保证内容完整，行文连贯，做到无单词拼写错误和语法使用错误。
3．范文：
My space travel
I had a great time last week and I was so excited because I had a journey into space. I went there with a famous astronaut. He had been there many times. We spent 10 hours arriving there by spacecraft. When we reached there, I was amazed at the beauty of space. I saw many planets which looked very beautiful. But I thought the earth was the most beautiful. I hope everyone can have a chance to go on a space travel.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求以“My space travel”为题写一篇短文；要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般过去时为主；采用第一人称口吻；直接采用1段落格式，阐述清楚太空旅行的人物、时间、方式、内容以及感受；注意无语法和拼写错误。
4．例文
How to be a better person
As a middle school student, if we want to be a better person, I think we should do the following things.
First of all, it’s important to be healthy. We should eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food. We should also do exercise every day and get enough sleep to stay energetic. What’s more, we should not be afraid to face challenges. And we should try our best to solve problems in life and study. Besides, we should be kind and friendly to others and get on well with others. Last but not least, it’s our duty to take care of our parents. When we have the ability to give back to society, we can do what we can to help the weak.
I think the most important thing is to be a useful person. If I start to develop these good habits, I will become a better person and make a difference in the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据表格内容介绍成为一个更好的人的条件；
第二步，介绍你自己的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②instead of而不是
③what’s more此外
④last but not least最后但同样重要的
⑤make a difference起（重要）作用
[高分句型]
①When we have the ability to give back to society, we can do what we can to help the weak.（when引导时间状语从句）
②If I start to develop these good habits, I will become a better person and make a difference in the world.（if引导的条件状语从句）
5．例文
This Spring Festival, I was so excited when I received a blessing from the astronauts in Shenzhou 13. How amazing China is! As middle school students, we should also contribute to the prosperity of our motherland. Then what should we do
First, we should understand Chinese history and learn about Chinese culture. In this way, we can better spread Chinese culture to the world. Second, we should learn about the excellent culture and knowledge of different countries. Understanding different cultures helps to broaden our horizons. Third, we should study hard and master all kinds of skills. When the young are strong, China is strong.
Let us work together to contribute to the prosperity of the country.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，谈谈我们应该如何为祖国的繁荣富强贡献我们的一份力量。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时主要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍应该怎么做；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

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