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高考英语读后续写语篇练习
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——夫妻俩森林迷路
题目分析
读后续写
题目再现
范文呈现
努力方向
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Part 1
题目呈现
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续写原文
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountaintop. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
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续写原文
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling(滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
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续写段首语
Paragraph1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Paragraph2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
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Part 2
题目分析
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点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；
点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；
点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；
点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。
情节构建的重点
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续写建议
第1段：但是没有更多的直升机来了，天又黑了。
1.简再一次被扔进了一个黑暗的世界，陷入了绝望。
2.那一刻，她只想坐下来好好哭泣。
3.但转念一想，她决定找个安全的地方过夜。
4.虽然简完全疲惫不堪，但她能够在离空旷的地方不远的地方找到一个地方。
5.之后，除了天空中几颗星星发出的微弱光芒外，天完全黑暗了。
6.抬起头，她想到了她和汤姆在一起的幸福时光，为吵架感到遗憾。
7.不知不觉中，她睡着了，甚至梦见和丈夫一起在湖边散步。
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续写建议
第2段：简醒来时已是黎明。
1.慢慢地，她站起来，蹒跚地走到溪边，在那里她喝了一些水，给自己塞了一些浆果。
2.但她并没有在那里呆太久。
3.当她走回空旷的地方时，奇怪的想法和担忧又开始涌上心头。
4.“如果直升机不回来怎么办？”她喃喃自语，感到沮丧。
5.突然，她听到远处传来直升机的声音，令她非常高兴的是，它向她飞来。
6.看到这一幕，简疯狂地标记她的黄色衬衫，直到直升机降落在空旷的地方。
7.她亲爱的丈夫冲了出来，知道她很安全，她只是瘫倒在地上。
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Part 3
范文呈现
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范文呈现
Paragraph 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
1. Once again, Jane was thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness.
2. At that moment, all she wanted was to sit down and have a good weep.
3. But on second thoughts, she decided to find a safe place to stay for the night.
4. Though Jane was absolutely worn out, she was able to find a place not far from an open area.
5. After that, it was completely dark except for the faint light from a few stars in the sky.
6. Looking up, she thought of the happy moments she and Tom had together, regretful for the quarrel.
7. Before she knew it, she fell asleep and even dreamed about walking with her husband along the lake.
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范文呈现
Paragraph 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
1. Slowly, she got up and hobbled to the stream, where she drank some water and stuffed herself with some berries.
2. But she didn’t stay there long.
3. As she walked back to the open area, strange thoughts and worries began to crowd in again.
4. “What if the helicopter doesn’t come back ” she murmured, feeling frustrated.
5. Suddenly, she heard the sound of a helicopter at a distance and to her great joy, it flew towards her.
6. Seeing this, Jane wildly flagged her yellow blouse until the helicopter landed on the open area.
7. Out rushed her dear husband and knowing that she was safe, she just collapsed on the ground.
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Part 4
努力方向
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高级结构
名词性从句
高级结构
三连动
虚拟语气
形容词做状语
无灵主语
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定语从句
状语从句
（包含倒装句）
强调句
副词做状语
非谓语
（包括独立主格）
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