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高考英语读后续写语篇练习——好心女士的指路题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文Deep in the forest, my husband and I had climbing over and crawling under the downed trees that blocked the dirt path before us. It was May, yet we walked up a snow-covered hill. When we noticed our jeans were wet up to our knees, it did not dampen our spirits. Not once did we say, “let’s turn around.” This was our vacation, and we were on an adventure. Little did we know this was the beginning of many more surprises.The trail was marked as an easy one-kilometer hike, yet we were already walking a long distance. Our lightheartedness stopped when we came out into a clearing and saw a parking lot without our rental car in it. As my eyes scanned the surroundings, nothing looked familiar. My heart raced. I realized we were lost in a notional park that did not officially open for another week.Usually, I am the calm one in the relationship, but my husband surprised me with his calmness. This did not comfort me; In fact, it heightened my fear. As we walked, I asked my husband to call for help, but there was no cell-phone signal in this isolated（偏僻的）area.续写原文It was awfully quiet except for our footsteps hitting the road, and my heavy breathing. My husband suggested we conserve energy and walk slower. With each step on the road, my feet and thighs hurt while my mind raced with thoughts about people who got lost in the Canadian woods for days.My vision sharpened. I noticed everything around me: the trees, rocks and snow. I thought we could eat the snow on the ground in case we needed water. For the first time in my life, I was ready and willing to get a ride, but we did not meet with a single car on the road. Silently, I prayed multiple times. We focused on each other, made joint decisions and connected through gratitude. We managed to stay on the main road and walked straight on.续写段首语Paragraph 1：My husband suddenly spotted a small building on a hill in the distance.Paragraph 2：Just then, a friendly woman appeared, saying, “Hello.”Part 2题目分析点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写建议我丈夫突然在远处的一座小山上发现了一座小楼。我们很快就发现自己正朝着它前进。我们充满了希望和兴奋，在偏僻的地方找到这样一座建筑。我们以摇摆不定的速度爬上山坡，仿佛所有的痛苦都消失了。当我们走近时，一个标志映入眼帘，上面写着：行政办公室。但是，它不营业。空荡荡的大厅让我们一下子紧张起来。我们绝望地站在那里，不知道下一步该怎么做。续写建议就在这时，一个友好的女人出现了，说：“你好。我几乎抑制不住自己的热情，脱口而出：“我们迷路了！她安慰我们，给我们打开了一个房间休息。看到我们又冷又饿，她用热巧克力招待我们。在研究了地图后，我们发现我们的车停在三公里外。她主动送我们回车，我们很乐意接受。再次看到我们租来的车，我感到松了一口气。能有这样难忘的经历，真是太幸运了！Part 3范文呈现范文呈现My husband suddenly spotted a small building on a hill in the distance. In no time did we find ourselves heading for it. We were filled with hope and excitement to find such a building in the middle of nowhere. We climbed up the hill at a swinging pace as if all the pains were gone. As we approached, a sign came into sight, which read: Administration Office. However, it was not open for business. The empty hall made us nervous all at once. We stood there hopelessly wondering what to do next.范文呈现Just then, a friendly woman appeared, saying, “Hello.” I could barely hold back my enthusiasm and blurted out, “We’re lost!” She comforted us and opened a room for us to take a break. Seeing we were cold and hungry, she treated us with hot chocolate. After studying the map, we figured out that our car was parked over three kilometers away. She offered us a ride back to our car and we accepted gladly. I felt relieved to see our rental car again. What a blessing to have such an unforgettable experience!Part 4努力方向高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）低头是题海，抬头是前途。终将上岸，阳光万里!祝大家前程似锦!

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