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高考英语读后续写语篇练习——一次难忘的徒步经历题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文Mr. Taylor checked again: water, food, bandage, medicines, a compass, and a map wrapped in plastic… Bingo! He put all that he prepared for the coming hiking into his backpack.Mr. Taylor was fond of hiking, this time in particular, for it was the first time for him to hike with his two sons, Harry and Joel. Joel liked reading books about explorers and Harry joined the hiking club in his school this term. “It will be an unforgettable experience, definitely.” He whispered to himself, unconsciously a smile spreading over his face.Harry and Joel, however, argued for the first three miles of their hiking trip. Harry accused Joel of wearing smelly old shoes. Joel blamed Harry for using all of the bug spray(喷雾防虫剂). Harry told Joel he smelled terrible，Joel called Harry a coward(懦夫).“Will the two of you just quiet down and enjoy our hike together "their father said. “You're missing all of the beautiful scenery! “续写原文It was true. Neither Joel nor Harry had taken notice of the bear their father had spied at the start of their trip. They hadn't looked up at the eagle he pointed out overhead. Worst of all, they hadn't paid any attention to the turns and twists along the way while they continued their argument.“Joel threw a stick at me!" Harry screamed.“That’s not true! "Joel shouted back.Mr. Taylor could no longer contain his anger. "And both of you need to stop arguing!" he erupted. As he turned to face them, his left foot caught on a root. He slipped backward and down muddy bank, falling into the river that ran alongside the path.Harry and Joel raced to their father's assistance. They helped him up out of the water, and then dragged his wet backpack up onto land.Fortunately, their wet-through father found himself just slightly injured.续写段首语Paragraph 1：But his glasses came off when he fell in the water.Paragraph 2: “Just calm down. “Mr. Taylor shouted, "Without my glasses, we need to work together to find our way.”Part 2题目分析点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写建议但是当他掉进水里时，他的眼镜掉了下来。泰勒先生叹了口气，然后迅速脱下湿衣服，把水挤出来。当哈利把衣服铺在一块巨大的石头上时，乔尔带着他们半裸的父亲走到了一个洞口。看到父亲用绷带包住伤口，乔尔觉得很奇怪。一个念头像触电一样从他的脑海中掠过。如果爸爸看不清，他们怎么能继续徒步旅行？“要是哈利早点不和我吵就好了！”他咕哝着，眉头皱到额头上。“我听到了！”哈利大吼一声，用灼热的眼睛瞪着他。续写建议“冷静点。”泰勒先生喊道，“没有眼镜，我们需要共同努力找到自己的路。他提到了地图和指南针，然后男孩们不情愿地走近，在他的背包里摸索着。没过多久，他们就找到了他们所在的地方，然后出发了。乔尔很快发现自己是使用指南针的专家，而哈利则学会了成为一名出色的地图阅读者。时不时地，漂亮的鸟儿唱着欢快的歌声，鲜花盛开的笑容让孩子们喘不过气来。那天晚些时候，他们设法看到了一些山羊，甚至还有一只灰熊和一只鹰。这是当天的亮点，他们谈论了几个小时，笑得合不拢嘴。Part 3范文呈现范文呈现But his glasses came off when he fell in the water. Mr. Taylor sighed before he quickly took off his wet clothes and squeezed the water out. While Harry was spreading the clothes on a huge stone, Joel walked their half-naked father to an opening. Seeing his father wrapping the wound with the bandage, Joel felt strange. A thought went through his mind like an electric shock. How could they continue hiking if Dad was unable to see clearly “If only Harry stopped arguing earlier with me!” he grumbled, his brows rising into his forehead. “I heard you!” Harry yelled, glaring at him with burning eyes.范文呈现“Just calm down. “Mr. Taylor shouted, "Without my glasses, we need to work together to find our way.” He mentioned the map and compass before the boys approached reluctantly and fumbled for them in his backpack. It was not long before they located where they were and headed off. Joel soon found himself an expert at using a compass while Harry learnt to be an excellent map reader. Now and then, pretty birds singing merry songs and flowers blooming with smiles made the kids gasp. Later that day, they managed to catch sight of some mountain goats and even a grizzly bear and an eagle. It was the highlight of the day and they talked about it for hours, grinning from ear to ear.Part 4努力方向高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）低头是题海，抬头是前途。终将上岸，阳光万里!祝大家前程似锦!

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