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高考英语读后续写语篇练习
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——幸运饼干朋友
题目分析
读后续写
题目再现
范文呈现
努力方向
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Part 1
题目呈现
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续写原文
Mei Mei frowned as she helped her mother and father set out the cooking supplies in the shiny steel kitchen. Her family had just moved here from San Francisco, having bought a small restaurant, which was set to open in the next few days.
“Moving here was a stupid idea. I have lost all my friends in San Francisco. What should I do now ” Mei Mei grumbled, mostly to herself.
“What’s that ” Her mother asked, opening a box and lifting out several pots and a wok.
“Nothing,” Mei Mei mumbled. The girl had been complaining about the move, but her parents had made the decision and were now too busy getting ready for the grand opening to listen to her complaints.
The first few days at her new school hadn’t been easy, either. She found it hard to talk to people she didn’t know, and it seemed like the students hadn’t even noticed her. Mei Mei sighed and got back to washing dishes.
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续写原文
On the day of the grand opening, Mei Mei’s parents were all smiles, welcoming customers into the restaurant, brightly decorated in gold and red. Even Mei Mei was in a good mood as she rushed around, seating guests, handing out menus, and pouring tall glasses of water. This was a big day for her family.
At one of the tables sat a family with two daughters who were about Mei Mei’s age. As she filled their glasses, Mei Mei realized the twins were in her class. Mei Mei ducked her head down so her long hair covered her face, and she turned away from the table.
Mei Mei’s mother found her soon after, in the kitchen loading the dishwasher.
“Honey, what are you doing back here We need you out front with the customers.”
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续写段首语
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“Mom, I don’t want to be out there
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Mei Mei put a handful of cookies into a small plate and left the kitchen.
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Part 2
题目分析
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点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；
点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；
点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；
点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。
情节构建的重点
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续写建议
起初，凯拉对父母的假期计划感到失望。她多么渴望出去和朋友们一起玩！尽管她非常不满，但她别无选择，只能按照安排去做。首先，凯拉被告知要洗早餐碗。之后，她被要求给他们的小狗洗澡，这对她来说是一个很大的烦恼。她抿了抿嘴唇，喃喃道：“这是我最不想做的事情。她不情愿地走进浴室，拿起刷子开始工作。
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续写建议
但当她做家务时，情况开始发生变化。在给小狗刷牙时，她发现这么多肥皂泡很有趣。然后跟着任务去了凯拉收集木棍的院子。她以为小棒子是篮球，然后把它们射进了一个大垃圾桶。很快，工作就完成了。凯拉看到院子里看起来井井有条，感到非常自豪。经过一天的辛苦工作，柠檬水尝起来更甜。
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Part 3
范文呈现
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范文呈现
原著：
“Mom, I don’t want to be out there. There are kids from school!”
“So ” her mother asked. “That’s good! Go take them some fortune cookies and say hello!” She clucked her tongue disapprovingly at Mei Mei and disappeared out of the kitchen.
Mei Mei frowned. She grabbed a handful of fortune cookies that they gave out after every meal, but first she tore open a wrapper and cracked a cookie open for herself. She popped a sweet, crunchy piece in her mouth, and absently read the paper fortune it held.
“Many friends are found with a single smile,” it read.
Mei Mei put a handful of cookies into a small tray and left the kitchen.
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范文呈现
Mustering up her courage, Mei Mei approached the table where the twins and their parents were finishing their meal. She placed the cookies down, and bravely looked the girls in the eyes. She smiled.
“Thanks so much for coming to our restaurant! I hope you liked everything,” Mei Mei said.
“Ooh, fortune cookies, I love these!” One of the girls exclaimed, reaching for the tray.
The other sister looked closely at Mei Mei. Then her eyes lit up with recognition.
“Hey! You’re that new girl in our class, right Isn’t your name Mei Mei ”
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Part 4
努力方向
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高级结构
名词性从句
高级结构
三连动
虚拟语气
形容词做状语
无灵主语
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定语从句
状语从句
（包含倒装句）
强调句
副词做状语
非谓语
（包括独立主格）
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低头是题海，抬头是前途。终将上岸，阳光万里!
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