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高考英语读后续写语篇练习——小狗的陪伴题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文In 2004, when my daughter Becky was ten, she and my husband, Joe, were united in their desire for a dog. As for me, I shared none of their desire.But why, they pleaded(恳求). “Because I don’t have time to take care of a dog.” But we'll do it. " Really You're going to walk the dog Feed the dog Bathe the dog ” Yes, yes, and yes.“ I don't believe you. " “We will.” We promiseThey didn’t. From day two, neither thought to walk the dog. While I was slow to accept that I would be the one to keep track of her shots, to schedule her vet appointments, to feed and clean her, Misty knew this on day one.Quickly, she and I developed something very similar to a Vulcan mind meld. She' d look at me with those sad brown eyes of hers, beam her need, and then wait, trusting I would understand. In no time, she became fifth appendage (附加物), snoring on my home-office couch as I worked, cradling against my feet as I read, and splaying across my stomach as I watched television.续写原文Even so, part of me continued to dislike walking duty. Joe and Becky had promised. “Not fair,” I'd loudly remind anyone within earshot upon our return homeThen one day --January 1, 2007, to be exact ---my husband’s doctor uttered an unthinkable word: leukemia(白血病. With that, I spent eight to ten hours a day with Joe in the hospital doing anything and everything I could to ease his discomfort. During those six months of hospitalizations, Becky, 12 at the time, adjusted to other adults being in the house when she returned from school.My work colleagues adjusted to my taking off at a moment’s notice for medical emergencies. Every part of my life changed: no part of my old routine remained.Save one: Misty still needed waking. At the beginning, when friends offered to take her through her paces, I declined because I knew they had their own households to deal with.续写段首语Paragraph1:As the months went by, I began to realize that I actually wanted to walk Misty.Paragraph 2:After Joe died in 2009, Misty slept on his pillow.Part 2题目分析点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写建议随着时间的流逝，我开始意识到我实际上想走迷雾。不知不觉中，我们之间的思想融合已经变得足够强大，让我永远着迷。在那些日子里，我大部分时间都在照顾乔因医院，几乎没有时间照顾贝基，更不用说米斯蒂了。但每当我设法带她走一会儿，她就会成为世界上最幸福的女孩，一秒钟像疯了一样在我身边跳来跳去，另一秒像闪电一样冲回去。正是在这一刻，我会感到一点放松。续写建议乔于2009年去世后，米斯蒂睡在他的枕头上。晚上，当我睡着或醒来时，就像往常一样，米斯蒂总是在那里陪伴我。有一段时间，我觉得世界末日了，我所有的希望都消失了，这当然是米斯蒂感觉到的。每天，我的家都看到她玩新把戏或做鬼脸来取悦我。当看到一个陌生人时，她不再像以前那样大声吠叫，好像不打扰我。渐渐地，我的生活发生了变化，深深的悲伤变成了对这样一个好伴侣的依恋和感激。一家三口——贝基、米斯蒂和我，又充满了希望。Part 3范文呈现范文呈现As the months went by, I began to realize that I actually wanted to walk Misty. Before I knew it, the mind meld between us had grown strong enough to keep me spellbound, always. In those days, with most of my time taken up attending to Joein hospital, little time was spared to take care of Becky, let alone Misty. But whenever I did manage to walk her for a while, she would be the happiest girl in the world, one second jumping about me like mad, and another dashing ahead before rushing back like lightning. It was at this moment that I would feel a little relaxed.范文呈现After Joe died in 2009, Misty slept on his pillow. At night, when I lay wide awake or woke up with a start, as was often the case, Misty was always there keeping me company. For a time, I felt the world was at an end, all of my hopes gone, which was sensed by Misty of course. And every day, my home witnessed her playing a new trick or making faces to please me. When catching sight of a stranger, she ceased to bark loudly as she used to, as if not to disturb me. Gradually, my life was changed with the deep sorrow transformed into attachment to and gratitude for such a nice companion. The family of three—Becky, Misty and I, was lively again with hope.Part 4努力方向高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）低头是题海，抬头是前途。终将上岸，阳光万里!祝大家前程似锦!

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