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Module 7 My Past Life.
单元话题满分范文必背
1．书面表达
假如你是李华,上周日你独自在家照看你五岁的妹妹Nana,请根据表格内容,写一篇短文。
活动 上午 讲故事，唱歌，……
中午 煮面（cook noodles），休息（have a rest），……
下午 玩游戏，看动画片（watch cartoons）……
感受 ……
要求:1.参考表格内容,可适当发挥;2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70词。(开头已给出但不计入总词数。)
Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.
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【答案】Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.
In the morning, I told her many funny stories first. Then we sang and danced happily together. I also taught her to speak a few simple English words and she learned well. At noon, I cooked noodles with tomatoes and eggs. She said they were delicious. I was very glad that she enjoyed the lunch. Then we had a rest. In the afternoon, we played games together. After that, we watched cartoons until my parents came back. I felt tired but happy.
【解析】
【详解】
写作分析：这篇作文是要求写一份日常活动的描述。描述一天的行为活动。首先要注意的就是时态，写作背景基于上周日，所以全文要使用一般过去时，其次要注意各个短语的正确表达方式，最后不能忘记适当表达自己的感受。
写作亮点：善于分段，可以用首段进行概括性描述，阐明背景（my parents were not at home）。第二段可以进一步开始细节描述。涉及到的短语有told her many funny stories，sang and danced happily，taught her to speak a few simple English words，cooked noodles，had a rest等等，使用短语的时候也有亮点，能够通过副词happily或者介词短语with tomatoes and eggs让动词短语的含义更加丰富。文章最后收尾简洁，用一句话点出了自己的感受，使得文章结构完整。
2．假如你的英语老师叫陈华，请根据所提供的信息，以My Teacher’s Past Life为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍她过去的生活情况。
Name Chen Hua
Born in a small village in Guangdong
Born on 18th June, 1978
Primary School Tiantou Primary School
First English teacher Mr Zhang
Character friendly, well-behaved
要求： 1. 词数：不少于60词。
2. 不要逐字翻译。
My Teacher’s Past Life
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【答案】例文
My Teacher’s Past Life
Chen Hua is my English teacher. She was born in a small village in Guangdong on 18th June, 1978. The name of her primary school is Tiantou Primary School. Mr. Zhang was her first English teacher. At that time, she was friendly and well-behaved. She was helpful and was willing to help everyone. I think all of her teachers and classmates liked her very much.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。要求根据题目“My Teacher’s Past Life”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
例文点评：例文采用一段式；时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中。
高分亮点：
短语：be born in；At that time；all of…等。
句型：The name of her primary school is Tiantou Primary School. 使用了of表所属。
I think all of her teachers and classmates liked her very much. 使用了省略引导词的宾语从句。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清文章的要求和要点；其次，理顺自己的行文思路；再次紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡；最后要仔细检查是否有单词拼写错误和标点的误用等，还要注意是否出现语法错误，有无重复遗漏，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
3．根据下面表格中的信息提示，写一篇60词左右的英语短文。要注意短文的层次性和语言的准确性，以及正确使用标点符号。
姓名 Li Shuai
出生地 Hangzhou
出生日期 26th August,1991
学校 Dongfang Primary School
启蒙老师 Miss Yang
第一位朋友 Wang Hai
性格 Nice;good
【答案】Li Shuai was born in Hangzhou．It is a beautiful city in Zhejiang Province．He was born on 26th August，1991．His school was Dongfang Primary School and Miss Yang was his first teacher．She was a nice teacher．His first friend was Wang Hal．Li Shuai was a nice and good boy．All his teachers liked him．
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们根据题目中表格的信息，介绍李帅的个人情况，内容包括出生地、出生日期、学校、启蒙老师、第一位朋友和他的性格。通过分析可知，这些内容都是过去的事情，所以这篇短文应主要使用一般过去时态，每句话的谓语动词形式要注意，变成过去式形式，尤其是要注意不规则动词过去式的形式。写作时应将表格中的所有信息变成完整的句子，用正确的语法结构表达出来，不用遗漏要点，注意汉语表达和英语习惯的不同。句子之间可以使用一些连词，使整篇文章意思连贯。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据表格中的内容介绍了李帅的情况，内容完整，包含了题目所给的所有信息。短文里使用了正确的时态，出来第二句话，关于李帅个人情况的内容都使用了一般过去时态，动词变成了过去式。短文里句子结构完整，符合英语的表达规范，语法准确。文中较好的句式有He was born on 26th August，1991、His school was Dongfang Primary School and Miss Yang was his first teacher．、She was a nice teacher、Li Shuai was a nice and good boy．All his teachers liked him等。
4．请你根据下面的提示，写一篇介绍你朋友的短文，80词左右。
1.我有一个亲密的（close）朋友叫李峰。
2.他出生在浙江省一个美丽又干净的小村子里。
3.村子里有一个池塘，里面有很多鱼。
4.池塘的旁边是他的母校——第二小学。
5.他的第一个老师是潘老师，39岁，友好但是有时候对学生要求严格。
6.当时的好朋友是张慧明和夏朝，他们很调皮（naughty）。
要求:必须包括以上全部要点，语句通顺，字迹工整。
【答案】例文
I have a close friend. His name is Li Feng. He was born in a small village of Zhejiang Province. The village is beautiful and clean. There is a big pool with many kinds of fishes in it. Near the poor was his first school-No. 2 Primary School. His first teacher was Mr Pan. He was thirty-nine years old. He was friendly, but he was sometimes strict with the students. At that time, his best friends were Zhang Huiming and Xia Chao. They were very naughty.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文，介绍你的好朋友李峰。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be born in, with, many kinds of, be strict with, at that time等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如be born in, with, many kinds of, be strict with, at that time等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
5．下表是林凡在小学时的个人资料，请用英文帮他写一份自我介绍，介绍他当时的情况。60词左右。
姓 名 Lin Fan 家乡 天津
性 别 男 出生日期 2003年9月8日
班 级 五年级一班 电话 8898 8782
学 号 2003050126 英语老师 Li Chang
【答案】My name is Lin Fan. I’m Chinese. I like maths and English.
I was born on September 8th, 2003 in the city of Tianjin. When I was seven years old, I was at Jinhua Primary School. Four years later, I was in Class 1 Grade 5. My student number was 2003050126. My telephone number was 8898 8782. My first English teacher was Li Chang. She was strict with us in study but very kind to us after school. We all liked her very much.
【解析】
【详解】
本题要求根据所给出的资料帮林凡写一篇小学时的自我介绍。在写作过程中，首先要将表格内提示信息用英语正确的表达出来，要涵盖表格中提到的所有要点，同时注意理顺要点，防止漏写。本文时态主要为一般过去时，人称主要为第一人称。在写作的时候，注意连句成篇，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，确保正确率。
6．进入七年级之后，很多学生的在生活和学习上都发生了很大的变化,请你根据表格中内容阐述过去和现在发生的变化。你觉得这些变化好不好？并谈谈你对这些变化的看法。(至少两点)
in the past now
life get up late and go to bed early hang out with friends on weekends … stay up late have no time to meet friends …
study like math study less hard … be interested in English work hard …
Your opinion
注意:
1短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节。
2.补全表中的理由，词数80-100
3语句通顺，句意连贯。
3文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。We have changed a lot since you started the new term of Grade Seven. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I’m in Grade 7. My life has changed a lot. I used to get up late and go to bed early, but now I stay up late because of my homework. I used to hang out with friends on weekends, but now I have no time to meet friends, because I have to take some lessons on weekends. I used to study less hard, but now I must work hard to get good grades. I think homework is important for students, but we also need to spend some time on our hobbies and hang out with friends, so that we can relax and share some information with friends.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。对于进入七年级之后的学生，阐述在生活和学习上发生的改变，并提出自己的观点。
2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称，一般过去时和一般现在时进行描述。在描述过去的情况时，用一般过去时，注意保持主谓一致性，句子要通顺，无标点和语法错误。
7．学校最近开展了“文明活动月”的实践活动。通过这次活动，同学们的变化很大，尤其是陈磊同学，请根据表格内容写一篇有关陈磊的变化的作文。
In the past Now
be late for school never late
fight with ... get on well with …
talk in class listen to the teacher
play computer games do homework
It seems that Chen Lei has Changed a lot in the past few days.
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【答案】例文
It seems that Chen Lei has changed a lot in the past few days. He used to be late for school, but now he is never late for school. He used to fight with his classmates, but now he gets on well with them. He used to talk in class, but now he listens to the teacher carefully in class. He used to play computer games, but now he does homework after school. His parents and teachers are very happy, because he has made great progress.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给提示，介绍陈磊同学在过去和现在的变化。
2.写作指导：本文采用第三人称，时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时，描述过去的情况用一般过去时。注意保持主谓一致性，句子要通顺，逻辑性要强，无标点和语法错误。
8．你是一名初中生，在进入初中以后，你的生活发生了很多变化。请根据表格中的提示，用英语描述一下这些变化。
注意：
1．词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
BEFORE NOW
Eating habits
schedule School: 8:30am - 4:00pm Bed time: 9pm School: 8:00am - 5:30pm Bed time: 10pm
Weekend
Life is different after I became a middle school student.When I was in the primary school,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】参考例文：
Life is different after I became a middle school student.
When I was in the primary school, I used to eat hamburgers and ice cream. During the week, I went to school at 8:30 in the morning and the class finished at 4:00 in the afternoon. At night, I could go to bed by 9 p.m. But now, since going to middle school, I have to eat more vegetables every day. School starts at 8 a.m. and finishes at 5:30 p.m. I can't go to bed until 10 p.m. every day. Before, on the weekend, I often played computer games. But now, I have to do homework and read books. After finishing my homework, sometimes, I can go fishing with my grandpa in my spare time.
The life in middle school is much busier than that in primary school, but I feel very full and satisfied.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。要求根据表格中的提示，写一篇短文谈谈进入初中以后，你的生活上的变化，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时应以第一人称，一般现在时和一般过去时来行文，从饮食，日常安排和周末活动三方面对比过去和现在的生活变化。文章开头已给出，可以适当使用连词使上下文链接过渡自然，注意语句通顺，条理清晰，无单词和语法上的错误。

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