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高考英语读后续写语篇练习——旅途中母亲的帮助题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文It was somewhere between spring and summer, and my mom and I were driving through the countryside. Back then, I was 13 years old, and always felt unhappy with Mom. But little did I know that this trip was going to be a special one.A pot of flowers sat in the back seat, whose heavenly scent filled the car.Suddenly, in the middle of nowhere, my mom pulled over. “What are you doing ” I cried, fearing that the car had broken down and we’d be stuck there, so far from home. But that wasn’t the case. My mom hopped out of the car, grabbing the flowers from the back seat. “It’ll just be a minute,” she called back through the open windows.My eyes impatiently skimmed the edge of the road before settling on a little sign showing that it was a nursing home. I looked back to the building, somewhat annoyed, as my mom reappeared, empty-handed.续写原文Before she started the car, curiosity drove me to ask, “Do you know someone there ” She shook her head. “Then what did you do with the flowers ” She smiled slightly, “I gave them to the receptionist.” “What ” She laughed at my confusion. “I told the receptionist to give the flowers to whoever needed them, especially who hasn’t gotten any in a while.”I kept silent for a moment. Not long after we continued our driving, I spoke again, “Did you leave your name ” To this she answered instantly, “No. Leaving flowers there for someone who will appreciate them makes me feel good, which is enough of a thank you for me.”Suddenly, still thinking about Mom’s deeds, I heard something burst loudly. It was our car that broke down! Nothing could be worse, because neither my mom nor I understood how to repair it, and we didn’t know where the garage was. It also seemed impossible to wait for any passer-by, since we had seen so few along the way.续写线索分析Paragraph 1: We were worrying about what could be done.Paragraph 2: As we drove along, a flower shop came into sight on the road.续写段首语第1段：我们担心能做些什么。但徒劳地等了好一会儿，我和妈妈决定走回疗养院的路去寻求帮助。天知道我们开了多远！当我们到达时，接待员很惊讶，但热情地帮助我们联系了车库。在那里，收到鲜花的老人很高兴见到我们，谈论那一天是多么美好。令我惊讶的是，随机的善意行为对接受它的人意味着什么。当我们欢声笑语时，车库把我们的车修好了。续写线索分析第2段：我们开车前行，路上映入眼帘的是一家花店。我快步走进花店，那里有一束盛开着红色光芒的花朵引起了我的注意。目睹了善良的效果后，我决定把甜蜜的花送给妈妈。很快，天上的香味再次充斥着车内。妈妈试图掩饰她的兴奋，但闪闪发光的眼泪让她失望了。通过这次旅行，我发现，尽管我偶尔会对她生气，但我实际上为她感到骄傲。这是我一生的旅行。Part 2题目分析点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点Part 3范文呈现范文呈现Paragraph 1:We were worrying about what could be done. But after waiting in vain for a considerable time, Mom and I decided to walk back the road to the nursing home and seek help. God knows how far we had driven! When we arrived, the receptionist was surprised, but warmly helped us contact the garage. There, the old men who had received the flowers were excited to meet us, talking about how great that day was. It amazed me what random actions of kindness could mean to the people who received it. While we were laughing and talking merrily, the garage got our car repaired.范文呈现Paragraph 2:As we drove along, a flower shop came into sight on the road. I paced quickly into the flower shop, where a bunch of flowers glowing red in full bloom caught my eye. Having witnessed the effect of kindness, I decided to send Mom the sweet flowers. Soon, the heavenly scent filled the car again. Mom tried to conceal her excitement, but the glittering tears failed her. Through this trip, I discovered that, despite my occasional anger towards her, I actually felt proud of her. This was the trip of my life.Part 4努力方向高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）低头是题海，抬头是前途。终将上岸，阳光万里!祝大家前程似锦!

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