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高考英语读后续写语篇练习——邻里之间互帮互助题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文It was an Art lesson. Rachel sat at the desk watching her classmates busy preparing the water jars and paints. She understood why Mrs. Weston asked her to sit down and got Lisa to fetch everything for her. It was always a disaster when Rachel tried to do Art!Rachel sighed and reached out to dip her brush in some black paint and—oh, no! She knocked over the jar. The water spread across the desk and drowned the paper. Lisa called Mrs. Weston to see what Rachel had done. Rachel went red in the face. She jumped to her feet to get a cloth. Her chair fell over backwards. She turned round and her paint brush caught Lisa across the face, giving her a black moustache. Lisa was so surprised that she fell back against a wire book stand. It came crashing down and the books went all over the floor.How clumsy! Rachel thought as she went home on the bus. The bus stopped outside her house. She jumped up and her elbow (肘部) knocked a woman’s hat right over her eyes. Oh, no! Rachel said sorry, got off and ran indoors. Mum wasn’t in the kitchen but lay in bed as she caught an awful cold. Rachel offered to make a cup of tea but Mum would rather wait for Dad. Rachel sighed. She understood Mum was afraid she would spill it.续写原文“But would you go to Mrs. Willow for some cold cure ” asked Mum. Rachel turned to the door at once. “But Rachel, Mrs. Willow’s house is full of beautiful things, so if she asks you to come in, you’d better say no.” Rachel sighed and ran out.Mrs. Willow was an old lady with white hair and sharp blue eyes living in an old house. She opened the door and invited her in. Rachel said why she came and that she preferred to wait outside remembering her mother’s warning. Mrs. Willow insisted Rachel come inside. Rachel took a deep breath and stepped in. She looked round Mrs. Willow’s sitting room and saw at once why Mum had been worried.续写线索分析Paragraph 1There were beautiful things everywhere — pretty china figures and delicate vases.Paragraph 2With a smile, Mrs. Willow comforted her, saying it had been broken before.续写段首语第1段：到处都是美丽的东西——漂亮的瓷器人物和精致的花瓶。瑞秋站着不动，害怕撞倒什么东西。柳树太太递给瑞秋一个棕色的小瓶子。瑞秋迫不及待地想逃跑，她觉得随时都会有一场灾难。她向她道了谢，转身走向门口，这时有什么东西擦过她的腿。瑞秋非常惊讶，她向后跳了起来。是一只猫！但她的胳膊肘撞到了一个花瓶，花瓶掉在地上，破碎了。真尴尬！续写线索分析第2段：柳树太太笑着安慰她说，它以前坏过。瑞秋叹了口气，盯着她。“我年轻的时候就做到了。你不可能像我一样笨拙。 柳树太太说，她锐利的蓝眼睛闪闪发光。“继续告诉自己你是一只天鹅，它会起作用的。瑞秋疑惑地说了好几遍。他们收拾好花瓶后，喝了瓷杯里的茶，吃了精致盘子里的蛋糕，瑞秋没有打破另一件东西。这是一种魔力。瑞秋笑了笑。Part 2题目分析点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点Part 3范文呈现范文呈现Paragraph 1:There were beautiful things everywhere—pretty china figures and delicate vases. Rachel stood very still, afraid of knocking something over. Mrs. Willow handed Rachel a small brown bottle. Rachel couldn’t wait to get away, feeling any minute there would be a disaster. She thanked her and turned to the door when something brushed against her leg. Rachel was so surprised that she jumped backwards. It was a cat! But her elbow hit a vase and it fell to the floor, broken. How awkward!范文呈现Paragraph 2:With a smile Mrs. Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before. Rachel sighed and stared at her. “I did, when I was young. You couldn’t have been as clumsy as I was.” Mrs. Willow said, her sharp blue eyes shining. “Keep telling yourself you are a swan and it will work.” Rachel doubtfully said that several times. After they cleared up the vase, they drank tea from china cups and ate cakes off delicate plates and Rachel didn’t break another thing. It was a kind of magic. Rachel smiled.Part 4努力方向高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）低头是题海，抬头是前途。终将上岸，阳光万里!祝大家前程似锦!

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