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高考英语读后续写语篇练习——鞋子和比赛题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文Ali and his younger sister, Zahra, lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood. Their mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job, and they had only a little money with which to buy food. As they had not paid the rent for several months, the landlord was breathing down their necks(盯着他们).One day, Ali took Zahra’s shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed, but he lost them on the way home. It wasn’t until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes. He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed, so he begged his sister to keep it secret. Zahra agreed and the two decided to share Ali’s running shoes. Zahra’s school hours were in the morning, so she would wear them first. After school, she would rush back and give them to Ali. He could then run to his school, which began in the afternoon. Although he ran as fast as he could, Ali often arrived late and was warned by the school.续写原文Ali heard about a long distance race that was held for the boys in the city. When he learned that the third prize was a new pair of shoes, he decided to take part. He ran home excitedly and promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes.The day of race arrived. Ali had a strong start, but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache. Getting more and more exhausted he thought only of Zahra and his promise to her. Dreaming of the new shoes he would win for his sister gave him strength, and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners, determined to finish third. Suddenly, as the finish line drew near, another runner collided(碰撞) with Ali from behind and he crashed to the ground.段首句Paragraph 1:Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.Paragraph 2:Filled with delight, Ali walked home quickly.续写思路分析Paragraph 1:Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.阿里抬起头，看到其他男孩冲在前面。此时他不肯放弃，跳起来，尽可能快地跑。他冲过终点线，获得了第四名。以为他会让妹妹失望，阿里忍不住抽泣起来。就在这时，他突然从广播中听到了自己获得三等奖的公告，因为与阿里相撞的跑者因违反规则而被取消资格。在颁奖典礼上，阿里把鞋子紧紧抱在胸前，当他最终为妹妹赢得鞋子时，他感到欣喜若狂和宽慰。续写思路分析Paragraph 2:Filled with delight, Ali walked home quickly.阿里满怀喜悦，快步走回家。他迫不及待地想见到他的妹妹并分享这个好消息。到达后，阿里发现扎赫拉在外面等着。紧张和焦虑的扎赫拉想知道她的哥哥是否给她带来了她所期待的东西。“扎赫拉，看看我给你准备了什么。”阿里兴奋地说，用颤抖的双手从包里拿出奖品。扎赫拉看到鞋子的那一刻，脸上亮了起来。她非常激动，以至于她扑向阿里。“谢谢！阿里。喜悦的泪水在他们的眼睛里涌出，兄弟姐妹紧紧地拥抱在一起。Part 2题目分析点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写建议前文主要讲述的是阿里家境贫穷，一天阿里给妹妹修鞋的路上，把妹妹的鞋弄丢了，他准备通过参加学校的长跑比赛，获得三等奖的奖品——一双鞋子，给妹妹作补偿，但在终点的时候发生一点意外。在给的第一段开头中，Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.(阿里抬头一看，看到其他男孩冲在前面)，可知本段是续写比赛中阿里被撞后是如何做的，这一段是文章的关键。第二段是以Filled with delight, Ali walked home quickly.(Filled with delight, Ali walked home quickly.)开头，此句中的delight是关键词，阿里为什么高兴，是因为他达到目的了，上一段已经指出他获得了三等奖，本段重点讲述他回家后发生的事情。Part 3范文呈现范文呈现Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead. Refusing to give up at this point, he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could. He dashed across the finishing line and won the fourth prize. Thinking he would let her sister down,Ali couldn’t help sobbing. Just then he suddenly heard the announcement from the broadcast that he won the third prize as the runner who collided with Ali was disqualified for breaking the rule.Holding the shoesclose to his chest during the award ceremony,Ali felt overjoyed and relievedas he eventually won the shoes for his sister.范文呈现Filled with delight, Ali walked home quickly. He could not wait to see his sister and share the good news.On his arrival, Ali found Zahra was waiting outside. Nervous and anxious, Zahra wondered whether her brother had brought her what she was expecting. “Zahra, see what I have got for you.” Ali said excitedly, taking the prize out of his bagwith his trembling hands. The instant Zahra saw the shoes, her face lit up. So thrilled was she that she threw herself at Ali. “Thank you! Ali.” Tears of joy welled up in their eyes as the brother and the sister hugged tightly together.Part 4努力方向高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）低头是题海，抬头是前途。终将上岸，阳光万里!祝大家前程似锦!

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