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江苏地区八年级英语下学期期中真题汇编-书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
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一、话题作文
1．（2022春·江苏盐城·八年级校考期中）“A green world”是我们共同的生活目标。我校英语专刊最近就此话题进行征文，请你根据以下提示内容写一篇不少于100词的英语短文来投稿。
内容要点：
*(1) 呼吁大家为“A green world”的目标而努力；
*(2) 写自己作为一名中学生为实现这一目标应该怎样做。
Hello, everyone. We share a common home—the earth.
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二、材料作文
2．（2022春·江苏盐城·八年级校考期中）阅读丰富人生，是我们获得知识的源泉。请以Reading Is a Wonderful Time为题，写一篇作文。
1.很多学生不像以前那么爱阅读了，忙于写作业，没有时间阅读；
2.不少学生花费太多时间看电视、上网……；
3.其实，好书就像朋友。当你失落时，给你信心和安慰；当你遇到困难时，给你建议解决问题……(适当发挥1-2点)
4.建议：合理安排时间；培养好的阅读习惯……(适当发挥1-2点)。
要求：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2.必须包含以上所有要点，并作适当发挥；
3.字数在80字左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
4.不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
Reading Is a Wonderful Time
Reading is a wonderful time. It makes our daily life colorful and meaningful.
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If so, I’m sure we will live a more colorful and meaningful life.
3．（2022春·江苏扬州·八年级校联考期中）4月23日是世界阅读日。我校在读书节前夕对全体学生的阅读情况做了一次问卷调查。请根据下列调查数据和相关文字提示，用英语写一篇短文，说明阅读的现状和意义，并就中学生如何更好地开展课外阅读活动提出你的建议。
要点 内容
调查数据 大部分学生每天阅读不足20分钟一些学生每天阅读30分钟很少学生每天阅读达到1个小时
阅读的意义 帮助放松心情让生活更加丰富多彩…
你的建议 每天坚持阅读至少半小时读书时养成记笔记的好习惯…
要求：
1. 写全要点，可以适当发挥；
2. 词数100左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 The World Reading Day is coming and our school has done a survey on students’ reading situation.
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Let’s take action right now!
4．（2022春·江苏南通·八年级校联考期中）阅读对人成长的影响是巨大的。“腹有诗书气自华”，一本好书往往能改变人的一生。每年的4月23日是世界读书日，为此你想给同学们提一些养成阅读好习惯方面的建议。要点如下：
1.选择适合自己读的书。从老师或家长处寻求读书建议，可以从学校图书馆借书或者到书店买书……
2. 计划好自己的时间。每天至少匀出半小时来阅读；不要轻易改变计划。比如，可以养成在睡觉前进行阅读的习惯；
3. 随身带一本书。当有空的时候，随时随地进行阅读……
4.再补充一条建议……
要求：
1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2.必须包含所有信息，并作适当发挥；
3.字数在100字左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
4.不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
Having good reading habits makes a great difference to you. If you want to have good reading habits, I have some advice for you.
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I hope my advice can help you form some good reading habits.
5．（2022春·江苏淮安·八年级淮安市浦东实验中学校考期中）假设你叫李华，近期你的学校举行了一次名为“The Changes”的征文活动，你打算参加并列出写作提纲如下。字数80左右。
提示：
生活中变化 1）以前工厂向河里倾倒垃圾，现在政府已经采取措施改善环境。2）以前住在低矮破旧的房子，现在已经搬进高大现代的公寓。3）以前家里只有自行车，现在很多家庭有轿车。
自己的变化 1）去了许多名胜古迹，忍不住拍了很多照片。2）比以前更加喜爱阅读。3）阅读的益处……
要求：1）内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2）词数80个左右；
3）展开的内容需合理想象，用1句话补充完整。The Changes
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6．（2022春·江苏南京·八年级统考期中）假如你是英语校刊English Garden的小记者李明，请以My Hometown为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，内容提示如下：
1. Where is your hometown
2. What was it like in the past
3. What is it like now
4. How do you feel about these changes Why
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范。
My Hometown
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7．（2022春·江苏泰州·八年级靖江市靖城中学校联考期中）过去这一段时间同学们都有了很大的变化和收获。Jack是你班上的一名同学，这学期他也变化了很多，学习进步很大，请根据下面表格提供的信息用英语写篇短文，向同学介绍Jack的变化以及他对未来的打算。
过去 现在
学习 大部分业余时间花在……；讨厌看书，认为…… 认真学习；热爱读书，因为……；最喜欢看……，觉得……
环保 浪费水电，……（自拟一至两点） 意识到环保的重要性（举例说明）
礼仪 大声喧哗，……（自拟一至两点） 举止礼貌，主动让座，……
爱心 不知道如何关心他人 ……
展望未来 决定做一些志愿者工作……（自拟一至两点）
注意:
1.字数100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥；
3.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。Jack is my classmate. Back to the life in the last year, Jack has changed a lot and made great progress in many ways.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（2022春·江苏镇江·八年级统考期中）阳光中学校报英文版正在开展以“I Love Reading”为主题的征文活动。请根据下表提示用英语写一篇短文，介绍你对阅读的看法及你的阅读计划。
I Love Reading
The importance of reading open up one’s mind,get more knowledge,…
My reading habit when to readwhere to readwhat to read
My favorite book …
My reading plan …
要求：
1. 层次清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范；
2. 短文必须包括以上要点，可作适当的发挥；
3. 词数不少于90词，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。Reading is very important and necessary for everyone.
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9．（2022春·江苏盐城·八年级校联考期中）时代在发展，我们的生活也发生着日新月异的变化。请根据下面提示，以“Changes around me”为题用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你生活和学习中发生的变化。
a.What were your life and study like in the past
b.How have your life and study changed
c.What do you think of these changes
d. .....
注意事项：1.词数：90词左右 (文章开头已经给出， 不计入总词数) ；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名， 校名等信息；
3.文章必须包含所有要点， 并作适当发挥， 使短文连贯、通顺。
Changes around me
Great changes have taken place in my life and study.
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10．（2022春·江苏常州·八年级统考期中）假设你是李明，上周你们班进行了“怎样有意义地过假期”班会活动，大家在班会上畅所欲言。请你根据表格中的提示内容，结合你自己对此事的看法，用英语给校报写一篇短文。
过去 打游戏、上网、看电影……
现在 看书、体育运动、郊游……
你的感想 ……（至少两点）
要求：
1. 要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺、连贯；
2. 正确使用时态，语法正确，书写整洁；
3. 90词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Last week, we held a class meeting. In the meeting, we talked about how to spend the holiday meaningfully.
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11．（2022春·江苏徐州·八年级统考期中）中国有句古话：“读万卷书，行万里路”。请你结合表格中所给的信息，以My hobbies为题给校英文报投稿，用英语谈谈阅读和旅行的好处，以及你今年的计划。
我的爱好 旅行 ●欣赏美景，开阔视野；●了解不同地方的人和文化；●……
阅读 ●使我们获得更多的知识；●有趣的故事让我们身心放松；● ……
我今年的旅行和阅读计划 ……
注意：1．短文应包括所有的信息，注意适当发挥。
2．词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3．短文不得出现真实的人名和校名。My hobbies
I have many hobbies. Among them, I like reading and travelling best.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．（2022春·江苏南通·八年级南通市海门区东洲中学校考期中）6月5日是世界环境保护日，你校组织以“ Being a volunteer of going green”为题的英语演讲比赛。假如李明参加比赛，请你以李明的名义写一篇英语演讲稿推荐自己，内容如下：
品质 助人为乐，善良，有礼貌
爱好 旅游，阅读，上网
事迹 为运动会做志愿者，为慈善机构筹集资金 ……
感悟 地球是我们唯一的家园保护环境，人人有责
措施 ……(至少两点)
要求：1. 要点完整，可适当发挥， 使句子通顺、连贯。
2. 正确使用时态，语法正确，书写整洁。
3. 70词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Being a volunteer of going green
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here.
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If I can be a volunteer,
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Thank you for listening!
13．（2022秋·江苏南京·八年级校考期中）假设你是Moonlight Middle School的一名八年级的学生，学校正在举行“畅想未来”的英语征文活动，请根据提示，以My ideal school life为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括提示中所有的信息，并做适当发挥;
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
My ideal school life
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三、电子邮件
14．（2022春·江苏泰州·八年级校考期中）假如你是林涛，你校爱尔兰外教Johnson因病回国休假，请你给他写一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：
1.询问Johnson近况；
2.告诉Johnson你校上周五举行的活动并谈一谈你的感受；
3.从下周五的两项活动中选择你准备参加的一项，说明理由，与Johnson分享。
Time Place Activities
Reading Day Last Friday The classroom *...(自拟)
Plans for the coming week Next Friday City park *Plant trees*Clean up the park
City library *Listen to the talk about good manners*Communicate with the speaker
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括题目要求的所有信息；
2. 文章不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Johnson,I’m Lin Tao. I can’t tell you how sorry I felt when I heard that you had to return to Ireland on sick leave. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you will get well soon and I’m expecting your early return to China.
Yours sincerely,
Lin Tao
15．（2022春·江苏常州·八年级统考期中）假如你是李华，昨天你的好友Jack给你发了一封邮件，请你根据他的邮件内容给他回复。下面是他的邮件内容：
Dear Li Hua,
The April 23rd is World Book Day. You must have read a lot of books on Book Day this year. Now I’d like to know the following information about your reading habits.
1.What kind of book do you like best
2.How much time do you spend reading every week
3.How do you get most of your books
4.Why do you like reading
I hope to hear from you as soon as possible.
Yours,
Jack
写作要求：
1.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
2.语句通顺，语法正确，逻辑正确；
3.词数不少于90字(开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
注意事项：文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Jack,
I’m very glad to receive your email. As we all know, the April 23rd is World Book Day and it is also an international festival. Now I tell you something about my reading habits.
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I hope everyone can build a good reading habit and enjoy reading books.
Yours,
Li Hua
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四、书信作文
16．（2022春·江苏泰州·八年级统考期中）江苏省第20届运动会(The 20th Games of Jiangsu Province)将于2022年在泰州市举行。为了确保省运会圆满成功，组委会发起了志愿者招募活动。假如你是学生李华，希望成为其中一员。请按照要求用英语给组委会写一封申请信。
内容：
1、参加志愿者活动的意愿和原因；
2、曾经参加过的志愿者活动和感受；
3、成为志愿者能做些什么。
要求：
1、可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2、不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3、标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数，词数120字左右。
Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua. I am a Grade 8 student. I would like to recommend myself to be the volunteer for the 20th Games of Jiangsu Province.
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I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
17．（2022春·江苏徐州·八年级统考期中）近年来，徐州市一直在推广“全民阅读”活动，市民的生活发生了很大的变化。假如你是李华，请根据以下信息用英文向你的英国笔友Simon介绍近年来徐州市开展全民阅读活动的变化与影响。
变化 过去：借书地方少；书籍种类少；
现在：社区有阅览室；徐州市图书馆有多种书籍；
影响 越来越多的人认识到阅读的重要性，……（至少一点）
你的感受 ……（至少两点）
注意事项：
1.词数在90个左右，开头和结尾已给出
2.不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息
Dear Simon,I’d like to tell you something about the activity of Civil Reading in Xuzhou.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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五、讲稿
18．（2022春·江苏无锡·八年级校联考期中）4月23日是世界读书日 (World Book Day)，你代表班级参加阳光中学所举办的英文演讲比赛，号召广大学生读好书。请根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿，要点如下：
1. Books & I
2. Reasons for reading good books;
3. Reading online(not suitable for...; too much time; ...)
4. My advice
参考词汇：影响 v. influence 鼓励 v. encourage 获得平衡 achieve a balance
注意事项：
1．短文须包括以上所有要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2．省略号部分各用1—2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3．词数在90个左右，短文必须写在答题卷指定的位置上。
Good morning, everyone! I am the monitor Class 2 ,Grade 9, Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. April 23rd is World Book Day. We are encouraged to read good books these days.
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参考答案：
1．例文
Hello, everyone. We share a common home—the earth. We should help build a green world so that we can live a healthy life. Let’s work hard for it together.
To have a good environment, I’m going to ride a bicycle to school and ask people around me to drive their cars less to reduce air pollution. Then I will plant more trees with my friends and recycle waste to help protect the natural environment. Moreover, I should use cloth bags for shopping, not plastic bags. What’s more, I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when I brush my teeth.
Remember that everyone can do something to make a difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是一篇校刊的征文稿。
②时态：本文以一般现在时为主。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，开头点明主题：我们要为了绿色世界做出努力；
②第二步，具体说明我们可以怎么做；
③第三步，结尾再次呼吁大家要付出行动。
[亮点词汇]
①so that 因此
②reduce air pollution 减少空气污染
③recycle waste 回收废品
④nake a difference 有区别
[高分句型]
①To have a good environment, I’m going to ride a bicycle to school and ask people around me to drive their cars less to reduce air pollution. (to do作目的状语)
②We should help build a green world so that we can live a healthy life. (so that引导结果状语从句)
③What’s more, I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when I brush my teeth. (when引导时间状语从句)
2．例文
Reading Is a Wonderful Time
Reading is a wonderful time. It makes our daily life colorful and meaningful. Many students don’t love reading as much as before because they are busy with their homework and have no time to read. Many students spend too much time watching TV and surfing the Internet. In fact, good books are like friends. When you are down, they give you confidence and comfort. When you are in trouble, they gives you advice to solve the problem. Good books help me relax after a busy day. They also open up a whole new world to me. Reading is a good habit. We should make good use of our time and read more books.
If so, I’m sure we will live a more colorful and meaningful life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学生们在阅读上存在的问题；
第二步，介绍阅读的好处；
第三步，提出合理的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be busy with忙于
②spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
③in fact事实上
④open up打开
[高分句型]
①Many students spend too much time watching TV and surfing the Internet.（动名词作宾语）
②When you are in trouble, it gives you advice to solve the problem.（when引导时间状语从句）
3．例文
The World Reading Day is coming, and our school has done a survey on students’ reading
situation We find that most of the students spend less than twenty minutes reading after class each day ,while some students read for thirty minutes, and few people read for more than one hour.
As we all know, reading makes a full man. Reading not only helps us relax, but also makes the life more colourful. At the same time, reading opens up a whole new world to us. As students, it’s time for us to read more. We should keep reading for at least half an hour every day. While reading books, we also need to develop a good habit of taking notes. What’s more, we can read more history books because they help improve our knowledge of the past.
Let’s take action right now!
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图。介绍全体学生的阅读情况的调查结果；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。说明阅读的意义；
第三步，书写结语。建议人们坚持阅读。
【亮点词汇】①not only...but also不仅……而且
②colourful多彩的
③at the same time与此同时
④improve提高
【高分句型】①reading opens up a whole new world to us.(动名词作主语)
②we can read more history books because they help improve our knowledge of the past.(because引导的原因状语从句)
4．例文
Having good reading habits makes a great difference to you. If you want to have good reading habits, I have some advice for you.
First, choose the right book. You can ask your teachers and parents for some advice about reading. You can borrow books from the school library or buy some from bookshops. You’d better read the four great classical Chinese novels.
Second, plan your time well. You should give yourself at least half an hour for reading every day. After you make the plan, don’t change it easily. For example, make it a habit to read before you go to sleep.
Third, always carry a book with you. When you leave home, remember to take a book with you. When you are free, you can read it any time.
Finally, find a quiet place to read. You can find a quiet room with a comfortable chair, then you can enjoy reading a book in the chair.
I hope my advice can help you form some good reading habits.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图，提出建议。
第二步：具体说明四条建议内容有哪些；
第三步：表明希望建议有帮助的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①good reading habits好的读书习惯
②some advice一些建议
③school library学校图书馆
[高分句型]
① You should give yourself at least half an hour for reading every day.（含有should情态动词的句型）
②You can find a quiet room with a comfortable chair, then you can enjoy reading a book in the chair.（enjoy doing sth.短语）
5．例文
The Changes
There are many changes in my life. For example, the factory used to dump waste into the river, but now the government has taken action to improve the environment. Besides, I lived in a low and shabby house before, but now I have moved into a tall and modern apartment instead. I notice that many families have cars now but we only had bicycles some years ago. On the other hand, I have changed a lot, too. I went to many places of interest and took many photos. I tend to like reading more than before. Reading helps me relax myself after class. To conclude, many good changes have taken place both in my life and upon myself. I believe the coming future will be brighter and brighter!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要用第一人称叙述，不要遗漏“提示信息”中的“阅读的益处”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍文章主题是生活的改变；
第二步，具体阐述改变的细节，对过去和现在的进行对比；
第三步，书写结语。表达对未来的美好期望。
[亮点词汇]
① used to do过去成常常做……
② take action采取行动
③ on the other hand另一方面
④ places of interest名胜古迹
⑤ take place发生
[高分句型]
① There are many changes in my life.（there be句型）
② I believe the coming future will be brighter and brighter!（省略that的宾语从句）
6．例文：
My Hometown
My hometown is Nanjing and it has changed a lot over the years.
In the past, many roads were narrow and dirty and the tallest building in the city was Jinling Hotel. But now there are wide roads and tall buildings everywhere. People used to watch TV in their free time, but now most families have computers and they can even enjoy films online. Years ago, people usually travelled around the city by bicycle or bus. Now they can take the underground or drive cars.
In a word, these changes have made our life much easier and more comfortable.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“How do you feel about these changes Why ”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山点明自己的家乡，并提出家乡有很大变化；
第二步，具体阐述家乡的变化；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①over the years多年来
②in the past在过去
③in a word总之一句话
④in their free time在他们的空闲时间
[高分句型]
①In the past, many roads were narrow and dirty and the tallest building in the city was Jinling Hotel. (运用了形容词最高级)
②People used to watch TV in their free time. (运用used to结构)
7．例文
Jack is my classmate. Back to the life in the last year, Jack has changed a lot and made great progress in many ways. He used to hate reading books and spend a lot of time playing computer games. He thinks playing computer games is interesting. But now he studies hard. He also likes reading books, because he gets a lot of knowledge from books. He likes reading books about animals best, because he thinks animals are so cute. He used to waste water and electricity. For example, he never turned off the light when he left the room. But now he realizes the importance of protecting the environment. For example, he always goes shopping with a cloth bag. He used to speak loudly in public. He never waited in line for the bus. But now he’s polite. He often gives seats to old people on the bus. He doesn’t speak loudly in public. He didn’t know how to care for others. But now he often cares and helps others. In the future, he decides to do some volunteer work. He wants to help those in need.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，从学习，环保，礼仪，爱心等方面介绍Jack的变化；
第二步，介绍他未来的打算。
[亮点词汇]
①make great progress取得巨大进步
②used to do sth过去常常做某事
③spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
④turn off关闭
⑤give seats to sb给某人让座
[高分句型]
①He thinks playing computer games is interesting.（省略that的宾语从句）
②He also likes reading books, because he gets a lot of knowledge from books.（because引导原因状语从句）
8．例文：
Reading is very important and necessary for everyone. Reading can open up our minds and help us get more knowledge.
As for me, I like reading a lot. In my spare time, I not only go to bookstores to buy books but also borrow books from the library. Before going to bed, I always spend some time reading. That really makes me feel relaxed. On weekends, I enjoy reading some novels. Journey to the West is my favorite book. And the Monkey King is my superhero.
The summer holiday is coming, and I am going to read Harry Potter, which is a very popular book.
Reading a lifelong journey. I hope everyone can read as much as possible in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，强调阅读的重要性；
第二步，先介绍自己的阅读习惯，包括何时阅读、在何地阅读和读什么；再介绍自己最喜欢的书，可以列举最喜欢的角色，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，介绍自己接下来的阅读计划并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①spend some time doing sth花费时间做某事
②enjoy doing喜欢做某事
③not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①That really makes me feel relaxed.（省略to的动词不定式作宾语补足语）
②The summer holiday is coming, and I am going to read Harry Potter, which is a very popular book.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
9．例文：
Changes around me
Great changes have taken place in my life and study.
I used to live in a dilapidated house, and our school classroom was also very dilapidated. I could only learn Chinese and mathematics every day. Now we live in a spacious and clean house. The classroom is also very big and clean. Every day except Chinese and math. We also study computing, science and music.
I think these changes are very good. Let us have a better environment to live and study. I believe the future will be better and better. I will study harder and contribute to the construction of the motherland.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇以记叙为主的文章；
②时态：时态有“一般过去时”，“一般现在时”，“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，要注意描写过去现在变化时态要准确，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描写过去的样子，接着介绍现在的变化。
第二步，对于这些变化的看法。
第三步，结束语，描述对未来的期许。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do过去常常做
②spacious宽敞的
③contribute to有助于
[高分句型]
①Let us have a better environment to live and study.（祈使句结构）
10．例文
Last week, we held a class meeting. In the meeting, we talked about how to spend the weekend meaningfully.
In the past, many students enjoyed themselves at weekends. Internet was their best friend and they almost did everything on the Internet. Playing computer games and going surfing online took up most of their free time. Several hours usually passed by before they knew it. Besides, some other students loved to see a movie when they were free.
However, at present, many students choose different activities. Doing some reading or having some sport becomes their first choice at weekends. Some other students prefer to go outing with their family. Getting close to books or breathing fresh air makes them feel better.
In my opinion, relaxing ourselves through computer games is acceptable, as long as we don’t spend too much time. Besides, nature can give us too many things to learn about, so we should get closer to nature as much as possible.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“你的感想”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，按照提示的要点，先说明在过去，学生们如何度过假期，再说明现在，学生们度过假期的方式有何不同，要列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发自己对此事的看法并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①prefer to do sth更喜欢做某事
②makes sb do sth让某人做某事
③get closer to nature更接受大自然
④as much as possible尽可能多
[高分句型]
①Playing computer games and going surfing online took up most of their free time.（动名词作主语）
②Several hours usually passed by before they knew it.（before引导时间状语从句）
③In my opinion, relaxing ourselves through computer games is acceptable, as long as we don’t spend too much time.（as long as引导条件状语从句）
④Besides, nature can give us too many things to learn about, so we should get closer to nature as much as possible.（so连接两个并列分句）
11．One possible version:
My hobbies
I have many hobbies. Among them, I like reading and travelling best. Travelling opens up my eyes. I can learn about people and cultures in different places. I always experience a lot from my travelling. It’s also a good way for me to relax. Reading helps me get lots of knowledge. Good stories can help me relax. They open up a whole new world to me. Moreover, books are my good friends. When I read a great book, I will forget all my worries. This year, I will keep reading at least two good books. I will spend about half an hour reading every day. Besides, I plan to travel to Yunnan during the summer holiday. I really want to visit Kunming—the Spring City. I think I can have a good time there.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据表格内容谈谈阅读和旅行的好处，以及今年的计划，可适当增添内容，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，表明最大的爱好是阅读和旅行；
第二步，详细叙述旅行和阅读的好处；
第三步，说明今年的旅行和阅读计划。
[亮点词汇]
①in different places在不同的地方
②keep doing sth持续做某事
③plan to do sth计划做某事
[高分句型]
①Reading helps me get lots of knowledge.（动名词作主语）
②When I read a great book, I will forget all my worries.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③I think I can have a good time there.（I think后跟省略that的宾语从句）
12．例文：
Being a volunteer of going green
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here.
I’m kind to others. I’m willing to help others any time. I know the importance of good manners. In my free time, I like travelling, reading and surfing on the Internet. I have ever organized a charity show to raise money for WWF. And I used to work as a volunteer for the sports meeting.
Earth is our only home. I think it’s our duty for everyone to protect the environment. If we work together, we can make the world a better place.
If I can be a volunteer, I can do many things for our environment. I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth. I can separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled. I must try my best to make a big difference to the Earth.
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，内容为推荐信；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“事迹”部分至少添加一点，以及“措施”部分至少添加两点内容，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，开门见山说明“我想成为保护环境的志愿者”。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，简单描述自己的“品质”及“爱好”，着重突出“事迹”、“感悟”及“节约用水、垃圾分类等措施”。
第三步，书写结语，表示感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①am willing to help others 乐于帮助他人
②used to work as a volunteer过去常常担任志愿者工作
③make the world a better place让世界变得更好
separate waste into different groups垃圾分类
make a big difference to the Earth对地球造成很大的影响
[高分句型]
①I think it’s our duty for everyone to protect the environment.（think后接宾语从句，省略that；it’s+名词+for sb.+to do sth.句型）
②I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③I can separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
13．例文：
My ideal school life
I’m a Grade 8 student. I have too much homework every day. I don’t have time for after-school activities. I think my school life is terrible.
I think my ideal school life is meaningful and colorful. During the rest of the time, I hope our after-school activities are rich and colorful. There are many organizations and clubs in our school. I would like to join the organizations which I am interested in. Learning online is part of my school life, but the work is not much, and very easy. We often use emails to send our homework to the teacher. Our teachers and classmates are very helpful and kind. Students will get along well with each other and help each other. Our school will have a school trip at least once a month. In this way, we will know more about the world. During my holidays, I want to be a volunteer to help others in need.
This is my ideal school life. I hope my dream will come true someday.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给的思维导图介绍“我理想的学校生活”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己并简单评价自己现在的学校生活；
第二步，从“师生、学习方法、课后活动”来详细介绍理想中的学校生活；
第三步，总结全文，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①too much太多
②would like to想要
③be interested in对……感兴趣
④get along well with与……相处融洽
⑤at least至少
[高分句型]
①I think my school life is terrible.（省略that的宾语从句）
②I would like to join the organizations which I am interested in. Learning online is part of my school life（which引导的限制性定语从句）
14．例文
Dear Johnson,
I’m Lin Tao. I can’t tell you how sorry I felt when I heard that you had to return to Ireland on sick leave. I’m wondering whether you feel much better these days.
We have organized many activities recently. Last Friday, we held a Reading Day in the classroom and it included a short play. Some of my classmates took part in it and had a good time. I also thought it was great fun. Next Friday, there will be two activities in our school. I prefer to listen to a talk about good manners in the City library. After the talk, we can also have a chance to communicate with the speaker. It will be very meaningful.
I hope you will get well soon and I’m expecting your early return to China.
Yours sincerely,
Lin Tao
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，询问Johnson近况；
第二步，告诉Johnson你校上周五举行的活动并谈一谈你的感受；
第三步，从下周五的两项活动中选择你准备参加的一项，并说明理由。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②have a good time玩得开心
③prefer to do更喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
I’m wondering whether you feel much better these days.（whether引导的宾语从句）
15．Dear Jack,
I’m very glad to receive your email. As we all know, the April 23rd is World Book Day and it is also an international festival. Now I tell you something about my reading habits.
I like books about history. I hope to understand more historical stories by reading books. I usually spend more than three hours reading books a week. This means that I read at least half an hour every day. Most of my books are bought for me by my mother. My mother is a teacher. She wants me to read more books. She thinks reading books can make a person better. My mother often buys books for me as birthday presents. I like reading books, because I hope to learn more knowledge from books.
I hope everyone can build a good reading habit and enjoy reading books.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出“介绍自己读书爱好”的主题；
第二步，介绍自己的读书爱好；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
②at least至少
③buy sth for sb给某人买某物
[高分句型]
①I hope to understand more historical stories by reading books（动词不定式作宾语）
②She thinks reading books can make a person better.（动名词作主语）
16．例文：
Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua. I am a Grade 8 student. I would like to recommend myself to be the volunteer for the 20th Games of Jiangsu Province.
I really want to take part in the volunteer project. It is fantastic to be a volunteer. I think it is a good time for me to get some knowledge and experience. I can not only help others but also make some friends. It’s also a good chance for me to improve myself.
I used to be a volunteer in a nursing home. I think voluntary work is important. It is also meaningful for me to help others in need.
If I become a volunteer for the 20th Games of Jiangsu Province, I can do lots of things. First, I am active and I can communicate with the players easily. Second, I am experienced in volunteering so that I can help them in many ways.
I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，叙述意愿和原因；
第二步，叙述曾经参加过的活动以及感受；
第三步，介绍自己成为志愿者能做的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②not only…but also…不但……而且……
③be experienced in在……方面有经验
[高分句型]
①I think it is a good time for me to get some knowledge and experience.（省略that的宾语从句）
②It is also meaningful for me to help others in need.（it固定句型）
③If I become a volunteer for the 20th Games of Jiangsu Province, I can do lots of things. （if引导的条件状语从句）
17．例文
Dear Simon,
I’d like to tell you something about the activity of Civil Reading in Xuzhou.
In the past, People couldn’t find any places to borrow books. They didn’t know where to borrow the books they wanted to read. Besides, there weren’t enough types of books.
Over the years, things have changed a lot. There are reading rooms in each community. People can borrow or read books nearby. What’s more, Xuzhou library has become big and modern. We can find all kinds of books. It’s fantastic to enjoy reading there.
From this activity, More people have realized the importance of reading. Many of them have developed the habits of reading. Reading makes a full man. They will feel happy and relaxed when reading.
For me, I think reading can make me feel confident. It can bring me a lot of knowledge. It’s really helpful to my study, and the most important is that it opens up a whole new world to me.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生适当完善内容，表达通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的。
第二步，讲述阅读的变化和影响。
第三步，表达对于阅读变化和影响的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①What’s more另外
②fantastic极好的
[高分句型]
①Reading makes a full man.（动名词作主语）
②It’s fantastic to enjoy reading there.（it的句型）
18．例文
Good morning, everyone! I am the monitor Class 2 ,Grade 9, Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. April 23rd is World Book Day. We are encouraged to read good books these days.
I love reading. I’m especially interested in modern novels. Good books are good for our mind and body. They can help us learn about the world. However, some of my classmates used to enjoy reading online. In fact, not all the books on the Internet are suitable for students. They spent too much time reading online. As a result, they had less sleep. It influenced their schoolwork as well. I think teenagers should learn how to choose good books. It’s better for them to achieve a balance between schoolwork and reading online.
Reading is great fun. Reading makes us wise. Please read good books.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示要点写一篇演讲稿，号召学生读好书，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己喜欢读书以及读好书的好处；
第三步，介绍网上看书的不利之处；
第四步，介绍自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②in fact事实上
③be suitable for适合
[高分句型]
①They spent too much time reading online. (动名词作宾语)
②It’s better for them to achieve a balance between schoolwork and reading online.(动词不定式作主语)
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