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My Dad’s Best Flower
I remember my first home was a small apartment on the second floor with a lovely and spacious balcony. When my mom was busy in the kitchen she let me stay on the balcony watching the kids playing in the street. On that balcony I played sometimes with my elder sister, Maria. She was seven years old and when my mom was absent she was like a mother to me. The balcony was a great hobby place for my father. After his work he used to grow carnations (康乃馨)in flower boxes. His carnations were red, pink and white, and everyone appreciated them for their beauty.
He took care of them with so much love and devotion. He dealt carefully with his flowers like a mother taking care of her baby. Many times I sat on the floor of the balcony for hours observing him and his lovely flowers with patience. He was always doing something on that balcony. He was watering them every day,cleaning the balcony floor, changing the potting soil and when the stems (茎)were thick, strong and high enough, he started his improvement operation like a doctor.
My dad took a tiny knife and with his left hand he held the stem of the carnation and measured the height. Then he made as mall mark on the stem with his finger. Afterwards he made a sharp cut with the knife, just enough to fit in a grain of barley (插穗的芽).Then he bandaged the stem with a small bandage. His job was then to water the plants and to take care of them. “No one should touch them”, he said to mom. Every day, when he came home from work he went straight to the balcony.
Mom used to tell us, “Do not touch daddy’s flowers.” For us it was a fascinating experience to watch how the small stems were growing and making flowers. When the carnations had grown big enough, my dad enjoyed watching them every day. We the kids did too.
One day, my elder sister, who loved dad very much, had a good idea. ___________________________________________________
When my dad arrived, he went as usual, straight to the balcony and saw his flowers lying on the floor like dead animals.
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语篇介绍：
故事主要讲述了父亲每天下班之后就在阳台上精心照料他最爱的康乃馨。他对康乃馨的照顾很细心，就像妈妈照顾自己的孩子一样，而且告诉家里人： “任何人不能碰他的花。”一天，在爸爸上班之后，非常爱爸爸的大女儿觉得爸爸很辛苦，决定要为爸爸做点什么。后面的续写部分就是要根据原文已知的情节信息，预测可能发生的故事情节。 结局应该是无论女儿做了什么，爸爸都会原谅，一家人温馨有爱，其乐融融。
Task 1: Read for plots.
Who------my elder sister,father mother and me
Where ----on the balcony
What happened-----Dad planted carnations on the balcony, and he treated them like a mother taking care of her baby, demanding that anyone should not touch them.
根据第二段确定的故事主题，
可能情节1:
Watching Dad taking care of the flowers painstakingly every day, Maria determined to help dad. She cut the flowers as what Dad did,arranging them on the flowers.
可能情节2:
Realizing Dad loved the flowers so much, Maria made up her mind to buy more carnations for Dad in the flower market. After returning home, she planted them with her sister, upsetting the flowerpot by accident. The flowers lay on the flowers.
可能情节3:
Realizing Dad loved the flowers so much Maria made up her mind to buy more carnations for Dad in the flower market.On the way home, she found a wounded cat, bringing it home and wrapped up the wound. The cat jumped up and down on the balcony, upsetting the flowerpot. The flowers lay on the flowers.
One possible version 1：
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One day, my elder sister, who loved dad very much, had a good idea. She proposed us to pick the best out of the carnations so that dad could appreciated it forever rather than have to plant it hard. We went to the balcony, hoping to select out the best and most lovely one.While doing so, however, Maria accidentally fell, bruising her knees. What was worse, many flowers were also knocked down, leaving the balcony in a mess and the majority of the flowers out of shape. Despite this, we managed to pick the very flowers we wanted and waited nervously and uneasily for the father’s arrival and his response.
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When my dad arrived, he went as usual, straight to the balcony and saw his flowers lying on the floor like dead animals. In no time, he got annoyed and stormed into our room, questioning us in glare who it was that made such a mess of his flowers. Instead of crying, brave Maria held out the flowers and explained what we meant to do and how it ended up this way.She was afraid that dad might punish her, but at the same time she hoped that dad would smile at our warm actions. Deeply touched, dad held the flowers tightly and gently, and immediately gathered us into his arms,saying, “You are my best flowers!”
One Possible Version2:
One day, my elder sister, who loved dad very much, had a great idea.She made a short cut of the carnations from their stems one by one and arranged them on the floor. She believed that dad would be pleased to see them that way.When mom realized what my sister had done, she became completely speechless. However, my sister didn't know why no one appreciated her efforts.The shock was too strong and we all waited for dad's arrival with anxiety.
When my dad arrived, he went as usual, straight to the balcony and saw his flowers lying on the floor like dead animals. He was shocked at first.He looked toward the street to see if any neighborhood children had done it. Then he entered the living room and looked left and right and mom in silence. Finally mom looked at dad and with a nice tone she said:No outsider did this great job, only your lovely daughter Maria."Hearing this, my dad's face changed from tense to a smile and then he said:“Do l have a better flower than my lovely daughter ”My elder sister smiled and hugged dad strongly.

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