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高中英语作文专题
——邀请信
（A Letter of Invitation ）
高考优秀作文的基本要求：
1. 卷面整洁
2. 句式多变
3. 巧妙串联
4. 蠢错不犯
5. 亮点若干
6. 层次不乱
一、书信分类
1. 按对象：
(1). 商务信件或公函
（Business Letter or Official Correspondence)
(2). 私人信件（Private Letter）
2. 按内容：
(1)邀请信：写信人对收信人的一种盛情邀约。
(letter of invitation)
①邀请信分类
②邀请信内容：
发出邀请→说明活动的内容、时间和地点→说明活动注意事项→表达期待或感谢之情
Dear Sir/Madam/Mr Smith, [称呼]
第一段：表明写信目的（去信）；表达谢意/叙述前谊——摈弃汉语思维，不以“你好”开头
第二段：主体内容（简明达意，层次分明）
第三段：表达愿望/希冀，进一步要求，祝愿…
I look forward to hearing from you. [结束语]
Yours Sincerely,[礼貌落款]
Li Hua [签名]
二、 必备句型
⑴ for beginning 开头
It’s a great honor/a pleasure for me to invite you to…
I take the pleasure to invite you to …
I feel quite honored to invite you to…
May I ask you to consider coming to ...
I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in…
二、 必备句型
⑵ for ending 结尾
We all hope that you would come and look forward to seeing you. Thanks a lot.
I’m looking forward to getting your early reply. Thanks a lot.
I would be grateful if you could accept my invitation. Thanks a lot.
Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.
Please keep me informed if you decide to come.
I shall be much obliged by a reply at your convenience.
⑶内容
The speech\lecture will start at\in\on …
Various\Diverse activities will be held, including…
It will be held in… from …to … on\about …
The activity is in honor of\in memory of ....
(4)相关短语
deliver a speech\ a lecture (about how to do sth)
做（关于…方面的）演讲或讲座
参加…活动
take part in; participate in; join in; be engaged in; be involved in;
attend a conference\ a concert\ a meeting\ a lecture …
出席会议、出席音乐会、参加会议、参加讲座
in our\the teaching building
在教学大楼
in our\the Multi-media Lecture Hall
在多媒体报告厅
in our school’s gym
在学校体育馆
the chairman of the student union\ Student’s Union
学生会主席
on behalf of…= as a representative of …
代表… （介词短语作状语）
(be) in charge of …
掌管、负责…
三 .邀请信模板
模板1：
Dear ，
I am ###, +身份. I will hold a/an ____ at on ___ in order to . As you are a close friend of our family, my parents , I would very much like you to join us in and share our joy.
The occasion will start at , and activities include , and . In addition, there will be . I am sure you will enjoy a good time.
My family would feel honored by your presence.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
模板2：
Dear ,
On behalf of , I would like to invite you to visit our university / my hometown for .
It would give us great pleasure if you could deliver a speech on the topic of during the visit, because . I am sure that it would be greatly beneficial to if .
During your stay in , we would like to offer you with and , which is free of charge, and .
We would appreciate it very much if you could accept our invitation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
What makes
a good
invitation
letter
Discussion
假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：
1.栏目介绍；
2.稿件内容；
3.稿件长度：约400词汇
4.交稿日期：6月28日前
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语已为你写好。
提炼要点：
1.写信约稿（目的）；
2.“外国文化”栏目介绍；
3.稿件内容：美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文； 4.稿件长度：约400词汇 ； 5.交稿日期：6月28日前；
（2-5：具体内容） 6.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Appreciating
（品味佳作)
要点提炼：
1.写信约稿:①
2.“外国文化”栏目介绍:② ③
3.稿件内容：美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文： ④ ⑤ ⑥
4.稿件长度：约400词汇 ⑦ 5.交稿日期：6月28日前⑧ 6.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯④ ⑥
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Dear Peter,
① I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
② The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. ③ It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. ④ Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States ⑤ And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. ⑥You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. ⑦400 words would be fine.
⑧Could we have your article before June 28
⑨ I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Content
Everything needed included which is related to your view.
(内容要完整)
Everything needed included which is related to your view.
(内容要完整)
Good beginning and ending
(好的开头结尾)
* Well organized and smoothly developed
(结构合理,行文流畅)
* Proper linking words between sentences
Everything needed should be included.
(内容完整）
Dear Peter,
① I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
② The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. ③ It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. ④ Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States ⑤ And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. ⑥You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. ⑦400 words would be fine.⑧Could we have your article before June 28
⑨ I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Step1(head)：
Writing purpose
Step2 (body)：Well-organized, smoothly and clearly developed.
Step 3(end)：Expectation
Structure
*GoodEverything needed included which is related tEeeEEEEEo your view.
(内容要完整)
tween sentences
Good beginning and ending.
（好的开头和结尾）
Well organized and smoothly developed.
（结构合理、行文流畅）
Proper linking words between sentences.
（恰当的连接词）
Dear Peter,
I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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过去分词作
后置定语
宾语从句
高级词汇
假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华.你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest）,希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士做评委,请参照以下比赛通知给她给写一封信.
英语演讲比赛
主题：人与自然
时间：6月15日下午2.00-5.00
地点：501教室
参赛选手：10名学生
联系人：李华（电话484876655）
欢迎大家光临
注意：词数100左右;开头已为你写好。
Dear Ms.Smith,
__________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
Dear Ms.Smith,
I am LiHua, the leader of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School. I sincere hope you can set aside some time for our English Speech Contest and a judge.
The contest, the theme of it is “Man and Nature”, will be holding in the Room 501 from 2：00 to 5：00 in the afternoon of June 15. What’s more, there will have ten students take part in it. I am sure that it will be a great success if you can give we some precious remarks.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invite. My telephone number is 44876655. I am looking forward to receive your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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2010年全国卷1 英语书面表达（满分25分）
假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华.你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest）,希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士做评委,请参照以下比赛通知给她给写一封信.
英语演讲比赛
主题：人与自然
时间：6月15日下午2.00-5.00
地点：501教室
参赛选手：10名学生
联系人：李华（电话484876655）
欢迎大家光临
注意：词数100左右;开头已为你写好。
Dear Ms.Smith,
__________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
Dear Ms.Smith,
I am LiHua, the leader of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School. I sincere hope you can set aside some time for our English Speech Contest and be a judge.
The contest, the theme of it is “Man and Nature”, will be holding in the Room 501 from 2：00 to 5：00 in the afternoon of June 15. What’s more, there will have ten students take part in it. I am sure that it will be a great success if you can give we some precious remarks.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invite. My telephone number is 44876655. I am looking forward to receive your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【分析】基本表达清楚；时态运用恰当；采用了连接手法；内容连贯；准确性不够。
词的修饰关
系错误
非限制性定语从句关系词错误
语态错误
介词错误
汉语式英语
时态错误
人称代词用错
名词动词不分
固定搭配用错
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* With exactly used words and relatively
changed sentence patterns.
(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)
* No Chinglish. (避免中文式英文)
* No Grammatical mistakes .
(避免语法错误)
Language
A good essay should be
1. complete （要点齐全）
2. coherent（行文连贯）
3. accurate（用词准确）
4. fluent/clear（表达流畅）
5. various (句式多样)
6. neat（书写工整）
Concluding
Step 1 analyze the requirements(认真审题)
Step 2 draw up an outline(谋篇布局)
Step 3 organize the sentences(联句成篇)
Step 4 get the article polished up(锦上添花)
Step 5 check the mistakes(查漏补缺)
Five steps to write an English essay：
牛刀小试1：假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华，你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛,希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith 女士来做评委，请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信，词数100左右。
英语演讲比赛
主题：人与自然 (Man and Nature)
时间：6月15日下午 2:00—5:00
地点：501教室
参赛选手：10名学生
联系人：李华（电话 4487665）
欢迎大家光临
Dear Ms. Smith,
___________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
一.审题目：
文体：
邀请信
主要人称：
第一人称,第二人称
主要时态：
一般将来时
二.列要点：
育才中学的学生会主席
举办一次英语演讲比赛
离…很近
开始，持续, 结束
参加
发表演讲
501教室
给某人打某个电话号码
做评委
chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School
hold/ organize/have an English speech contest/competition
be near/close to; be not far way from…
begin\start; last(for) ; end\conclude
take part in…\ compete in…\ be engaged in… \ participate in…
make / give / deliver speeches
Room 501
call sb at + 电话号码
work/act\serve as a judge
三.巧串联：
（1）常用开头：
我写信是为了邀请你做某事
I’m writing to invite you to do sth.
I’d like to invite you to do sth.
（2）常用结尾：
如果你能接受我的邀请，我将不胜感激。
I would be grateful if you could accept my invitation.
（3）最少使用2个复合句（定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句等）。
四.查漏缺:
（1）表顺序
（2）表递进
besides，what’s more; moreover，furthermore;
most important of all，most importantly，
（3）表因果
because，because of，as，since；
so， therefore，thus，as a result;
now that, in that, owing to, due to, thanks to
first; second; then; next; finally
Dear Ms. Smith, (version 1) I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle
School, which is close to your university. On June 15, our school is
going to hold an English speech contest. I’d like to invite you to be a
judge.
Now let me tell you something about the contest. It will start at
2:00 pm in Room 501 and last for about three hours. Ten students
will deliver their speeches concerning the topic “Man and Nature”. We hope that you can accept our invitation if it is convenient for
you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions. I am looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely yours, Li Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Ms. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, the leader of the Student Union of Yu Cai Middle School. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for our English speech contest to be a judge.
Now let me tell you something about the contest .The contest, the theme of which is “Man and Nature”, will be held in the Room 501 from 2:00 to 5:00 on the afternoon of June 15. What’s more, there will be 10 students taking part in it. I’m sure it will be a great success if you can give us some precious remarks. I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. My telephone number is 44876655.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
With best wishes,
Li Hua
六：Practice
假如你叫李华, 你所在的学校拟在下个月举办美国电影节（American Film Festival)。请你根据以下要点给你的美国朋友Peter 写一封短信，邀请他给学生做一次讲座。信的主要内容包括：
1. 讲座目的： 使学生对美国电影有所了解；
讲座内容： 简要介绍美国电影业的历史；
讲座时间：1小时30分钟左右
注意：
1. 可适当增加细节，使结构完整；
2. 词数150左右。
Dear Peterson,
Our school is planning to hold an Australian culture show this summer vacation. So I’m writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the people and customs on the continent of Australia.
We would like to get our teachers and students to learn more about your history and culture. You may choose any day of the first week in August and give us the talk that afternoon, starting from 3:00 pm and ending at about 5:00pm.
I’m looking forward to your reply and I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.
Yours
Li Hua
Dear Peter,
　　Our school is planning to hold an American Film Festival next month．I’m writing to ask you to come and give a talk on American Films and film making industry．It will help us understand how the industry has developed into big business as it is today．
This understanding should go along way toward increasing their knowledge of American culture in general．Do you think one and a half hours will be enough Please let me know as soon as possible so that I can make arrangements．
I’m looking forward to seeing you and enjoying the talk．
　　With best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua

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