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(共75张PPT)
ADVERSITY AND COURAGE
Using Language
Reading for Writing
写作
Amelia
Learning Objectives
1. To read a continuation story of the rest men on the island with 5W1H.
2. To know how to use proper words and phrases to express emotions and describe the environment.
3. To write a continuation story with 5W1H.
have an optimistic attitude towards adversity.
&
by
tried to make their first land crossing of Antartica
got stuck in the ice
left Elephant Island for help
abandoned the ship and camped on the ice
stayed on the island
Revision
Prediction
In Pairs, predict
what might happened to the crew members.
After Shackleton left to look for rescue, his crew members were left on Elephant Island.
1.2 商业模式
no drinking water
food
water
no vegetables or fruit
the dangers of living in the island
dangerous wild animals,
savage,
changing temperatures.
What might happen
Problems
people remaining on Island might face
not able to make fire;
easily ill
Writing
Task: Continue the story.
After Shackleton left to look for rescue, his crew members were left on Elephant Island.
We watched as Shackleton and the boat sailed away from Elephant Island. It was easy to imagine the danger ahead of them. Would they ever turn to find us What might happen to them What if they were delayed We felt so alone and desperate. But it was not for long.
Life fell into a regular pattern and staying alive took all our time and energy. ____________________________________________
When we were finally rescued,___________________________.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Read for the structure with 5W1H
When
Where
What
Who
Why
How
As Shackleton and the boat sailed away from Elephant Island
On the Elephant Island
Shackleton and the men left on the Island.
Shackleton left and the rest men tried to survive on the Island and waited for him to rescue them.
They were rescued and felt grateful and joyful.
Their optimism and faith in Shackleton had helped them persevere in staying alive.
What
1. Read for the structure to complete the 4 squares
Find the details to support the main idea of each paragraph.
Plot: results (Para. 2)
Characters and settings
Plot: problems and solutions (Para.1)
Plot: problems and solutions (Para. 1)
1
3
4
when, where, who, what to think
what to do (problems)
what to do (solutions)
how and why
2
When: as Shackleton and the boat sailed away
Who: crew members on the Endurance
Where: Elephant Island
What to think: alone, desperate, worried
Problems
①got drinking water;
②made fire;
③food problem;
④were ill
Solutions
①melted ice from the ocean;
②used animal fat as the only fuel;
③varied the meals of sea animals;
④not to go outside
What: being rescued
How: relieved, grateful, joyful
Why: discipline, team spirit, optimism, faith in Shackleton
Use the clues above to continue the writing
Para 1: Life fell into a regular pattern and staying alive took all our time and energy.
Para 2: When we were finally rescued,
①描述问题：水、生火、食物、生病；
②如何解决问题；
③Shackleton前来营救。
①获救的反应：放松，喜悦；
②总结获救原因；
③对Shackleton表示感激。
Find out useful expressions in the passage to continue the writing
Para 1: Life fell into a regular pattern and staying alive took all our time and energy.
水：
生火:
食物：
生病：
Find out useful expressions in the passage to continue the writing
Para 2: When we were finally rescued,
获救：
Combine the sentences连词成句
We watched as Shackleton and the boat sailed away from Elephant Island. It was easy to imagine the danger ahead of them. Would they ever turn to find us What might happen to them What if they were delayed We felt so alone and desperate. But it was not for long.
Life fell into a regular pattern and staying alive took all our time and energy. With no water to drink, we could melt ice from the ocean and drink the water from it. If it weren’t for sea animals, we would all starve. But how could we make fire The only fuel we could use was animal fat. This stayed burning even in strong wind but it gave off oily, black smoke. Besides, we had to be careful not to go outside too often, as the changing temperatures could make us ill. It was almost as dangerous to become too cold from wearing too few. The sweat could freeze very quickly.
When we were finally rescued, we felt such relief and joy that many of us could not hide our tears. We were at last free to go home to warm beds, good food, and the care of our family and friends. So our optimism and faith in Shackleton had helped us persevere in staying alive. And he paid us back by his commitment to save us from a slow but painful death.
Read for writing methods
We felt so alone and desperate. (para 1)
When we were finally rescued, we felt such relief and joy that many of us could not hide our tears. (para 3)
1
What’s the function of underlined expressions
A. give opinions
B. express emotions
C. describe environment
so +adj. (+ that)
such + adj. + n + that
Practice
She was ____________ (excite) _______ she couldn’t fall asleep.
她兴奋得睡不着觉。
so excited
that
Emotional description
(情感描写)
Read for writing methods
...with no water to drink, we could melt ice from the ocean and drink the water from it. (Para 2)
2
Practice
没路可走，他只能返回来。
她转过身，泪流满面。
Environmental description
(环境描写)
(with的复合结构)
_____________________________, he had to come back.
She turned around, _______________________________.
with tears streaming down her face
With no path to go
Emotional description (情感描写)
（with的复合结构）
Read for writing methods
The only fuel we could use was animal fat. This stayed burning even in strong wind but it gave off oily, black smoke, which made many of us ill. .... The sweat could freeze very quickly. (para 2)
3
Practice
他冒着炎炎烈日跑向了终点线。
modifiers
(巧用adj. 或adv. 作修饰语)
He ran towards the finish line in the ____________(burn) heat.
burning
Environmental description
(环境描写)
Summarize the writing methods
Writing methods
情感描写
环境描写
so+ adj. / such + n. that +句子
with的复合结构
modifiers (巧用adj.或adv.作修饰语)
with的复合结构
升级词汇
Para 1:
①由于没有水可喝，我们只能喝海洋中融化的冰。
②如果不是因为海洋动物，我们都会饿死的。
③至于生火，我们得到的唯一燃料是动物脂肪，即使在强风中也能燃烧，但会释放出油腻的黑烟。
With no water to drink, we could melt ice from the ocean and drink the water from it.
句式整合升级版
With no water to drink, what we could do was drink the melted ice from the ocean.
If it weren’t for sea animals, we would all starve.
If it weren’t for sea animals, we would all starve to death.
But how could we make fire The only fuel we could use was animal fat. This stayed burning even in strong wind but it gave off oily, black smoke.
As for making fire, the only fuel we got was animal fat, which stayed burning even in the strong wind but gave off oily, black smoke.
④更糟糕的是，不断变化的温度使我们无法经常外出。
⑤幸运的是，多亏Shackleton带着救援队回来，我们才最终看到了希望的迹象。
Fortunately, thanks to Shackleton, who returned with the rescue team, we eventually saw signs of hope.
Fortunately, it wasn’t until Shackleton returned with the rescue team that we eventually saw signs of hope.
Besides, we had to be careful not to go outside too often, as the changing temperatures could make us ill. It was almost as dangerous to become too cold from wearing too few. The sweat could freeze very quickly.
Worse still, the changing temperatures prevented us from going outside too often.
Para 2:
①当我们终于获救时，我们感到如此的欣慰和喜悦，以至于我们中的许多人都忍不住流下了幸福和感激的泪水。
②筋疲力尽但喜出望外的我们回到了家，那里有温暖的床铺、美味的食物和亲友相伴。
When we were finally rescued, we felt such relief and joy that many of us could not hide our tears.
When we were finally rescued, such relief and joy did we feel that many of us couldn’t help shedding tears of bliss and appreciation.
We were at last free to go home to warm beds, good food, and the care of our family and friends.
Exhausted but overjoyed, we got back home to warm beds, good food, and the care of our family and friends.
③要是没有对Shackleton的乐观和信念，我们就没办法坚持下去。
④我们首次意识到我们有多么幸运遇到了Shackleton，他坚定地将我们从缓慢但痛苦的死亡中拯救出来。
And he paid us back by his commitment to save us from a slow but painful death.
We realized how fortunate we were to meet Shackleton, who committed to saving us from a slow but painful death.
Never once had we realized how fortunate we were to meet Shackleton, who committed to saving us from a slow but painful death.
So our optimism and faith in Shackleton had helped us persevere in staying alive.
Without our optimism and faith in Shackleton, we wouldn’t have persevered in staying alive.
Version 1
Life fell into a regular pattern and staving alive took all our time and energy. With no water to drink, what we could do was drink the melted ice from the ocean. If it weren’t for sea animals, we would all starve to death. As for making fire, the only fuel we got was animal fat, which stayed burning even in the strong wind but gave off oily, black smoke. Worse still, the changing temperatures prevented us from going outside too often. Fortunately, thanks to Shackleton, who returned withthe rescue team, we eventually saw signs of hope.
Version 1
When we were finally rescued, such relief and joy did we feel that many of us couldn't help shedding tears of bliss and appreciation. Exhausted but overjoyed, we got back home to warm beds, good food, and the care of our family and friends. Without our optimism and faith in Shackleton, we wouldn't have persevered in staying alive. We realized how fortunate we were to meet Shackleton, who committed to saving us from a slow but painful death.
Version 2
Life fell into a regular pattern and staving alive took all our time and energy. With no water to drink, what we could do was drink the melted ice from the ocean. If it weren't for sea animals, we would all starve to death. As for making fire, the only fuel we got was animal fat, which stayed burning even in the strong wind but gave off oily, black smoke. Worse still, the changing temperatures prevented us from going outside too often. Fortunately, it wasn't until Shackleton returned with the rescue team that we eventually saw signs of hope.
Version 2
When we were finally rescued, such relief and joy did we feel that many of us couldn't help shedding tears of bliss and appreciation. Exhausted but overjoyed, we got back home to warm beds, good food, and the care of our family and friends. Without our optimism and faith in Shackleton, we wouldn't have persevered in staying alive. Never once had we realized how fortunate we were to meet Shackleton, who committed to saving us from a slow but painful death.
Summarize the structure
Structure
场景 settings
情节
plot
人物 characters
When
Where
Who
What
Why
How
What to think
What to do
What to hear
What to say
feelings
results
language points
Using Language
Amelia
1) What can we know about the sailors from the first paragraph
A. They had mixed feelings at the time.
B. They were sure they would be saved.
C. They had no faith in Shackleton.
D. They all wanted to go with Shackleton.
2) What was the most important thing for the sailors on Elephant Island
A. Making fire. B. Finding trees.
C. Getting oil. D. Surviving.
3) What is the fourth paragraph mainly about
A. The shortage of food and vegetables.
B. The effects of the changing weather.
C. The spread of illnesses there.
D. The clothes they wore.
4) Which of the following best describes Shackleton
A. He was a warm-hearted man.
B. He was a man of his word.
C. He was a generous man.
D. He was a mean man.
1. The sailors wondered whether Shackleton would
return to find them.
2. The sailors did all they could to stay alive on Elephant Island.
3. It was quite easy to find food on Elephant Island.
4. Wearing too many clothes was very safe on the island.
5. The sailors believed in Shackleton who helped them persevere in staying alive.
Decide whether the following statement is True or False.
T
T
F
F
T
the reward for
sail away
the danger ahead of them
sth. happened to sb.
feel alone and desperate
cheer sb. up
para. 1
...的回报
驶离
前面的危险
某人发生了某事
感到孤单和绝望的
使某人高兴/振奋
fall into a regular pattern
make fire
animal fat
give off oily black smoke
strong winds
para. 2
陷入一个固定的模式
生火
动物脂肪
产生油腻的黑烟
大风
pretty well
it is one’s duty to do sth.
vary the meal
in whatever way
para. 3
几乎，差不多
做某事是某人的职责
变换三餐的花样
无论用什么方式
be careful not to do
as...as
damage our eyes and burn our lungs
in the cold
discipline and team spirit
keep us optimistic
deal with
in a positive and successful way
para. 4&5
小心不要做某事
和..一样
损害我们的眼睛和伤害我们的肺部
在寒冷中
纪律和团队精神
让我们保持乐观
处理，应付
用积极的成功的方式
feel relief and joy
at last
our optimism and faith in sb
persevere in doing
pay back
save…from
para. 6
感到如释重负喜不自禁
做某事是某人的职责
我们的乐观和对某人的信任
坚持做
偿还，报答
使免受，从..救出来
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总结
1. It was easy to imagine the danger ahead of them.
It was easy to imagine sth when sb did sth.
当某人...不难想象...
不难想象我的兴奋和激动当我得知伦敦美术馆要举办中国画展。
It was easy to imagine my excitement / thrill/θr l/ when I knew that a Chinese painting exhibition will be held in London.
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总结
2. What if they were delayed We felt so alone and desperate.
What if.... 要是...怎么办呢 ？如果…会怎么样呢？
Never did sb feel so alone and desperate/hopeless.
某人从来没有感觉过如此的孤独和绝望。
要是没有人来救我怎么办 ？我从来没有感到如此孤独和绝望。
What if no one came to my rescue Never did I feel so lonely and hopeless/desperate.
What if… 如果……会怎么样呢？(=What would happen if… )
(1)表示假设，意为“假若……”“假若……怎么办”“要是……将会怎么样”。其后句子可用陈述语气(用一般现在时)，也可用虚拟语气(用一般过去时或should+动词原形)。若是针对过去的情况，从句则用过去完成时。
What if it rains when we can’t get to school on time？
What if the assistant came tomorrow instead of this afternoon
(2) 表示邀请或建议，“如果……怎么样”“如果……如何”
What if you join us for lunch
(3)表示不重要，“就算……那又怎样”，通常与so连用。若句意清楚，so what if…有时可省略成so what
1. So what if he gave up the election. Who cares
2. I’m afraid it’s too expensive.
So what We’ve plenty of money.
【语境应用】完成句子。
1) ______________________________ (如果机器人坏掉怎么办) right as it is serving hot soup or tea
2) _______________________________ (要是我们把沙发挪到这边来会怎么样) Would that look better
3) ______________ (就算……那又怎样) nobody else agrees with me
What if the robot breaks down
What if we moved the sofa over here
So what if
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总结
3.There was nothing like a good dinner and some music to cheer us up.
There was nothing like......to cheer us up.
没有什么比得上....能让我们振奋起来。
没有什么比得上【一个帮助她挣钱的好主意】能让我们振奋起来。
There was nothing like a marvelous/amazing idea to help her make money to cheer us up.
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总结
没有什么比得上假期更让人放松了。
There was nothing like a holiday to make one feel relaxed.
1. There were no trees growing (grow) on Antarctica and no oil, so the only fuel we could use was (be) animal fat.
There be + 主语+ 非谓语动词
该句式中，非谓语动词作后置定语，修饰前面的主语。具体形式：
(1) There be + 主语+ doing （表示主动和进行）
There are 300 people moving to the new factory in the south.
para. 2
(2) There be + 主语+ done(表示被动或完成)
In this book, there are passages learnt before.
(3) There will be + 主语+ to do (表示动作尚未发生)
There will be some problems to discuss at the conference.
【注意】
当主语与其后的不定式是被动关系时，不定式用主动语态和被动语态均可
【语境应用】完成句子。
1) There are some citizens ____________________________ (站在画廊前).
2) There is a red car ______________________ (停在房子外面).
3) ______________________ (无事可做) and he just sits there absent-minded.
standing in front of the gallery
parked outside the house
There is nothing to do
Food was also a problem, as we did not find any vegetables___ fruit on the island. One of our group members, Lionel Greenstreet, ______ (note) in his diary about how ______(bore) he was with the meals: "The food now is ____________(几乎，差不多) all meat of sea creatures." If it weren't for sea animals, we would all starve. As a chef, it was my duty _______ (cook) so I tried to vary the meals ___ whatever way I could. But it was difficult.
or
noted
pretty well
to cook
in
bored
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总结
If it weren't for sea animals, we would all starve.
If 型虚拟, ”与现在事实相反的假设”
If (were/did), should/would/could/might + do.
如果我是你，我就会抓住这个机会。
If I were you, I would catch the chance.　
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总结
如果现在不上课，我会去旅游。
If I didn't have classes, I would go traveling.
如果现在下雨，我会在雨中漫步。
If it rained now, I would take a walk in the rain.
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总结
If 型虚拟, ”与过去事实相反的假设”
If (had done), should/would/could/might +have done.
如果我们没有充分的准备，比赛就不会如此成功。
If we hadn’t made full preparations, the compete wouldn’t have been so successful. 　
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总结
As a chef, it was my duty to cook, so I tried to vary the meals in whatever way I could.
As a..., it was my duty to do sth, so I tried to do sth in whatever way I could.
作为一个..., 做某事是我的责任。因此，我用任何我能想到的方法努力做某事
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总结
作为一名学生，努力学习是我的责任。因此，我努力【用任何能用的方法】提高我的学习成绩。
As a student, it is my duty to put my heart and soul into learning, so I try to improve my results in whatever way I could.
It was almost as dangerous to become too hot from wearing too many clothes as to become too cold from wearing too few.
To become too hot from wearing too many clothes was almost as dangerous as to become too cold from wearing too few.
as dangerous as... 变得一样危险
穿衣服太多而太热同穿得太少而变冷差不多一样危险。
para. 4
as 用法
We had to be careful not to go outside too often, as the changing temperatures could make us ill.
It was almost as dangerous to become too hot from wearing too many clothes as to become too cold from wearing too few.
We watched as Shackleton and the boat sailed away from Elephant Island. (para1.)
As a chef, it was my duty to cook...（para3.)
总结：as
1.因为 2.和...一样 3.当…时候，随着 4.作为(prep.)
其他：5.虽然，尽管 6.如，像(conj.)
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总结
Our discipline and team spirit kept us optimistic and helped us deal with our fears in a positive and successful way.
Sth kept us optimistic and helped us deal with our fears in a positive and successful way.
para. 5
This was an episode in my life 【that I would never forget. 】这是我一生中永远不会忘记的一段经历。
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When we were finally rescued, we felt such relief and joy that many of us could not hide our tears.
当我们最终获救时，我们感到如释重负，许多人都喜极而泣。
When we ...., we felt such relief and joy that many of us could not hide our tears.
para. 6
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He paid us back by his commitment to save us from a slow but painful death.
他回报了我们，实现了他的承诺，把我们从缓慢而痛苦的死亡中救了出来
Sb paid us back by his commitment to do sth
某人回报我们，通过他...的承诺。
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Assignments
没有什么比得上假期更让人放松了！
没有什么比母爱更加伟大！
要是我们能帮助他挣钱，该多好啊！我从来没有感觉过如此的开心！
如果他们被耽搁了怎么办？
没有什么比得上一顿好饭和一点音乐能让我们振奋起来了。
作为一名厨师，做饭是我的职责，所以我尽量用任何我能想到的方法来使食物多样化。
我们的纪律和团队精神使我们保持乐观，并帮助我们以积极和成功的方式应对我们的恐惧。
这是我一生中永远不会忘记的一段经历。
我们感到如释重负，许多人都喜极而泣。
我们的乐观和对沙卡尔顿的信任帮助我们坚持活了下来。
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recitation
1. There is nothing like a holiday to make us relax.
=There's nothing more relaxing than a holiday!
=Nothing is more relaxing than a holiday.
2.There is nothing more selfless than a mother'love
= Nothing is greater than a mother's love!
3. If only we could help him make money! I've never felt so happy !
Homework
Task: Continue the story according to what we’ve learned just now.
高考链接 ——(2016年浙江卷10月改编)
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snow-capped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom! ”she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落)somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. 注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1:
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. ________________
Paragraph 2:
It was daybreak when Jane woke up. __________________________
Read for the structure with 5W1H
When
Where
What
Who
Why
How
What
Jane quarrelled with her husband Tom.
one weekend in July
by a lake in the forest
Jane and her husband Tom
Jane got lost in the forest without the phone, food and water.
tired, hungry, thirsty and sleepy
Solutions
①found some berries to eat;
②slept;
③walked along the stream; hoped the helicopter would take her away
Plot: problems and solutions (Para.1)
Plot: Results (Para. 2)
Plot: problems and solutions (Para. 1)
Characters and settings (阅读)
3. Learn to write the structure with 4 squares
1
2
3
4
why, when, where, who
what + how (problems)
what + how (solutions)
what and how
How to change the structure to fit our article
When: One weekend
Who: Jane and her husband Tom
What: went camping by a lake →had quarrels→Jane got lost
Where: In the forest
Problems
①made fire;
②got food;
③found the way out.
What: After some time, her husband Tom found her.
How: excited
Use the clues above to continue the writing
Para 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
①描述感受：后悔，绝望，疲惫；
②角色反应：跟丈夫的回忆，给予勇气继续前进；
③如何解决问题：生火，水，食物；
④休息。
①获救前：解决饮食问题，继续上路；
②获救中：到空地等待救援，Tom找到她；
③获救后：角色反应——欣喜，激动。
5. 成文：Write the story on your own
Para 1 What to do: problems and solutions — feelings, food , fire , sleep
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Feelings + What to think
what to do — fire
What to do —food and sleep
Jane感到绝望和筋疲力竭，在附近的一块石头上躺下。突然，与丈夫的回忆涌上心头，这让她有勇气应对这种可怕的情况。
Desperate and extremely exhausted, Jane lay down near a stone. Suddenly, the memories with her husband crowded in, which made her take the courage to cope with the terrible situation.
她感到有点安心并充满希望，于是立刻生了火。
Feeling a bit settled and hopeful, she managed to make a fire at once.
在那之后，她匆忙地去找了一些莓子来吃。Jane她抵不住睡意，睡着了。
After that, she hurried to find some berries to eat. Soon Jane couldn't resist the nap and fell fast asleep.
句子升级：
当夜幕开始降临时，Jane感到如此疲惫以至于她抵不住睡意，睡着了。
例句1：
Soon Jane couldn't resist the nap and fell asleep.
With night beginning to fall, soon Jane felt ______________ couldn't resist the nap and fell fast asleep.
Learn to use writing methods
so tired that
Emotional description (情感描写)
使用so+ adj. / such + n. that +句子
句子升级：
Jane感到绝望和筋疲力竭，在附近的一块石头上躺下，泪流满面。
例句2：
Desperate and exhausted, Jane lay down near a stone.
Desperate and extremely exhausted, Jane lay down near a stone, __________________________________.
Learn to use writing methods
with tears streaming down her face.
Emotional description (情感描写)
（with的复合结构）
句子升级：
在那之后，借着微光，她匆忙地去找了一些莓子来吃。
例句3：
After that, she hurried to find some berries to eat.
After that, she hurried to find some berries to eat when there was still ______________.
Learn to use writing methods
dim light
Environment depiction
(环境描写)
modifiers (巧用adj. 或adv. 作修饰语)
5. 成文：Write the story on your own
Para 1 What to do: problems and solutions — feelings, food , fire , sleep
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Feelings + What to think
what to do — fire
What to do —food and sleep
Jane感到绝望和筋疲力竭，在附近的一块石头上躺下，泪流满面。突然，与丈夫的回忆涌上心头，这让她有勇气应对这种可怕的情况。
Desperate and extremely exhausted, Jane lay down near a stone, with tears streaming down her face. Suddenly, the memories with her husband crowded in, which made her take the courage to cope with the terrible situation.
她感到有点安心并充满希望，于是立刻生了火。
Feeling a bit settled and hopeful, she managed to make a fire at once.
在那之后，借着微光，她匆忙地去找了一些莓子来吃。当夜幕开始降临时，Jane感到如此疲惫以至于她抵不住睡意，睡着了。
After that, she hurried to find some berries to eat when there was still dim light. With night beginning to fall, soon Jane felt so tired and sleepy that she couldn't resist the nap and fell fast asleep.
5. 成文：Write the story on your own
Para 2 Results (what, how)
It was daybreak and Jane woke up.
What to do
What to hear
How to feel+ What to say
Results + Feelings
在吃了一些莓子和喝水后，她沿着小溪走着，希望很快能找到她的丈夫。令她非常高兴的是，她终于到达了一个空地。Jane祈祷直升机能再次回来，于是坐下来耐心地等待。
After eating some berries and drinking water, she walked along the stream, hoping to find her husband soon. To her great joy, she finally arrived at an open area. Praying that the helicopter would come back again, Jane sat down waiting patiently.
似乎过了很长一段时间，她听到远处传来一个声音。
After what seemed like a long time, she could hear a voice somewhere at a distance.
她内心充满了喜悦，挣扎着站起来喊道：“我在这里！”
With joy welling up inside her, she struggled to her feet and shouted, “I'm here!”
看到Jane，Tom感到非常兴奋，他无法抑制自己的喜悦，赶紧紧紧地拥抱他的妻子。
Seeing Jane, Tom felt such excitement that he couldn’t contain his joy and rushed to hug his wife tightly.
Summary
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